ok....1st round had some disappointing no shows, but the tourney must go on....again, all forms of creativity count - no holds barred....24 bar limit

deadline is tuesday night at 8pm to submit....
(insert Mills Lane quote here)


ROUND 2 MATCHUPS:

Alias vs Sikstyle
Biohazard vs Samurai_Shampoo
Desto Finesstro vs EL_FANTASMO
Shakeet Lokh Em vs Soulbrotha
Rajeniro757 vs empro
Whateva vs willi_dudat


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/lifthalegend_music.htm

"u wanna play ball or u wanna fight?" -- ray brown in the gym

Good luck everybody its getting serios now. Im planning on turning racist ass DESTRO into DESTROyed. Yeeeeeeeah. But ummm good luck to you too DESTRO Im not gonig to be mean to you just because you a racist you the one who needs good luck most of all. LOLOLOLOL I told you last time and nobody listned so Ill say again YOU ARE NOT READY FOR EL FANTASMO! None of you.

My name is TASMO and Im ready to rock.
The best MC on the whole damn block.
Yeeeeah nobody wants none of this.
Feel bad for the man who got some of it.
Make his life a war zone like KABUL.
Most of you soft pussie Jah Rules.
MURDER! It what he say but it what I do.
Im doing it to you now in round two.
Yeeeah you really not ready for me.
The nicest MC that you never did see.
Destro not ready for wrath of Chicano.
I play his KKK ass like it a piano.

this matchup right here is the shit im waiting to see this round:

>Alias vs Sikstyle


these two will be close calls to but they dont get me hyped like sik vs. ko

>Biohazard vs Samurai_Shampoo
>Whateva vs willi_dudat


the rest are all easy to call as far im concerned tho

...(the end)...

its me and whateva huh???

my verse is in, holla back lif...

and best wishes to whateva... LETS DO DIS!!!

*ding, ding*

"It's the return of the gangsta, thanks ta..."

-du

willi's passin out innanet mixtapes and shit
____________________________________________________________

A wise man sees failure as progress,
a fool divorces his knowledge and misses the logic
(c) canibus - poet laureate 2

way to blow up his spot samurai

...(the end)...

To think that you told me you didn't wanna take my audio into consideration because it wouldn't be fair. Being that this is a traditonally written tourney. And you, out of all people, make an audio for your next round. ROFLOL Classic. And THEN you post it almost a week ahead of time. Now Whateva get to listen to what you did and make his verse stronger. Bwah ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha Take it down Will. Cuz you showin your hand man. This is just my advice and my opinion. So, take it or leave it. *shrug*

"I'm scientific, but my reflex gangsta"- Black Thought

>Take it down Will. Cuz you showin your
>hand man. This is just my advice and my opinion. So, take it
>or leave it. *shrug*

but this isnt necessarily correct:

>To think that you told me you didn't wanna take my audio into
>consideration because it wouldn't be fair. Being that this is
>a traditonally written tourney. And you, out of all people,
>make an audio for your next round. ROFLOL Classic. And THEN

i didnt want to consider your audio and i dont want to consider others when i vote because some people dont have the means to post up audios on the net and record quality shit on their computers- in fact not some people a lot of them

if you want to make an audio tourney make it i for one think it would be hot but this is and has always been a lyrics tourney and its just not fair to the cats entering who dont have mics or recording programs

now that is obvious but with that being said there is nothing hypocritical about dude making an audio- first off cause he knows there's cats like you that are gonna discount him if he doesnt and second off just to add a little extra flex to his shit for those who aren't

its like going up for a dunk when a lay up would do just fine

...(the end)...

video even.
____________________________________________________________

A wise man sees failure as progress,
a fool divorces his knowledge and misses the logic
(c) canibus - poet laureate 2

yeah i see that

its up to lif to make the rules not me

but i just think its a bad direction to go in

i think if we gonna have audios included in the voting there should be two separate tourneys

thats why i am not gonna count any audios when i vote on the shit and i dont think anyone else whos doing the same should get clowned

that being said i love to see audios from folks and anyone doing that no matter what skill level gets props from me especially dudes like sha and lif who come hard on audio

so i was just saying i see where someone could be coming from posting up an audio and still saying they shouldnt be counted

shit i posted an audio last time around


dont get it twisted im not at all against audios being posted

all im doing these days is working on my audio game and i like that more dudes on the site is posting them but i think as that is happening we need to think about how to approach it for the tourney- and this is the best forum for discussing that right?

...(the end)...

>thats why i am not gonna count any audios when i vote on the
>shit and i dont think anyone else whos doing the same should
>get clowned

this is exactly it. everybody's gonna vote how they want.
that's how it should be.

>that being said i love to see audios from folks and anyone
>doing that no matter what skill level gets props from me
>especially dudes like sha and lif who come hard on audio

lest we forget, not all the audios were hot.
it may help a little, but it may hurt a lot.

____________________________________________________________

A wise man sees failure as progress,
a fool divorces his knowledge and misses the logic
(c) canibus - poet laureate 2

>this is exactly it. everybody's gonna vote how they want.
>that's how it should be.

true im just campaigning for two separate tourneys and not counting audios unless its an exclusively audio tourney

why do i even give a fuck? obviously i have audio capabilities and furthermore im not even in the tourney

really to me its about the long term health of the boards

say youre 15

and you have no equip or dough

and no skills but want to start rhyming
this site is great for you and the tourney is a great hook to kids like that so we should keep it accessible at least a bit to cats like that

or dudes of any age with no cash for audio equipment who is on a comp in some library
theyre ill on the mic and tear ass in live battles and want to be on here to consistently develop their writtens

i dont want to see the tourney shut out to those folks- the tourney is the only thing that gets some people on the boards

this board can be a great resource for people and i think we maximize its potential by having lyrics and audios be separate contests

its like having distances in track- it just makes for better events

...(the end)...

>i didnt want to consider your audio and i dont want to
>consider others when i vote because some people dont have the
>means to post up audios on the net and record quality shit on
>their computers- in fact not some people a lot of them

Yo. HDUB. No holds barred means exactly that. I could make a .gif fle with no sound and just lipsyncin my verse if i wanted to. It don't matter. These rules were made clear at the start of the tourney. If somebody don't wanna be subject to it they shouldn't enter it. Furthermore, just cuz you got an audio don't mean jack if your opponets written verse reads very well. Cuz I guarnatee you Whateva gon come with it regardless of who got an audio up. It's just entertainment mang.

>if you want to make an audio tourney make it i for one think
>it would be hot...

That would be a great idea actually.

but this is and has always been a lyrics
>tourney and its just not fair to the cats entering who dont
>have mics or recording programs

It's Charles Darwin in motion man. The tourney is evolving. *shrug* And on top of that, no one made these "helpless" people enter. LOL

>now that is obvious but with that being said there is nothing
>hypocritical about dude making an audio-

It's the DEFINITION of hypocritcal. I 'on have nothin against the man, but it mos def is contradictory. Period.

first off cause he
>knows there's cats like you that are gonna discount him if he
>doesnt

*deep sigh* You're a 100% wrong. Dude I voted for El Fantasmo last round when Frontline had an audio up. So uh...how am I discounting someone who soley has a written verse? The hottest verse will win. Regardless of format.

"I'm scientific, but my reflex gangsta"- Black Thought

read my post to samurai

i think youre misunderstanding me

obviously within the confines of this tourney its going to be mixed but the presence of so many audios is new on the boards- its real good but it could be negative if we dont handle it right

im just trying to discuss that now so we can maybe think about it more for the next go round

and while you may not be biased entirely by an audio i think sometimes cats can be

and by the way willi- i agree with sha about whateva

if you want to beat him that audio needs to be stepped way up

...(the end)...

Hdub you need to quit whining. No matter how many twists you put on it or how much you 'think it thru', dude contradicted himself with the 'not considering the audio' statement and then posting one himself. Furthermore, as I recall, somebody did try to get an audio battle goin but nobody was trying to get with that. Y'all need to stop cryin like some lil' biotches and man up.

...i even got these whack ass destro aliases jumping on me for shit

how am i whining or bitching? or like southern said "ruining the tourney?" im not even in the shit- i got no reason to cry or bitch and if you all dont like what i say ignore it and it has no effect on anything but my vote

for some reason any time i open my mouth you all have a bitch fit and get ya panties in a twist

i just am explaining the reasoning im using when i vote- im allowed to vote however i want and i also notice that my shit hasnt even disagreed with the majority on ANYTHING so i dont know why all of y'all are bitching so much

im also trying to get a discussion going on how to deal with audios in the tourney in the future cause for all the reasons i said i think this is a bad idea

once again it seems like a bunch of us think an audio tourney would be hot so its not liike im saying something so out of nowhere- and by the way barnoess/destro/slaughter/flint/whoever the fuck that is very different from southerns idea of weekly audio one on ones

...(the end)...

ssssssshhhush and leave well enough alone, post a new thread for the audio tourney shit.

peace

"if i shoot u, u brainless/ if u shoot me, u famous/" - Jay - Z

http://www.soundclick.com/artist/5/youngsleep_music.htm

youre the one continuing the conversation

you dont want a discussion to go on dont read it and certainly dont add several comments to it

i dont see an "ok" next to your name so as far as i can tell you have no authority to stop me from saying whatever whenever

i was done talking about this but you coming in here just trying to talk shit im trying to be consturctive and some of yall just want to bitch and argue

...(the end)...

n/m


"if i shoot u, u brainless/ if u shoot me, u famous/" - Jay - Z

http://www.soundclick.com/artist/5/youngsleep_music.htm

granted i should have waited to post the audio, my bust...

"It's the return of the gangsta, thanks ta..."

-du

if you look at what i said about the audio you posted, you will find that i said nothing about it bein unfair... i said that if i took it into account that it would damage the vote... dub said what he said, but you tryin to make me eat his words, thats nonsense...

you still got my vote in rd 1 so i'on know what the big deal is anyway...

oh yeah, i took ur advice... wouldn't want a dead give away... how could i be so careless *shakes head*...

"It's the return of the gangsta, thanks ta..."

-du

damn i missed the audio....

Yo Hdub, u fucking this tourney up just like u did the last one. Audios are good no matter what, and u used one last tourney so ur opinion is for no reason.

In order for audios tourneys to started they gotta form some way and this is the perfect way.

If u know someone has audio capabilites and u dont, step ya written game up, its call competition and ur the only one seeing it a problem....im not beefing with u, just disagreeing, so dont pout. this been a good tourney, beside the no posters, keep this shit going.

peace


"if i shoot u, im brainless/ if u shoot me, u famous/" - Jay - Z

http://www.soundclick.com/artist/5/youngsleep_music.htm

My verse is in. Let me know if you got it, Lif.

____________________________________________________________

A wise man sees failure as progress,
a fool divorces his knowledge and misses the logic
(c) canibus - poet laureate 2

Biohazard:

I'm too hot, wherever I tread, it smolders/
Cut through Shampoo, slice your Head & Shoulders/
Dead as boulders, respect the code of honor/
Followed the trail of broken armor back to Yokohama/
Had to cope with drama, got cat's commitin' harakiri/
Scar your CD's, when I'm spittin' bars freely/
Got 'em all uneasy, take a step behind/
This cat's messin' around with swords...but not the weapon kind!/
I'll shred your spine, if you turn your back towards me/
Snatch your glory, then smack you off the Boards, G!/
Hattori Hanzo, I bomb foes while you walk planks/
Samurai??? Kid, you're faker than Tom Hanks!/
I Rob banks! Never afraid to show guns/
My flow stuns like home runs, blastin' back your Shoguns!/
No fun, strictly business, I'm here to collect the the bounty/
Live and die by the lyrical sword...On to round three!


Samurai_Shampoo:

look at this chump with the link in his verse
Dash's other woulda smashed yours and snatched up your purse
the type to plant evidence next to HIS OWN chalk line
fuck names to faces, i put a flame to ya hearse
premature princes prematurely dusted
Bio's poem showed promise til a samurai touched it
that's Bio-(degrading), c'est la vie...
i dig animals, but i love cutting trees:

i'm a samurai and you're just a hazard
i ain't marry the bitch, guess that makes you a bastard
so the hazard's the bastard and gettin Maury to answer
and figuring out which rapper unwrapped and then hatched her
Teri Hatcher she ain't, at least she wasn't
maybe cuz your grandma enjoyed fucking her cousins
it's A Family Affair and all are invited
if Hazard's sister o-Blige-s, pussy got people united

i cuss like a sailor, sting like a King
if you striking a chord, i'll leave your spine in a sling
no room to complain, i shatter vertebras
it's the.. Street Writer pile-drive upside-down vert-a-broad
unleash Zangief grief on a nuclear waste cause
every line that you write elicits a late *pause*
bar over bar, Shamp kinged collect nods
this ain't checkers, you can't chessbox with the gods


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/lifthalegend_music.htm

"u wanna play ball or u wanna fight?" -- ray brown in the gym

shampoo...

lotta good punches from both... sami sham just edged it out imo...

"It's the return of the gangsta, thanks ta..."

-du

Shampoo had good punchlines but he talked about duke fam too long, the shit was funny but Bio's verse was stronger battle wise..-->IMO


Vote: BioHazard


"if i shoot u, u brainless/ if u shoot me, u famous/" - Jay - Z

http://www.soundclick.com/artist/5/youngsleep_music.htm

but shampoo's middle mini-verse took away from it

without that he woulda won but i give bio the slightest of edges...

BIO

Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

Building repetoires (c) spm since 1983

I think Samurai tried to do too much in his verse. Bio kept it short and simple which worked in his favor this time.

BTW, my verse is in.

***************************************
"Science" and Religion are the two most dangerous weapons of ideology. See holocaust.

Why do "scientists" constantly produce statistics based on "race", a social construct?

Biohazard impressed me with this one.

bio, was quick and with effective punches.. i liked the verse.. samurai had a nice smooth style.. but i felt bio's verse just a bit more.. peace

n/m

"I walk around with sick styles, sippin on cristal, my whole cliques wild, I'm rich pal no more sticks I'm making hits now... when I recite you takin hours to write, so if you fight just tell ya man what kinda flowers you like"
-Big L

"I'm scientific, but my reflex gangsta"- Black Thought

n/m

^^this is me from now on- going with sik's idea

normally i like to explain my votes so people can benefit from feedback but seems folks here are too sensitive for any kind of discussion/different perspectives

...(the end)...

well guys this was a hot battle, it kept me on edge!

here's my critique:



biohazard: you verse was fire in a sense of how it was read, it flowed really nice! but where it lacked was in originality- in your disses i felt that i heard similiar shit before and then in the end it was rushed
>
>
>Samurai_Shampoo: lol your verse was bugged out! some crazy shit - i dig animals but i love cutting trees? "premature princes prematurely dusted"- was ill!
the way you used his name up in there was hot too!~
your lines were funny as hell
>i ain't marry the bitch, guess that makes you a bastard

>it's the.. Street Writer pile-drive upside-down vert-a-broad
>unleash Zangief grief on a nuclear waste cause

the only thing that i can say you could work on with yours is being overly creative with your punches
cuz when you think of too much original shit the reader is like wtf is he talking about and doesnt understand the diss... feel me?

but since that was the only thing my vote is for you: SAMARAI SHAMPOO..

- I write battle verses to Mariah Carey songs...
www.webspawner.com/users/delicateaurasoul4/index.html
This is a great website to discuss spirituality/religion, philosophies, and post poems:www.aware-discussion.net

more umpf in it...

i'm a samurai and you're just a hazard
i ain't marry the bitch, guess that makes you a bastard

made me chuckle...good showing to both.


<--hostage situation--

my vote=bio

...

R.I.P. Martin alexander (Marty Gra) Alston - my brother, my mentor , my friend-

<-------Knockin' Nukkaz Out!


K.O. The Alias

"They say the Hood die young...."

it worked.

and

samurai's verse was just a little too hard to follow.

vote: bio

_____________________________________

The cry I bring down from the hills
__________belongs to a girl still burning
__________inside my head. At daybreak

____________________she burns like a piece of paper. - YK

leave no feedback, vote with a n/m. I'm not only the founder, I'm also a client!

"I walk around with sick styles, sippin on cristal, my whole cliques wild, I'm rich pal no more sticks I'm making hits now... when I recite you takin hours to write, so if you fight just tell ya man what kinda flowers you like"
-Big L

"I'm scientific, but my reflex gangsta"- Black Thought

willi_dudat:

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=419193
"whateva will be"

comin off'a first round k.o, its du yo,
whateva's whateva's record nobody has to know;
as if john legend had come to ya rescue,
you "ordinary people" who don't wanna trade blow wit du:
cause i'll despose of you, like trash men, EARLY on monday,
and listen for the beep while they wisk you away;
its better this way, because you make the boards bored g,
who's next? this dude like tek, he'd rather write poetry:
talkin bout birds & bees & social disorder,
me? i'd rather leak reek speech causin lyrical slaughter;
the cause of your demise, with no disguise,
my eyes on the prize, you best just take a word from the wise: just don't even post
like the otha fo', who were disqualified,
"dis" prefix meanin "not" wit "ready" followin describes;
your preparation, you mistaken on misguided ventures,
im exposin fakeness like i yanked out ya mom's dentures:


Whateva:

Ayo hailing from smallest desert town on the map
Sierra Vista, Arizona, mister willi_dudat!!!!
The question for Whateva is "Will he run through that?"
my dick-ridin padawan, I really hate to do that
screw dat, I'm Jehovah but not to toy wit da Bible
I have to cease and desist my most loyal desciple
the right to, test ya masculinity, worthless snitch
you she-man, the masters of the universe's bitch
itch, for a record scratch, ropes and nailgun outback
stitch you down to rails, make a speed bump for Amtrak
I verbally rip apart dudat, you can't win fam
surgically take ya heart, give you da axe, like The Tinman
grinning, I keep pinheads spinning on an axis
the penned venom that I'm ventin mayne takes intense practice
Scrapped it, out wit crooks, you tryin my patience sonny
Perhaps, pick up my book "Flow and Cadence for dummies"
ya honey, said "Arizona bastids can't stimulate us"
so I bent her over and stuffed my cactus into her anus
heinous, I screwed ya name and female companion
so toss ya verses and ya game out into that Grand Canyon
man I'm still standin, the soundbombin original article
breakin willi_who'sdat down to sub atomic particles
part of you, wants to be me, ya hero, the rest fears me
but I'm number one, and yous a fuckin zero, it's binary....

Getcha weight up rookie. Stop playin games.



http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/lifthalegend_music.htm

"u wanna play ball or u wanna fight?" -- ray brown in the gym

he said binary, lol

Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

Building repetoires (c) spm since 1983

well the audio argument fucked shit up, cuz it raised the expectations of the audio, and im sorry to say it hurt cha. nice verse but i expected u to come way meaner battling whateva.

Whateva, u didnt come as mean as i thought either, u've been way meaner, the length and fact that ur punchlines where stronger won the round.

vote Whateva

peace

"if i shoot u, u brainless/ if u shoot me, u famous/" - Jay - Z

http://www.soundclick.com/artist/5/youngsleep_music.htm

"I'm scientific, but my reflex gangsta"- Black Thought

interesting battle fellas... here's what i think:

willi< you had some killa lines but it was kinda boring like u really didnt put any time in writing your verse
some punches were very ill but were taken by the lack of "rhyming creativity" like the simple words used to rhyme? feel me?
I also dont think that audios should be included in posts unless everyone submits them

whateva< i've seen u come much harder man! your verse was like a warm up or something BUT u keep me interested because you rhyme unevenly? meaning you rhyme the last word with the first or sometimes the last with the last, etc. nevertheless, the flow is interesting and it makes the reader want to keep reading to see what ur going to come up with next...despite the lack of punches you made it work

but in both verses i felt there should have been more effort

like i wanna feel like this is a competition

no dissing intended just honest critique

but since i have to choose i lean more towards: WHATEVA

- I write battle verses to Mariah Carey songs...
www.webspawner.com/users/delicateaurasoul4/index.html
This is a great website to discuss spirituality/religion, philosophies, and post poems:www.aware-discussion.net

n/m

...(the end)...

^

"I walk around with sick styles, sippin on cristal, my whole cliques wild, I'm rich pal no more sticks I'm making hits now... when I recite you takin hours to write, so if you fight just tell ya man what kinda flowers you like"
-Big L

Whateva

<--hostage situation--

coulda been more decisive if you proofread, but those were good (enough) punches.

____________________________________________________________

A wise man sees failure as progress,
a fool divorces his knowledge and misses the logic
(c) canibus - poet laureate 2

whateva

Whateva...

Willi got me with the last couple bars but it seemed he just whistled through until he got there. I wish he had gone longer..it'd have been harder to decide then.

"Do to others what you would others have done unto you." - The Lord Jesus Christ

SB Video: http://www.youtube.com/soulbrothavideo
SB tweet:www.twitter.com/soulb

.....

R.I.P. Martin alexander (Marty Gra) Alston - my brother, my mentor , my friend-

<-------Knockin' Nukkaz Out!


K.O. The Alias

"They say the Hood die young...."

_____________________________________

The cry I bring down from the hills
__________belongs to a girl still burning
__________inside my head. At daybreak

____________________she burns like a piece of paper. - YK

the audio argument was all just a misunderstandin... i dropped it think what'chu like...

audio reposted but you won't hear again until lif posts it...
peace

edit: oh, he already did...*gasps*

"It's the return of the gangsta, thanks ta..."

-du

well im finally back, could some one explain how da heck i can enter a tourney coz im back and impatient for battles

just a concept: if you're in a tourney and take an L,
you should have to rock the illest rhyme (eg 2 lines) from the foe that beat you for a month
(or til the next tourney, whichever's sooner) in the sig.

'chall think?

or a simple "I took an L to *insert emcee name here*"

lol

_________________________________________
"Too weird to live.... too rare to die..."

IG: KnowOne215 | PS+ ID: KnowOne215

that should happen whenever u loose a battle period

peace


"if i shoot u, u brainless/ if u shoot me, u famous/" - Jay - Z

http://www.soundclick.com/artist/5/youngsleep_music.htm

...

R.I.P. Martin alexander (Marty Gra) Alston - my brother, my mentor , my friend-

i think i beat blacksilence one time and he had to rock it in his sig for a week ......ummm i told dub if he could find two nukka that said his verse was hotter than mine i rock it in my sig for a month ....and besides if mofo's lose it's just they alias they don't use them shit that much any way ... but if mofo had the balls to accept defeat with thier regular screen names then this might be worht something .....o by the way ...read golden but zin !!!!!

sig.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Guess who's Back

as in post up the verses per usual, then inbox your vote to the tourney host.
has this been done?
____________________________________________________________

A wise man sees failure as progress,
a fool divorces his knowledge and misses the logic
(c) canibus - poet laureate 2

people can do n/m's opinions dont need to be clarified but accountability makes things less shady

...(the end)...

you want objective voting? there you go. tell me how i'm wrong.

____________________________________________________________

A wise man sees failure as progress,
a fool divorces his knowledge and misses the logic
(c) canibus - poet laureate 2

after the fact is good

but that does make a lot of work for the host and slows down the tourney

plus if its gonna get shown after the fact anyways then theres no difference i can see

if there was any chance youd act different anonymously- like for example not supporting a friend who didnt really win the posting after the fact takes away the anonymity

just my opinion

...(the end)...

it really wouldn't take too much extra out the host.

we did the All Skills tourney before with MC 1 vs MC 2, but anonymous voting would work better (in hindsight)

just my thoughts. there's heads that'll always say if it ain't broke, don't fuck with it
____________________________________________________________

A wise man sees failure as progress,
a fool divorces his knowledge and misses the logic
(c) canibus - poet laureate 2

Shakeet Lokh Em:

I bet you twenty naira/ Soul fool with that funny fire//
Only flamin brothas see more skid marks than muddy tires//
To say you got skill is a further stretch than bungee wires//
Your poetry sweeter than a forest teemin with bunny choirs//
Skippin, singin it’s a wonderful mornin//
Well it’s huntin season homie, my shots ain’t warnins//
In the court of hip hop, your flow’s out of order//
Every script I write’s a ten, ain’t more dimes on the corner//
I read where they said, that you sound like Common//
Well it’s apparent they never did a MySpace audit//
Do like the homie Robert, keep your flow trapped in the closet//
There’s no teeth to your style so there’s no need to floss it//
Oh and thanks homie for sendin me your CD//
Cuz it make a great antenna for my kids t.v.//
With your nickelodeon text/ skill so little only depress//
Callin you hot is like callin a cartel a simple opium sect//
Sha nice 365 like a Goodyear, your tread worn like old rubbers//
In the next class of femcees, you are the Sole Brother//
Rappin about holdin hands, negga I’m on stage to bolster mics//
Your soul is misguided homie, your whole style is a poltergeist//
I’m sensibly/endlessly/ spittin fire tremendously//
Metaphysically/ rhythmically/ slay your Tennessee/ tendencies//
I rip you with Desert Eagle black talons, you shook how I bust mine//
Homie I’m intelligence cubed, I don’t deal with no Plus Signs//



Soulbrotha:

**Hiding place – Little Brother**

Let’s just state the facts…

Your similac battle raps/ are similar to short-lived animal attacks/
To put in plain terms/ them words/ ain’t touchin’ this cat’s/
Like manikins desperately reachin’ for Goliath’s jockstrap/
I slap-the taste out your mouth till you’re tongue tied breathless/
same as blind mice getting cataracts/ you tryinna spit my way is useless/
the-truth-is/ disrepute-is-allergic-to-my-ruthlessness/
just as the HIV virus getting infected itself by more diseases/
Who’s sicker? None other/I’m quick-to-the-draw/
Your flow’s once in a month/ I put your e-rap style on menopause/
Simply because/ you Micro Soft/ I’m strictly Word Perfect/
Forgeddit/I could dumb down the audiovisual and still win with no effort/
Let-it-be-known-immediately-imaginary-thrones-don’t-move-me/
‘Cos I-Lokh-Em-down-literally-meaning-I’m victorious-even-in-sleep/
you-on the other hand-are-just-a-geek’s-passing-wet dream/
Still masturbatin’ to the rhythms I’ve given after I’ve punched in keys/
board already is me/I Mount Everest this degenerate with everlasting punchlines
Audience looks fro-zen/ thought I was cold blooded/just told ‘em nope/ lunchtime!
Crunch rhymes/ defeating me is what FEMA means to black folks/
Trying to clock in to help the po’/wasting your time/
You’re kidding-me with those lazy paragraphs you paste up
Your soundclick spits always amount to nothing ask blank paystubs!
U-u-u Say whaa? / Damage I cause is enough to break jaws/
Forget an OKP/I unearth your teeth from the Roots/
And diss-Band your face from the front page just to erase flaws…



http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/lifthalegend_music.htm

"u wanna play ball or u wanna fight?" -- ray brown in the gym

He was just more coherent and smoother not to mention this line:

"I’m sensibly/endlessly/ spittin fire tremendously//
Metaphysically/ rhythmically/ slay your Tennessee/ tendencies//"

Good job to both though.

Soulbrotha,I didn't understand this rhyme scheme at the end(mistake?):

"U-u-u Say whaa? / Damage I cause is enough to break jaws/
Forget an OKP/I unearth your teeth from the Roots/
And diss-Band your face from the front page just to erase flaws…"

Now you know, and knowing is half the battle.

n/m

...(the end)...

shakeet

@asiaradiant

n/m

"It's the return of the gangsta, thanks ta..."

-du

n/mizzle

"I walk around with sick styles, sippin on cristal, my whole cliques wild, I'm rich pal no more sticks I'm making hits now... when I recite you takin hours to write, so if you fight just tell ya man what kinda flowers you like"
-Big L

...

R.I.P. Martin alexander (Marty Gra) Alston - my brother, my mentor , my friend-

n/m


"if i shoot u, u brainless/ if u shoot me, u famous/" - Jay - Z

http://www.soundclick.com/artist/5/youngsleep_music.htm