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LexM
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"untitled (issues)"


  

          

i want to say
something like
"i don't use
band-aids!
...i bleed thru penstrokes and
make pages drip lifewater!"

but
it sounds far too cliche
... and these days?
i fear those
more than anything.

the world is in serious need
of innovation
there are already
too many cycles
too much history
too many people
repeating...

i always wonder
if i'm part of the solution
or perpetuating the problem.

i mean,
def poetry jam
makes everyone old enough to
stay up past midnight
wannabe a poet

every hussla's the next jay-z

get shot and you're an instant ja rule
maybe even a pac or biggie-style martyr

i write 'cause i have to.
there's no goal or destination,
no record deal or cd comp--
i just do this.
automatically.
...universal ticker tape machine
running off emotional dividends
and updates on the worth of the ancestors
(refreshed daily for someone's conveinence)

so i won't really start in on
the beauty of my nubian people
the merits and/or bullshit of pussy poems or
late night thoughts of wrist-slitting and angst.

i just want to know
if any of these words have a purpose
and constantly consider
the validity
of the messenger.


  

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Subject Author Message Date ID
RE: untitled (issues)
Aug 03rd 2005
1
i think it's been yrs since i posted here.
Aug 03rd 2005
2
      RE: i think it's been yrs since i posted here.
Aug 03rd 2005
3
           *grin* thanks.
Aug 03rd 2005
4
RE: untitled (issues)
Aug 03rd 2005
5
haven't seen you in a minute
Aug 03rd 2005
6
i don't come around here much anymore
Aug 04th 2005
10
i actually did it.
Aug 04th 2005
7
Where'd you go? n/m
Aug 04th 2005
8
      warm weds
Aug 04th 2005
9
           warm weds? hmmmm Where is that?
Aug 04th 2005
11
                the 5 seasons
Aug 04th 2005
12
                     RE: the 5 seasons
Aug 05th 2005
13
RE: untitled (issues)
Aug 05th 2005
14
damn, thats hot. i feel you.
Aug 05th 2005
15
RE: untitled (issues)
Aug 05th 2005
16
'Bout Time U Came Back 2 Us ...
Aug 05th 2005
17
RE: untitled (issues)
Aug 05th 2005
18
it's good to see you shaking down the block
Aug 06th 2005
19
RE: untitled (issues)
Aug 07th 2005
20
to clear the air round here rise....
Aug 27th 2005
21
ARCHIVE SECOND~ED ...
Aug 29th 2005
22

Shakeet Lokh Em
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1. "RE: untitled (issues)"
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"i write 'cause i have to.
there's no goal or destination,
no record deal or cd comp--
i just do this.
automatically."

^This is why I write also.^ And for love of people. Some of us may disagree on the solution to our problems. Some think putting the right people in office will bring peace. Or community activism will bring stability to families. Or like myself, a strong belief in God Almighty as the answer. But we have in common the love, and the want for peace and good health not just for ourselves, but for everyone. But the message gets jaded alot of times by pseudo-activists who are pumping their own agenda. So WE write to clear the air of the fake, insincere rhetoric that those type of people put out. Thank you Lex for this. Thank you. Thumbs north. ~one~

"I'm scientific, but my reflex gangsta"- Black Thought

  

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LexM
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Wed Aug-03-05 12:31 PM

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2. "i think it's been yrs since i posted here."
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Wed Aug-03-05 12:32 PM by LexM

  

          

i wrote this this morning...lately i've been trying to assess why it's so difficult to find my (getting out there & reading/sharing) voice...

i appreciate ur appreciation.



~~~~
~*~musical revolution~*~

"The world was warned about this...The CIA calls what happened in London today "blowback." It is wrong, it is heinous, it is murder plain and simple, and it was as predictable as the sun rising in the East." ~Wm Rivers Pitt

  

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Shakeet Lokh Em
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3. "RE: i think it's been yrs since i posted here."
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>lately i've been trying to assess
>why it's so difficult to find my (getting out there &
>reading/sharing) voice...

Sometimes, real life issues can stifle our creativity. Especially in Baltimore. But I'm glad you back on that diesel. Write on sistah! ~one~

"I'm scientific, but my reflex gangsta"- Black Thought

  

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LexM
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4. "*grin* thanks."
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HueyNewton
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Wed Aug-03-05 03:30 PM

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5. "RE: untitled (issues)"
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universal ticker tape machine, imagine that . .
somebody call da doctor!!!!!!!!! {smile}

they showed us phYsically, we could reach infinitY, but mentally, through the century, we lost our identitY
-Rakim

  

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ASIEM
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6. "haven't seen you in a minute"
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Wed Aug-03-05 03:58 PM by ASIEM

  

          

when GOD wants a message heard He will deliver it in several tongues ways and forms and in that i say yes "be cause I am a poet" speaks the same language feel me? i am feelin you in this. (periOd) and "Al Qalam (The Pen)" is eternal
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
checkout these sites
http://4luvofpoetry.com
www.poetology.com

  

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LexM
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Thu Aug-04-05 08:23 AM

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10. "i don't come around here much anymore"
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for whatever reason....

i guess i just threw this up in anticipation of breaking the ice.

but ur always reading/responding. i appreciate that.

peace


~~~~
~*~musical revolution~*~

"The world was warned about this...The CIA calls what happened in London today "blowback." It is wrong, it is heinous, it is murder plain and simple, and it was as predictable as the sun rising in the East." ~Wm Rivers Pitt

  

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LexM
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7. "i actually did it."
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i went to a venue where i know ppl i know don't usually go

and one where i don't feel entirely comfortable

and i got up there and i did it

and i'm still breathing.

wow.

  

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Shakeet Lokh Em
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8. "Where'd you go? n/m"
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"I'm scientific, but my reflex gangsta"- Black Thought

  

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LexM
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9. "warm weds"
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Thu Aug-04-05 08:20 AM by LexM

  

          

i haven't liked the vibe there for years.

i'm more of an organic soul/notre maison type...at least, that's where i usually run into folks i know/knew.

i can't really explain it...some places are just more "homey" than others, u know?

~~~~
~*~musical revolution~*~

"The world was warned about this...The CIA calls what happened in London today "blowback." It is wrong, it is heinous, it is murder plain and simple, and it was as predictable as the sun rising in the East." ~Wm Rivers Pitt

  

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Shakeet Lokh Em
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11. "warm weds? hmmmm Where is that?"
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AndI only go to Organic Soul. They give you mad love and encouragement to just let your art shine. I'm still tryin to make my way to XandO's though.

"I'm scientific, but my reflex gangsta"- Black Thought

  

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LexM
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12. "the 5 seasons"
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down on guilford ave.

i'm not one to discourage...you might find you like it. but if you're more an organic soul type, it may turn you off.

i *knew* i wasn't gonna take my nervous ass on organic's stage my (sortakinda) first time out.

delrica's hounded me into getting up there at xando once or twice, but i knew i had to do it in front of a bunch of ppl i didn't know. and it worked. i only saw 2 ppl i knew out of the whole crowd.

successful experiment

~~~~
~*~musical revolution~*~

"The world was warned about this...The CIA calls what happened in London today "blowback." It is wrong, it is heinous, it is murder plain and simple, and it was as predictable as the sun rising in the East." ~Wm Rivers Pitt

  

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delrica
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13. "RE: the 5 seasons"
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see...delrica knows best

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Cop my stuff, mayne!

My first chapbook: "This Chapbook Was Made With Pilfered Office Products" available now - $6.00

My 2nd chapbook, coming in 2007: "Orgasms and Ice Cream"

fmi: http://www.myspace.com/delrica

  

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invisible ink
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14. "RE: untitled (issues)"
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amen...good to see you ....miss k

if you didn't define yourself for yourself you'd be crunched into other peoples fantasies of you an eaten alive.

audre lorde

  

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15. "damn, thats hot. i feel you."
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*****
Wipe your feet really good on the rhythm rug
If you feel the urge to freak, do the jitterbug
Come and spread your arms if you really need a hugİa tribe called quest
________________________
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minikiss
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16. "RE: untitled (issues)"
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>...i bleed thru penstrokes and
>make pages drip lifewater!"

Oh GOd, sometimes you write cause thats the only way to get out of the bottom less pit. joy comes from pain and pain from joy, its lifes story


>i write 'cause i have to.
>there's no goal or destination,
>no record deal or cd comp--
>i just do this.
>automatically.
>

its from within, as i said above, its the only way to survive in this world of uncertainty. Its divine.. it gives strength.. divine strength

I loved this... i really did

"the origin of a mans heart is black" laurynhill

Life aint complete without minikiss- "im lifes last puzzle"

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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17. "'Bout Time U Came Back 2 Us ..."
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You took a long enuff break -- ( BUT BREAK~TIME IS OVER -- )

Now it's time to share -- Inspire -- and bless us with your words! -- *smiles*


*You've Been Missed*


Stick Around -- *Pretty Please*


Wonderful flow by the way! --



A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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BarTek
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18. "RE: untitled (issues)"
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this is a beautiful piece...sooooo refreshing.
peace

  

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19. "it's good to see you shaking down the block"
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i mean,
def poetry jam
makes everyone old enough to
stay up past midnight
wannabe a poet

every hussla's the next jay-z

get shot and you're an instant ja rule
maybe even a pac or biggie-style martyr

i write 'cause i have to.
there's no goal or destination,
no record deal or cd comp--
i just do this.
automatically.

amen... Peace~


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Pinwheels and Hula Hoops: my book
http://www.lulu.com/content/132318

http://msmind.blogspot.com

you're the ying to my yang, tre.
your words do ballet.

  

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newolf
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20. "RE: untitled (issues)"
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write 'cause i have to.
there's no goal or destination,
no record deal or cd comp--
i just do this.
automatically.



this is all of us.

i've always loved your stuff, might i add.

============sig========================
newolf, formerly wolfie.

time to save the world, where in the world is all the time?

  

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ASIEM
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21. "to clear the air round here rise...."
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from the deep and make shallow dreamers think

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

  

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22. "ARCHIVE SECOND~ED ..."
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Per the "Perfect Mistake's" suggestion -- *Yuuup* --

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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