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KnowOne
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"KING O' DA RING TOURNEY III (semis)"


  

          

Prolif VS hdub


lets get it.......

Dead line is this Wed.

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(Insert Don King voice)
Jul 11th 2005
1
a few technical difficulties...
Jul 13th 2005
2
yeah lif's verse is in....
Jul 13th 2005
3
      RE: yeah lif's verse is in....
Jul 14th 2005
4
Prolif VS hdub
Jul 14th 2005
5
Prolif VS hdub
Jul 14th 2005
7
meh
Jul 14th 2005
8
Prolif
Jul 14th 2005
9
*Prolif*
Jul 14th 2005
10
Prolif
Jul 14th 2005
11
RE: Prolif VS hdub
Jul 14th 2005
12
RE: Prolif VS hdub
Jul 15th 2005
14
wow
Jul 15th 2005
17
      RE: wow
Jul 16th 2005
22
      RE: wow
Jul 16th 2005
24
      LOL.
Jul 18th 2005
43
      RE: wow
Jul 18th 2005
47
woah... unexpected... but here's my critique
Jul 16th 2005
18
Leaves Lurk Mode
Jul 16th 2005
19
MY ode to okp.....
Jul 16th 2005
20
      don't know about y'all, but...
Jul 16th 2005
23
      Are you From NYC...
Jul 18th 2005
44
           ^^^this said from the infamous crew cock-rider^^^
Jul 18th 2005
46
           Whatch your mouth...
Jul 18th 2005
48
                i thought u lost in rd 1...lmfao
Jul 19th 2005
52
                     RE: i thought u lost in rd 1...lmfao
Jul 19th 2005
55
           ummmm
Jul 18th 2005
49
      RE: MY ode to okp.....
Jul 16th 2005
25
      RE: MY ode to okp.....
Jul 17th 2005
35
      ...I'ma be cordial about this...
Jul 18th 2005
37
           RE: ...I'ma be cordial about this...
Jul 18th 2005
39
                lmao
Jul 18th 2005
40
      There are too many Of yous on the website.
Jul 18th 2005
45
           *sigh*
Jul 18th 2005
50
                RE: *sigh*
Jul 19th 2005
54
      *LoL* @ Dub ...
Jul 16th 2005
26
      WTF man?!!! no excuse..
Jul 16th 2005
27
      LMFAO
Jul 16th 2005
29
      RE: LMFAO
Jul 18th 2005
42
      this is why i lurk....
Jul 17th 2005
30
      I just lost a lotta respect for you.
Jul 17th 2005
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      RE: I just lost a lotta respect for you.
Jul 17th 2005
33
      RE: MY ode to okp.....
Jul 18th 2005
36
****audio***
Jul 14th 2005
6
hmmm
Jul 14th 2005
13
RE: ****audio***
Jul 15th 2005
15
RE: ****audio***
Jul 16th 2005
21
stop actin like a little bitch, lol
Jul 16th 2005
28
      RE: stop actin like a little bitch, lol
Jul 18th 2005
41
           BUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAHAHAHHAHAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAA
Jul 19th 2005
53
RE: ****audio***
Jul 17th 2005
34
RE: KING O' DA RING TOURNEY III (semis)
Jul 15th 2005
16
this is d funniest shit i've seen n a while not talking about d battle
Jul 17th 2005
31
History Repeats Itself ...
Jul 18th 2005
38
Can i just say this ....hdub
Jul 18th 2005
51

jay_fever
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Mon Jul-11-05 01:12 AM

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1. "(Insert Don King voice)"
In response to Reply # 0


  

          

Only in AMERICA...errr uhh Okayplayer could these 2 barbarians of 16 bars face off in such a splendifferous stupendicant fashion!!!
=====================================
"My salvation is salivating"---Rass Kass

"Consider me fear because I shear ideas"--Kool G Rap

"Really dope needles are needed to inject this"--Kool G Rap

  

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hdub
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Wed Jul-13-05 12:16 PM

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2. "a few technical difficulties..."
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...my shit is ready to go but im having some unanticipated issues getting it onto a computer with internet access- turns out i cant touch shit on cd's in these internet cafes

some bullshit

im gonna be back home later tonight and i guess ill have to rig up some dial up shit

probably will be right around 9pm for you folks so it shouldnt be an issue

you ready lif?

good luck dog, you gonna need it

bwahahahahahaha*



*dub's signature evil laughter

...(the end)...

  

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KnowOne
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3. "yeah lif's verse is in...."
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get it up tonight if you can. Im going away tomorrow till sunday. So get it to me ASAP so I can atleast post it. And by the time Im back voting should be finished.

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hdub
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Thu Jul-14-05 08:26 AM

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4. "RE: yeah lif's verse is in...."
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....mines in too

sorry for the delay folks you know i don't like to be slowing up the tourney

i couldn't figure out how to get one of these laptops here on the internet- these french phone numbers confuse the shit of me and to make it worse last night i was smashed

it's bastille day here so there's quite a lot fo partying going on

anyway once again sorry about that- now that i know i have to do it like this it wouldnt happen again

now, on with the show and all that shit, let's do the damn thing!......

...(the end)...

  

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KnowOne
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5. "Prolif VS hdub"
In response to Reply # 0


  

          

Prolif VS hdub


Prolif
Lif massacre ya scripts - annihalate carnage/
every word Dub spit is trash - i'm talking straight garbage!!/
"aaawwww not that dude Dub again! yeah, he gon' get drug again!/
and if they vote for him, then he must be making luv to them!"/
i spin u round cuz - leave u split on ya pivot!/
cause u the only Dubs i ever seen to fit on a Civic!!/
see, i come out gunning to make this dude cripple/
while u running round the net looking at other dude's nipples!!!/
some thought that was cute, but i was far from it/
cause u aint tell them dudes u prolly' got off on it!!/
and ya'll kats buggin'; it aint good to hype rappers!/
'specially Hacksaw-Jim-Dugan-look-alike-rappers!!/
so what it look like scrappa? Lif reigning and shining/
killin' the only dude on the board complaining and whining!/
and i aint never in my life heard of luck that dras-tic!/
cause it's a Miracle that u even got past Ric!!/
yo, u overacheived! but now u slow to receive/
that i aint in the game playa - dawg, i'm over tha league!/
kats know who's mighty - they laugh at what they witnessing/
and in the Beat Society, u a second class citizen!/
i'm gettin' wit' my socials - this is Pro's function/
while u tha weakest in writtens, vocals, AND productions!!/
Lif drop rooks hard and leave ya hooks scarred!/
even 5-0 couldn't put u behind good bars!!/
i southpaw ya mouth par, u aint got a hope!/
unless u make up other screennames and come back and vote!/
tha decision occured b4 ya vision was blurred/
can't win rook of the year on the injured reserve!!/
and don't flex duke, cause u aint fit son/
i give repect where respect's due, so u'ont get none!/
i spit that hole-in-one post - dun u sub-par/
this nicca Dubs just got blown like London sub cars!!/


hdub
i’m on the attack came in swinging from the get go
i wrote this rhyme on the paris metro
dub bringing hip hop to the land of techno- let’s go
it’s hdub on the verse- you know i got the tendency
to wreck heads worse than crack rock dependency
rap dennis the menace-y- getting old heads steamed
spit miracle streams- water flows into hennessy deemed
rip greens smokier than mountains in tennessee dreams
the most high supreme i post skys above means
like teams in queens- i make fools into believers
that its my crown- the rest are all thievers
sick of pussies- y’all beavers- leave!
im the definition of skilled- y’all can check ask jeeves
Prolif falls like leaves- dub do more damage than jabs
still making ‘em bleed tho im far from the lab
im spitting manos de piedra- you no harder than flab
im settling scores- demanding whack cats pay tabs
so Pro Knows i hunt fools down like cap ahabs
take cabs- you still cant catch up to my timbs
i “keep on moving” like im rapping in hymns
im packing ‘em in- shining bright while ya lights are dimmed
vicodin- cant kill the pain that I types him in
i fights to win- losing to no rhyme-
mic slicing him- its murder at showtime
in no time look like lif OD’d on dubs dope lines
im ending beefs- a slaughterhouse to y’all bovines
at post time send MC’s into worldwide panic wit’ my antics
i effortlessly rock the whole globe transatlantic-
wit’ more energy than manics- i blow up like panoramics
prolif you aint hard- im steel you ceramics dammit
the size of my skill levels gigantic- write star systems and planets
was in to street retail now im liking verse damage
usually manage to spit personal but lif leaves no details
so ill just dis versatile- assume he’s a preteen female
that’s why he hides his voice Pro only raps in email

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Shakeet Lokh Em
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7. "Prolif VS hdub"
In response to Reply # 5
Thu Jul-14-05 09:29 AM by Shakeet Lokh Em

  

          

Prolif

>i spin u round cuz - leave u split on ya pivot!/
>cause u the only Dubs i ever seen to fit on a Civic!!/

^LOL^

>see, i come out gunning to make this dude cripple/
>while u running round the net looking at other dude's
>nipples!!!/
>some thought that was cute, but i was far from it/
>cause u aint tell them dudes u prolly' got off on it!!/

^Yo I was almost on the floor. lol^


>i'm gettin' wit' my socials - this is Pro's function/
>while u tha weakest in writtens, vocals, AND productions!!/

^*Shakes head*...Dub, it don't look good for you buddy...^


>Lif drop rooks hard and leave ya hooks scarred!/
>even 5-0 couldn't put u behind good bars!!/

^Fire^


>tha decision occured b4 ya vision was blurred/
>can't win rook of the year on the injured reserve!!/

*Shameless Plug* I still got that belt anyway. Dub ain't neva have that. lol


HDUB

>rap dennis the menace-y- getting old heads steamed

Yo c'mon Dub. This is just gay. You lost on this line alone. lol
You had a good tourney though. About three rounds better than me. lol


Vote: Prolif

"I'm scientific, but my reflex gangsta"- Black Thought

  

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Samurai_Shampoo
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8. "meh"
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neither of y'all brought it this round (unlike the other rounds)...
the only real eye-catcher was Lif's last line, and that one wasn't cool.
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A wise man sees failure as progress,
a fool divorces his knowledge and misses the logic
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Zin
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9. " Prolif"
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dub ....wasn't punching at all just getting hit in the face

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Guess who's Back

  

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FrontLIne
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10. "*Prolif*"
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www.aboveave.com "Culture Reboot" coming soon

  

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MiracleRic
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11. "Prolif"
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From the civic line down was heat

dude had me dyin laughin

Dub didnt really impress me too much with this one...the flow was overly forced even tho near the end i heated up really nicely but he just didnt have the ammo

Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

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jay_fever
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12. "RE: Prolif VS hdub"
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That 5-0 line wrapped it up for me. It took a minute for dub to get going. So ....
Vote=LIF
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"My salvation is salivating"---Rass Kass

"Consider me fear because I shear ideas"--Kool G Rap

"Really dope needles are needed to inject this"--Kool G Rap

  

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nuke
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14. "RE: Prolif VS hdub"
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Yo this battle was mad amped up. But Imma get right to the point. Prolif came with some ill punch lines about HDUB but lemme just say for the record that its alot easier to diss sombodies looks and preferences when they are an active member on the website. Dub Ain't afraid to put the picture up with the marajuana and rep him self. On the other hand you have no info about yourself, so Dubs last rhyme really did ripp you. If you really were a fat girl from the trailer parks, which you might be, Dub came with the hottest rhyme in this whole post. I know that you are a "OK Player" veteran who is obviously repped hard on this site, but dogs I ain't ever heard you come up with somthing worth reading. But this is just my personal opinion.

Oh yeah the Vote: HDub.

Forget Pro-Lick-It Dub gets the Ticket.

Good Battle.

N.F.O. Representative....Holla.

  

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Prolif
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17. "wow"
In response to Reply # 14
Fri Jul-15-05 10:31 PM by Prolif

  

          

i usually don't get into internet jibber-jabber and i still refuse to, but i had to speak on this one.....the whole point of a battle (since u don't know) is to call the other person out by using any and everything available( excerpt from Battling 101, pg. 12);

u a lil' too sensitive about this whole thing lil' man...

anybody notice when i spit up Puke (what round was that, that u bowed out in again???), that Hdub was the only one who voted for his boy...and now.....hhhhhhmmmmmmmm....interesting...

"i'm rick james, he's charlie murphy..i mean, what's he gon' do" -- rick james

"get that hatred out yo heart son, b4 yo wind up just another nigga like yo father!" -- jake shuttlesworth



http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/lifthalegend_music.htm

"rip so many bars he should'a got a juris doctorate" -- phonte

  

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hdub
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22. "RE: wow"
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>anybody notice when i spit up Puke (what round was that, that
>u bowed out in again???), that Hdub was the only one who voted
>for his boy...and now.....hhhhhhmmmmmmmm....interesting...
>

i did think nuke got you- shakeet got you too

just like i did for this battle i backed up my reasoning with line by line breakdowns that exposed your whackness

and still you talk shit

you know whats really interesting??

when i was winning there was mad shit talking going on in the threads- zin like ran a campaign to get heads to vote for dvs and ric was in our battle all voting for himself and shit

in spite off all of the shit talk i was mad confident in my victory and i felt no need to say shit

you "winning" this one basically unanimously- one dude votes against you and you cant just take it on the chin and keep rolling

seems like your a little insecure of your "victory"

lol

...(the end)...

  

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Prolif
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24. "RE: wow"
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>when i was winning there was mad shit talking going on in the >threads- zin like ran a campaign to get heads to vote for dvs and >ric was in our battle all voting for himself and shit
>in spite off all of the shit talk i was mad confident in my victory >and i felt no need to say shit
>you "winning" this one basically unanimously- one dude votes >against you and you cant just take it on the chin and keep rolling
>seems like your a little insecure of your "victory"

and insecure victory? that's another first...aint never heard of that b4

this looks like more complaining and whining....

look man....i aint got time for this....i wish u much success in spitting, beats, battles, whateva u do kid....i'm out


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/lifthalegend_music.htm

"rip so many bars he should'a got a juris doctorate" -- phonte

  

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43. "LOL."
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N.F.O. Representative....Holla.

  

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nuke
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47. "RE: wow"
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You are probably a couch potato in you mid 30's. LOL. Keep to writing your little internet rhymes cause your good at them. And cherish this moment because you are almost the "KING OF THE INTERNET" after all .LOL. You could'nt do this in real life doggie. And you ain't puke up nothing in that round between me and you, the only reason you won is because your friends voted for your wack ass. But on that note Im about to go to class and get my academics and live up to my "student status in society". Because after all you can't be a gangster and a scholar. LOL remember you said it best.

Sincerely "Stan Miller"..

N.F.O. Representative....Holla.

  

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18. "woah... unexpected... but here's my critique"
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Sat Jul-16-05 04:10 AM by Ezzsential

  

          

wow!
so unexpected but i have to give this to lif (for this verse)
even though his punchlines weren't that original & I'm not really feeling his verse ... he was punchlining throughout his whole peice (and that's what i look for in battles)
(sigh)
well Dub ya kno i always got ya back but ur shit wasnt packin enough fire!
it was just on some braggadocio shit
(shrug) I'm just sayin' I've seen u come better man!

and Lif.. eliminate the explanation points PLEASE!
I think that too much punctuation is annoying and takes away from the flow of the battle (shrug)

oh and also i think that ya'll shouldnt be so "even barred"
and u all should try rhyming the last word in the bar wit the first in the next bar so it isnt so redundant/repetative and monotonous =/

Basically... both could have come better.. but since i have to vote I give it to Lif for this one
(sigh)
come DUB! just think of one ill ass punchline then work around it in a verse...
i know how it feels to run out of shit to say...
but u can always say the same shit differently (smile)

-lol I write battle verses to Mariah Carey songs...

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southernboy_423
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19. "Leaves Lurk Mode"
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Sat Jul-16-05 09:45 AM by southernboy_423

  

          

***leaves lurk mode thinking...i cant leave can i***
<-----he cant leave the boards!

Prolif - was nice as fuck, i read smoothly, and he had punchlines after punchlines. Punchline meaning everybar was targeting and came off properly, and wasnt said to setup the next bar that is a punchline. Everyone was just waiting one the big metaphoric one, so yall dicredited the ones he was hitting dubs ass wit.

Hbud - verses was okay has well, but he didnt put as much in like he did when he came at Ric (yeah i was lurking) but i still liked the verse....until...i heard that damn audio. U still tryna us a rapping voice, which doesnt exsist. i rather read ur shit, cuz right now i see no talent in you verbally spitting what u write but i hope u get better because u have shit to say u just dont know how to say it.


Vote - Prolif

***re-enters lurk mode***

....and so it goes, im at it again. Fix ur fucking face, Im in the building!

http://www.soundclick.com/band/5/youngsleep_music.htm

"I had to get off the boat, so I can walk on water". - Jay-Z

  

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hdub
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20. "MY ode to okp....."
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....and unlike pro's my shit is an actual expression about how i feel about this site rather than a shameless attempt at politrix

seriously tho- y'all just cream your pants to see your name in a post dont y'all...

anyways im seeing that the general consensus on this battle is that i didnt come with the punchlines like pro did

you guys have seen my punches-- nobody is as devastating with the personal attacks as i am-- zin didnt come around for like two weeks after i smashed him

also noticed ric changed up the soundclick a bit...

..i would have gladly given pro the same treatment but as nuke pointed out we know nothing about dude-- in fact i been assuming hes a dude this whole time without knowing for sure

perhaps dude has something to fear???

i on the other hand am a walking punchline- i proudly rep being a white jewish stoner college boy

i let you all know im in france- come on pro FRANCE- im very disappointed you didnt take at least one shot at that little factoid right there

and despite being completely new to this and not taking it half as seriously as some of y'all i am fully willing to broadcast my beats AND my voice on the internet

so anyways i got no dirt on pro and he has all sorts on me and still his punchlines were STILL largely generic- my shit wasnt personal but it was unique anything that i would have made up about dude besides the one major punch that i did throw would have been just generic

besides all that a battle isnt just straight debasing the other person through wisecracks- its debasing them in terms of skill- my shit might have just been boasts but the wordplay and humor in there as well as the rhyming and flow was miles past pro's shit

my boasts WERE punches cause i was really backing them up showing that im lyrically way beyond lif--- dudes "punches" that you speak of were weak anyways and his shit didnt even rhyme well

let me get vintage dub and break it down:



Lif massacre ya scripts - annihalate carnage/
every word Dub spit is trash - i'm talking straight garbage!!/

this is what im talking about- straight up generic

and if you gonna use tired shit like calling someone garbage find a creative way to do it- like your shits more trashy than trailers girls

this is shit that might as well be directly bitten cause its been done so many times

"aaawwww not that dude Dub again! yeah, he gon' get drug again!/
and if they vote for him, then he must be making luv to them!"/

all right this is ok- once againt he must be making love to voters is not unique whatsoever but this is better than "hes trash- garbage!"

still throwing the awwwww in there is weak- this is a trend that continues throughout lifs verse- he throws in one syllable exclamations to make his shit rhyme or work but they mean nothing in terms of content- in a skilled rhymers piece i.e mine every word is integral

its done again here with cuz

i spin u round cuz - leave u split on ya pivot!/
cause u the only Dubs i ever seen to fit on a Civic!!/

now obviously every one of us does that sometimes but dude uses one syllable throwaway words so much in this piece that it really takes away from it

now of course these lines were funny- although once again generic- i been here a while lif is by no means the first person to use my screename in this manner

see, i come out gunning to make this dude cripple/
while u running round the net looking at other dude's nipples!!!/
some thought that was cute, but i was far from it/
cause u aint tell them dudes u prolly' got off on it!!/

now here lif is not being generic- the first two lines in this group were aimed right at me- funny shit- thing is he killed it cause the second half of this blatantly doesnt rhyme

from it and on it dont rhyme at all- is he rhyming "it" with "it" here?

rhyming a word with itself is whack--- like this next shit for example

and ya'll kats buggin'; it aint good to hype rappers!/
'specially Hacksaw-Jim-Dugan-look-alike-rappers!!/

"rappers" rhyming with "rappers"- this shows no lyrical skill whatsoever

besides this the punchline itself is just weak

no one hypes me on here- 99.9% of y'all hate my ass

and i dont really look like hacksaw duggan- anyone who seen my pic knows i dont have that lovely hair and beard- BUT- even if i did saying this is basically saying "you look like a really big strong dude who could kick the shit out of me with one hand tied behind his back"

plus shakeet who has quite the special friendship with lif if y'all haven't noticed is gonna completely dismiss my shit cause of one line referencing dennis the menace is according to him "gay"

if lines referencing cartoons are gay then lines referencing watching pro wrestling- a bunch of scantily clad dudes grabbing on eachother- are fucking flaming

besides sha- how is dennis the menace gay and you infatuation with heman is perfectly acceptable?

anyways enough on that line--

so what it look like scrappa? Lif reigning and shining/
killin' the only dude on the board complaining and whining!/

more generic shit- plus the throwaway word scrappa

besides i got nothing to complain about i been quietly mopping the floor with all of y'all for weeks now

now i know cats are gonna see this right here as complaining but its not- i got nothing to complain about this round was a continued demonstration of my lyrical superiority- this aint a complaint is school in session

and i aint never in my life heard of luck that dras-tic!/
cause it's a Miracle that u even got past Ric!!/

thats ok i guess- i wouldnt necessarily highlight the roll i was on tho if i was lif- his journey through the brackets has been largely bush league- especially compared to the folks i smashed-- thats right ric and zin i dont think you suck im just better

yo, u overacheived! but now u slow to receive/
that i aint in the game playa - dawg, i'm over tha league!/

i overacheived- so basically you acknowledging that i was nice???

i get his meaning in here but it takes a minute- not cause hes deep but it was a forced fit into this rhyme scheme

kats know who's mighty - they laugh at what they witnessing/
and in the Beat Society, u a second class citizen!/

funny- one of the few bright spots in this awful verse

i'm gettin' wit' my socials - this is Pro's function/
while u tha weakest in writtens, vocals, AND productions!!/

now this is week on two counts- first off rhyming function and production is a stretch at best

secondly- how you gonna call me weak on vocal when you hide your voice like a little bitch lif?

i put audios up from day 1- aint nobody listened that first time which was probably a good thing- but still, this shit just highlights my main punchlines and points about lif

Lif drop rooks hard and leave ya hooks scarred!/
even 5-0 couldn't put u behind good bars!!/

this was funny- but what you mean leaving hooks scarred- are you talking about punching me on the hands?- it rhymes well but i think you just forced it to fit with your punchline

i southpaw ya mouth par, u aint got a hope!/
unless u make up other screennames and come back and vote!/

now this right here- besides being generic- was the worst shit lyrically in this whole dismal mess

"i southpaw ya mouth par?!?!??!?"

what the fuck is that?

i know what southpaw ya mouth means but the use of par in here is the ultimate one syllable throwaway

this means absolutely dick

tha decision occured b4 ya vision was blurred/
can't win rook of the year on the injured reserve!!/

b4- thats so corny- like a little girl on im

the second line of this was funny but the first line is another forced thing just thrown in to include the second- it barely means anything

and don't flex duke, cause u aint fit son/
i give repect where respect's due, so u'ont get none!/

"fit son" and "get none" kind of a weak rhyme- i guess he meant us to read it kind of as "git"- still with this he continues overusing one syllable throwaway words to make his rhymes stick- this is the kind of shit i used to do before as y'all say my rhymes got "better"

and finally this closer line which is just whack on soooo many levels

i spit that hole-in-one post - dun u sub-par/
this nicca Dubs just got blown like London sub cars!!/

first off a golf reference in a battle rhyme- i thought i was the white guy here?

secondly speaking of which how you gonna drop the n-bomb on me when im a proud cracka gangsta

thirdly didnt you just use "par"- granted it was completely out of context and didnt mean shit but still a good rhymer should avoid using the same word close to itself

and finally the london line- just not cool at all- i mean that is just in such poor taste people on this very board lost friends in that shit and you up here throwing it in this battle

whack

now on to my verse--- i want to break it down cause i think pho might have been on to something and yall missed half the meaning in my shit

cause i was punching dude- HARD- as y'all have said it was boasts but they backed themselves up cause my flow and rhyming were better and my shit is more creative and funnier than his

i’m on the attack came in swinging from the get go
i wrote this rhyme on the paris metro
dub bringing hip hop to the land of techno- let’s go

they call the subway over here the "metro"

this is not really directed at prolif but i actually wrote this verse on the train and nothign can describe how weird it is to be in this city bumping meth and red in my phones and writing verses and shit

obviously folks listen to hip hop here- but its just different- and most of the time you go out all you hear is techno crap

it’s hdub on the verse- you know i got the tendency
to wreck heads worse than crack rock dependency

just a boast but funnier and involving a more complex rhyme than any of pros shit

rap dennis the menace-y- getting old heads steamed
spit miracle streams- water flows into hennessy deemed

for those who dont know dennis the menace stay fucking with old man wilson- kind of like i fucked with all the crusty old okp's who thought they were the shit-- this also points out the fact that a lot of you are in your 30's and shit while im not even legal

the second half of this is a reference to how quickly i have improved at EVERY aspect of the rap game- using the metaphor of jesus' miracle of turning water in to wine except with a little hood twist

rip greens smokier than mountains in tennessee dreams
the most high supreme i post skys above means

smoky mountains is a range in tenn. for those who dont know

and im the most high in two sentences- a champion stoner and the best lyricist in this shit- far beyond being above average- skys above means as in the mean average

like teams in queens- i make fools into believers
that its my crown- the rest are all thievers

a reference to the NY Mets ballclub based in Queens- an embarassment to a city with a beautiful baseball tradition this squad hasnt won shit in 20 years- they so pathetic their slogan is "you gotta believe"

sick of pussies- y’all beavers- leave!
im the definition of skilled- y’all can check ask jeeves

beaver is slang for cooch- and ask jeeves is an old search engine that you couold ask questions like "what does skilled mean?" or "exactly how much does lif' verse suck?"

Prolif falls like leaves- dub do more damage than jabs
still making ‘em bleed tho im far from the lab

self explanatory- im killing y'all while im on vacation

im spitting manos de piedra- you no harder than flab
im settling scores- demanding whack cats pay tabs
so Pro Knows i hunt fools down like cap ahabs

photo explained the manos de piedra thing so i wont do that- captain ahab is the main character in moby dick- dude was insane as all hell and spent his whole life chasing the titular white whale across the oceans and hunting his ass

throwing knows name here in conjunction with being hunted down and the far from the lab thing is me hinting at the obvious fact that knowone is afraid to see me in this shit

dog delayed the tourney every chance he had- you guys were hoping i would lose steam on vacation- as the lab and the paris lines indicate- i didnt

also- as sha and others have pointed out the brackets were definitely not even remotely random as ive said before i had the best in each round up until now where i got the "rest"

take cabs- you still cant catch up to my timbs
i “keep on moving” like im rapping in hymns
im packing ‘em in- shining bright while ya lights are dimmed
vicodin- cant kill the pain that I types him in

"keep on moving"- a famous old gospel church song- here i use it to illustrate how despite all the obstacles from know and the hate from zin ric frak et al i still made it all this way

and sha get out of here with that rook of the year nonsense- you the one who keeps bringing it up but you went out in rd. 1 both pro and i are rooks who had better records than you this year

so i start this describing my rise and doing some more boasting-- and then with the vicodin shit i begin to throw punches talking about how lif is getting lyrically smashed

which i continue through here---

i fights to win- losing to no rhyme-
mic slicing him- its murder at showtime
in no time look like lif OD’d on dubs dope lines
im ending beefs- a slaughterhouse to y’all bovines

this is pretty self explanatory as well- the OD- dope connection

and then the use of the technical name for cows to describe beef

this next part continues the punching and boasting plus talk of how i get lif and everyone else running scared- further emphasizing that im doing all of this in paris way out of my routine and comfort zone

at post time send MC’s into worldwide panic wit’ my antics
i effortlessly rock the whole globe transatlantic-
wit’ more energy than manics- i blow up like panoramics
prolif you aint hard- im steel you ceramics dammit
the size of my skill levels gigantic- write star systems and planets
was in to street retail now im liking verse damage

and then finally my main point and punchline:

usually manage to spit personal but lif leaves no details
so ill just dis versatile- assume he’s a preteen female
that’s why he hides his voice Pro only raps in email

lif gives no information about himself- i gotta start speculating about what hes hiding and why hes hiding it

besides its really amazing that with all the stuff you guys could draw from to dis me lifs verse is so whack- i got nothing to diss lif on but lack of audio and lack of lyrical quality- hence the boasting "im better then" "i smash him like" type shit rather than the fuck you and your girl or fuck you and your lisp type shit i did for ric and zin

oh wait no i didnt bring up the lisp before i thought it was too mean

oops

in the context of this punchline and the audio i posted pro just looks like a fake ass net writer-- i mean he makes hot beats but this aint soundclash this is on lyrics and in written or sonic quality i bust him

i dont think dude is bad- honestly i wouldnt have wanted him in round one- thing is pro you lose steam after around two verses- with time your shit goes from smart funny and flowing to the type of garbage we saw in this round- the best example of this is in that vastly overhyped battle with shakeet- started out fire but the latter rounds were whask shit

anyways i was expecting to be hated out of this from the first- im amazed it took this long- as far im concerned with the wins i piled up (including this round imo for everything mentioned above) there is no question who the king of this shit is

as far as im concerned the tourney is over- i just spanked pro- and know got spanked by zin- who i smashed- a while back

y'all can say what you want i know i killed it and i made this shit as detailed as could be to back that up in teh archives for all to see- and y'all can say im mad but the truth is im in the city of lights with my girl a phat sack and a big brick of hash- what the fuck i got to be mad about??--- what about y'all- what are you doing thats so great- lyrically or in the real world???!?!?!?!?


bwahahahahahahaha*

so now that i've gotten the crown- yeah thats right i just crowned myself but my reasons have been fully explained- in my first tourney appearance i think im gonna take a break from battling for a while

as i said to yukon- it was a nice tool when i was first trying to develop my rhyming skills but now ive grown past it- all y'all want is fat jokes and allusions about folks' sexualities regardless of quality- im trying to work on my audio game and im ready to be writing more meaningful lyrics

besides that i need to enjoy my vacation and get off computers- i wouldnt have been checking this shit at all except know was kind of bitch made and had this drag on forever

im officailly jacking the crown and going into lurk mode for a while

when i come back ill think about giving axe and know a 3 rounder since theyre pretty much the only ones i havent sonned yet- tek thanks for letting me get you in between rounds it helps legitimize my rule- but like i said i think im past battling

...(the end)...

  

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Prolif
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23. "don't know about y'all, but..."
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...i aint even read all that ish....

dude, u got to be kidding...i aint never heard of a dude explaining his battle verse or his opponent's battle verse...u sure u from NY?....and on that whole "Oh, we don't know about lif, he knows about us"...WTF IS THAT GA'BAGE!! what does that have to do with posting a verse in a battle? every battle, u gotta come back and explain yourself....

so i aint got a picture up...um, does that take away from the verse? NO
so you've posted audio?...uh, what does that have to do with written battle verses??? NOTHING
just like i said, "the only dude on the board complaining and whining"
bottom line: my BATTLE verse was better than yours...plain and simple

honestly, it crakcks me up when cats come off so sensitive after a battle...that's gay....man, post the verse, let people vote and be done with it!!! the voters critique the battle....

y u gotta explain where u was coming from? if the readers can't get that from the verse, then obviously u aint do a good job the first go around....

i'm done with this "explaining urself bull"....it's cool though, i respect the fact that everybody is entitled to their own opinion....u can have fun and continue the "post-fight" antics...the fight's over and i've already left the building

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/lifthalegend_music.htm

"rip so many bars he should'a got a juris doctorate" -- phonte

  

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nuke
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44. "Are you From NYC..."
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Dogz I don't know where your from and I don't care sonny boy..Dubs right you probably just a fat ho from a trailer park... LOL...Suck it up dogz you won. Well atleast according to your little groupies on this hating ass site.

N.F.O. Representative....Holla.

  

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MiracleRic
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46. "^^^this said from the infamous crew cock-rider^^^"
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>Dogz I don't know where your from and I don't care sonny
>boy..Dubs right you probably just a fat ho from a trailer
>park... LOL...Suck it up dogz you won. Well atleast according
>to your little groupies on this hating ass site.

Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

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nuke
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48. "Whatch your mouth..."
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I thought you lost in round three.. SHHHHHHhhhhhhhhhhhhh....

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MiracleRic
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52. "i thought u lost in rd 1...lmfao"
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didnt i slay both of ya bitches already in 3 round e pounds

the only one who hasnt exposed they pussy of ur crew is sik

but birds of a feather...lmao

and ya definitely actin like birds, bitchin, complaining, makin wild ass pointless "hate" allegations and shit

from day one, ya been labeled as dickriders...nobody has really said that about sik yet...wonder why...cause he let ya handle ya own shit...he let ya get ya asses handed to ya and rarely showed up to even vote cause he knew his bias...do u even have a single win nuke?

lmfao, i remember me shittin on you, ax, sha, and basically whoever else u battled...and then u use this crutch on some..."it wouldnt happen in real life"...u still get shitted on...we all in the same boat on here, but ya groupies need to grow up, and dont bother to come online battling if all u gonna do is complain about the results, the consensus is he got shitted on...period...if anything, more folk was on dubs nuts the whole tourney...i sonned him, and he looked at my chest, the fact he made this mistake is part of what cost him this rd...im done rambling at dumb bitches, ya wanna battle...we can kick the writtens, the audios, but either way adios!!

Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

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nuke
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55. "RE: i thought u lost in rd 1...lmfao"
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I would due the audio's, the beats, and the "ONLINE BATTLES" if shit was evenly distributed.There is no judge on this site which makes this a 106 and played out website. No real Judges, no battle no nothing cuase there is just too much of these small time bitches sticking up for their crews. But in terms of you. You do suck balls in critique and battles. Point Blank. and for the record Sha-Skeet and I never battled it was only you and Instant Whackness. And call it how you wanna but your name sounds like it should be on a jar of mayonaise. Sukka suck up your wind, cause your the one bitching.

Can you believe this, hes still rambling. NO more of this shit.. On some Jz shit, just enjoying "The Summer".

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49. "ummmm"
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>this hating ass site.

your more than free to go else where.

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"Too weird to live.... too rare to die..."

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Shakeet Lokh Em
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25. "RE: MY ode to okp....."
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>plus shakeet who has quite the special friendship with lif if >y'all .haven't noticed is gonna completely dismiss my shit cause of >one line referencing dennis the menace is according to him "gay"

Yo I was bein nice about your verse DUB. You warmed up toward the end, but it was waaaay too late by then. Prolif didn't have the best verse I've ever seen, but it was better than YOURS. End of story. No "special friendships" with anybody HSCRUB, you're reachin into thin air for sympathy. It's sad. The 'Dennis the Menace' line was 100% gay to me. But that's just my OPINION. I'm one person. When I lose man, I lose. It ain’t that serious to get your ovaries all in a bunch which you obviusly have. That French air is makin you REALLY SOFT. Cream puff even. Lol You makin yourself look like an idiot. From day ONE since I’ve been on here, I’ve been dolo. The ONLY thing I be reppin in here is Baltimore. The dude Biohazard came harder than you did in the last round. And truth be told, his verse would have ate yours too. I give props where it’s due. That’s it. But who’s the one with a whole clique up in here?…Yeah uh-huh, that’s what I thought. Your boy NUKE come out of NOWHERE talkin nonsense. Everybody know you lost, and this cat is sayin it was a slaughter the other way around. Yall homosexuality is painfully obvious. But I’m nobody’s judge, so do you. Lol And see, I said this like two weeks ago when I was battlin Sikstyle. You just made me a prophet….

“Where your boys at homey? You know you can't handle me dolo//
The B-more bandit who got lyrical Mass, I Chew Sets that's homo//
Fo sho yo/ I 'on need to clique to scrub my nuts and gas me up//
Sik tossin Dub salad while he blowin Nuke, yall cats crack me up//”


^^Bwah ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha^^ Dooky chasin flamers. lol


>besides sha- how is dennis the menace gay and you infatuation with >heman is perfectly acceptable?

You’s an idiot. I had a picture of Battlecat. BATTLECAT. For the sole purpose of the tourney. Of which, when I lost in the first round, I promptly changed my avatar. *shakes head* If you gonna be ANY kind of lyricist, you gotta know when a battle is lost. If you can’t see this…then maybe you better just stick to whatever your major was in college. Cuz this obviously ain’t for you. ~one~

"I'm scientific, but my reflex gangsta"- Black Thought

  

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35. "RE: MY ode to okp....."
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this got nothin to do with me or you, if you're bringin me into this then you're drawin in the "clique" yourself, I don't even vote on dubs battles, he made it this far on his own. nuke put in his two cents, and it made sense, dubs had to take a different angle of approach battlin lif because of his anonymity so he didnt come with the same kind of punches, but it was still a good verse. nuke chose to weigh it out that way, thats his vote. out of everyone here, our "crew" doesnt do shit for scrubbin nuts, especially compared to most of the people on here, I'm here for feedback and sharpenin skills, having my friends from school meet me on the internet to gas me up would not only be pointless, but it accomplishes nothing. so in other words ya verse aint a prophecy to shit, if you think I can't "handle you dolo" ^UP^ our battle and ask people to vote on it, you might find your foot in ya mouth, but then again you like that kinda shit dont ya? 1

"I walk around with sick styles, sippin on cristal, my whole cliques wild, I'm rich pal no more sticks I'm making hits now... when I recite you takin hours to write, so if you fight just tell ya man what kinda flowers you like"
-Big L

  

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Shakeet Lokh Em
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37. "...I'ma be cordial about this..."
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First off, I 'on have no issue with you Sik, so don't be so sensitive. READ what I wrote and the context I was using. Nothing was aimed at you personally. You just so "happen" to be in that clique that your boy so convienently wants to forget about. As long as you got them 3 letters in your sig, you claimin whatever Dub do, period. I gave my OPINION of why he lost and in the same breath gave him props for makin it this far in the tourney. But both yall misread context as a personal attack and I cannot say enough that it is NOT that serious. Who gettin paid in here? I quoted a battle verse to prove my point to HDUB and thats it. Nothin more, nothin less. You take offense like it's the actual truth. lol Don't.Be.So.Sensitive. And as far as our battle go, you can up it yourself. I don't care either way. This is for fun, real life is outside. Remember that. ~one~

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39. "RE: ...I'ma be cordial about this..."
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aight man, if you say so. you just made it seem like you were reacting to what dubs wrote about you in a sensitive way, and throwin out names that had nothin to do with it. I'm not about doing this Lemon Kid back and forth shit, I said it from the start. you're right, its not that serious at all. this site is at an all time low right now though, at least battle-wise, too much fuckin drama, not enough constructiveness. If it's not gonna be of any use to me besides observing how to perfect online bitching skills, I'm probably just gonna stick to the notebook. peace

"I walk around with sick styles, sippin on cristal, my whole cliques wild, I'm rich pal no more sticks I'm making hits now... when I recite you takin hours to write, so if you fight just tell ya man what kinda flowers you like"
-Big L

  

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MiracleRic
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40. "lmao"
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only one person bitchin

everyone notices how convenient that only one person voted y boy, and look who it is...its never a surprise...i aint sayin shit, i lost my rd, did i think i shouldve won...yea, do i see how folks could think he won...yep...so i speak my piece in a real way and move on, lol, lets be real here...dude just exposed his vaginal lips

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nuke
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45. "There are too many Of yous on the website."
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Yo.... I still think you screwed me over from your corney ass imput on my first battle Vs. Pro-Lick-it. Back off Dunnie. Ya'll are all obsessed with this word "HOmo" but all of yall are soft duke, in my opinion, yall couldn't drop an album if your threw a picture of your self off the roof. FOr realz dunnie. And lemme just say that from the get go I always felt a lot of hate on this site. Why you think I havn't posted. I already heard people reuse my lines. So just back off. One thing I do have to say though Shakeet... Your audio was ill. LOL.....For realz. But yo keep my name out. Doggie. The only reason im still looking at this site is because the last member of my crue is in the hizzouse. So chill out duke. Stick to writing rhymes about fat girls and how you kiss the grease off of their lips. LOL.

N.F.O. Representative....Holla.

  

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Shakeet Lokh Em
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50. "*sigh*"
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>Yo.... I still think you screwed me over from your corney ass
>imput on my first battle Vs. Pro-Lick-it.

Slim, you got slaughtered. Once again I was bein nice about it. Go back and read what I wrote. But I can't even be nice about it. Ain't nobody screw you over. YOU screwed yourself by entering the tournament.


Back off Dunnie.

^^ROFLOL^^ Or what?! lol I ain't even gonna touch that one. lol


>Ya'll are all obsessed with this word "HOmo" but all of yall
>are soft duke, in my opinion, yall couldn't drop an album if
>your threw a picture of your self off the roof.

Wow. That was best verse I seen from you. lol


FOr realz
>dunnie. And lemme just say that from the get go I always felt
>a lot of hate on this site. Why you think I havn't posted.

Because. You. Are. Wack.


>I
>already heard people reuse my lines.

Reuse YOUR lines?! Out of ALL the cats on here, they choose YOUR lines to reuse? ROFLOL Did you read this before you posted?


>Stick
>to writing rhymes about fat girls and how you kiss the grease
>off of their lips. LOL.

*shakes head* You couldn't make yourself look any more immature. You missed the whole point of the song. But your opinion is your opinion. I respect everyone's opinion.

Bottom line I'm through with this. If you and/or your crew can't take constructive criticism and learn from it, you have NO business EVER picking up a pen or tapping a keyboard. The fact that ANYBODY replies to something you've posted has weight within itself. So if they take the time out their day to tell you their opinion about your piece, RESPECT IT. Ain't nobody hatin. Because when people are hatin on you, you're not going to see replies or for that matter views at all besides your post. Mature a little bit and stop playin the victim. Either build with us or go home.

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nuke
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54. "RE: *sigh*"
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A yo Whose playing the victim? Get your shit right and then reply. Im definetely not the victim and that shows through my rhymes. Most of the shit on this site is definetely MAD COW GRADE beef. MY junior highschool rhymes are better, and thats real. Just to top it off I do think their is tension and between NFO and other cats cause we are a "NEW FLOW ORDER". Get the shit right before accusing. Common Sense.

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PhotoSynthesis
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26. "*LoL* @ Dub ..."
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(((for those who dont know dennis the menace stay fucking with old man wilson- kind of like i fucked with all the crusty old okp's who thought they were the shit-- this also points out the fact that a lot of you are in your 30's and shit while im not even legal)))


I LUV U DUB -- I REALLY DO! -- *chuckles* --


And as you pointed out in your breakdown -- ~YOUR SHIT WAS HOTTT~ -- *Sizzling* -- You even opened ^UP^ my eyes to a few punches I hadn't seen B~4 -- But the fact that you HAD to break it down, thusly, possibly means that you went OVER some folks heads and they COULDN'T catch all your nice punches & jabs --

That ain't yo problem if everyone didn't catch em' -- That's *Our Bad* -- But it's kinda like:

If I read an exceptionally well written poem -- (All profound, astute and whatnot) -- But I gotta consult the dictionary, thesaurus, and other literary reference material -- In order to understand the flow and the meanings behind the pCe -- Then I'll lose interest in it quickly, cuz it's too difficult to comprehend at face value. (Besides that, I'm just lazy when it comes to dissecting and translating complex poetry / verses) -- Unless it's written by somebody I really appreciate and care about -- (Such as yourself) --

I caught the complexity in several of your verses and noticed it wasn't the mediocre stuph that most battles are made of -- *And I Likes That* -- -- But when you catch most folks "off guard" with summthin' they don't know the history behind -- They tend to skip it, and look for something more simple to base their decisions on, nahmean?

Shit can go either way -- Depending on your audience.

Some folks eat ^UP^ astute, complex, witty shit -- (Particularly when they catch the meaning behind it) -- while others believe in the "KISS" philosophy: KISS = (KEEP IT SIMPLE, STUPID!) -- *chuckles*

Note: I ain't saying your ish went ova aaiirrrybodies heads -- (Cuz Ion't know) -- I'm just sayin' if you threw some exotic shit in there that wasn't understood or appreciated because it wasn't understood -- Don't be mad! --


I just call it like I see it boo -- And this time I saw PROLIF as the victor -- But I still luvs you! --

I'll hit your INBOX up later aaiight? --



A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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Whateva
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27. "WTF man?!!! no excuse.."
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This shit was not even close.

I can't believe you're even mad. If I were you I'd be inboxing Lif a congratulations. I'm actually disappointed. I know a lot of other MC's on this board are disappointed. With all due respect Hdub, you didn't deserve to make it this far if you just wanted to recite coffee house poetry. You came at Ric hard!! That's what I was expecting. You don't need a biography to land blows.

Look at my verse against Instant Axis. I know nothing about dude.

"I produce more blows than a woodwind section"

That's not personal but it sticks.

Here's a list of targets for Prolif off the top:

The drum machines in his avi
play on the word prolific
that archived battle with shakeet
I remember him saying he was from NC


You could've used all of this. That's 5 or 6 bars right there or maybe more. In a battle you BATTLE!!! There's no excuse.

Vote: do I even have to say?

When's the next tourney?

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"Science" and Religion are the two most dangerous weapons of ideology. See holocaust.

Why do "scientists" constantly produce statistics based on "race", a social construct?

  

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MiracleRic
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29. "LMFAO"
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did i bother read 15% of this...in the words of whitney..."hell to the naw!!!"

lmao

this is the biggest bitchfest since tek in our battle...no offense tek but u know that shit was a spectacle....lmfao

just be glad i didnt wanna be bothered with u and spit swag at u, cause u better then me is a joke that only u dont seem to get, vocals/production/writtens...i fathered ur flow in the first place..lmfao...this is sooooo fuckin funny its ridiculous

funniest shit i seen in a minute

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nuke
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42. "RE: LMFAO"
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Yeah you would use Whitney as an example.

LOL....

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southernboy_423
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30. "this is why i lurk...."
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***fuck lurk mode for a minute***

Yo Know, Blak, or somebody can we archive bitching, is that possible?

Hdub u have to make ur mind up are u a novice or the best at this shit, choose one and stop using them both to defend and save ur ass.

THIS TYPE OF SHIT IS A PART OF THE REASON IM IN LURK MODE.

"and despite being completely new to this and not taking it half as seriously as some of y'all" <--Hdub u do, im mean look seriously, look at how much input u do.

u dont need a fucking background check to battle people. u are no way in no shape or form an emcee, this shit disappointed me, and u won a couple of battles u have gotten mad cocky, thats a shame, cuz u blamed the unknown for doing the same thing - BITTERNESS think about it.

this is why i didnt place an attempt during round two, cuz people talk they was out of loosing, thats sad. this is a display of bitch in ur blood. u cross the line of being respected, u better off not posting anymore, cuz u just gave everyone something to spit at u about for a long time.

im gonna stop cuz im waisting time, i need to be doing other shit, but like said before ARCHIVE his bitching as an example of what NOT to do when u lose.

and anybody who read Hdub's whole post of bullshit, should be crowned King of the Ring..Lmfao

***enters lurk mode but will be back very soon***

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
....and so it goes, im at it again. Fix ur fucking face, Im in the building!

http://www.soundclick.com/band/5/youngsleep_music.htm

"I had to get off the boat, so I can walk on water". - Jay-Z

  

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KnowOne
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32. "I just lost a lotta respect for you."
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*shakes head*

Come on Dub.... first of all how you think you gonna just cruise control it into the finals? You know you could have and should have come much harder than that. I think the problem is you were sleepin' on Lif and that is no ones fault but your own. But that aint what made me loose respect... its all this pissin' and moanin' after the fact. Just man up and take ya L if thats the way the votes go. A clear example of how this should have gone is the last tourney. In my humble opinion (and I even said it then) I think Ric came harder than me. Yet I pulled the win by one or two votes. Did Ric piss and moan and say "look even Know said he shouldnt have won!". Nope, he said "congratz, I'll see you next tourney" and gave me the crown.

I got nuthin more to say........

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FrontLIne
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33. "RE: I just lost a lotta respect for you."
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Now that this is over with....Why DID M.C. get disqualified?

www.aboveave.com "Culture Reboot" coming soon

  

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the unknown
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36. "RE: MY ode to okp....."
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man you know i was looking for a good book to read and wow. your book is great man . "how to get pissed off win you lose a battle " is a great book dude. i'm going to recommend it to all my friends. oh yea i'm back, just i give you fair warning and i'm recharge and ready to do damage. and the audio is up. peace

p.s.
great book you wrote(ha ha)

when i spit i flood the block and walk on water like christ/ i'm a mix of jay-z and nas which makes me twice as nice
-
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hdub
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6. "****audio***"
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Thu Jul-14-05 08:44 AM by hdub

          

thanks for the quick turnaround know

i was worried i missed ya

i haven't been able to post too much lately so i wanted to give a little extra for this round and i put this together

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/hdubshydroponicallygrownhiphop_music.htm

the beats another doom sample i rigged up

i didnt have as much time for this as i would have liked so i might come around later and do another take on those vocals- let me know what y'all think

i worked on my breathing to eliminate that growl y'all hated

not having my bong helped too lol

...(the end)...

  

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MiracleRic
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13. "hmmm"
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ya voice sounds better but at times it sounded like ya voice was gonna crack under the pressure, im not sure what to tell u about this, it just sounds like its very difficult for u...

the most work needs to be done on ya delivery/flow...it doesnt sound like u wrote to this beat...im not writin without a beat anymore, make it a habit...its more timestaking but practice makes improvement

Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

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PhotoSynthesis
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15. "RE: ****audio***"
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I liked the growl! --

This AUDIO was tight dub -- But you did sound like you was strainin' a lil' bit in spots.

(I think really "HEARING" you and appreciating your voice prolly takes a lil' gettin' used to, nahmean?) -- You sound like you have one a' those "character" type voices -- *Distinctive* -- (An acquired taste~type steeze)

But I liked what I heard -- Beat and all! -- *Yuuuup*


Good job for a quick "Throw Out" -- Considering you're (((Over There))) in France, tryna rip it in *Internet Cafe's* and shit -- But I know you already *know* -- THERE'S NO PLACE LIKE HOME! --


Come back safely -- An hurry ^UP^!


A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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hdub
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21. "RE: ****audio***"
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i love it- i put up an audio to show that my shit flows on a beat and ric is still saying my lyrics is forced- shit might not be written to a beat but i proved it works

i also actually was dumb enough to think that yall were giving my last audio feedback and not just hate so i worked on toning down the "growl"

damn right that shit was difficult for me- the first audio was my natural shit and to tone that down involves tightening up my throat and shit

note that despite me doing unnatural shit it was still on beat for two minutes straight in one go- but thats besides the point

you right southern this was a "voice" but before it wasnt

damn when i come back im gonna stop looking for feedback from you all- theres only like 5 folks on here whos opinions i respect anyways not counting folks i know outside this place- the rest of you are haters

im gonna keep posting my rhymes and audios- but before i did it to grow

now ill do my growing outside of here- im just gonna keep showing off how nice i am just to spite yall

and to the few folks who do actually give good feedback- you know who you are- im not gonna name names but definitely keep letting me know your opinions

...(the end)...

  

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MiracleRic
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28. "stop actin like a little bitch, lol"
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>i love it- i put up an audio to show that my shit flows on a
>beat and ric is still saying my lyrics is forced- shit might
>not be written to a beat but i proved it works

this is false..plain and simple...that shit was offbeat the majority of the time...plain and simple...dont get mad cause ur shit is weak...no hate...im always gonna call a spade a spade, when i gave u ur flow u wasnt complaining, now im hatin, u a bitch son, lets highlight what i said

"the most work needs to be done on ya delivery/flow...it doesnt sound like u wrote to this beat...im not writin without a beat anymore, make it a habit...its more timestaking but practice makes improvement"

this was constructive criticism, u dont like how offbeat u were? fix it whatever way u can...we not lookin for u that hard duke, and grow the ability to be truly neutral towards ur shit, in our battle i gave u ur credit, i thought ur verse was solid, but i didnt think it was as creative as mine, i know exactly why my verse didnt get the votes, i live with that, i dont try to explain my shit to death, i let u know what i think of the results an move on, ur shit was lukewarm, u right, u didnt have ammo, u supposed to create it or be strategic and predict what hes gonna say and counter, look what i did to flash, i created shit..u pussy yo, u a complaing attention cravin lil bitch...now thats constructive



>i also actually was dumb enough to think that yall were giving
>my last audio feedback and not just hate so i worked on toning
>down the "growl"

more pussy ass whining...people are either gonna like ur voice or they not, not everyone has the voice of an MC, but if ur gonna change ur voice, give it some practice to take away the forcedness, to be honest, the growl didnt sound all that natural either but hey, thats just me

>damn right that shit was difficult for me- the first audio was
>my natural shit and to tone that down involves tightening up
>my throat and shit

stop bitchin

>note that despite me doing unnatural shit it was still on beat
>for two minutes straight in one go- but thats besides the
>point
>
>you right southern this was a "voice" but before it wasnt
>
>damn when i come back im gonna stop looking for feedback from
>you all- theres only like 5 folks on here whos opinions i
>respect anyways not counting folks i know outside this place-
>the rest of you are haters
>
>im gonna keep posting my rhymes and audios- but before i did
>it to grow
>
>now ill do my growing outside of here- im just gonna keep
>showing off how nice i am just to spite yall
>
>and to the few folks who do actually give good feedback- you
>know who you are- im not gonna name names but definitely keep
>letting me know your opinions

u should be workin on this outside of this anyway...but please stop making urself look pussy, why do u think there is soooo much ammo, u tried to do the same thing against me, with the whole link thing, which is what i did to flash by the way but anyway, my point is, ur shit came off as gay, lif exploited it, i dont think ur shit was hot, u had other heat in ur verse against me but to me that was just gay, and in this battle, u had some aight lines, some corny lines, and ur flow was broken until the end...u notice people sayin u didnt heat up til the end...if u dont like the criticism u get, stick to cluster fuckin with nuke, ya seem to agree on everything conveniently...bitches

Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

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nuke
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41. "RE: stop actin like a little bitch, lol"
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You stop your bitchen son. Miracle Ric the Miracle Bitch. You lost son. Plain and simple. ANd yo don't include me in your stupid ass critiques dog for real. Your shit was obviously not as good as YOU thought. So stop trying to reverse the tides in the HDUB VS YOU. I seen it. Yo theres a reason I voted for Dub. In that battle you was on some old Eminem "Stan" Shit. DUb Fucked you up. And in my opinion you ain't a real mc. Dub might just be starting out, but his audio, in my humble opinion, shits on your audio any day of the week in U.S. and France time. So do me a favor and keep my name out. I never said nothing bout you asshole.

Good Shit DUb.

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MiracleRic
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53. "BUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAHAHAHHAHAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAA"
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ROFLMAO @

"And in my opinion you ain't a real mc. Dub might just be starting out, but his audio, in my humble opinion, shits on your audio any day of the week in U.S. and France time. So do me a favor and keep my name out. I never said nothing bout you asshole."

fuckin hilarious...LMFAO

im not an MC and yet even dub would should be able to admit im better then him on the audio tip, and if he wasnt on his own cock, hed know im better at all counts, im better than both of u, my overall record shits on all of u period...as far as audios, post one so i can clown u, anyone who thinks dubs was better is nothin more then a dickrider..period...theres always room for opinion but in this case...its humor, people were afraid to listen to dub, lol...i got audios people enjoy, lmao

"keep my name out"

lmao..fuck u, i slayed, get off my nuts, ur man beat me in one rd, congrats, i gave him his props on that verse, u aint been that close fam, not to mention i already slayed him, i gave duke his first archive and his new flow, if it wasnt for my tips he wouldnt have gotten this far in the tourney, dub is my son, and u obviously making a case for my daughter in law...fuck nuke

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34. "RE: ****audio***"
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just heard it homey, damn man you need to find a soundproof booth where you can just scream, cause the idea behind this is gold, the delivery just came off a little held back. you are def on ya way, you can tell you got that drive in this too, just gotta keep droppin more and sharpenin up. you just gotta figure out if you want a fierce voice where you yell louder or the laid back swag style which takes more time to develop, seems like you lean towards the latter more. beef up the volume, and a little more emphasis. as to other people's bitchin, people are gonna say things that contradict each other, and even themselves, the point is if it hits you as something you should change, than do, otherwise fuck it, dont worry about the fuckin growl to make other people happy, just spit whatever's comfortable. keep droppin more audios too man, I like hearin the improvements. besides that, a plethora of props dunny. peace

"I walk around with sick styles, sippin on cristal, my whole cliques wild, I'm rich pal no more sticks I'm making hits now... when I recite you takin hours to write, so if you fight just tell ya man what kinda flowers you like"
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16. "RE: KING O' DA RING TOURNEY III (semis)"
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Prolif's verses were wicked! -- *Str8 Wicked*

Not much "filler" -- He just cut to da bone -- And kept cuttin' --

Of course -- He had more ammunition from witnessing previous battles, as well as other tidbits of info, i.e. pics, etc. -- (Knowledge Is Power) -- So he used it ALL to his advantage -- *No Doubt*

*The Lady Takes A Bow* -- Prolif did the damn thang!!!

Hdub's verses were lava hottt -- But not quite hot enuff to burn Prolif --

I liked the bi~lingual inference used in his verse -- (Manos de Piedra -- Which means 'Hands of Stone' in Spanish) -- I have a feeling not many folks caught that -- Or even *knew* what it meant -- *chuckles* -- But to me that added a lil' extra class & finesse to the mixxx! -- Not just your typical battle verse, na'amsayin'?

The other verse that tugged at my eyeballs was:

>i effortlessly rock the whole globe transatlantic-
>wit’ more energy than manics- i blow up like panoramics
>prolif you aint hard- im steel you ceramics dammitt
>the size of my skill levels gigantic- write star systems and planets

That just seems so (((All Encompassing))) -- Rockin' the "WHOLE GLOBE TRANSATLANTIC" -- and then "WRITING STAR SYSTEMS & PLANETS" -- However -- As far as battling is concerned -- ^THAT^ ain't necessarily battle material -- it's boasting material --

SCENARIO: So it looks like hdub was dancin' around the ring with fancy footsteps & smooove execution of blocks and counter~moves -- But Prolif was sockin' & boppin' & punchin' above & below da below the belt.


I luv ya to death dub darlin' -- But as far as heavy handed battles go, I gotta give this one to Prolif!


VOTE: Prolif




A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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Rajeniro757
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31. "this is d funniest shit i've seen n a while not talking about d battle"
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i'm not even voting , i don't need to vote *lights registration on fire*

R.I.P. Martin alexander (Marty Gra) Alston - my brother, my mentor , my friend-

  

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38. "History Repeats Itself ..."
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OVER & OVER & OVER AGAIN! --

(((Same Scenarios / Different Players)))

I've been around long enuff to see it, nahmean?

The players *KNOW* who they are -- They remember the history -- They remember the battles -- They remember the pissin' & moanin' -- Whining, complaining & bitchin'.

~~ ALL OF EM' ~~

This ain't a FIRST! -- It happens periodically -- Whenever battles get convoluted or voted on differently than expected.

Most battles involve a hella lotta testosterone -- So when some "estrogen" bitchin' gets in da mixxx -- THAT'S WHEN IT GITS CONVOLUTED! --

Let's just move on -- And get back to the "drawing board" -- Polish ^UP^ and Perfect both *VERSES & AUDIO'S* (futures) -- And come back stronger next time.

The who's -- what's -- when's -- & why's -- are irrelevant at this point, na'amsayin'?


Bottom Line: PROLIF won this battle according to the majority rule vote.

(((CASE CLOSED)))


A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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Zin
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when your on the top looking down ...everybody looking back atchu is a hater ....now you see how i feel ...cause for some reason of another everyone has a reason to hate Zin ... i like it tho ...now could you please ...stop using me as your platform for every speech ... some people thing your verse was hotter than mine in round two ...the majority did ...that's not a hard feat to accomplish ...but i left (welll i didn't accually leave but i stopped posting cause i said i was before i battled you ...as a mater of fact you wasn't even gonna get a verse from me .... cause i felt that you didn't deserve the 5 mins of thinking it would have took me to do it ....but that's another post .... don't ever feel like you RUN shit ...because you don't ....and yeah i'm in my 30's ...and i still will give it to you for 3 or 30 rounds ....

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