"the countdown before the decisive moment that cause distinct revealuatio"
---- the countdown before the decisive moment that cause distinct revealuation -----
i am lost between spaces of hours gone left right of the second hand and misbegotten minute clicks clock the time spent with cuckoos and chimes on linoleum floors in cold corridors caught spacelessly without faith between decisive strokes of time I suspend without body but active mind preceeding the fatal fall I falter before shattering.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~newolf~*~*~*~*~*~*~
the light: so, you're having a pre-pre-midlfe crisis? wolfie: yes. the light: well, that's wonderful!
2. "just one day, i'd like to walk around in ur head" In response to Reply # 0
more than i do so on here:
left right of the second hand and misbegotten minute clicks clock the time spent with cuckoos and chimes on linoleum floors in cold corridors caught spacelessly without faith between decisive strokes of time I suspend without body but active mind
whatever it is you are writing out... continue to do so. peace~
3. "RE: the countdown before the decisive moment that cause distinct revealu" In response to Reply # 0
I had the image of someone curled up, foetal position, on the floor of an institution of some kind. The waiting felt drawn out and traumatic, but inevitable— almost tragic in its inevitability. I'm rambling, I know (!). I have no idea what the person was waiting for, but understand it was pivotal (thanks to the title). Had to read it a couple times as I usually use punctuation as a parachute. Liked the 'linoleum floors'— indicative of a bygone era in many respects, and also of coldness or sterility. Liked the alliteration in the last couple of lines. And 'shattering' is always a good word— emotive, and can be literal and allegorical simultaneously.
Trust all is well, *waves & cyber hug* ____________________________________________________
"The words the happy say Are paltry melody But those the silent feel Are beautiful" -Emily Dickinson
"If something has to change, then it always does. You don't need this disease, no not right now." -Editors
"You know that we're all afraid of waking every day" -Hood
I'm still trying to figure out what it's about to me. But, trust me, I'll be back to give it another read. I love these lines here:
decisive strokes of time I suspend without body but active mind preceeding the fatal fall I falter before shattering. ~*~ Beauty is in my ear I sketch beautiful rhythms with a pen canvassing my thoughts artfully articulated into harmonies of words ~*~ KSB ~*~
"My feelings or emotions or anything at all will reverberate throughout the halls of a poem." ~KSB~
"My fear is my only courage." Bob Marley
~~~~~~~~ When One learns to live without fear, then One cannot be broken.
7. "i wrote this in a hallway" In response to Reply # 0 Thu Mar-03-05 06:31 PM
one of the worst hours spent in a while. just sitting there, knowing what was being said about me, but having to respect secrecy and just wait out there. the hallway was cold, the building is haunted, and i just sat there. it was painful. i hope this captured that.
ps thanks for all the love and support
~*~*~*~*~*~*~newolf~*~*~*~*~*~*~
the light: so, you're having a pre-pre-midlfe crisis? wolfie: yes. the light: well, that's wonderful!
9. "RE: the countdown before the decisive moment that cause distinct revealu..." In response to Reply # 0
This "sounds" like a ~waiting~ pCe -- With time moving slower than usual -- (Or at least seeming like it's moving slower)
I sense apprehension mixxed with frustration -- Like TIME ain't on your side!
Sorry for the delayed reaction -- But TIME be's like dat sometimes! --
^UP^
A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence -- I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥
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