Okayplayers, time to drop the ice packs, rinse and spit, cuz Photo is walkin' round the ring in a thong with a #2 card and the bells bout to ring..... once again I'm gonna post your name and your opponent’s name. (Just as in round one match-ups were randomly chosen. Its the luck of the draw.) You have until 10am EST on Wednesday to put ya verse in my INBOX …(remember my INBOX...not email.) I will post both verses as soon as they hit my inbox ..if ya late you get DQ'ed …so you lose .. We had a lot of DQs in round one. Lets try to stick around this time people.

FYI, as a result of the DQs we were 1 emcee short, so Instant Axis has been added as an alternate.

The match-ups are as follows......

nuke vs Prolif

Biohazard vs southernboy_423

hdub vs Zin

MiracleRic vs Rajeniro

MCee vs def1

Whateva vs Instant Axis


Sound the bell........

PS - also to keep everything neat, pls keep all ish talkin' and ran-dumb idle talk in replies to the ish talk thread below.

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best matchup here:

dub vs. zin

mos def watching.

finally ya'll can stop all the talk and just rhyme. i'm tired of seeing the back and forth so lets get it out once and for all and then just move on to some otha ish. feel me.

Basura Caliente:

S.A.U.S.E. - Distributary
The Movie Stars - Coming to the Stage

"I school a beat like I'm Aus at Harvard" - Miracle Ric

"Bless yo heart!!!!"

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http://www.myspace.com/s_a_u_s_e

i like almost all the matchups

some of the dq's disappointed me

but oh well

Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

Building repetoires (c) spm since 1983

n/m

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lol, yeah right. Shakeet and Prolif in the FIRST round? Not random. Good promo though. HDUB and Zin in the second round? AFter the way they been poppin off to each other? Random? Ummmmm, no. But still good promo.

"I'm scientific, but my reflex gangsta"- Black Thought

wanted to see dub go at it with Ric.
If it was up to me it woulda been:

hdub vs MiracleRic

Instant Axis vs Zin

Whateva vs Prolif

nuke vs Rajeniro

and the rest could stay as is...
Biohazard vs southernboy_423

MCee vs def1

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then I guess it was fate, haha. lookin foward to readin some of these

"I walk around with sick styles, sippin on cristal, my whole cliques wild, I'm rich pal no more sticks I'm making hits now... when I recite you takin hours to write, so if you fight just tell ya man what kinda flowers you like"
-Big L

get at me bad gurl

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when it comes to me ill send it in----------- as of now the mood hasnt struck me yet

besides we even if i did send it in right now- we need to be the grand finale of this shit anyways

so i wanna see them posted tomorrow morning

...(the end)...

so what your saying is you need more time
....know one throw my other verse out i'm gon
na write one forreal ...

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Guess who's Back

if you were the king you would get to set the schedule

you're not

i havent even started with you yet

people said they tired of the shit talking- we've said enough back and forth let's just spit

...(the end)...

fuck a sig!!!


why MiracleRic thinks me and him clic aight, here's the reason, u real with yours, i am once i bring my guard down, we both stupid as hell, we both got our talents, want a lot of the same things, like a lot of the same things, we both

Whateva:
Knowone locked salt in a cage wit a slug
A spliff, and a fifth of henny in a cage wit a thug.
A thug killing henny wavin fifths pumpin slugs
into Instant Axis and out of his anal plug
spliff half dead, just a roach, wait, killed it
bad approach, hope you kissed ya fate before you sealed it
I'm beyond your reality I'm passed the truth
I'm naturally occuring, ahk, you massed produced
Get more green than Micks in Boston Massachutes
a black tee and timb boots, respected without suits
in major urban disputes we commense with arms abuse
In the city of the Roots ya best friend is a truce
Axis gets splattered like mixin cookin batter
Had to pry ya chick lips off my shit before you had her
Taught her how to William Mark Felt before you bagged her
Ironic like a physicists askin "what's the matter?"
I'm destroying Axis's powers with internet chatter
Cali nigga not brawlin is appaulin to me
Can't type enough periods to stall a defeat
Off sets, I'm protected like bubble wrapped packages
Director slash bad cop, I double tap actresses
I'm too much, you have me, too vexed to get nice
too gutter, like ya avi, reach and get hit twice
I don't need a star or a compass for direction
I produce more blow than a woodwind section
Instant Axis get blown from this dimension to the next one
Rookie, study the masters before you actually test one
See yall in round 3....


Instant Axis
AX ABOUT ME...BRIZZLE AX ABOUT ME!!!!

its like old leather belts sever ya flesh and burn...i be like whateva whateva with cats that think they clever...with that in turn i stash the urn...let ya ashes burn...say la v extract the germ...i perm cats on ocassion...straightin ya thoughts out...pull bait thru ya jaws mouth and blatantly call out..."hook line and sinker!!!"...the reeper so grim tell a friend to tell a friend...i telegram and have Know One dancin at ya doorstep..."try again"(whoa!!)...i monopolize those that change clothes and be like "i suppose"...ice those with grills whateva kid...lies show thru reels...you pleather wiz...i rip thru shredder quick and lines is better writ...ya spine is jelly split...i rhyme intelligent...so smart from the start of this verse not rehearsed i dispersed ya hearse quite snug in Photos purse...take a snapshot of the last drop youll ever see...cause rd 2 apologies is how to acknowledge thee...i vanish cats in combat...ask anubis nuke and H Dub who broke contract...another story returned to glory...side note..ignore me...im full of myself like the yankees and joe torre...ya flows corny..i saw ya first round..you had sikstyle...who couldnt win in that now...i just lost a vote..no sweat...i gotta give you somethin...cause charity from the stripe is free to throw punches...my speed is slow lunges...you chutes and ladders...this game aint for kids so lame ya dont matter...the name its told bladder "im gonna piss on you"....whateva dude

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To me, this was close. No odds on favorite. Instant Axis came a little harder, but I like Whateva's flow better. I'm a scientific dude, so I liked this line: <Ironic like a physicists askin "what's the matter?"> Very clever.

Vote: Whateva

"I'm scientific, but my reflex gangsta"- Black Thought

>"im gonna piss on you"....whateva dude

Axis, I loved that line...I've used it once or twice in my freestyle battles back in the cornfields of Iowa, yo the first person on these boards to quote me.... yo gangsta dawg

Vote: Axis

*I hate you you look like a potato* >my man lil solja tee flow<
*when flips in the crib mah drop it on my c**k drop it on my c**k drop it on my c**k

...my name was brought into this so im not even thinking about voting

BUT

i do want to say for the record that this clown ax and i havent battled yet and for him to claim any kind of victory over me is complete bull

anyways this was pretty close- i've seen much better from both of you these two verses are pretty weak if either of you had actually brought it like you normally do for the tourney you would have clearly smoked the other one

...(the end)...

" and H Dub who
broke contract"

meaning we were going to battle...you kept saying my time will come but after i snubbed anubis and nuke...your challenge was no where to be found...you should really disect the shit before you politik about it...you talk a good game cuzzin but to me you will never really be shit and with that said..it doesnt really matter...you do you...peace.

fuck a sig!!!


why MiracleRic thinks me and him clic aight, here's the reason, u real with yours, i am once i bring my guard down, we both stupid as hell, we both got our talents, want a lot of the same things, like a lot of the same things, we both

our time still will come when its right on my schedule

you want to do that shit on your timetable then call me out otherwise shut the fuck up and wait your turn

...(the end)...

so lets see...your bitter cause i shit on you in rhyme and then when i point out how you was crying and challenging me saying our time will come you bitch up and tell me to wait my turn like you an OKP god now...this is real funny and then you act like i even care where you stand in the matter...you a pawn duke...you will always be a pawn....i dont worry about you...i dont make posts about you...i shit on you in a rhyme that wasnt even all about you but yet ya pantie got all in ya ass and you just itchin to argue...you aint Photo and you hold no weight in this issue...if anything...you should drop it and keep workin on your beats...im not gonna reply to this anymore cause you seriously aint worth my time and id shit on you in real life...you look like a goober in ya pic if thats you on the soundclick page..get the fuck on yo..comedy!!

fuck a sig!!!


why MiracleRic thinks me and him clic aight, here's the reason, u real with yours, i am once i bring my guard down, we both stupid as hell, we both got our talents, want a lot of the same things, like a lot of the same things, we both

...wasn't a post about me then i dont know what is


you dont care about me but you peeping my soundclick?

and putting my name in your verses

ok dog you right


by the way- i might not be the best looking man in the world but i dont need the internet to find a wifey like some people

...(the end)...

Instant Axis takes it

>Whateva:


>Had to pry ya chick lips off my shit before you had her
>Taught her how to William Mark Felt before you bagged her

only reason I knew that was Deepthroat was cause I was gonna use that for a line, haha

>Cali nigga not brawlin is appaulin to me
>Can't type enough periods to stall a defeat

got him on his written style, which was my main issue tryin to read his, its written like he's having an asthma attack

this was pretty solid the whole way through, no 'mo.

>Instant Axis:


>ice those with grills
>whateva kid...lies show thru reels...you pleather wiz...i rip
>thru shredder quick and lines is better writ...ya spine is
>jelly split...i rhyme intelligent...

you had some nice runs flow-wise like here, I could actually follow it to a beat in parts like this, but you lost me in some other parts.


>im full of myself like the yankees and joe torre...ya
>flows corny..i saw ya first round..you had sikstyle...who
>couldnt win in that now...i just lost a vote..no sweat...

I didnt really like this part for some reason. not really sure why. nah for real though, I almost didn't vote cause of this line haha, but fuck that. I like how you come off with confidence in lines like this, and you got some good imagery too, just hard to follow your flow, prob easier for people who know you.


vizzote 4 Whateva

"I walk around with sick styles, sippin on cristal, my whole cliques wild, I'm rich pal no more sticks I'm making hits now... when I recite you takin hours to write, so if you fight just tell ya man what kinda flowers you like"
-Big L

dang, i try not to vote for dudes i know for the simple fact its always going to be easier for me to read than someone i don't because i've heard them and know exactly how they would sound spitting it. i'ma just throw out the flow category cause my vote would be biased based on the aforementioned. so that said i vote Ax on the strength his punches were harder. point blank.




insert the random "just cause they boys" rant here.



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Basura Caliente:

S.A.U.S.E. - Distributary
The Movie Stars - Coming to the Stage

"I school a beat like I'm Aus at Harvard" - Miracle Ric

"Bless yo heart!!!!"

http://www.myspace.com/beatslanginpimps
http://www.myspace.com/s_a_u_s_e

haha, nah man I feel you. big part of this is being able to understand the flow, you just happen to get it cause you know him, I didn't cause I don't. it's all a style thing anyway, if it's hot to you more than the other one then you should vote for it. I just think hed get more votes if he had a structure that was easier to follow along with, cause it's hard for some people to see where the rhyme pairs match up. Some people don't have a problem reading it like this though, I just usually see it easier if it's written in bars, or something of that sort.

"I walk around with sick styles, sippin on cristal, my whole cliques wild, I'm rich pal no more sticks I'm making hits now... when I recite you takin hours to write, so if you fight just tell ya man what kinda flowers you like"
-Big L

whateva's verse didnt hit me until the mass produced line, but from then on, it was solid, clever shit, but the flow coulda been iller...

Ax was solid all the way thru and had the best image with that KnowOne dancin at your doorstep shitn (that shit had me get up and run from the comp laughin), i do know ax and know how this would sound and i think this is the first time ive felt his "flow" as much as my own

whateva - had the more clever punches
ax - had the hottest/most humorous punch/image

whateva - flow was straight
ax - flow was heat

whateva - a small chunk of filler
ax - a lil filler but better spaced

my first instinct was draw and in the edit ive changed my mind

whateva's wasnt as clever as i first thought, and frak's had swag

AX wins

Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

Building repetoires (c) spm since 1983

Vote: Instant Axis

"I ain't never been smacked; a nigga better keep his hands
to himself or get clapped for what's under that man's belt"

this was close...seen betta' from both....one had betta flow, the other had betta blows...

vote: Whateva

"duck cause i struck with the soul of motown/my central broadcasting systems is low down" -- gza

...put me down for whateva

heads have accused me of hating before

i cant let the better verse lose simply cause my name got brought into the situation

they both flowed well but ax wasnt really throwing them gut busting punches

whateva came with a whole heap of them that deep throat line was only one of a bunch- it wasnt even close

...(the end)...

you know what...im leading in this battle but just take me out if young cats is gonna bitch up and pull shit like this...just take me out the tourney...seriously...if i win...dont even put me in the next round...this is the exact reason i didnt sign up to begin with...cats is bitches yo...i easily won this shit...but yeah...drop me from the tourney...i knew i shoulda just stayed out the shit...for real H Dub...you got to be the biggest pussy on this site...apologies to you fine females on the board but this pussy is just gushin!!

fuck a sig!!!


why MiracleRic thinks me and him clic aight, here's the reason, u real with yours, i am once i bring my guard down, we both stupid as hell, we both got our talents, want a lot of the same things, like a lot of the same things, we both

i aint even the only one who voted against you

but go ahead keep bitching

if deep down you knew your shit was as hot as you say i think you'd be less insecure and able to take a few knocks

...(the end)...

this is a battle tourney, you gonna quit cause cats taking this seriously?? come on mang! you gon' fuel hdub wit punches, stick around, and maybe you can take it somewhere. i havn't seen anything that should force you to quit. seriously.

peace
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BE' (c)Common Sense

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"with...cats is bitches yo...i easily won this shit.."

Not an easy win. We still counting. You only up by two votes. As far as I'm concerned, the two best emcees in this tourney voted for me, so I'm straight. Win lose or draw. Talent recognize talent. I'll walk away with that. Congrats on the battle though. Good luck if you make it to the next round.

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"Science" and Religion are the two most dangerous weapons of ideology. See holocaust.

Why do "scientists" constantly produce statistics based on "race", a social construct?

if i win ima stay in it Know...just match me against....well...nevermind...the kid gonna lose this round anyway.....peace

fuck a sig!!!


why MiracleRic thinks me and him clic aight, here's the reason, u real with yours, i am once i bring my guard down, we both stupid as hell, we both got our talents, want a lot of the same things, like a lot of the same things, we both

lmao

n.m

...(the end)...

because i haven't had the time to dig into verses and vote appropriately.
but i don't have to go to school or work tonight...
i'm just relaxing here watching the Finals so...


First off..

Overall Vote:

Whateva- 7.8
Instant Axis- 7.9

Reasons:

Whateva:

the beginning of a verse is so important.
it's where you literally pull your dick/pussy out and put it on your opponent's forehead.

Your beginning:

>Knowone locked salt in a cage wit a slug
>A spliff, and a fifth of henny in a cage wit a thug.
>A thug killing henny wavin fifths pumpin slugs
>into Instant Axis and out of his anal plug


well done. the last 2 lines could have been stronger.
but the first 2 lines made me pay attention.

Where you won:

better consistency, format, flow, some of your punches were heavier
(deepthroat,physicists,periods, bubblewrap,director slash bad cop)

Where you lost:

weaker punches, less swagger, you let off the gas pedal in the middle of your verse:

>a black tee and timb boots, respected without suits
>in major urban disputes we commense with arms abuse
>In the city of the Roots ya best friend is a truce

in my humble opinion (humble for real fam) these were weaker lines that came across as filler.
it felt like you relaxed here instead of tearing his head off.
this is round 2 of a tournament...every word counts.



Instant Axis:

beginning:

>AX ABOUT ME...BRIZZLE AX ABOUT ME!!!!
>
>its like old leather belts sever ya flesh and burn...i be like
>whateva whateva with cats that think they clever...with that
>in turn i stash the urn...let ya ashes burn...say la v extract
>the germ...i perm cats on ocassion...straightin ya thoughts
>out...pull bait thru ya jaws mouth and blatantly call
>out..."hook line and sinker!!!"...


Outstanding. heavy, heavy confidence...heavy, heavy swagger.
imo, that last line alone was worth about 3 of whateva's punches.
i literally laughed out loud.
And that's what a battle is about...the 'Oh-Shits!'.


where you won:

basically what i said above...plus heavier punches..and tripled rhyme schemes

where you lost:

you let off the gas in the middle of your verse as well.

and

format, format, format. i'm sayin, your style is your style.
but in typing the way that you do...all of this was probably lost on half the board:


>...lies show thru reels...you pleather wiz...i rip
>thru shredder quick and lines is better writ...ya spine is
>jelly split...i rhyme intelligent...so smart from the start of
>this verse

>...cause charity from the stripe is
>free to throw punches...my speed is slow lunges...you chutes
>and ladders....
>the name its told bladder "im gonna piss on
>you"....

overall, good battle.

I like your analytical skills, blaksilence -- Although I might not have paid as much attention to detail and you did -- But I have to co~sign & ditto on EVERYTHING you said here --

This battle was damn nice -- But I think Axe had the sharper edge in the outcome -- (Cut a lil' deeper/made more blood puddles) --


*AXE~MEISTER*

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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Great analysis. I had to reply to this. I'm seeing some weaknesses in my verse now.

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"Science" and Religion are the two most dangerous weapons of ideology. See holocaust.

Why do "scientists" constantly produce statistics based on "race", a social construct?

Whateva had the upset til this 'I produce more blow than a woodwind section'.
way to call yourself out man.
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A wise man sees failure as progress,
a fool divorces his knowledge and misses the logic
(c) canibus - poet laureate 2

i think he meant blows. I hope so at least, haha

"I walk around with sick styles, sippin on cristal, my whole cliques wild, I'm rich pal no more sticks I'm making hits now... when I recite you takin hours to write, so if you fight just tell ya man what kinda flowers you like"
-Big L

seriously.

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"Science" and Religion are the two most dangerous weapons of ideology. See holocaust.

Why do "scientists" constantly produce statistics based on "race", a social construct?

thaats how i took it but it coulda been blows, but my blow as in the drug woulda been hot

Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

Building repetoires (c) spm since 1983

....somebody just failed street 101 lol

...(the end)...

nah, only rich white people deal with coke, coke aint street, who actually calls it blow...but u knew what i meant

blow me

Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

Building repetoires (c) spm since 1983

>who actually calls it blow...but u knew what i meant

according to this quote right here you did

you cant say im wrong cause nobody calls it that while saying at the same time that you meant to say coke

its kinda contradictory

lol

this has got ot be the most analyzed line of the tourney

...(the end)...

.....funny shit!



....and so it goes, im at it again. Fix ur fucking face, Im in the building!

http://www.soundclick.com/band/5/youngsleep_music.htm

or that sweet cocaina (c) tony montana. yo whateva, let me know, I'll drive down to philly right now, I just want one more hit and then I promise I'll stop, for real this time. *scratches neck and shoulder*

"I walk around with sick styles, sippin on cristal, my whole cliques wild, I'm rich pal no more sticks I'm making hits now... when I recite you takin hours to write, so if you fight just tell ya man what kinda flowers you like"
-Big L

now he meant 'blows' but it still has the double interpretation,
and for someone calling Frak a rookie, that's a rookie mistake.
btw Whateva.. other than that line it was a solid verse

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A wise man sees failure as progress,
a fool divorces his knowledge and misses the logic
(c) canibus - poet laureate 2

I'm figuring out now that he already has a following. I didn't even know.

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"Science" and Religion are the two most dangerous weapons of ideology. See holocaust.

Why do "scientists" constantly produce statistics based on "race", a social construct?

on first take ....i was like draw ....but after re reading the shit ....yeah frak got in him .... yeah ....
whateva you posted a good verse ...i just think ax came alil bit hotter and i wasn't even gonna vote on this shit

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very very close, but i give the vote to whateva
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MCee:
Def1, I wouldn't let a Def1 hear you,
No fear fa dudes who spit pointless like lightin fires in pools,
No one ta compare me to, i'm rarer danna lion chased by caribou,
I'm cannibal, like animals, in zoos widout food,
Why you spit, i'm tryna solve dat mystery like Scooby Doo,
I guess you similar ta Keys, you got niggas sayin boo,
Maybe Mike Jones too, say ya name, dey like who?
Def1, worthless, you can't trade pennnies fa jewels,
Ya bumb rap get smashed, lunged at da sun when we clash,
Hungry fa dis like a fat nigga waitin fa a snack,
Crush you like Big Pun wit da flow, matta fact,
Da mic crushed in my grasp son, brush up on ya act,
Iss no contest, i'm hotter by da largest margine,
Armor anna shield couldn't fend you from my pen's offense,
Mentally scarred like concentration camps was in my bars,
I shit on emcees, yo ass needa stop fartin', peace


def 1:
I would bring the dopest shit to have you open with
but my spoken script at its worst is to dope for this
i'll have you choke on piss i'll leave you with a broken fist
after you try to cope with this, you better be hoping kid
you're nothing you gotta be joking bitch
thinking you bring anything dope or sick, Im over this
so inclusion you're ruined Im including the bruising
concluding the shooting of dope verbs will soon then
demolish you and Im calling you
out just to see you falling through
my trap Im schooling you from pre-k to college dude
call me rude as I abolish you
dont fuck with me you'll be lucky see to escape by ducking me
i'll bust MCee you aint shit to me
you think you're dope everyone else thinks differently
try to get rid of me you got be kidding me
Im the epitome of skill so you must be shitting me
I thought you we're tickling me when you was hitting me
its just common sense that I'll bring out the bitch in you
Im like chick-fil-a cause Im serving chicken dude
you must be stupid to battle me turn you quick to a casualty
skill is something you lacking see I'll have you rattled b
like you was a babies toy you're not even a wack mcee
you're below that I'll have you choke back
on every word and every line that you wrote cat
you aint dope cause i dont smoke crack
and I just smoked you and left you with burns to the 3rd degree
I won this shit before you even had a chance to murder me
but you wouldnt have accomplished that niether
this shit was nothing I consider this taking a breather

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"Too weird to live.... too rare to die..."

IG: KnowOne215 | PS+ ID: KnowOne215

"Def1, I wouldn't let a Def1 hear you" ROFLOL

Def1 was okay, he came with some alright punches. But somehow, in a shorter verse, MCee was better.

Vote: MCee

"I'm scientific, but my reflex gangsta"- Black Thought

these were both pretty basic- if it was up to me neither of these dudes would be in the 3rd BUT im gonna give it to def1 for several reasons

a) danna, dis, iss, these misspelled shits aren't necessary they instantly dumb down mcee's verse and make it harder to follow- that shit is just straight up annoying on the page- and it's not necessary to understanding the beat or rhyme

cee i've heard you on audio JUST WRITE THE WORDS DOWN you come off as a special needs person and you dont need to

you get annoyed whenever anybody responds to your shit saying the spelling errors detract from the rhyme- but this is peoples feedback- they do! if youre going to keep posting writtens and you want people to respond more positiviely to them listen to criticism

b)

im 99.9% sure i have recently heard this EXACT same line on the boards:

>I guess you similar ta Keys, you got niggas sayin boo,

and finally

c)

>Mentally scarred like concentration camps was in my bars,

as a jew i'll say go fuck yourself for this one

ive said before that i think being offensive can strengthen the humor or punch factors of a line- BUT - this line doesnt have any jokes in it just the offensive content

if you made me laugh hard enough i wouldnt have noticed that i should be offended but this didnt make me laugh at all it just annoyed me

...(the end)...

Co-sign to this: ">Mentally scarred like concentration camps was in >my bars,

as a jew i'll say go fuck yourself for this one"

Auschwitz and Sachsenhausen were NO joke.

"I'm scientific, but my reflex gangsta"- Black Thought

i figured out where the keys line was from- turns out mcee reused most of the verse he had for bartek for this round

automatic DQ here as far as i'm concerned

bartek not showing up got you into round 2- you lucky for that- it doesnt give you the right to only write one verse for two rounds

everybody else who didnt get an easy bye with a DQ has had to write one verse so far- why should you have to do half the work- especially considering that you had the easiest possible road to round 2

http://board.okayplayer.com/okp.php?az=show_topic&forum=20&topic_id=14604&mesg_id=14856


BarTek VS MCee
Posted by KnowOne, Mon Jun-13-05 08:33 AM

BarTek was DQ'ed
Here was MCee's verse:
Bartek jus stepped inta da wrong meat market,
Wrong target fa dis arsenist ta burn, regardless,
You lack ill rap like P Diddy's artists,
Iss mini me ta Shaq, don't get it twisted like da mob did,
Iss no contest, i'm hotter by da largest margine,
Armor anna shield couldn't fend you from my pen's offense,
Ya garbage, my bars abuse dudes like you,
Why you spit? I'm tryna solve dat mystery like Scooby Doo,
I guess you similar ta Keys, you got niggas sayin boo,
Maybe Mike Jones too, say ya name, dey like who?
Bartek? Who dat? Homie think dat he could rap?
Put ya pen down dog, an emcee, you ain't dat,
Off my track, off my scale, so, you could call me fat,
Crush you like Big Pun wit da flow, matta fact,
Da mic crushed in my grasp son, brush up on ya act, peace

...(the end)...

I ain't know he did that. I didn't even read his first round verse. Aiiyo that's messed up. You gotta be creative enough to write somethin different specific to each person. I voted for this guy too. I did think he came a little harder than def 1. So I can't change my vote. But you right Dub, that should NOT be allowed. Emcees recycle words, yeah, but a whole 2 bar set?! Get outta here with that man.

"I'm scientific, but my reflex gangsta"- Black Thought

>So I can't change my vote.

that's why im saying this should be an automatic dq a lot of people probably wont peep this exchange right here and they might miss this and you and aus voted before i could back up my claim of biting

as far as im concerned this is unprecedented grimyness- so it might require a little unprecedented grimyness on our parts as well

...(the end)...

seems like def1's flow was better, but mcee came with funny ass punches that were too much to overcome.


MCee


****EDIT****

after reading dub's exhibit A I rescend my vote. can't recycle verses in a tourney.

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RE: MCeezy
From: KnowOne
Date: Jun 14th 2005

Thanks fine if thats what you want. Just make sure to send me what you want me to post.


>Can I use the same verse I used against BarTek for my second
>round but change it up alittle?...peace

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dub...seriously, i think you gotta get off ya own dick n quit hatin

just cause he let you do it doesnt mean it was cool

i'll put it to you this way- you kknew you were on shaky ground with that otherwise you wouldnt have asked him

and you can say im hating but i had nothing bad to say about y'alls audios

they were aight- definitely better than anything i could do but these writtens are just not on point- specifically for the higher levels of this tourney

you can still say im hating if it helps you sleep at night tho- is shakeet hating too?

...(the end)...

1)Because I figured if ya'll had read round one, you would see it was a reused verse and take that into accout.

2)Also in the last tourney DQ'ed verses were never posted. So in theory I could have reused a verse and no one would have ever known but Ric. (even though I really couldnt cuz I keyed it and didnt keep a copy. LOL)

3)And you have to take into account... if a persons re-used spit, was still hotter than his opponet... how can you vote against him. You can post what ever you want. If you inbox me 2 lines & the rest of the spit is just:
lgohslghsolgn;slng;SZ
sd;lgbSA:Ogfn:WL
sad;gs;dlgn;slgs
Thats what Im gonna post. Its up to the judges to decide. (Though Id feel sorry for anyone loosing to such a verse. LOL)

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just so you know i don't think you did anything wrong-- people should be able to put up whatever they want as a verse

im just doing like you said and "taking it into account"

lol

...(the end)...

people recycle verses all the time, we obviously werent supposed to see his original

so i'll judge the verses by themselves

MCee-had the better punches but was hit or miss

def1-had the iller flow and only decent punches

vote: DRAW

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wasn't really feelin either of them. nothin special here, whoever makes it to the next round better step it up, see what's working for other people and try to implement stuff like that. good luck, peace

"I walk around with sick styles, sippin on cristal, my whole cliques wild, I'm rich pal no more sticks I'm making hits now... when I recite you takin hours to write, so if you fight just tell ya man what kinda flowers you like"
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with the refurbished verse ......

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Vote: MCee

"I ain't never been smacked; a nigga better keep his hands
to himself or get clapped for what's under that man's belt"

although we should keep it new, i don't think dude should be penalized for reusing his own words...now had he reused somebody else's, that's some'n different....however, i thought both flows were too basic for a second round matchup...Def had more punches, even though it was a bit long

vote: Def 1


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if Def1 would have shortened his verse
and added some weight to his punches
he would have taken it

because this is thorough wordplay/lyricism:

>so inclusion you're ruined Im including the bruising
>concluding the shooting of dope verbs will soon then
>demolish you and Im calling you
>out just to see you falling through
>my trap Im schooling you from pre-k to college du...


But MCee was just funnier/better

example:

>Def1, I wouldn't let a Def1 hear you,
>No fear fa dudes who spit pointless like lightin fires in
>pools,
>No one ta compare me to, i'm rarer danna lion chased by
>caribou,
>I'm cannibal, like animals, in zoos widout food,
>Why you spit, i'm tryna solve dat mystery like Scooby Doo,
>I guess you similar ta Keys, you got niggas sayin boo,
>Maybe Mike Jones too, say ya name, dey like who?
>Def1, worthless, you can't trade pennnies fa jewels,
>Ya bumb rap get smashed, lunged at da sun when we clash,
>Hungry fa dis like a fat nigga waitin fa a snack,
>Crush you like Big Pun wit da flow, matta fact,
>Da mic crushed in my grasp son, brush up on ya act,
>Iss no contest, i'm hotter by da largest margine,
>Armor anna shield couldn't fend you from my pen's offense,
>Mentally scarred like concentration camps was in my bars,
>I shit on emcees, yo ass needa stop fartin', peace

yea that's the whole verse.

Overall Score:

MCee- 8.2
Def1- 7.0