...the original thread for this battle got a bit clogged with shit talking

im setting the rounds up in here to make it easier for heads to vote

...(the end)...

hdub:

"truly more miraculous"


i'm up late at night like a jumpy junky fiend
dub spitting high rhymes wit the drunken monkey steez
this humpty dumpty ric gets his skull cracked and broke
flowing body and soul im the one leaking yolk
no joke, a ric win's "gonna take a miracle"
it's hysterical, him and zin jerk spherical
in numerical posts, talk smack in countless threads
dub knocks 'em dead flowing dirty like unwashed dreads
i saty ahead, rise fast like an olympic track star
net rap star from the home of brownstones and black star
brooklyn- bringing through sweetness like the keebler elves
dub be burning down dc like its 1812
doing this well and only getting more betters
now ric's a known loser rocking scarlet letters
sew L's to chests with lyric threads and beat needles
beat these twins zin and ric like they dee dum tweedles
like the beatles, no fad- i'm a full fledged invasion
ric loses placement, outranked by caucasians
so amazing, dub got soul without melanin
i stay at forefronts, the rest look irrelevant
spit elements, a force of nature made to win
ric's buried, burned, blown away with earth fire and wind
hes snagglepuss softness like teddies and flowers
i got rock the clock flows, open 24 hours
dont give a fuck about ric's rhymes, dimes, and other two bit cares
you're nothing to me ric! just one of zin's pubic hairs
i'm a trendsetter like high fashion labels
critically acclaimed like dramas on cable
spit fables, my rhymes teaching morals and lessons
golden rule of the game- with dub don't be messing
i been blessing, this board with straight hotness for weeks
now i'll shit on your rep till ya miracle reeks
this miracle's weak, i got stronger foundations
my flows technically sound like cars built by asians
it takes a nation- of millions to hold me back
im ill like flavor flav in the days before crack
stand back, cause you know how vicious my attacks is
blitzkrieged zin and ric, now the next bitch is access.....



MiracleRic:

 "a first round hearse found " 

          
u cats stay on the avy, must think ric is handsome,
slayin u gladly, i drop the spitters' anthems,
u spit off-balance/ soft ballads,
i spit tounge in cheek,…u…toss salads…
u all phallic, my raw palette,
is equipped with spectrums,
u couldn’t drop hot shit, if u spit from rectums,
u toads, im sick like I lick infections
while u pose, and win battles thru loopholes
I poop foes, into porcelain caskets,
Nuke’s froze, I teach courses and classes
On how to spit dope, and export to the masses,
Of course it’s a classic, Now that’s flow fellas,
I’ll kick with so much force in ya asses,
you’ll have a toe fetish
im the new vet, and u leapt, a lil too froggy,
u? threat? .... new hobby!
Im king of the hill…u bobby
First verse versus nuke…two bodies
ur hearse is cute, like a circus coupe
i even type dope, u tight-rope,
the God MC, I smite folks, mics, votes
and even great white hopes
u turle-DOVEs, act like soaps
i spit fertile floods, u lack tight quotes
I murder teams, U from BK?
hmm, im the burger king, u pre-k…
beef Queens, is paintin queef scenes,
on the subways of Spanish Harlem,
my canvas scars him…daily,
these clowns is barnum bailey,
u and ur men flows is like power windows
they come standard…like my bitches…
my battlecry’s vicious, u even whine lame,
“Ric wont spit within my timeframe”
i silence cats, i push u vaginas back
with my balance act, talk shit,
did violence crack when he spat,
do calc, u alf, "got any cats?"

edit: *does first rd KO dance* ayo, ima start 2nd round 2morrow, we gonna do this ABBAAB style, i want this to be extra fair for u, lol

...(the end)...

im not talkin like im the best emcee.. but maybe im giving this cuz i would like for one day someone to do this to my battles lol
but i have been watching tourneys and analyzin battlecats since 1997 (shit- peace to war, danger, onlyone and my aol clique lol)
anyway,
im still due to battle zin, samari shampoo (sp?) and jayare (smile)
but i quoted the best punchlines.... and voted among


>hdub:


>no joke, a ric win's "gonna take a miracle"
>it's hysterical, him and zin jerk spherical
>in numerical posts, talk smack in countless threads
>dub knocks 'em dead flowing dirty like unwashed dreads

>sew L's to chests with lyric threads and beat needles
>beat these twins zin and ric like they dee dum tweedles
>like the beatles, no fad- i'm a full fledged invasion
>ric loses placement, outranked by caucasians
>so amazing, dub got soul without melanin
>i stay at forefronts, the rest look irrelevant
>spit elements, a force of nature made to win
>ric's buried, burned, blown away with earth fire and wind

>>dont give a fuck about ric's rhymes, dimes, and other two bit
>cares
>you're nothing to me ric! just one of zin's pubic hairs


> MiracleRic:
         

>u couldn’t drop hot shit, if u spit from rectums,
>u toads, im sick like I lick infections


>First verse versus nuke…two bodies
>ur hearse is cute, like a circus coupe

>u turle-DOVEs, act like soaps
>i spit fertile floods, u lack tight quotes

>my battlecry’s vicious, u even whine lame,
>“Ric wont spit within my timeframe”


well hdub wins this one only cuz he had MORE punchlines

RIC i always have ur back but u need to lessen the commas and the "yogi bear" type of punches...if u cant think of shit to say just put emotions into it and wyal out! (i've been there before)
PG is great for that look at his shit when he goes off, i love it!

say stupid creative shit
outthink the others
FUCK BATTLING LIKE ANYONE ELSE (shit this deserves a post) lol

remember my line "smack ragu on ya brake pads"
well it was just straight stupid.. but u had to admit.. it made ya laugh even tho it didnt make sense and it just went wit the verse...

hdub< i was really feeling certain parts but it was like u stopped just as ur verse was getting fire.... i wanted more & u left me hangin
but ur punchlines were a bit stronger and there were more of them so it held ur verse together better

but voting on punchlines (who produced more).. hdub wins this one. <waving flags>
next


-lol I write battle verses to Mariah Carey songs...

www.webspawner.com/users/delicateaurasoul4/index.html
This is a great website to discuss spirituality/religion, philosophies, and post poems:www.aware-discussion.net
www.3kingsmusic.com < for spiritual

wow! that was quite in depth and thorough

i really appreciate it i dont think ive ever gotten such detailed feedback on these boards

thanks

...(the end)...

>dont give a fuck about ric's rhymes, dimes, and other two bit
>cares
>you're nothing to me ric! just one of zin's pubic hairs


>i been blessing, this board with straight hotness for weeks
>now i'll shit on your rep till ya miracle reeks
>this miracle's weak, i got stronger foundations
>my flows technically sound like cars built by asians
>it takes a nation- of millions to hold me back
>im ill like flavor flav in the days before crack
>stand back, cause you know how vicious my attacks is
>blitzkrieged zin and ric, now the next bitch is access.....
>

you finished strong

but the lines i cut are the only ones im really feeling.

idk, your stuff is solid but technically its kinda basic, no knock on you by any means, just different strokes you know.
i think your punches could be alot stronger if you stayed away from just making every word at the end of a bar rhyme and dropped some internal rhymes to speed the flow up, because its not that your shit is bad, i just get bored when im reading it because it doesn't flow super smooth.

regardless you finished that one up strong.

i was diggin the last eight bars alot.


>
> MiracleRic:
>
> "a first round hearse found " 
>
>          

>u spit off-balance/ soft ballads,
>i spit tounge in cheek,…u…toss salads…
>u all phallic, my raw palette,
>is equipped with spectrums,
>u couldn’t drop hot shit, if u spit from rectums,

lmfao.

>u toads, im sick like I lick infections
>while u pose, and win battles thru loopholes
>I poop foes, into porcelain caskets,
>Nuke’s froze, I teach courses and classes
>On how to spit dope, and export to the masses,
>Of course it’s a classic, Now that’s flow fellas,
>I’ll kick with so much force in ya asses,
>you’ll have a toe fetish
>im the new vet, and u leapt, a lil too froggy,
>u? threat? .... new hobby!

sick.

>my battlecry’s vicious, u even whine lame,
>“Ric wont spit within my timeframe”
>i silence cats, i push u vaginas back
>with my balance act, talk shit,
>did violence crack when he spat,
>do calc, u alf, "got any cats?"
>

finished strong too

i give round one to ric.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

when whodini made friends it was well spoken.

hdub:

"great white hope..."
          
like a hip hop historian ric knows what the Score is
my verse so uproarious he begged me to forfeit
im bringing more shit-
wordsmith at ya table to eat
has ric ever spit a rhyme without saying queef or skeet?
hes beat-
although his first few lines was ill
by the end the flow was forgotten like the femcee amil
so can I get a-
whoop whoop
like the sound of the police
ric spitting pure doos doos like some septic leaks
drop pepcid acs-
my rhymes goes straight to ya chest
he spent the whole night writing but my flows still the best
so do your little dance ric and make a little love
your flows gets no ko’s once dub drops his gloves
you’s a DC mc spitting nothing but politricks
say you come real with yours but never give illness acknowledgement
just stay polishing dicks of these zins and accesses
licking they infections and sucking they abscesses
dubs here to crush representatives of evil axises
im a white brown bomber landing punches on max s’s

MiracleRic:

"skeet skeet skeet!!!!"

          
queef theme, play this at night and i'll teach teens,
understandable smooth shit, that cannibals chew with,
queefs theme, play this at night, while I eat spleens,
understandable splooge gets, stuck on ya crew's lips,
this Moulin Rouge chick,
needs to be schooled quick on who’s sick,
u abuse ric? please, that’s a fraudulent newsclip
pure libel! u dick fossils know
I spit gospel so, just look in ur bible
u pray to me, from A to Z, the alpha omega
to beta beat, u lil rascals need stay outta alfalfa bodega (skeet!)
once more, u took the bait, u shoulda just pushed escape,
I lyrically push this “wait”… … … … … …
Ya lil birds cluckin,
I fling hot shit, ya need to improve ur turd ducking
I spit big imagery, like zin and 3rd fuckin
u went from hunter dub to Joe Blow,
(zin did that), my foe's flow, assbackwid BJ's,
ur lyrical exercise consist of tea bags and a knee raise,
this aint beggin, its mercy,
u cant question how ill the end of my verse be,
cause I hearsed these, highway Hershey…passengers,
i spit passion germs, like infected skeet,
here’s ur pearl necklace freak, check the ‘nique,
medic!! i just wet this geek!!!!!!!

edit: check this leak...lmao

http://www.robinjuhl.homelinux.net/weblog/images/cedar-point-coaster-results.jpg

...(the end)...

well hdub wins again ric, his verse was immaculate.. i hate to say it.... but you know what.. i've seen u battle better...
ELIMINATE THE COMMAS PLEEEEEEEEEEZ! and bar ur shit
put some work into it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

rhyme the last word in a bar with the first in the next bar
or something

but here's ur best lines:
         

>queefs theme, play this at night, while I eat spleens,
>understandable splooge gets, stuck on ya crew's lips,
>this Moulin Rouge chick,
>needs to be schooled quick on who’s sick,
>u abuse ric? please, that’s a fraudulent newsclip




>
>http://www.robinjuhl.homelinux.net/weblog/images/cedar-point-coaster-results.jpg
>


-lol I write battle verses to Mariah Carey songs...

www.webspawner.com/users/delicateaurasoul4/index.html
This is a great website to discuss spirituality/religion, philosophies, and post poems:www.aware-discussion.net
www.3kingsmusic.com < for spiritual

>hdub:
>
>"great white hope..."
>          
>like a hip hop historian ric knows what the Score is
>my verse so uproarious he begged me to forfeit
>im bringing more shit-
>wordsmith at ya table to eat
>has ric ever spit a rhyme without saying queef or skeet?

lol

that was what i was talking abt in round one.

>hes beat-
>although his first few lines was ill
>by the end the flow was forgotten like the femcee amil
>so can I get a-
>whoop whoop
>like the sound of the police
>ric spitting pure doos doos like some septic leaks
>drop pepcid acs-
>my rhymes goes straight to ya chest
>he spent the whole night writing but my flows still the best
>so do your little dance ric and make a little love
>your flows gets no ko’s once dub drops his gloves
>you’s a DC mc spitting nothing but politricks
>say you come real with yours but never give illness
>acknowledgement
>just stay polishing dicks of these zins and accesses
>licking they infections and sucking they abscesses
>dubs here to crush representatives of evil axises
>im a white brown bomber landing punches on max s’s

fuck. that is probably the best verse ive seen you drop since you've been on the board.

good show.

>
>MiracleRic:
>
>"skeet skeet skeet!!!!"
>
>          
>queef theme, play this at night and i'll teach teens,
>understandable smooth shit, that cannibals chew with,
>queefs theme, play this at night, while I eat spleens,
>understandable splooge gets, stuck on ya crew's lips,

ric, why?
not feeling that one too much.

>this Moulin Rouge chick,
>needs to be schooled quick on who’s sick,
>u abuse ric? please, that’s a fraudulent newsclip
>pure libel! u dick fossils know
>I spit gospel so, just look in ur bible
>u pray to me, from A to Z, the alpha omega
>to beta beat, u lil rascals need stay outta alfalfa bodega
>(skeet!)

that shit flows nice as hell.

>I fling hot shit, ya need to improve ur turd ducking
>I spit big imagery, like zin and 3rd fuckin

oh shit.
hahaha.

i think you had the strongest punch with that, i laughed out loud in the computer lab and had ppl staring like no other, but hdub takes this one.

its even right now.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

when whodini made friends it was well spoken.

You really are some bitch. Biting Nas' lyrics. Not only that, biting them and making them "soooo" wack. But I'm calling you out. Next time, if youre going to post some corny ass lyrics, make sure they are your own, rather than taking a great verse by a REAL lyricist and butchering it.

RICS VERSE:
queef theme, play this at night and i'll teach teens,
understandable smooth shit, that cannibals chew with,
queefs theme, play this at night, while I eat spleens,
understandable splooge gets, stuck on ya crew's lips,

"eat spleens"????? WTF?????????? Here is the original:

NAS' VERSE:
Understandable smooth shit that murderers move wit
The thief's theme, play me at night, they won't act right

...just want to make sure people peep this one

i cant wait to see how ric spins this shit

hes like the fox news of this shit

most creative thing about him is his excuses for whackness

...(the end)...

this was a joke clown, i did a thiefs theme beatjack a while back

and decided to spin his whole "queef skeet" bullshit back at him with humor, u bitches are really fuckin annoying, pissed cause i wont battle u weak bitches

two newbs per month is enough for me, damn...

and hdub, im not talkin shit, but all this ended after rd 3, i dont have to complain about how u tallied the votes, b/c if u count how many people said i won its 5, if u count many said i lost it's 3, i dont have a problem i dont think u shoulda got a single vote but thats me, i dont even care if u had one, get over this, and the rest of these dick-munchers really need to get a life

Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

Building repetoires (c) spm since 1983

ric ate you. i've never seen him blaze like that before. that zin and 3rd fuckin line, pure genius right there. peace


~
he stood there,
eyes locked on her,
stare irreversible.
her hands over mouth,
she laughs. he smells
her soul,
tames his thoughts,
and hides the want.
- the perfect mistake

...although you coming with this before all the rounds was posted but whatever

...(the end)...

its really nothing personal. he really did beat you. he beat me before too. ric is just ill at battlin.

peace
~
he stood there,
eyes locked on her,
stare irreversible.
her hands over mouth,
she laughs. he smells
her soul,
tames his thoughts,
and hides the want.
- the perfect mistake

...but the reason i said that is cause i recognize you as one of the more impartial cats on this board

even if i disagree wit you on the first two i still wanna know what you think about the third

...(the end)...

MiracleRic:

"*DEADLINE*"

          
Like condoms, ya real used to dick
Ya should act like my bitches and…refuse to spit
My jewels is sick, these actors quick to lose they scripts
i’ll give u the blues and crip…walk,
cause this is more than my usual shit-talk
I spit chalk…outlines that outshines…
This bitch faulk, marshall, mathers
How is it ric’s fault u spit “awful” faster
U confused my hostile laughter
For a reason to stop talking at me
Cause I’ll pop off at ya face and im not talking acne
U nerd tricks is allergic to my final pollen
lay the wax on a vinyl album,
I leave MC’s on they backs minus spinal columns,
And what is doos doos (deuce,deuce), I rock 40 Calibers
I laugh and shoot, the black Gallagher…Im smashin fruits,
This is a Street dealership, ric speak real as shit, for a square rapper,
im so nice I don’t just kick knowledge, I send that ass a care package,
I start a sick college, ric solid, they gassed, so I spit liquid,


hdub:

"school is in session..."


queefs, skeet, hearses and hot shit
rics flows repetitive, whack, plainly not sick
hes not it- don’t you know rakim’s the god???
im a great white shark you aint shit but scrod
dub makes heads nod- while rics biting like a louse
smoke him out like an ounce and shout IS BROOKLYN IN THE HOUSE?!?!!
i bounce- through ghettoes and hoods like low riders
i might be the cracker but its rics thats prep like docksiders
these cockriders- they stay sweating zin
rics flow was hot then he started imitating him
im intimidating him- my skills is straight scary
huge and phat like your moms ass but not as hairy
lets get married- obviously you love being my bitch
you like a snitch get disposed now you sleeping wit fish
b-b-b-bitch- you hear me? or did I stutter
face me then go soft like you ruben studdard
ive uttered the illest verses in this battle
you spit straight farts like campfires in blazing saddles
my flows rattles shakes rocks and and also rolls
you cant flow cause your tongue stays in assholes
these fat joes, spit wannabe lean backs
but lacking yey yos they just joe craps
wit no knack- rics rhymes lack the vocab
he thinks hes blackalicious but ric gots no gab
its so bad- his freestyles are written and revised
i spit longer dick tho my shits circumcised
realize that tho you got 720 SAT’s
i spit 187’s you just some aint me’s
you hate me- cause im just so much iller
revolutionizing the game like im mj’s thriller
top biller headlining my names always called
step to HUNTER WALKER and this frederick falls
from the windows to the wall
i stay winning these brawls
awwww ric ric ric ric goddamn
awwww ric ric ric ric goddamn!
odd man- youre out! cause your skills been decaying
first ill fuck ric then do some james brick laying
hes saying “too busy to spit” ric just whines and grovels
i battle during finals spit in between 18th century novels
drop vaclav havels, my flows taking powers
ric spits whackness tho he works on it for hours
hes not hood approved like rocking eddie bauers
y’all cowards, me and nuke we the new twin towers
sonning flowers NFO soldiers scraping the sky
you scraping nothing but resin just cant get as high
just to get by, just to get by- i son you for stress relief
rics done - next time come - with something more than just skeet

...(the end)...

i'll give u credit yo on the real, the beginning of this last rd is very hot, even tho u kinda repeating yaself about me repeating myself, u came nice with the flow on that part, and it was a nice punch, strategically speaking...no shit talk involved here, good battle, i dont respect ur steez, but ur verse were more than decent, u have potential

Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

Building repetoires (c) spm since 1983

...looks like were both improving

me with my rhymes and you with being less of a hater

it was a good battle tho even if i think i murdered ya you did come aight

i thought ya third was your best

and just to show you im not biased

ill be the first to admit if you were coming like you did back in the days (the flow vs. dash that you inboxed me) you could destroy me or anyone else on here

but as of this moment

i think i got ya

...(the end)...

Nice to see you two being civil for a change. Honestly, it's the shit talking that makes me biased. Again, not gonna vote cause it would probably be questioned by you anyway unless I voted in your favor, but H is coming in with some sick lines with great metaphors/references, and thats the kinda shit I like personally. Ric, the line about the spinal columns was admittedly ill, I agree with you there, and I have to say that you got a nice flow and rhythm in you're rhymes. So, in the end props to both of you for a good battle.
_______________

So I don't form pals - conform to norms - morals different
Gifted - use it to shift shit a mutant shape shifter when I spit it I'm liquid
(The Roots/Jean Grae)

ric this was ur best verse but he killed u!
when i read ur shit first on this one i was like "he's gonna kill him now!" and he just came harder =X
=(
sorry.

he rhymes wit more confidence
just flow like ur talking and eliminate the "sparcity" the space
the place where u stop and think

(just tryin to help, honestly.)
shiiiiiiieeeeeeeet
i wanna battle now just for practice

i know you hate me now
i feel like nas =/
but the truth is better...

-lol I write battle verses to Mariah Carey songs...

www.webspawner.com/users/delicateaurasoul4/index.html
This is a great website to discuss spirituality/religion, philosophies, and post poems:www.aware-discussion.net
www.3kingsmusic.com < for spiritual

nah, i dont hate u, i just disagree, i thought my first 2 verses were vintage ric, lol

thanx for voting, u have always had my back, and u havent agreed with the way my style has changed, however, i think they are vast improvements, in the wordplay category, but some people just dont value wordplay, only punches, and i cant help with the commas, its how i break my ideas down when i spit, lol

Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

Building repetoires (c) spm since 1983

people dont always get wordplay
cuz they are made up from the writers perspective
so wordplay is often overlooked
personally, i think battlin is about dissin
straight jabs and creative ones is what i mainly look for...

-lol I write battle verses to Mariah Carey songs...

www.webspawner.com/users/delicateaurasoul4/index.html
This is a great website to discuss spirituality/religion, philosophies, and post poems:www.aware-discussion.net
www.3kingsmusic.com < for spiritual

>MiracleRic:
>
>"*DEADLINE*"
>
>          
>Like condoms, ya real used to dick
>Ya should act like my bitches and…refuse to spit

nice.

>This bitch faulk, marshall, mathers
>How is it ric’s fault u spit “awful” faster

nice jab.

>U confused my hostile laughter
>For a reason to stop talking at me
>Cause I’ll pop off at ya face and im not talking acne
>U nerd tricks is allergic to my final pollen
>lay the wax on a vinyl album,
>I leave MC’s on they backs minus spinal columns,
>And what is doos doos (deuce,deuce), I rock 40 Calibers
>I laugh and shoot, the black Gallagher…Im smashin fruits,
>This is a Street dealership, ric speak real as shit, for a
>square rapper,
>im so nice I don’t just kick knowledge, I send that ass a care
>package,

ill.

very nice.

>I start a sick college, ric solid, they gassed, so I spit
>liquid,

could have been nice but wtf happened man?
why did you let it die?


>
>
>queefs, skeet, hearses and hot shit
>rics flows repetitive, whack, plainly not sick
>hes not it- don’t you know rakim’s the god???

nice.

>im a great white shark you aint shit but scrod

lol, its probably just me but, as a white guy, i hate when other white guys say shit like that lol. idk what it is but i just dont feel it.

>these cockriders- they stay sweating zin
>rics flow was hot then he started imitating him
>im intimidating him- my skills is straight scary
>huge and phat like your moms ass but not as hairy
>lets get married- obviously you love being my bitch

hahaha.

>he thinks hes blackalicious but ric gots no gab
>its so bad- his freestyles are written and revised

nice word play.

>hes saying “too busy to spit” ric just whines and grovels
>i battle during finals spit in between 18th century novels
>drop vaclav havels, my flows taking powers
>ric spits whackness tho he works on it for hours

aight....

that shit was pretty even.

im not really swayed either way, yours was longer but it was on and off, ric's was short and he only had a few punches.

over all, i call that round even.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

when whodini made friends it was well spoken.

...to find myself getting thorough feedback from two people in one thread

really appreciate the in depth analysis here

thanks man

...(the end)...

.

...(the end)...

******SiG***************
"my crisis stems where
love used to bloom"-BarTek

RALPH NADER!!!

*edit* (Dont know what else he's for, I just want some of that sticky green party )

"I walk around with sick styles, sippin on cristal, my whole cliques wild, I'm rich pal no more sticks I'm making hits now... when I recite you takin hours to write, so if you fight just tell ya man what kinda flowers you like"
-Big L

Always comin with the comic relief...no doubt about it bro. But if this is the shit that is poppin' into your head, you might actually, finally, be going crazy.

_______________

So I don't form pals - conform to norms - morals different
Gifted - use it to shift shit a mutant shape shifter when I spit it I'm liquid
(The Roots/Jean Grae)

I've stood in da cut -- Tryna keep my mouth shut -- Basically cuz I've got a (((BIG MOUF))) to begin with -- -- But also, because I hate sippin' on battles laced with lemon/lime egos & Hater~aide -- sugared w/personal vendettas of venom & hella pride!

But I've watched hdub hang in there and improve his skills -- against adversity/trickery/baiting/intimidation, etc., etc. -- *Instead of just plain ol' sparring/battling -- for the sake of strengthening vocab and having fun*

The scenarios I've observed would've "run" the average newbie EMCEE pup away in a heartbeat -- (With tail tucked between his legs) -- Believing defeat based on all the shit talking & intimidation tactics thrown at him.

YET -- HE STOOD HIS GROUND ...

And he kept coming back STRONGER and HARDER! -- With obvious improvements & changes to his rhymes and rhyme patterns.


I ain't voting on this --

Cuz it reminds me too much of when MiracleRic was on the other end of da whippin' stick -- Tryna stand ^UP^ to Zin -- And Zin was tryna beat his ass down with the same kinda intimidation tactics that Ric has used against hdub.

I just don't understand?!?!?!?

Is this some kinda initiation rite of passage, Mr. Ric?

You do the same shit to others who're tryna excel --- THE SAME SHIT THAT WAS DONE TO YOU WHEN YOU WERE TRYNA IMPROVE YOUR SKILLS?

Cuz I remember how I stood in your corner and told YOU to hold your head UP when it was gettin' bashed in by Zin and others that ganged up on you and tried to destroy your confidence!

Now you're so glad to be in their crew -- That you're doing the same thing to the newbies -- THAT WAS DONE TO YOU!

*tsk*

~Photo Shakes Head~


I ain't voting ...


All I'm gonna say is: Good Job "hdub" -- GOOD JOB!


Edit: Trust me -- There is a better way to help newbies improve their battle skills -- BETTER THAN THE INTIMIDATION TACTICS -- SHIT TALKING -- AND TRICKERY THAT'S USED NOW! -- *No Doubt*

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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you really havnt been paying attention if you think H Dub is soooo innocent in this...i mean just because he replies to your pieces and praises them dont make the kid innocent...you should really read everything he's put out as far as comments in other threads....and this is battling....you do what you do to win...thats battle...its strategy....the kid is obviously game so why not bully him...hes got friends who are talkin shit with him so Ric should stand down and koombyeyah the shit up...i know i wouldnt...they battlin...lets just leave it at that...you can hit me in the inbox if you have more to say on this...peace.

fuck a sig!!!


why MiracleRic thinks me and him clic aight, here's the reason, u real with yours, i am once i bring my guard down, we both stupid as hell, we both got our talents, want a lot of the same things, like a lot of the same things, we both

I HAVE been watching -- EACH AND EVERY THREAD! -- Aaiight?

But ...

I said what I felt -- And I MEANT what I said -- So I ain't sayin' nutthin' else about it --


I've also been on the other end of Zin's whippin' stick, nahmean?


I love Zin to death ... NOW! -- But I ain't forgot.


And like I said: MiracleRic is doing the SAME DAMN THANG -- That was done to him -- I know the history behind certain tactics -- Right, Wrong, or Indifferent!


I also know Hdub ain't innocent -- He's pretty much wise and cunning with his shyt -- But at the same time -- He's "different" than the average Joe -- (And I can appreciate that)


The fact that Hdub has responded to me on my flows -- Is totally besides the point as far as my comment "HERE" is concerned -- (Just So Ya Know)


I ain't mad atcha Axe darlin' -- but like everyone else -- I'M JUST CALLING IT LIKE I SEE IT -- AND LIKE I BEEN SEEING IT! -- *Past/Present/& Futures*

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

u guys tried to intimidate him (hdub)
u guys were on some popularity contest shit
but he ripped you!

and zin sucks~! period!
he doesn't even try just rambles on
i'm looking for creativity, and through-ness without the childish antics of net-"crews" and "cliques"

word!


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Kid, look back at the posts...with the exception of me, wrongly I admit it, flyin' off the handle on Ric with one of his lines (which we later briefly discussed) hdub's boys have been relatively silent with the exception of Sik's comedic relief, which with all the intensity and emotion displayed in all the posts related to this battle, was necessary in my opinion. Most of the shit talkin here has been going back and forth between ric and hdub...except for you when ya came in with this...tell me if I got it wrong or out of context:

"its funny to see wack people drop wack shit and probably be at home on the comp like "that shit was hot"!!! "


but in truth ('cause I CAN be impartial), I gotta give ya credit for this, as it was honest and respectable:

"the first half of ya 2nd round rhyme was hot but then you seriously fell off id say the last 6 to 8 lines....you gotta end strong more so then start...its what people remember ya dig...peace."

So check the posts again kid...I'm not tryin' to shoot ya down, or anything like that, cause I got respect for some of the shit ya written, and there is truth in that.

In this, I am not going to vote, but If I were to say anything, it has been said already by Photo, Ezzential and Blaksilence. I got respect for ya Ric, but I went and checked the archives and you honestly were FAR better with this shit back then. More heat, better flows. You should try getting back into that rythm man...when ya came like that, I could see quite clearly why you were crowned.

....sad but true:


>Most of the shit talkin here has been going back and
>forth between ric and hdub...

...(the end)...

....lol nah seriously tho i think you off base with this right here

>i mean just because he replies to
>your pieces and praises them dont make the kid innocent...you
>should really read everything he's put out as far as comments
>in other threads....

if you do a author search on my name youll see that i drop comments and feedback all over the place on this board

advice/criticism/feedback is my main reason for being here and how can i expect to get that if im not giving back to the boards?

you might even notice that ive complimented your flows several times

the only one i wasnt feeling was your latest shit

and i stayed doing that even when you were coming at me

ive even complimented zin and ric on lines theyve spit at me in the midst of all of our endless cyclical shit talking

im not politicking with mine man

the three people appearing in this thread who ive complimented the most are you photo and shakeet

notice that none of these three voted for me

...(the end)...

but it's not quite the same, its no hate in my game at all, if u look at how its started, most of my shit-talking, something i always do in battles, whether im underdog or not, is in response to something, not to intimidate, so, i dont feel ima bully at all if people ask for it

Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

Building repetoires (c) spm since 1983

when i first read 'homez' i thought:

1. he's too simple

2. he's spamming the boards

but i read every verse in here and the difference between
the first time i read his shit and now is like night and day

fam is doing rap push ups...and they're working.

who won the battle?

if you're into complicated rhymes( punches within punches, heavy wordplay, metaphors even in transitional bars) you're going to pick
miracleric in this one.

hdub flowed easier..more natural

miracleric was more complicated

overall score: miracleric -8.0 hdub- 7.9

hdub..you earned a heavy amount of my respect in this one.

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The cry I bring down from the hills
__________belongs to a girl still burning
__________inside my head. At daybreak

____________________she burns like a piece of paper. - YK

this is the best breakdown of this ive seen, u weighed everything here, hdub has mos def done his push-ups, he's a hungry mofo

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...3 thorough in depth evaluations in one battle thread

this is beyond my highest expectations

thanks blak

kepp 'em coming folks!

...(the end)...

Round 1: first off let me just say that the first two rounds were extremely hard call, only becauz yall both came out strong. For the first round imma give it to Ric. Even though Hdub came thorough with the ill line about burning down D.C. like it was 1812. I felt Dub was just getting warmed up though, and Ric definetely had me picturing his statements. Good shit from both of you.
HDub: 9, Ric: 10

Round 2: I have to give this round to Hdub for two rymes that stuck out to me. The first was when he made reference to the late Rockafella Mc Amil and then imediately tied the (Whooop Whoop) from her song to one of the greatest songs in hip-hop history by KRS One. Another line that stood out was the rhyme About him being the white brown bomber knocking out Max's. I don't have to explain the hole politics with Joe Luis for you to realize that the line was ill. Straight up ill though Your joint was ill though about your rhyme being huge like 3rd i and Zin fucking. That was Kodak imagery status right there. In my Opinion this round goes to H-Dub by an incling. but dogz Ric you came with some heat like the fire that burned down the pentagon in sept.

HDub: 10, Ric: 9

Round 3: reminds me of our 3rd round battle a bit because HDub's verse was longer and stronger in my humble opinion. I think Hunt might of gave you the Ok player KO on this round. I mean the Lean Back ryme was ill. I feel like Ric you drop alot of better stuff than the round you spit back to H-Dub. But then again there was a wierd time frame thing going on with you two.

HDub: 10, Ric: 8

Edit: Aight time to do some finals.. Shitttt.

N.F.O. Representative....Holla.

...this is quite the heated battle

i been trying to calculate votes and im not sure how to do it cause a) its damn close

and b)some people did specific scored individual rounds and some didnt

this is the scoring system i came up with

i want to stress that i am NOT TRYING TO START ANY SHIT WITH THIS (this should be pretty obvious cause as of now my system gives ric an *ever so slight* edge)

i consider this a work in progress i just wanted to get us all started on getting a consensus on how we were gonna score this

here's what i did:

for people like hunuh and ezzsential who gave specific scores for all three rounds i obviously just plugged in their judgements

since bartek only looked at the first two and said ric had it i put him down as scoring the first two rounds 10-9 ric and i didnt put anything down for him in the third

since NoBle just said "Ric!!" without scoring any of the rounds individually assume he feels ric won all three so i put him down as scoring it 10-9 ric for all three rounds

it was pretty much the same with blaksilence. since blak said the whole battle was ric winning 8-7.9 i put him down as giving ric each round wit a score of 8-7.9

like i said this is a work in progress

if any of you who voted object to what i put down for ya and want to elaborate this is your chance to let me know

if any of you object to this system entirely let me know and suggest how you think we should do it

im not stuck on this i just thought it was a good way to score quite a tight battle

so without any further ado here's how this came out:

Round 1

Ezzsential: hdub 10-9
hunuh: Miracleric 10-9
BarTek: Miracleric 10-9
NoBle: Miracleric 10-9
blaksilence: Miracleric 8-7.9
nuke: Miracleric 10-9

Round One Total:

Miracleric: 57

hdub: 53.9

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Round 2
Ezzsential: hdub 10-9
hunuh: hdub 10-9
BarTek: Miracleric 10-9
NoBle: Miracleric 10-9
blaksilence: ric 8-7.9
nuke: hdub 10-9

Round Two Total:

hdub: 55.9

Miracleric: 55

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Round 3:
Ezzsential: hdub 10-9
hunuh: Even 10-10
Noble: Miracleric 10-9
blaksilence: Miracleric 8-7.9
Nuke: hdub 10-8

Round Three Totals

hdub: 46.9

Miracleric: 45

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Final Score (as of now)

Miracleric: 157

hdub: 156.7

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so that's how my scoring on this came out

should we say polls close...say...Friday at midnight (technically Saturday morning) or should we play this by ear? or perhaps keep it up longer?

let me know what you guys think of all this (especially you ric)

my math should be right on this but i dont have a calculator now so ill triple check it later

also ric, let me know if you want me to take nuke's scores out of the official count since he is admittedly my boy

remember i said this was a work in progress

either way i cant believe how close this is

as of now im so close, yet so far away

.3

damn

...(the end)...

that shit is too confusing.

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Why cats gotta vote anyway? Why can't sometimes it just be about rhymin? I ain't been on here that long, but the only time I saw anyone really vote was for the King of the Ring joints. These side battles, nobody really be votin on. So if that's the case, screw it, just rhyme without a reason. Make an ill thread, and that should be accolade enough.

"I'm scientific, but my reflex gangsta"- Black Thought

...and voted battles are good fuel for subject matter in future battle joints

also just from a pure feedback perspective

accolades aint what im in it for

the voting and bragging rights shit is part of the whole show

but no point doing this if im not hearing what people think about it- especially in comparison to other styles and writers

if i lose this im still back tomorrow rhyming but bearing in mind what shit went down here

if i win it its not making my day it just might give me a line or two in a future battle

either way i can learn from peoples comments and votes

...(the end)...

...i had actually thougth about that but ive never seen anything like that before

personally that shit is a lot to do and i wouldnt be looking forward to adding up the rest of them

ric, if you cool with a poll too let me know in here and ill set it up or just throw that shit up yourself when you see this

i dont want to do anything unless i know we both cool with it

...(the end)...

its cool as it is, its closer than i thought too, but the way u scored it is kinda weird

normally, u dont tally it up rd by rd, what happens is, if a person gives one person 2 out of the 3 rds, than that just counts as one vote for that person, kinda like boxin...if this judge voted i came out with a 29-28 win, then that just counts as 1 of me, and say only 3 people voted, and lets say the first 2 judges gave me the fight, and the third gave it to you, then i win 2-1, just think of it as boxin, the way u were doing it is a lil weird but its cool, no need for a post tho, we already got this thread up twice, just keep the polls open til friday or whatever

Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

Building repetoires (c) spm since 1983

that works too should have been the common sense approach but for some reason it didnt cross my mind

how bout we just wait till friday night and then let the responses/votes dictate how we do it

since people were giving us thorough feedback it lent itself to my precise scoring if people keep comign like that we can score the whole thing all complicated like i did

if the rest of the replies we get are more along the lines of simple shout outs then we'll do it the easy way

sound good to you ric?

...(the end)...

works for me?

edit: im mad i asked myself *slaps forehead*

Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

Building repetoires (c) spm since 1983

Would like to say for the record hdub getting better.

let me mjust say this ...ric and i had it out ...me and photo had it out ...me and everybody had it out on this board ....so for you to come and call my name out a throw a hot verse should be the easiest battle in the world to win why cause everybody has a gripe with me on some level ....either i made a post they didn't think was cool ....i shitted on one of there respected poets ...or thier friends ...so what doesn't kill you make you stronger and i think you are getting stronger ...but 30 verses in 20 days ...somebodys just tried of seeing you lose ....what i would do is stop for a couple of days maybe a week review what you've learned and eat someone's food ....

sig.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Guess who's Back

Bro, ya sound like ya runnin scared...H has faced some tough shit from you all, and I'm not even the one who originally said that. The fact that you have some shit with people now is irrelevent...if ya that good, ya should be able to win on ya verses, not ya popularity. He had gripe with all of you and ya crew...the only difference now is, people aside from YOU are coming in with shit ta say...ya gave the man his props, so ups for that, but ya did it in a backhanded way son...the kid earned his bragging rights even if in the end the numbers don't come up in his favor.
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So I don't form pals - conform to norms - morals different
Gifted - use it to shift shit a mutant shape shifter when I spit it I'm liquid
(The Roots/Jean Grae)

scared of what!! i have nothing to gain from battling anyone on this board ....since i came here i been battle tested doggs ...if you stick around and watch you'll see ...a month from now some new poster will come outta the wood work and put my name in their subject header and call me out ...for what reason i don't know ...it's like somebody just told them to come here and battle Zin ... running scared ...nah ....but back handed ....i wouldn't say that i was giving him props ...i'm still not convinced that his shit is THAT hot ....i think mofo just looking for a new nukka to cock ride against the old heads .... which brings me to the point ....he should have done quick work of me ... A. i don't battle anymore B. i'm clearly the most hated dude on the boards C. everybattle post up her has my name in it in some way ...when i haven't even look at the post ....and when the battle is over and i'm reading i'm like damn what the fuck i have to do with it? ... D. i don't have a crew ...
E. even ric wants a nukka to beat me ...

look man there is a couple of people up here i just won't battle cause i am really scared they will ripp me a new ass hole but clearly can see that you or any of the current posters are them.

geesh ...first it was Zin and Frak should battle ....then they saw that shit wasn't gonna happen ....then it's fuck zin ....then it's Ric you should loose Zin from ya click ...when i was never in anybody's click ...

Photo ...i told you i was sorry you got to let it go baby

sig.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Guess who's Back

for real though, im still thinking...

"Life without knowledge is death in disguise" - Talib Kweli

...most definitely appreciate you taking the time to really evaluate carefully

...(the end)...

....so far its looking like im getting passed a fat L

it sucks im used to getting hated on but i really thought i was gonna get an officially recognized win off this one

...(the end)...

If it means anything from me, of course you won. You throw straight jabs with creativity that have the same rythem as ric's, his wordplay is nice but sometimes he overdoesit. The last verse was almost of epic proportions, and this was an epic triumph. Not in the sense that you murdered ric overall, but your punchlines and style just stepped up over ric's, and all the thorough evalutations and commentary support that. You have been blessin this board with hotness for weeks, and ric before you, but this time the W goes to you. Props to both.

"Show them fools what it's all about. Holla out. Say Ooh Ooh Ahh Ahh Ahh....Let the monkey out - Redman

...it looks like time is up on this one

if we do this the traditional way it comes out as a tie

3 for you 3 for me and 1 for a draw

my crazy shit gives it to me (check it out below), but once again the margin is miniscule @ 2.3

we can keep this open to votes for a few more days if you want

or we can call it a tie for official purposes since it was so damn close

im willing to do either one so let me know


Round 1

Ezzsential: hdub 10-9
hunuh: Miracleric 10-9
BarTek: Miracleric 10-9
NoBle: Miracleric 10-9
blaksilence: Miracleric 8-7.9
nuke: Miracleric 10-9
MORE: hdub 10-9

Round One Total:

Miracleric: 66
hdub: 63.9
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Round 2

Ezzsential: hdub 10-9
hunuh: hdub 10-9
BarTek: Miracleric 10-9
NoBle: Miracleric 10-9
blaksilence: ric 8-7.9
nuke: hdub 10-9
MORE: hdub 10-9

Round Two Total:

hdub: 65.9
Miracleric: 64
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Round 3:
Ezzsential: hdub 10-9
hunuh: Even 10-10
Noble: Miracleric 10-9
blaksilence: Miracleric 8-7.9
Nuke: hdub 10-8
MORE: hdub 10-9

Round Three Totals

hdub: 56.9
Miracleric: 54
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Final Score (as of now)
Miracleric: 184
hdub: 186.7
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...(the end)...

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Hell yeah. I second that......

N.F.O. Representative....Holla.

...let me know what ya say to this

lets not let this get embarassing

...(the end)...

what are u talkin about, i havent paid this thread any attention, i dont even see where there's a question...but whatever, score it like a normal battle, lol, like boxing, and leave the polls open, if nobody else votes, then whatever, they may archive this soon anyway, i dont think it should be but it what the people are asking for

Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

Building repetoires (c) spm since 1983

i wanna vote on this but i wont only because i know who won and if i say who won...cats gonna moan and cry and call me a rider...its whatever tho....but archive...yall cats is really dumb for that.

fuck a sig!!!


why MiracleRic thinks me and him clic aight, here's the reason, u real with yours, i am once i bring my guard down, we both stupid as hell, we both got our talents, want a lot of the same things, like a lot of the same things, we both

so just say what u think...

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nah, we too busy tryin to intimidate, lol, it is comedy

i respect everyone opinion and all but this ish was obvious to me

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Building repetoires (c) spm since 1983

...fuck the deadlines we originally set, you wanna keep this open till the outcomes in your favor

fine let people put votes up in here till it falls off the boards for all i care

remember you the only one not calling this a golden age lol

i can see why you dont want this archived

this was a milestone in ya demise

...(the end)...

what are u talkin about?

all i was sayin, it was a good battle not a great one(meaning i dont think it should get archived)...and are u implying that if we wait long enough all that will happen is i'll get more votes?...i can care less about the polls or votes...its really not that serious...in my mind i won this, in yours u did, as far as braggin rights, those are always mine, cause im just that nice, lol


and u notice none of my supposed "crew" voted?

edit: i didnt even realize anyone was still payin this any attention, in the past, every battle that was remotely hot didnt get archived and only tourneys have voting deadlines, but i really dont care, (then again this would be the 2nd battle archived with me being called out, maybe i should actually call someone out for once, but that makes too much sense for a bully)if u want to invent ur own vote tallying system fine, if u want a deadline fine, call it however u wish, im just a bully, lol, if u really think more people thought u won, then by all means brag away

Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

Building repetoires (c) spm since 1983

...he wants to be your loooooooooooooverman?

...In the Land of The Strange Confusion Is King.

its funny i posted a while ago asking how you wanted to vote

you said you were fine with what i said

NOW youre complaining

you want to let the thread be just let this be it doesnt need to get clogged with shit talking like the last one

...(the end)...

first 2 rounds werent even close, last rd was close but Ric wins somewhat easily

~"You are your own best thing" (c) Paul D in BELOVED

cats comin out the woodwork to vote on a battle?
come on!

-lol I write battle verses to Mariah Carey songs...

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start a new thread then...

may the best man win...

..sounds like what I said on my wedding night.

...In the Land of The Strange Confusion Is King.

lol @ "who are you?"

*checks the rest of voters id*

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lol

...(the end)...

lol, yep, slayin cats is hard on the conscience, lol

fuckin with ya, the best man won, it aint like i wont give u a rematch or anything tho

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Building repetoires (c) spm since 1983

...youve decided that this is done now that you ahead in the voting (by a slim margin of 1 i might add) but before when i was ahead it wasnt over even tho we ha ddeadlined it

i thought we were going "indefinitely" lol

you aint won shit

...(the end)...

his flo's too basic

Nathaniel Bacon!!!!

no he thought he did. what does that say about Ric. Or you bacon boy?

...In the Land of The Strange Confusion Is King.

why is it u never make sense?

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Building repetoires (c) spm since 1983

..because you got a closed mind.

...In the Land of The Strange Confusion Is King.

please kid.. u got a chemical balance...
hush
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