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invisible ink
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"funky lowdown"


  

          



iíve become
melted
scientific fact
that
ice does
evaporate when heat
hits thigh bone.

i wonder
if high
is a state
in your being

i search
for new definitions of
open
and I see
you

like an adjective
conjugated in the action
of a noun.
thereís much more
to your natural wonders.

work on
the back of my neck
with soft grazes
like fancy feathers
from a fan dance.

you
kiss
like you got
a certificate
or
diploma in soft speak.


I gotta mind
to readjust my vision
just to reflect myself
better in your light
so when you decide to turn the lights off

we can
burn
in the dark
together.



Kimabe 2005

if you didn't define yourself for yourself you'd be crunched into other peoples fantasies of you an eaten alive.

audre lorde

  

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Ahhh Haaa ...
Aug 10th 2005
1
RE: Ahhh Haaa ...
Aug 10th 2005
2
RE: Ahhh Haaa ...
Aug 10th 2005
3
RE: Ahhh Haaa ...
Aug 10th 2005
4
RE: Ahhh Haaa ...
Aug 10th 2005
5
i think you started this sooo right.
Aug 10th 2005
6
RE: i think you started this sooo right.
Aug 11th 2005
11
RE: funky lowdown
Aug 10th 2005
7
hey hey hay
Aug 11th 2005
12
RE: funky lowdown
Aug 10th 2005
8
we can burn in the dark together
Aug 10th 2005
9
Damn Gurl
Aug 10th 2005
10
RE: Damn Gurl
Aug 11th 2005
13
I'm Sorry ...
Aug 13th 2005
14
Oh Yes -- And FurtherMore -- ARCHIVE 2nd'd
Aug 29th 2005
15

PhotoSynthesis
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Wed Aug-10-05 12:34 PM

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1. "Ahhh Haaa ..."
In response to Reply # 0


          

I ain'st sayin' nutthin' but: "Ahhh Haaaaa!" --

I'm smiling & *sighing* at the same time -- But then -- Reading your work does that to me anywayz -- *sigh*


>I gotta mind
>to readjust my vision
>just to reflect myself
>better in your light
>so when you decide to turn the lights off

>we can
>burn
>in the dark
>together.


(((Slow Burn))) -- "YOUR" turn to speak in tongues --



A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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invisible ink
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Wed Aug-10-05 03:47 PM

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2. "RE: Ahhh Haaa ..."
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(lol)...i ain't messin' witchu...(laughing)

if you didn't define yourself for yourself you'd be crunched into other peoples fantasies of you an eaten alive.

audre lorde

  

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invisible ink
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3. "RE: Ahhh Haaa ..."
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(lol)...i ain't messin' witchu...(laughing)

if you didn't define yourself for yourself you'd be crunched into other peoples fantasies of you an eaten alive.

audre lorde

  

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invisible ink
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4. "RE: Ahhh Haaa ..."
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(lol)...i ain't messin' witchu...(laughing)

if you didn't define yourself for yourself you'd be crunched into other peoples fantasies of you an eaten alive.

audre lorde

  

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invisible ink
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5. "RE: Ahhh Haaa ..."
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(lol)...i ain't messin' witchu...(laughing)

if you didn't define yourself for yourself you'd be crunched into other peoples fantasies of you an eaten alive.

audre lorde

  

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paperdollpoet
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Wed Aug-10-05 04:23 PM

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6. "i think you started this sooo right."
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iíve become
melted
scientific fact
that
ice does
evaporate when heat
hits thigh bone.

cause that is just plain ole' sexy.
---
www.sheflypaper.com

  

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invisible ink
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Thu Aug-11-05 11:02 AM

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11. "RE: i think you started this sooo right."
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lei...coming from u that is truly high praise my fellow scorpio....k

if you didn't define yourself for yourself you'd be crunched into other peoples fantasies of you an eaten alive.

audre lorde

  

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jayare214
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Wed Aug-10-05 04:57 PM

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7. "RE: funky lowdown"
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holy shit! its you!!!!!
damn ive missed reading your work!!!!
shit if you are posting agian ill start reading everyday again.
damn!
inbox me miss when you get the chance lets connect.
-j

my music group:
http://www.facebook.com/beataroundabush
http://www.lastfm.com/beataroundabush
http://www.reverbnation.com/beataroundabush
http://www.myspace.com/beataroundabush

My beats:
www.myspace.com/jayarejohnson

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/no

  

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invisible ink
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12. "hey hey hay"
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i've posted a couple of things in the past few weeks so just go back a couple of pages...it's good to know u still around sir...i will holla...k

if you didn't define yourself for yourself you'd be crunched into other peoples fantasies of you an eaten alive.

audre lorde

  

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the_best_part
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8. "RE: funky lowdown"
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im glad you posted this. this is a lesson on how to make this subject interesting and unique.

peace

  

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the perfect mistake
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Wed Aug-10-05 06:55 PM

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9. "we can burn in the dark together"
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i'm going back to the effin drawin board..

i wonder
if high
is a state
in your being

i search
for new definitions of
open
and I see
you

like an adjective
conjugated in the action
of a noun.
thereís much more
to your natural wonders.

u're keeping it consistent... *nods*

------------------------
Pinwheels and Hula Hoops: my book
http://www.lulu.com/content/132318

http://msmind.blogspot.com

you're the ying to my yang, tre.
your words do ballet.

  

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Winter Blaze
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Wed Aug-10-05 08:39 PM

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10. "Damn Gurl"
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This whole piece was sublime and you just continue to be consistent in the comeback to the boards.

Peace

Kitkat

If fucking were graceful, I'd be your dancer

He is the flower that blooms everyday in my heart

  

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invisible ink
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13. "RE: Damn Gurl"
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u guys ...thank u for the honors...k

if you didn't define yourself for yourself you'd be crunched into other peoples fantasies of you an eaten alive.

audre lorde

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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14. "I'm Sorry ..."
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But I'm having a problem lettin' this "Funky Lowdown" go down any further than page "3" ...


^UP^ again -- Blowin' in da wind! -- *smiles*




A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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15. "Oh Yes -- And FurtherMore -- ARCHIVE 2nd'd"
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Per "Perfect Mistake's" Request -- *Uhhh Huhhh* --

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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