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KnowOne
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"King O' Da Ring Tourney III (round 4)"


  

          

Okayplayers, You have until 1 pm EST on Saturday to put ya verse in my INBOX …(remember my INBOX...not email.) I will post both verses as soon as they hit my inbox ..if ya late you get DQ'ed …so you lose ..

FYI, hdub has a by this round and has already locked his spot in the semi-finals.

Prolif VS Biohazard


holla.........

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Subject Author Message Date ID
questions, comments, and other ish'.....
Jun 30th 2005
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RE: King O' Da Ring Tourney III (round 4)
Jul 02nd 2005
2
Yoooooooo
Jul 04th 2005
3
Prolif VS Biohazard
Jul 05th 2005
4
RE: Prolif VS Biohazard
Jul 05th 2005
5
Prolif VS Biohazard
Jul 05th 2005
6
this was tougher than i thought cause...
Jul 05th 2005
7
      co-sign on this....
Jul 06th 2005
10
RE: Prolif VS Biohazard
Jul 05th 2005
8
RE: Prolif VS Biohazard
Jul 06th 2005
9
RE: Prolif VS Biohazard
Jul 07th 2005
11

KnowOne
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1. "questions, comments, and other ish'....."
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n/m

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hdub
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Sat Jul-02-05 06:33 PM

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2. "RE: King O' Da Ring Tourney III (round 4)"
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cool- im gonna check in again before the end of the week to mlake sure i dont miss my deadlines

good luck y'all

and prolif--- you`re a beast but be forewarned that i got a secret weapon for this one- the hash here is sick and the greenery is straight off the boat (actually probably its the train) from amsterdam)

lol

i amuse myself to no end

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MCee
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Mon Jul-04-05 04:59 PM

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3. "Yoooooooo"
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I sent my verse against Biohazard when KnowOne first posted the battles up....I been gone fa like a week n jus got on seein i got DQ'ed....

  

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KnowOne
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4. "Prolif VS Biohazard"
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Prolif VS Biohazard

Prolif:
hey hold up!! who in tha'.....huh? imagine this!
dude is pre-puberty, claiming he hazardous!!/
Bio battles Lif??? ya'll gotta sense a rumor/
if not, i KnowOne dude out there got a sense of humor!/
dude was being funny - i'm lacking competition/
'cause putting u in this tourney is subtraction by addition!!!/
ya' condition 'bout to change - give u a different look!/
we might be on the same page, but i'm in a different book!/
and can u even read?!?! 'cause we know u can't write!/
this lil' kid's 'bout to bleed, "dawg, u know u aint right!"/
look, i tried to tell tha' boy, his time was way soon/
but men were on the floor, he should'a stayed in his room!/
this is grown man son, so respect the intellect/
dude had to beg his moms to get on the internet!!/
i know u hate to feel this - Lif' tha' great still spit/
i make u kneel quick on ya 8th grade field trip!!/
deals settled! - too deep 4 ya lines to feel treble/
i'm nearly twice ya' age and 4 times ya' skill level!!!/
and u aint getting betta' duke, cause u aint staying wit it!/
had ya' whole life ahead of u, but u kept playing wit' it!/
u can't stand wit' it, i thow' rights to tha' end/
i tuck u in wit' tha pen, say goodnight to ya' friends!!/
buried in a cast black - check my bio: 'unfade-able'/
Lif' turn Bio's hazmats to bio-degradables!!!/


Bio:
You think it's heat this whore bringin'? I come in swords swingin'
All the cats he fuckin' with got his herpes sores stingin'
Lif, you need to battle folks your own skill, that's the truth
This prostitute would pro'lly get taken out by Doctor Seuss
He lost a tooth! Oh shit, he got his crown cracked!
Lif, you'd best bounce back, you might make it as a lounge act
The magicians assistant, like "Is this your card?"
I'm livin' large and rippin' 'tards like you to little parts
You pedal hard, but you can't make it with out training wheels
I aim to build my empire over emcees that I maim and kill
"He's insane with skills," they say as they watch me cripple Lif
I'm ready with the missile fists, his best move's the nipple twist
Illiterate? are you? 'Cause you don't know how to write
Listenin' to you rap is like tryin' to watch a coward fight
My power might overwhelm you, Lif get crushed again
Is there any need to vote? Just hand hdub the pen


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sikstyle
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Tue Jul-05-05 10:26 AM

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5. "RE: Prolif VS Biohazard"
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>ya' condition 'bout to change - give u a different look!/
>we might be on the same page, but i'm in a different book!/
>

I got up and walked away from my computer after that. just couldnt read anymore, damn. Bio REALLY surprised me though, this was a big step up for him, hes def makin moves, just wasnt strong enough, needed to show a little more confidence in flow. this was actually more entertaining than I thought it would be, but I gotta give it to lif, good f'n show people.

"I walk around with sick styles, sippin on cristal, my whole cliques wild, I'm rich pal no more sticks I'm making hits now... when I recite you takin hours to write, so if you fight just tell ya man what kinda flowers you like"
-Big L

  

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Shakeet Lokh Em
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Tue Jul-05-05 11:04 AM

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6. "Prolif VS Biohazard"
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I agree with what Sik said. Bio came WAY HARDER than I thought he would. For real. But Prolif still came harder.

Vote: Prolif

"I'm scientific, but my reflex gangsta"- Black Thought

  

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MiracleRic
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Tue Jul-05-05 01:34 PM

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7. "this was tougher than i thought cause..."
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Tue Jul-05-05 01:52 PM by MiracleRic

  

          

lif had the better punches but i honestly think bio outflowed him, had bio extended his verse a bit more and had one punch that just smacked me in my face, he woulda had it

bio showed his flow on this one, but hes gotta improve the punches just a bit and make his verses a lil longer

edit: oh yea, ima vote for Lif

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hdub
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10. "co-sign on this...."
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>lif had the better punches but i honestly think bio outflowed
>him, had bio extended his verse a bit more and had one punch
>that just smacked me in my face, he woulda had it


bio surprised the hell out of me as well kinda like dude just stepped up to the big show

bios was too short and lifs was too long- lif you started out with solid murder and should have cut it off around 3/4 of the way through

if bio had just put in a few more lines and made his shit longer i think we'd really have a tough call on this one

anyways i think lif got it but i was most impressed with bio

besides i think lifs saving up his real shit for next round

i also thinkn that my vote shouldnt count since its set that i got the winner

see y'all next week

bon soir bitches

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jay_fever
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8. "RE: Prolif VS Biohazard"
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Nice flow from both... But my vote goes to Lif. He hit Bio with the haymaker something tough.

Vote-PROLIF
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Jason Voorhies
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Wed Jul-06-05 09:42 AM

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9. "RE: Prolif VS Biohazard"
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favorite lines from lif
grown man son, so respect the intellect/
dude had to beg his moms to get on the internet!!/
deals settled! - too deep 4 ya lines to feel treble…

favorite lines from bio:
watch me cripple Lif
I'm ready with the missile fists, his best move's the nipple twist

close shit to me...both came with something. bio, you in there but imma lean towards lif. bio seemed more riled up and bratty with it, lif had the cool confidence...

<---Ben Wallace apreciation

  

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Whateva
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Thu Jul-07-05 08:23 PM

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11. "RE: Prolif VS Biohazard"
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This came down to line for line strength.

Bio, your lines are in shape, but prolif's lines were really cut. They just hit harder. You remember his lines after you read them. For example, look at the opening and closing lines:

Lif opening lines:

hey hold up!! who in tha'.....huh? imagine this!
dude is pre-puberty, claiming he hazardous!!/
Bio battles Lif??? ya'll gotta sense a rumor/
if not, i KnowOne dude out there got a sense of humor!/

Bio opening lines:

You think it's heat this whore bringin'? I come in swords swingin'
All the cats he fuckin' with got his herpes sores stingin'
Lif, you need to battle folks your own skill, that's the truth
This prostitute would pro'lly get taken out by Doctor Seuss

Lif's lines are jumping off the page. It's funny, little wasted words and it makes sense.




Lif closing lines:

u can't stand wit' it, i thow' rights to tha' end/
i tuck u in wit' tha pen, say goodnight to ya' friends!!/
buried in a cast black - check my bio: 'unfade-able'/
Lif' turn Bio's hazmats to bio-degradables!!!/


Bio closing lines:

Illiterate? are you? 'Cause you don't know how to write
Listenin' to you rap is like tryin' to watch a coward fight
My power might overwhelm you, Lif get crushed again
Is there any need to vote? Just hand hdub the pen

Prolif this was fire as usual, but I you can take it to a completely different level and show us why you deserve to be the champ next round. Show your Floyd Mayweather side.

Vote: Prolific

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