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PhotoSynthesis
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"N / Between / Dreamz"
Fri Jul-29-05 09:34 PM by PhotoSynthesis

          

You know that place?
Where we face depth
In other dimensions and diadems
Watching stars shine over rainbows
Under spinning planets
Around midnight
That place where
If I coulda, woulda, shoulda – (But I didn’t) --
Manifests itself N2 concrete possibilities
Previous choices & decisions fade as surreality shades life
In soft charcoals -- Vivid water colors -- And acrylic oils
In our dreams …
We walk on marshmallow clouds, hovering over vicious volcanos
Totally in control of time & space
You know that place?
Where those who’re married – Are single
And those who’re single – Are married
And those who’re lost -- are found
And those who’re found – get lost
And those who’re bound -- are free
And those who’re free – get tied ^UP^ with velvet ropes & handcuffs --
And those who’re stressed – Get undressed and unwind
And those who’re loose – Get wound ^UP^ and defined
Runnin’ aound like the energizer bunny on fresh batteries
You know that place?
That place where we CAN turn back the hands of time …
(((Silver Lined)))
We CAN change fate as we wait for blind~dates with destiny
Confessed to be the best of "We" –
Alter egos transform timid Clark
Into Superman –
Peter Parker into Spiderman
In our dreams we’re not only Super Heros
We’re gods
At odds with reality
Fighting problems – issues – shit~u~ations –
As daylight hours blind us to see
Sometimes we drown in melted butter
As credits roll past movie scenes where dreams come true
~Alphabetically~
And medically our hearts stop on the drop of a dime
While we swim in shark infested waters
Like mermen -- Or mermaid daughters
Fishing for answers to questions of the Uni~Verse
Unrehearsed
We diligently act out Shakespeare’s curiosity:
??? “TO BE – OR NOT TO BE “ ???
Hoping for a different answer each time
But 4 now, I think I’m finished with this rhyme
Sleep will come – EVENTUALLY --




A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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SSSSSSSSSHHHHHHHHHHHHHEEEEEEEEEEETTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!
Jul 29th 2005
1
that was a mouthful,ha...i like it...Photo on acid w/this one.
Jul 29th 2005
2
damn...i see why cats is thirt for photo around here...
Jul 29th 2005
3
Get'em Photo
Jul 29th 2005
4
RE: N / Between / Dreamz
Jul 30th 2005
5
wtf... Archive, and SOMEBODY better second that
Jul 30th 2005
6
*Photo Gets A Bar Of Soap*
Aug 01st 2005
16
Up^^^^
Jul 31st 2005
7
I always wanted to be spiderman!
Jul 31st 2005
8
RE: N / Between / Dreamz
Jul 31st 2005
9
RE: N / Between / Dreamz
Jul 31st 2005
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RE: N / Between / Dreamz
Jul 31st 2005
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Maaaaaaaaan
Aug 01st 2005
12
RE: N / Between / Dreamz
Aug 01st 2005
13
You are so sick...
Aug 01st 2005
14
RE: You are so sick...
Aug 01st 2005
15
      Mmmm hmm...
Aug 01st 2005
17
           You Funny Ms. Bonita ...
Aug 01st 2005
18
RE: N / Between / Dreamz
Aug 02nd 2005
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RE: N / Between / Dreamz
Aug 02nd 2005
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archive seconded
Aug 02nd 2005
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RE: N / Between / Dreamz
Aug 02nd 2005
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RE: N / Between / Dreamz
Aug 02nd 2005
23
Wow....
Aug 03rd 2005
24

bonitaapplebaum71481
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1. "SSSSSSSSSHHHHHHHHHHHHHEEEEEEEEEEETTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!"
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>You know that place?
>Where we face depth
>In other dimensions and diadems
>Watching stars shine over rainbows
>Under spinning planets
>Around midnight
>That place where
>If I coulda, woulda, shoulda – (But I didn’t) --
>Manifests itself N2 concrete possibilities
>Previous choices & decisions fade as surreality shades life
>In soft charcoals -- Vivid water colors -- And acrylic oils
>In our dreams …
>We walk on marshmallow clouds, hovering over vicious volcanos
>Totally in control of time & space
>You know that place?
>Where those who’re married – Are single
>And those who’re single – Are married
>And those who’re lost -- are found
>And those who’re found – get lost
>And those who’re bound -- are free
>And those who’re free – get tied ^UP^ with velvet ropes & handcuffs --
>And those who’re stressed – Get undressed and unwind
>And those who’re loose – Get wound ^UP^ and defined
>Runnin’ aound like the energizer bunny on fresh batteries
>You know that place?
>That place where we CAN turn back the hands of time …
>(((Silver Lined)))
>We CAN change fate as we wait for blind~dates with destiny
>Confessed to be the best of "We" –
>Alter egos transform timid Clark
>Into Superman –
>Peter Parker into Spiderman
>In our dreams we’re not only Super Heros
>We’re gods
>At odds with reality
>Fighting problems – issues – shit~u~ations –
>As daylight hours blind us to see
>Sometimes we drown in melted butter
>As credits roll past movie scenes where dreams come true
>~Alphabetically~
>And medically our hearts stop on the drop of a dime
>While we swim in shark infested waters
>Like mermen -- Or mermaid daughters
>Fishing for answers to questions of the Uni~Verse
>Unrehearsed
>We diligently act out Shakespeare’s curiosity:
>??? “TO BE – OR NOT TO BE “ ???
>Hoping for a different answer each time
>But 4 now, I think I’m finished with this flow
>Sleep will come – EVENTUALLY --

yo...
this flow was so hot I'm straight quotin this whole bidness!! You put yo' foot in this ish fo' real and I'm luvin it!! Do it up girl!!!


~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Love at the lips was touch

As sweet as I could bear;

And once that seemed too much;

I lived on air - Robert Frost

  

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blak_yukon
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2. "that was a mouthful,ha...i like it...Photo on acid w/this one."
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<<----reporting live-----

http://www.myspace.com/vicversus

  

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Jason Voorhies
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3. "damn...i see why cats is thirt for photo around here..."
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<---tryna git back to my artsy thing.

  

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southernboy_423
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4. "Get'em Photo"
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....that shit was hot, blazing. It flowed like a muthafucka.


....and so it goes, im at it again. Fix ur fucking face, Im in the building!

http://www.soundclick.com/band/5/youngsleep_music.htm

"I had to get off the boat, so I can walk on water". - Jay-Z

  

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HueyNewton
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5. "RE: N / Between / Dreamz"
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believe me i know that place very well photo
n / between / dreamz i'm there right now . . {winked eye}
i especially enjoyed this piece, my bohemian mindset relates!!!
{smile}

they showed us phYsically, we could reach infinitY, but mentally, through the century, we lost our identitY
-Rakim

  

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Lucky187
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6. "wtf... Archive, and SOMEBODY better second that"
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What the fuck is that? How the FUCK do you do that? Can you teach me? This was seriously- holy god damned motherfuckin' shiiiiiiiiiiiiit!

This is seriously, imo, the BEST mofukkin' piece I've EVER read, in books, heard on DefPoetry, or read on Okay. I always like your shit- but THIS was simply amazing.


Why ain't I seen a Photobook, yet?

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Sig-

"I wandered around darkened hallways,
Lab-rynth, filled with,
Blood vessels and plasma,
Caught glances of windows-
Peeking OUT, exoflective,
Invective messages left on my own voice mail..
And by looking out from within?

I

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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16. "*Photo Gets A Bar Of Soap*"
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Mon Aug-01-05 09:30 PM by PhotoSynthesis

          

>What the fuck is that? How the FUCK do you do that? Can you teach me? This was seriously- holy god damned motherfuckin' shiiiiiiiiiiiiit!

*Photo commences to washin' out Lucky's dirty Mouf* --

Listerine?


(((Now Rinse))) -- *chuckles*


Thanx 4 the love sweetie -- Now watch yo mouth! --


>Why ain't I seen a Photobook, yet?

You wanna see some of my baby pictures? -- *hehehe*





A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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bonitaapplebaum71481
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7. "Up^^^^"
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cuz this is mos def sum hot Archive ish...


~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Love at the lips was touch

As sweet as I could bear;

And once that seemed too much;

I lived on air - Robert Frost

  

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8. "I always wanted to be spiderman!"
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Or Wolverine. I like this drop. Im'a start my own 'Alter ego' of sorts...or wait, am I already...uuuhh...shhh... dont tell 'em....or is that schitzo-sumthin??? uh, nevermind!LOL


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9. "RE: N / Between / Dreamz"
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u betta do that damn thang, shawdy!!!!!!!!!!!! yeah, folk, that was straight up and down. that was like a batch of bigg mama's greens or, in my case, nana's paella y tostones! good for the soul. soul food indeed!!!!!!!! write on, write on!

Aiden Waves, the cleansing fire

"just as the pureness of honey can sanctify my sins, i say let ur love blow in the wind...." -me!

  

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10. "RE: N / Between / Dreamz"
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hot as always

when i spit i flood the block and walk on water like christ/ i'm a mix of jay-z and nas which makes me twice as nice
-
the unknown

  

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11. "RE: N / Between / Dreamz"
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you are definitely the POET LAURETTE round here and yes i have said that at many times maybe even for some others but for real hands down in this forum there is no other consistantley droppin bombs like you...i mean besides havin poems that speak to the heart audio's that bring solace to the ear and mind but an honest love for writing that is felt and often underappreciated...SALUTE SALUTATIONS LACHEIM ALLAHUAKBAR may you keep doin your do. it is hard to say quite enough bout you. many thanks for being there this piece just did it for me. it is the quintessential work that says no matter where you been there is another side.
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
checkout these sites
http://4luvofpoetry.com
www.poetology.com

  

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12. "Maaaaaaaaan"
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Do I have to comment anymore? I'ma just start replyin with a n/m, just so you know I dropped by, love. And you know by default I would say somethin like: I.LOVED.THIS. But I don't wanna sound jaded, cuz I keep sayin that about your pieces. Ack! Anyway, um...I loved it. lol That r.e.m. is a beast. It can bring you a lot of things. Peace or pause. And then when we awaken we're like, "does that have any real meaning to my conscious state?" Hmmm, I' still tryin to figure that one out. Thumbs north. ~one~

"I'm scientific, but my reflex gangsta"- Black Thought

  

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13. "RE: N / Between / Dreamz"
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poetry in motion, you moved me with that on

"those who're stressed get undressed and unwind"

beautiful

peace

  

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14. "You are so sick..."
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My God.

~Complex with the creative content on a conquest with concepts and context as concrete as poetry
~Its real and ill when I be sitting still yet still rocking to my mental rhythme.
~Its just right when I write

http://www.myspace.com/decisive147

  

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15. "RE: You are so sick..."
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I do feel a lil' feverish -- You wanna take my temperature, Doctor "D"? -- -- *chuckles*



A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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17. "Mmmm hmm..."
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you took mad long replyin back to the praise you was recievin... what were you waiting for?? For us to bow down to the lyrical genius that is Photo?? Sssssshhhhhheeeeeetttt!!! Oh hell, what am I fronting for?? Hail to the queen!!!

*Bows Immensely*


~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Love at the lips was touch

As sweet as I could bear;

And once that seemed too much;

I lived on air - Robert Frost

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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18. "You Funny Ms. Bonita ..."
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Nahhhh but really -- I'm not one for replying to each and every response or comment made on my Posts -- *shrugggs*

I appreciate the love from EVERYONE tho -- But I'll prolly only comment on certain threads -- (Usually for comic relief) -- Hoping someone will laugh or chuckle at my reply)

Believe it or not -- I have a hard time accepting compliments in real life as well -- So I play it off with a jokie joke -- *chuckles*

Thank YOU for your support & love Ms. Bonita -- I really appreciate you! --


A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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19. "RE: N / Between / Dreamz"
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nice very nice

peace

  

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20. "RE: N / Between / Dreamz"
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"We diligently act out Shakespeare’s curiosity:
??? “TO BE – OR NOT TO BE “ ???"

If this ain't the truth...

"Do to others what you would others have done unto you." - The Lord Jesus Christ

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21. "archive seconded"
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somebody else inbox the mods tho cause im on vacation- sort of

this is one of your best pho

as always sonically on point but the imagery in here is off the hook

i do know that place and i think for it all the time

damn

damn

i might come back to this right now i want a few more reads

...(the end)...

  

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22. "RE: N / Between / Dreamz"
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hmm, aren't we always dreaming..?...nice

  

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23. "RE: N / Between / Dreamz"
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I know this place all too-well... your description is beautiful and vivid.
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"To be a poet is a condition, not a profession."
- Robert Frost

  

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24. "Wow...."
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Your brilliance never ceases to amaze ME! I felt like i was N/between/Dreamz readin that piece. You go Girl, keep doing the Damn Thang!

Only God can judge me - 2Pac

  

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