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Otto
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Fri Feb-18-05 10:21 AM

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"insurrection of mannequins."


  

          



my skin is a ream of genetic fabric
— imported from Europe, on a ship,
nevertheless — stretched conservatively
over the backbone pattern of a man, honest;
tailored so the seams — drudgery — are
hidden. notwithstanding, victim of vision,
manhecan be reduced to a mannequin—
frivolously posing in a sill, subject of
consumers shop through the window
of their eyes. blink the facade of buildings and
inhibit surveyors of exterior architecture—
pull down all blinds! the newspaper,
it advertises a daily class for interior design.

  

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Subject Author Message Date ID
this is publishable work...
Feb 18th 2005
1
:::A B S T R A C T:::
Feb 18th 2005
2
a ghost in the shell.
Feb 18th 2005
3
are you a serial killer
Feb 19th 2005
4
sorry i slept.
Feb 21st 2005
5
...as hunuh would comically say:
Feb 25th 2005
6
lol
Feb 25th 2005
7
RE: insurrection of mannequins.
Mar 01st 2005
8
You had me at: "my skin is a ream..."
Mar 02nd 2005
9
i love what you do with words
Mar 02nd 2005
10
^UP^ 4 Mannequins --
Mar 07th 2005
11
whoa..
Mar 07th 2005
12
RE: insurrection of mannequins.
Mar 07th 2005
13
Um hm
Apr 14th 2005
17
as always...
Mar 08th 2005
14
RE: insurrection of mannequins.
Mar 10th 2005
15
*waves*
Apr 14th 2005
16
archive
Jul 25th 2005
18
Oooooooooooottoooooo!
Jul 25th 2005
19
you need to totes archive.....
Jul 26th 2005
20

Morehouse
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Fri Feb-18-05 12:28 PM

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1. "this is publishable work..."
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imma proof it.

there's a site i want you to check out.
hit me up on im or inbox me.

hot shit.
peace.

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"At least embarrassment is not an imitation.
It's intimacy for beginners,
the orgasm no one cares to fake.
I almost admire it. I almost wrote despise." -Alice Fulton

"The future is a grey seagull
Tattling in its cat-voice of departure.
Age and terror, like nurses, attend her,
And a drowned man, complaining of the great cold,
Crawls up out of the sea."
-Sylvia Plath

"I would like to be the air
that inhabits you for a moment
only. I would like to be that unnoticed
& that necessary." -Margaret Atwood

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myself is sculptor of
your body’s idiom:
the musician of your wrists;
the poet who is afraid
only to mistranslate
a rhythm in your hair...
-E.E. Cummings

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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Fri Feb-18-05 01:09 PM

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2. ":::A B S T R A C T:::"
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I'm luv'n it -- *No Doubt* -- Cuz it's on anotha level of mental excursions -- Trekkin' thru the mind of Otto~mania! -- *smiles*

>my skin is a ream of genetic fabric
>— imported from Europe, on a ship,
>nevertheless — stretched conservatively
>over the backbone pattern of a man, honest;
>tailored so the seams — drudgery — are
>hidden.


Crazy 'bout the Otto~Man! -- *Yuuuup*

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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bluetiger
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Fri Feb-18-05 11:13 PM

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3. "a ghost in the shell."
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The story of life is quicker than the wink of an eye.
The story of love is hello and goodbye.
Until we meet again.

"why do we have a war on terrorism? we need a war on apathy and ignorance." - maynard james keenan

love is the law - love under will

♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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don't be fkn evil.

  

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lunaeco
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Sat Feb-19-05 12:57 AM

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4. "are you a serial killer"
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this is silence-of-the-lambs-ish scary you know
i get confused at that artist-passionate-expressive-breaking it down into detailed wonderings-murderer border sometimes.
great writing.
bless

~~~


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hunuh
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5. "sorry i slept."
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that was wow man.

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when whodini made friends it was well spoken.

  

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Otto
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Fri Feb-25-05 09:57 AM

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6. "...as hunuh would comically say:"
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...tumble weed rolls by...

-Otto

  

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bluetiger
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7. "lol"
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The story of life is quicker than the wink of an eye.
The story of love is hello and goodbye.
Until we meet again.

"why do we have a war on terrorism? we need a war on apathy and ignorance." - maynard james keenan

love is the law - love under will

♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

¥Ŧ‡₪¢¤©ŘÐ

♀¤º°`°º¤ø,¸¸,ø¤º°`°º¤ø¤º°`°º¤ø,¸¸,ø¤º°`°º¤♀


don't be fkn evil.

  

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soulchild
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Tue Mar-01-05 05:38 PM

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8. "RE: insurrection of mannequins."
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good work otto.
i think you already know what i think...




  

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Socially Inept
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9. "You had me at: "my skin is a ream...""
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Ridiculously dope.

==========================================================
Me: "I dunno...is "D'Lena" (a) hood (name)?"
Morpheme: "yes D'Fuck it is."



Hmm...I don't think I'm a 'sig' person...

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(and birds sing sweeter
than books
tell how)

  

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the perfect mistake
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Wed Mar-02-05 01:40 PM

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10. "i love what you do with words"
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you seem to open up a new window (excuse the pun) with every post.

hidden. notwithstanding, victim of vision,
manhecan be reduced to a mannequin—
frivolously posing in a sill, subject of
consumers shop through the window
of their eyes

those are my fav lines... Peace~







================





On
the corner of hope
and nowhere

i stood. ©revion

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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11. "^UP^ 4 Mannequins --"
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With clothes on *Of Course* -- ;^)

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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Phenomenality
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12. "whoa.."
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>
>
>my skin is a ream of genetic fabric
>— imported from Europe, on a ship,
>nevertheless — stretched conservatively
>over the backbone pattern of a man, honest;
>tailored so the seams — drudgery — are
>hidden.
>----->daaaayum..

notwithstanding, victim of vision,
>manhecan be reduced to a mannequin—
>frivolously posing in a sill, subject of
>consumers shop through the window
>of their eyes. blink the facade of buildings and
>inhibit surveyors of exterior architecture—
>pull down all blinds! the newspaper,
>it advertises a daily class for interior design.
>----->otto.. this was RIDICULOUS man.. i dont know how i missed it when u first posted.. unbelievable.. truly.

Breathe E.Z.
~ Zhana ~

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when the door is so wide open?" ~Rumi

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"Though we seem to be sleeping,
there is an inner wakefulness
that directs the dream,
and that will eventually startle us back
to the truth of who we are." ~Rumi



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MiracleRic
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13. "RE: insurrection of mannequins."
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hunuh was right, get ya copywrite ready, and get to publishing, this may be one of my favs of urs ever..dare i say archive?????

i want to read this often

ill command of words yo

Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

Building repetoires (c) spm since 1983

  

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mara
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17. "Um hm"
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"get ya copywrite ready, and get to publishing"

I tell him this but I don't think he listens.

*I'm hella hella sexy*

  

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wolfie
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14. "as always..."
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excellent.

~*~*~*~*~*~*~newolf~*~*~*~*~*~*~

the light: so, you're having a pre-pre-midlfe crisis?
wolfie: yes.
the light: well, that's wonderful!


icantspell

  

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gsquared
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15. "RE: insurrection of mannequins."
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very nice work..

  

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mara
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16. "*waves*"
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my skin is a ream of genetic fabric
— imported from Europe, on a ship,
nevertheless — stretched conservatively
over the backbone pattern of a man, honest;
tailored so the seams

*I like way this was phrased*

*I'm hella hella sexy*

  

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rgv
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18. "archive"
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i just want chu to know
how i feel
how i feel

  

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Lucky187
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19. "Oooooooooooottoooooo!"
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This is the first shit I seen since I been back, from you, and its as good as ever.. I think you might see if you read my shit that I've fallen off somewhat- how the fuck you stay so good?

If anyone here is pro-level, dawg, its you. You and Decstar always been my favorite poets on here, and this is proof of why. I can't even quote, cause ya shit is all so good I'd have to do the whole thing, and I couldn't even say anything coherent. Dope drop.

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Sig-

"I wandered around darkened hallways,
Lab-rynth, filled with,
Blood vessels and plasma,
Caught glances of windows-
Peeking OUT, exoflective,
Invective messages left on my own voice mail..
And by looking out from within?

I

  

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bonitaapplebaum71481
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Tue Jul-26-05 10:01 AM

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20. "you need to totes archive....."
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this is to the moderators... Delrica.... but good job man, cool beans...


~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Love at the lips was touch

As sweet as I could bear;

And once that seemed too much;

I lived on air - Robert Frost

  

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