the smell of saliva on skin
searching playful hands
torso to breast
tight embraces
tongues dance in mouths
the way you whisper 'Asia'
i feel you
inside
capsules of passion release
surfacing to motivate each movement
each minute action
the desire you have
to feel me
makes me feel
free
the care you have in your heart
to catapult me into another dimension
the sweet tenderness of
being made a priority
the unselfishness of
giving yourself to me
allows me to
leave my body
but still feel every sensation
that your actions give me
it allows me to fall
into the deep abyss of exstacy
and forget for a moment, my name
and on what planet i lay
which street i live
and
anybody else's existance
bodies intertwined
wrapped up in sensual urgency
bites, nibbles and sucks
are more than bites
nibbles and sucks
they become
small physical manifestations
of things like
desire and eager ambition
to make relations
on a deeper level
to relate
on a deeper
level

slightly?!?!?!

hell naw

this top part here was amazing:


>the smell of saliva on skin
>searching playful hands
>torso to breast
>tight embraces
>tongues dance in mouths
>the way you whisper 'Asia'
>i feel you
>inside
>capsules of passion release
>surfacing to motivate each movement
>each minute action
>the desire you have
>to feel me
>makes me feel
>free

the rest was great but that top part was ringing in my head

nice drop

...(the end)...

whispering asia. hot as always.peace

when i spit i flood the block and walk on water like christ/ i'm a mix of jay-z and nas which makes me twice as nice
-
the unknown

.

Destro's cobra is ready to spit.

lol, that's not emotional.

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*nods*

the following lines are where it's at for me:

the sweet tenderness of
being made a priority
the unselfishness of
giving yourself to me
allows me to
leave my body
but still feel every sensation
that your actions give me
it allows me to fall
into the deep abyss of exstacy

Peace~

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those lines were entrancing

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...Is it because I value reality that I’m beginning to hate cordiality?

i appreciate those comments. i really do. i notice a huge difference between the number of views and replies. i would assume that those that left without saying anything just werent moved to do so. which makes me really appreciate the ones that take the time to let me know they were here, whether they liked my work or not. that's peace.

hot as always. peace

when i spit i flood the block and walk on water like christ/ i'm a mix of jay-z and nas which makes me twice as nice
-
the unknown

oooh eeee...words placed so openly are bound to lend wishful thinking....

much love for bringing this forward...

Rev

slightly is an understatement. u had me from the beginining. this was hypnotic. great job. write on, write on!

Aiden Waves, the cleansing fire

"just as the pureness of honey can sanctify my sins, i say let ur love blow in the wind...." -me!

I uh...um...yeah. Hot and sultry. On some put the kids away for a FEW nights type deal. Thumbs North. ~one~

"I'm scientific, but my reflex gangsta"- Black Thought

. . . . . . . . . . . BRAVO . . . . . . . .!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
now write me another one!!!!! {smile}

they showed us phYsically, we could reach infinitY, but mentally, through the century, we lost our identitY
-Rakim

....and im speechless, and i cant find out why....

peace


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thank you for reading.
speechless?
dont know why?
you'll discover why. and i'm sure you'll let me know.

@asiaradiant

i just read this again and i kinda liked it and...well maybe some of those 130 views will read again and give me some feedback. like...i dig this but i can see some places in it that im not completely satisfied with, but im my own worst critic. so im uppin my own in hopes of snatching a few more replies.

thank you to those that have commented thus far.

@asiaradiant

"the care you have in your heart
to catapult me into another dimension
the sweet tenderness of
being made a priority
the unselfishness of
giving yourself to me
allows me to
leave my body
but still feel every sensation"

*swoon*
This... is lovely. Simply lovely.

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- Robert Frost

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nice drop..... thrilling read...

Keep Flowin' Sis'.....

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fkn long

pun intended

i just want chu to know
how i feel
how i feel

*chuckles*

I have a feeling the guys have been re~reading your "slightly erotic" flow -- ON SEVERAL OCCASIONS -- (Possibly with cobras in hand) --

Never~The~Less -- I *know* I wasn't around when you originally posted this joint, or else my name would be ^UP^ in here somewhere ...

I'd like to see this in ARCHIVES -- And I'm sure the GUYS would also! -- *wink~wink*



(((ARCHIVE))) -- Going once!

Anyone second that emotion?

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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"I'm scientific, but my reflex gangsta"- Black Thought

seductive and passionate peice... nice

- I write battle verses to Mariah Carey songs...
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when my soul speaks:
when watchin VH1 soul and they play back to back videos that i like, when I'm intertwined with intimacy, goin' to a Jill Scott co

Interesting title for a sensuous flow!!! Nice drop. Ok so I had to come back and say that I liked that u made the experience more than just two bodies doing that age 'ole thing! It was whimsical; a beautiful write.
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When One learns
to live without fear,
then One cannot be broken.

hard to pick out a single line in this. I like how you describe the out of body experience while still concentrating on strengthened feelings going on locally. its like it makes no sense but it does. if that makes sense, lol. nice piece

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