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Intrepid Vixen
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"Americka"


  

          

Americka

hates its own skin
doesn't know the
body it's in
which language
to speak
deceit
the only
dialect

nothing but
a whore
patrolling
the streets
flies on the
stage of a
wasteland

satan's hand
runs deep

Amerikkka
no more
beautiful
than its
poor

flag flying
high
but what does
it really mean?

red for blood
that soiled
the soil
green

white for
purity
because
black
just wouldn't
do
pigment
full
of
impurities

though my great
grandmother
has eyes
of blue

which backdrops
the stars
but in reality
the stars are
suspended in
shadow

like the truth

~*~
It's only what you believe will happen and therefore do next that will bring
about a life change.
Addendum
Prayer of Jabez

~~~~~~~~
When One learns
to live without fear,
then One cannot be broken.

  

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Subject Author Message Date ID
RE: Americka
Jan 02nd 2005
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RE: Americka
Jan 02nd 2005
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RE: Americka
Jan 02nd 2005
3
RE: Americka
Jan 03rd 2005
4
      not at all...
Jan 12th 2005
11
RE: Americka
Jan 11th 2005
5
RE: Americka
Jan 11th 2005
6
ouch
Jan 11th 2005
7
RE: Americka
Jan 11th 2005
8
RE: Americka
Jan 11th 2005
9
dammit girl...
Jan 12th 2005
10
RE: dammit girl...
Jan 12th 2005
12
RE: Americka
Jan 12th 2005
13
RE: Americka
Jan 12th 2005
14
RE: Americka
Jan 20th 2005
15
RE: Americka
Jan 21st 2005
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RE: Americka
Jan 24th 2005
17
whoa....
Jan 25th 2005
18
RE: whoa....
Jan 25th 2005
19
^UpPeRz^
Feb 03rd 2005
20
RE: ^UpPeRz^
Feb 03rd 2005
21
RE: Americka
Feb 03rd 2005
22
RE: Americka
Feb 03rd 2005
23
RE: Americka
Feb 03rd 2005
24
RE: Americka
Feb 04th 2005
25
Archive~able?
Feb 07th 2005
26
Oh this shit is hot.
Feb 07th 2005
27
RE: Americka
Feb 07th 2005
28
RE: Americka
Feb 07th 2005
29
      Ummmm ... Ms. Vixen
Feb 07th 2005
30
           RE: Ummmm ... Ms. Vixen
Feb 07th 2005
31
                No Ma'am --
Feb 07th 2005
32
                     RE: No Ma'am --
Feb 07th 2005
33
                          Well -- For Starters --
Feb 08th 2005
34
                               RE: Well -- For Starters --
Feb 08th 2005
35
...
Feb 08th 2005
36
RE: ...
Feb 08th 2005
37
Wow...
Feb 18th 2005
38
you be making it happen
Feb 18th 2005
39
RE: you be making it happen
Feb 18th 2005
40
Can We? -- (((ARCHIVE))) Now?
Feb 27th 2005
41
Yeah ARCHIVE THIS
Feb 27th 2005
42
RE: Americka
Feb 28th 2005
43
Mos Def worth an archive. Nice work.
Feb 28th 2005
44

Otto
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1. "RE: Americka"
In response to Reply # 0


  

          

which backdrops
the stars
but in reality
the stars are
suspended in
shadow

like the truth

...well...atleast we have one preacher here on the board...
that is serious! a beautiful way of exposing our hypocrisy and corruption, and overall neglect for the truth

-Otto

  

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Intrepid Vixen
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2. "RE: Americka"
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Thank you! I'm just trying to expand my horizons and do something, at least for me, that's different. My goal is always to express the ordinary and mundane into something else. I appreciate.

~*~
It's only what you believe will happen and therefore do next that will bring
about a life change.
Addendum
Prayer of Jabez

~~~~~~~~
When One learns
to live without fear,
then One cannot be broken.

  

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Jason Voorhies
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3. "RE: Americka"
In response to Reply # 0


  

          

VANGLORIOUS!!!!....


j.

(chyeah.chyeah.chyeah.chyeah//cha.cha.cha.cha)

  

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Intrepid Vixen
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4. "RE: Americka"
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You think I was being vain, Jason V.? I wasn't.

~*~
It's only what you believe will happen and therefore do next that will bring
about a life change.
Addendum
Prayer of Jabez

~~~~~~~~
When One learns
to live without fear,
then One cannot be broken.

  

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Jason Voorhies
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11. "not at all..."
In response to Reply # 4


  

          

it's an ol'school word from the x-clan days. kindve like at the end of the xmen cartoon...stan lee would say "excelsior!"

i digs
j.

(chyeah.chyeah.chyeah.chyeah//cha.cha.cha.cha)

  

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Babynoon
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5. "RE: Americka"
In response to Reply # 0


          

ty for sharing this with the OP

Keep expressing

:^

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:hacked or spammed entry, do not responsed or send messages to this
account:: suspicious account or virus

  

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Intrepid Vixen
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6. "RE: Americka"
In response to Reply # 5


  

          

Thank you, Babynoon! I appreciate your comment.

~*~
until out of merely not nothing comes
only one snowflake(and we speak our names
e.e. cummings

~~~~~~~~
When One learns
to live without fear,
then One cannot be broken.

  

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robynwildchild
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7. "ouch"
In response to Reply # 0


  

          

but its the view from you
and i don't disagree but its harsh.. got truth..

and i see it more and more from both sides of the fence.
it disgusts me
it infuriates me
that people can be so
FUCKING STUPID.
a narrowminded person doesn't grow, learn... progress in life..

were all a color of the rainbow
and all the beautiful colors of the world..
i say
embrace it.

~~~~~~~~ luv R.
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psycho.
"Institutions encourage us to consider the opinions they sell as "facts" and that we "believe" rather than question the morality they pitch."
cities need fewer shopping malls and more skat

  

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Phenomenality
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8. "RE: Americka"
In response to Reply # 0


  

          

im feelin this, although i do believe that like a sinner.. below the surface and behind the sin.. lies tha true precious Soul..

>hates its own skin
>doesn't know the
>body it's in
----->so true

>which language
>to speak
>deceit
>the only
> dialect
>----->this is multilayered.. although our governing body, our 'political' voice & the high-processed masses speak this language.. the grassroots of its people are wholesome at heart.

>nothing but
>a whore
>patrolling
>the streets
>flies on the
>stage of a
>wasteland
>----->i daresay, evrery 'whore' has a story! *wink*

>satan's hand
>runs deep
>----->yes it does, but never as deep as tha ~Light~
>
Amerikkka
> no more
>beautiful
>than its
>poor
>----->the most humble, salt-of-the-earth humans i've encountered are the poor... im feelin your analogy tho..

>flag flying
>high
>but what does
> it really mean?
>----->its the flag of the Divided States of Arrogance..

>red for blood
>that soiled
>the soil
> green
>----->red for the blood of the people whos backs this country was founded on.. and who's LAND..

>white for
>purity
>because
>black
>just wouldn't
>do
>pigment
>full
>of
>impurities
>----->nor brown nor yellow nor red..

>which backdrops
>the stars
>but in reality
>the stars are
>suspended in
>shadow
>----->i like these lines!

You broke out a mouthful here.. although i play the devils advocate (or reverse as the case is here.. lol) there is no undermining of the sentiment.. im feelin u.

Breathe E.Z.
~ Zhana ~
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"Keep your power just in the day that you are living on this Earth, and not on how to maneuver tomorrow." ~Meditations for Souls in Process

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"Why do you stay in prison
when the door is so wide open?" ~Rumi

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"Give me a naked Soul... And a Mature Mind." ~Joshua Redman

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"Though we seem to be sleeping,
there is an inner wakefulness
that directs the dream,
and that will eventually startle us back
to the truth of who we are." ~Rumi

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9. "RE: Americka"
In response to Reply # 0


  

          

summin different from u huh? thanks for the courage and action.

thought provoking

ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
checkout these sites
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www.poetology.com

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




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Instant_Vintage
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10. "dammit girl..."
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you did it again. How am I suppossed to spit if you keep postin classics?

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Intrepid Vixen
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12. "RE: dammit girl..."
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Wed Jan-12-05 10:30 AM

  

          

^^ U are too crazy, Instant, but thank you for the compliment. I actually wrote this piece because I was angry and I'm just highly disappointed in a lot of things in the world right now, however, I do know that one person can make a difference too. Yup, Asiem I came with something a little bit different this time. It was what I was feeling at the time. I appreciate all of your comments and thoughts.

~*~
until out of merely not nothing comes
only one snowflake(and we speak our names
e.e. cummings

~~~~~~~~
When One learns
to live without fear,
then One cannot be broken.

  

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Unknownaquarian
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13. "RE: Americka"
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This is fuckin awesome... nuf said

there came a screaming across the night... T.P.

  

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Intrepid Vixen
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14. "RE: Americka"
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Thank you Unknown. I've been checking your stuff out too!! I tried to personify America as I saw it. I think y'all for your feedback.

~*~
until out of merely not nothing comes
only one snowflake(and we speak our names
e.e. cummings

~~~~~~~~
When One learns
to live without fear,
then One cannot be broken.

  

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ArKay01
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15. "RE: Americka"
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Hit em again Intrepid I see...

>but in reality
>the stars are
>suspended in
>shadow

>like the truth

Without truth all facts and perpeptions mean nothing..life is nothing.

- En-Vista



- En-Vista

  

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Intrepid Vixen
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16. "RE: Americka"
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I agree Arkay. Without truth what do we really have? And in the quest for truth I have encountered anything but, that is not to say that I have lost my faith in humans, but it does make it tougher to be one all the time. Thank you for peeping!!!
~*~
until out of merely not nothing comes
only one snowflake(and we speak our names
e.e. cummings

~~~~~~~~
When One learns
to live without fear,
then One cannot be broken.

  

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17. "RE: Americka"
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i see you from B-more but you in Florida right? We in B-more are doin it like it sposed to be done tite like dat. all this time and you my homie wow...the middle east strikes again (amerika's) middle east B-more

ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
checkout these sites
http://4luvofpoetry.com
www.poetology.com

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




www.myspace.com/asiem61

  

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18. "whoa...."
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really harsh and thought provoking... I've been thinking on the same lines about how dissapointing this country is for two reasons: Bush's inauguration and this movie called Hotel Rwanda... if you haven't seen it you gotta... but Intrepid, you're always keepin a sistah thinkin and I appreciate that for what are we if we do not question the injustices and immoralities of the world???

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19. "RE: whoa...."
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Yes, Asiem. I was raised in Baltimore, born in Baton Rouge, Louisiana and now I live in Orlando because I'm in school studying to be a recording engineer. So, yes I rep it all and I knew that I had some kind of kinship with ya'!!! Miss B., I feel your comments and I'm glad that we aren't the only ones who feel this way. I hear that the inaguration costs something like $40-60 million but we have soldiers dying everyday! What a boldfaced lie! And I'm glad that I can share my thoughts. Much love!!
~*~
Part the flesh and inject love where there was once pain. Love yourself...then learn to love yourself again.
*~KSB~*

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When One learns
to live without fear,
then One cannot be broken.

  

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20. "^UpPeRz^"
In response to Reply # 0
Thu Feb-03-05 04:57 AM

          

Your versatility & diversity with "subject matters" is an asset to this board -- *Yes Indeed* -- ;^)


Thas' all I'm gon' say for now -- But I'll prolly be back later! -- *wink*

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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Intrepid Vixen
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21. "RE: ^UpPeRz^"
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Thank you Photo!

~*~
Beauty is in my ear
I sketch beautiful
rhythms with a pen
canvassing
my thoughts
artfully articulated
into harmonies of
words
~*~ KSB ~*~

"My fear is my only courage."
Bob Marley

~~~~~~~~
When One learns
to live without fear,
then One cannot be broken.

  

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22. "RE: Americka"
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And you rave on my poetry. WHAT?! You got it. I like that you covered all that you needed to. Very complete, very potent.

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Intrepid Vixen
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23. "RE: Americka"
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Yes, I rave on your poetry and I thank you for peeping my piece. Much appreciated!!!


~*~
Beauty is in my ear
I sketch beautiful
rhythms with a pen
canvassing
my thoughts
artfully articulated
into harmonies of
words
~*~ KSB ~*~

"My fear is my only courage."
Bob Marley

~~~~~~~~
When One learns
to live without fear,
then One cannot be broken.

  

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TruePower
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24. "RE: Americka"
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Thu Feb-03-05 07:16 PM

          

I am digign this, it's on point

F.E.A.R. is False Expectations Appearing Real

  

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Intrepid Vixen
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25. "RE: Americka"
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Thank you Truepower. I appreciate the comments.

~*~
Beauty is in my ear
I sketch beautiful
rhythms with a pen
canvassing
my thoughts
artfully articulated
into harmonies of
words
~*~ KSB ~*~

"My fear is my only courage."
Bob Marley

~~~~~~~~
When One learns
to live without fear,
then One cannot be broken.

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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26. "Archive~able?"
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I think so! -- *smiles*

But if I could get a few Amen's -- It would help! -- ;^)



(((ARCHIVE))) -- *Pwettty Pweeeze*

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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27. "Oh this shit is hot."
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w/outta doubt.

  

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28. "RE: Americka"
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Mon Feb-07-05 01:32 PM

  

          

Wow, I like the rhythm in this poem. It seems like you wrote this poem effortlessly. It just flowed.

Oh and thanks for complimenting my post by the way. I really appreciate the feedback.

Bless.

  

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29. "RE: Americka"
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^^ You're very welcome Corey. And thank you for peeping my work. I appreciate it. TLynnFaz, I appreciate the feedback too.

~*~
Beauty is in my ear
I sketch beautiful
rhythms with a pen
canvassing
my thoughts
artfully articulated
into harmonies of
words
~*~ KSB ~*~

"My fear is my only courage."
Bob Marley

~~~~~~~~
When One learns
to live without fear,
then One cannot be broken.

  

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30. "Ummmm ... Ms. Vixen"
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I THINK you could say AMEN to my archive request too yaknow? -- *chuckles*


We need at least 2 or 3 in agreement to get it archived!


Come on now!!!

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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Intrepid Vixen
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31. "RE: Ummmm ... Ms. Vixen"
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LOL! Yes, I hear ya'. Where is it? Is it the audio post? I was just in your "Thought of the Day" post.

~*~
Beauty is in my ear
I sketch beautiful
rhythms with a pen
canvassing
my thoughts
artfully articulated
into harmonies of
words
~*~ KSB ~*~

"My fear is my only courage."
Bob Marley

~~~~~~~~
When One learns
to live without fear,
then One cannot be broken.

  

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32. "No Ma'am --"
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MY REQUEST TO ARCHIVE ***this*** POST -- AMERICKA!


(((See #26 Above)))

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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33. "RE: No Ma'am --"
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U wanna archive my post?? Goodness, really that's an honor. I don't know...I'm up for it but I don't know what I need to do to get it there. I'm truly surprised. Thank you for thinking that it should belong there, and even if it doesn't go there, I'm glad that people gave it a read.

~*~
Beauty is in my ear
I sketch beautiful
rhythms with a pen
canvassing
my thoughts
artfully articulated
into harmonies of
words
~*~ KSB ~*~

"My fear is my only courage."
Bob Marley

~~~~~~~~
When One learns
to live without fear,
then One cannot be broken.

  

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34. "Well -- For Starters --"
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Tue Feb-08-05 04:36 AM

          

Archiving requires a few folks in agreement -- IN ORDER FOR IT TO BE ARCHIVED!

I made the first request above -- ;^)

Now I need at least TWO more in agreement to get it archived!

My suggestion above was that EVEN YOU can be in agreement -- By just saying" Hey! -- Yeah! -- Go 'head and Archive this fa me! -- *chuckles*

That would be NUMBER 2 request.

Then maybe our brotha ASIEM could third that motion -- And then the Moderators are notified of the ARCHIVE request --

And viola -- THERE YA GO!


(((Pay Attention))) -- *pinch*


Edit: Hell yeah, this deserves to be archived!

Look @ the subject matter -- Historical since the days of slavery -- And things seem to change so little over time -- So THIS post is a timeless reminder of where we came from, as well as how far we have to go -- (For every step taken forward / We seem to take TWO steps backward)

Damn right this deserves to be ARCHIVED!

You could prolly pull this out and post it 5 years from now, and it would still be appropriate for the times!

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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35. "RE: Well -- For Starters --"
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Ahhh, okay now I get it. Sure, go 'head and archive it. *goofy grin* LOL! Now, let me go hit Asiem up!!!

~*~
Beauty is in my ear
I sketch beautiful
rhythms with a pen
canvassing
my thoughts
artfully articulated
into harmonies of
words
~*~ KSB ~*~

"My fear is my only courage."
Bob Marley

~~~~~~~~
When One learns
to live without fear,
then One cannot be broken.

  

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36. "..."
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oh my damn!

this piece. whoa.

yea.

oh my damn is all i can say.

www.marlenelillian.com

www.planetcory.com

  

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37. "RE: ..."
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^^ Thank you Soledad!

~*~
Beauty is in my ear
I sketch beautiful
rhythms with a pen
canvassing
my thoughts
artfully articulated
into harmonies of
words
~*~ KSB ~*~

"My fear is my only courage."
Bob Marley

~~~~~~~~
When One learns
to live without fear,
then One cannot be broken.

  

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Focus23
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38. "Wow..."
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Dope.
I really liked how you ripped it right down the side of the page (its cool for the eyes)

Peace


...But wait...
Do you hear something? ((Chooo Chooo))

ToBeContinued;
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Be on the look out for theBoxCarBoys...(InGeniousPoet/The_Epiphany/Feel1ONE/Focus23)


Peace and Love are still in my lungs, never stale.
I still wait for the Poet to return so that I may Exhale.
---Boxcarboys

Steam-Powered Spit-Sessions Re-write the Bright-Lessons of Life each day with Nice-Blessin's...Word/Life/Write

http://boxcarboys-focus.blogspot.com/

ToBeContinued;
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Check out theBoxCarBoys...

  

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39. "you be making it happen"
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You know how to get the point across every time...I'm feeling it

  

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40. "RE: you be making it happen"
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Thank you Kdini and Focus!! Thank y'all for the love!!

~*~
Beauty is in my ear
I sketch beautiful
rhythms with a pen
canvassing
my thoughts
artfully articulated
into harmonies of
words
~*~ KSB ~*~

"My fear is my only courage."
Bob Marley

~~~~~~~~
When One learns
to live without fear,
then One cannot be broken.

  

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41. "Can We? -- (((ARCHIVE))) Now?"
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I'm sure folks are in agreement here! -- ;^)

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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42. "Yeah ARCHIVE THIS"
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BEST WORD SON YA DID YA THANG.

Stayls aka Peaches Cochran (THE REAL STAYLS)

Yes Natty!

Don't try to downplay Pac and get mad because MC Underground with his complicated flows and lyrics can't move a crowd even if he pointed a gun at them. -Clash Sic

  

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43. "RE: Americka"
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ARCHIVING?! Going once, going twice...

~*~
Beauty is in my ear
I sketch beautiful
rhythms with a pen
canvassing
my thoughts
artfully articulated
into harmonies of
words
~*~ KSB ~*~

"My feelings or emotions or anything at all will reverberate throughout the halls of a poem."
~KSB~

"My fear is my only courage."
Bob Marley

~~~~~~~~
When One learns
to live without fear,
then One cannot be broken.

  

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44. "Mos Def worth an archive. Nice work."
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n/m

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