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mylife
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Sat Sep-17-05 06:51 AM

"i got nothing"


          

this bullshit
this raw ache

how much i care
how far i would go
to save you,
or even make you
feel better
on your way down

it's pointless
futile
unrequited

no matter
how many times
you say
i love you.

i got it all.

but i got nothing.

democracy at gunpoint isn't a democracy.

♥♥

  

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Subject Author Message Date ID
RE: i got nothing
Sep 17th 2005
1
why do i constantly see myself or my experiences
Sep 18th 2005
2
damn
Sep 20th 2005
3
archive anyone?
Sep 20th 2005
4

PhotoSynthesis
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Sat Sep-17-05 06:04 PM

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1. "RE: i got nothing"
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*Dark ... & Painfully ... Nice*

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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the perfect mistake
Member since Dec 19th 2004
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Sun Sep-18-05 11:37 AM

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2. "why do i constantly see myself or my experiences"
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in your words?

it's pointless
futile
unrequited

no matter
how many times
you say
i love you.

i got it all.

but i got nothing.

*nods* peace~

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Pinwheels and Hula Hoops: my book
http://www.lulu.com/content/132318

http://msmind.blogspot.com

hopefully people can see
my music is tethered to my brain. Šjohn mayer

  

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eclipsedInI
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Tue Sep-20-05 01:55 PM

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3. "damn"
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don't be so destitute son

u killing me

raw, petitive without the re

so i guess staccato

i liked

_____________________
puttin' the roota in the toota since 98'

  

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hdub
Member since Oct 19th 2004
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Tue Sep-20-05 06:21 PM

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4. "archive anyone?"
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i loves it!

your words really illustrate an experience we all can relate to- and do it vidily and well

so much truth in this

and its lyrical

dug dug and dug some more

...(the end)...

  

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