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KnowOne
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"In Your Own Words.......(Please Read!!!)"


  

          

This was made up by taking a line from almost everyone who has a current post. Thus the words in this piece are not mine…but actually yours….I just used them to paint a picture… I put the names of the authors in ( ) beside each line. I did not get to use everyone, but almost. Check it out & tell me what ya think!

IN YOUR OWN WORDS

Remember my name (3rdi)
LISTEN TO ME...D/L ME...LOVE ME (Ricochet)
im the hypocratic hypocrit healer (jayare214)
one of the first to blend that (blak_Yukon)
grandiose pain with a pen (Ezzsential)
enough to stir your fantasies and move your imagination (Natalie)

i grew up much the same as every other cat dealing with the friction (WILDOUT)
my soul is forever blind to limelight (k_rockah)
Now splender is the occasion of love (Chaste_Souls)
over extending your welcome (BarTek)
that you were kind enough to share (Spread)

i'm sick of this (otto)
Is there any solution to being lonely (Sage)
Do you know of any? If so, can you post em please? (illmeta)
Feeling this way for a reason (deepthought74)

Behind the words a battered soul (HannahTall)
Like every sad song that ever was (lunaeco)
You might here this and cry but I don't care (TheProdigiousPoet)
meddle hearts with metal barriers (MiracleRic)
Listen not to whimpers of madness, (shybutcurious)
I would elaborate. But (scholar)
No good can come of this (Nowachaoticthing)

I wrote this poem for this minute………. (Nikky Nak)
i dont know i just wanted to put something in writing cause (harmoni_representative_002)
I breathe through their existence (eyo)
I gave myself permission to go inside (mindful)
a place where even the smoke is dirty and inconsiderate (InspiredFree)
where the knees bend (Morehouse)
holding my palms open (masego de jah)
in dangerous spots and positions is where you will find (HavoK07)
many echoes are screaming me to leave (presyzion)
Yet my third eye says I aint (sun_das_ill)
The rest is just a blur (LunchBox)
Faces and names and dates escape me (Mahogany5952)

the music reminds me (lunaeco)
Together we make sadness sound like harmony (Hartford_Locura)
flipping pages different chapters from tears
to laughter to shouts form whispers truths (rukudzo)
until your throat bursts (HardGroove)
then the directions splinter (gsquared)
but i feel like there is clarity in all this madness. (melchizedek)
balance, space, and time redundant companions of respect (nappiness)

Time to shine on now. (bluetiger)
With no fears, i make that split decision, to do anything i can (cyberwulf)
dancing around in circles and steppin light (robynwildchild)
sketching designs of my desire helplessly (Sober)
Hope my life and future get better with time (Quest4Knowledge)
But, I refuse to harp a requiem within (soulchild)
Memory seldom replaces vision, and I (BarefootAquarian)
Just wanted you to see how rollin' & elevating above the norm really feels (PhotoSynthesis)
-© 2004 All Of The Above Player's

Feedback Pls.......
Keep Flowin'............


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LOL!
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Know, you have really outdid yourself man...
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this reminds me of something my class did one time
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Well, Aren't U The Clever / Witty ONE? --
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wooow! amazing!
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More info......
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A Lyrical Collage
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archive.
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And Another Thing --
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Thanks Sis'....
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Imagination_7
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1. "RE: In Your Own Words.......(Please Read!!!)"
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That was a great idea. Enjoyed.

“I have had to experience so much stupidity, so many vices, so much error, so much nausea, disillusionment and sorrow, just in order to become a child again and begin anew. But it was right that it should be so: my eyes and heart acclaim it. I had to experience despair, I had to sink to the greatest mental depths, to thoughts of suicide, in order to experience grace, to hear Om again, to sleep deeply again and to awaken refreshed again. I had to become a fool again in order to find Atman in myself. I had to sin in order to live again. Whither will my path yet lead me? This path is stupid, it goes in spirals, perhaps in circles, but whichever way it goes, I follow it.” Siddhartha- Herman Hesse

"Poetry is an orphan of silence. The words never quite equal the experience behind them."
-Charles Simic

"Unless, this
very world is a trash bin, and I am just waiting for
someone to find me so I
can be recycled." InspiredFree




Lesley

  

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delrica
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2. "I'll have to read this again..."
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i don't quite know how to feel about this...but the first time through was like...dag...

know must be bored at work! (sorry...but it was! :-P)

so i'll read it later tonight for contextual purposes

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MiracleRic
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5. "RE: I'll have to read this again..."
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lol

Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

Building repetoires (c) spm since 1983

  

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KnowOne
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>i don't quite know how to feel about this...but the first
>time through was like...dag...
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>know must be bored at work! (sorry...but it was! :-P)

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Sober
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This was soooooo dope... if an okaypoets book ever gets put out... i would request that this piece be in it.. its so beautifully the way you took a thread from each thread and wove them into a piece my eyes could wear... im just taking aback by the creativity here... "jolly good show chap" ...keep spitting...

amaZing
isnt it??

  

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Otto
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Is there any solution to being lonely (Sage)
Do you know of any? If so, can you post em please? (illmeta)
Feeling this way for a reason (deepthought74)

Behind the words a battered soul (HannahTall)
Like every sad song that ever was (lunaeco)
You might here this and cry but I don't care (TheProdigiousPoet)
meddle hearts with metal barriers (MiracleRic)
Listen not to whimpers of madness, (shybutcurious)
I would elaborate. But (scholar)
No good can come of this (Nowachaoticthing)

~~~~~~~~~

man, u really know how to bring us together...and make a brother feel good, i also realize through this, that i have a lot of reading to do, beace all these segments are very enticing...

PROPS MAN!

BIG PROPS!!!

Respect,

-Otto

  

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cosign, real cool idea know

Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

Building repetoires (c) spm since 1983

  

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Instant Axis
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from first look id say you have alot of time on ya hands,lol but for the job put into makin this post i gotta appluad, nicely done and very original, i definitely digs this, peace.

fuck a sig!!!


why MiracleRic thinks me and him clic aight, here's the reason, u real with yours, i am once i bring my guard down, we both stupid as hell, we both got our talents, want a lot of the same things, like a lot of the same things, we both

  

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8. "Know, you have really outdid yourself man..."
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how did you go about doing this? did you print every piece out, read them, then select each line u wanted from it, and then put it together this way. It flows rather well, funny how all of our words combined makes one great piece... Peace~








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If there's a
, been written
yet, then you must
write it. ©Toni Morrison

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my work
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cyberwulf
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11. "RE: Know, you have really outdid yourself man..."
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My god how could you find the time to come up with something like that, creative ish man props on it fo real peace

RIP:K

  

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Loni
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but the fact that it came from just one person piecing things togther is really cool

dot . dot . dot .

☺ ☺

I guess U know me well, I don't like winter
But I seem 2 get a kick

  

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Decstar
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man, this is some shit i couldnt even do. how long did this take u? this is amazin. nice joint.

oh, that ric line u got at was actually mine, but hey, it's cool.

u tha damn ass man, know. nothing else to say

"There is nothing more poetic, but depressing than a male writer" -yours truly

  

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..it's great w/out knowing how it was done, and great knowing...

http://www.GaryPatrickGarry.com

"I'm stalling in flight
Hovering over horizons
Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
--Photosynthesis

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13. "Well, Aren't U The Clever / Witty ONE? --"
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(((Mr. Creativity))) -- *smiles*

I thoroughly enjoyed the read -- Patched together with pieces of our thoughts, feelings, emotions & ideas! -- ;^)

You brought us together as ONE in this thread -- And I appreciate the effort & time you took to do it -- (((Thank You)))


*An un~intentional board collabo* -- *LoL*


A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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eyo
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this must have taken a long time to do. you're a genius!

  

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see, it just shows that all of us are more alike than not. Feeling, thinking, and writing words that can connect and create something beautiful.


i enjoyed this!


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- Phyllis -




"music is soul"

  

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also, i think these are the parts that flow the best:

Behind the words a battered soul (HannahTall)
Like every sad song that ever was (lunaeco)
You might here this and cry but I don't care (TheProdigiousPoet)
meddle hearts with metal barriers (MiracleRic)
Listen not to whimpers of madness, (shybutcurious)
I would elaborate. But (scholar)
No good can come of this (Nowachaoticthing)

I gave myself permission to go inside (mindful)
a place where even the smoke is dirty and inconsiderate (InspiredFree)
where the knees bend (Morehouse)
holding my palms open (masego de jah)
in dangerous spots and positions is where you will find (HavoK07)
many echoes are screaming me to leave (presyzion)
Yet my third eye says I aint (sun_das_ill)
The rest is just a blur (LunchBox)
Faces and names and dates escape me (Mahogany5952)

Time to shine on now. (bluetiger)
With no fears, i make that split decision, to do anything i can (cyberwulf)
dancing around in circles and steppin light (robynwildchild)
sketching designs of my desire helplessly (Sober)
Hope my life and future get better with time (Quest4Knowledge)
But, I refuse to harp a requiem within (soulchild)
Memory seldom replaces vision, and I (BarefootAquarian)
Just wanted you to see how rollin' & elevating above the norm really feels (PhotoSynthesis)


___________________________
- Phyllis -




"music is soul"

  

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KnowOne
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thanks for reading, responding to, and inspiring this piece. It actually did'nt take all that long. Just one bored day at work. LOL I went through & read almost all the current pieces on pages 1-7. As I did I chose a line that I liked from each one & copied it down as well as who wrote it. I also chose lines that I thought would be useful to the flow or as transitions. Once I had everything I just had to re-arrage it over and over until it all made sense. Some lines could not be used so i would go back to that person's piece & pick a different line. It took a lil while but it felt worth it once it was done. I was satisfied with how it turned out. I'm glad you all could feel it. It just goes to show how talented all of you are! Keep it up.....


Keep Flowin'......

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NO, how talented u are playa. this was incredible.

now this is love for tha boards

"There is nothing more poetic, but depressing than a male writer" -yours truly

  

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KnowOne, this is a very good exerscise. Very well done it shows passion and love for the board. Job well done

"To create a thought is devine especially done with spectacular company" - Seyi Awolesi S@ge080219710500(Wordsmith)

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BarTek
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wow, this was brilliant. archive pls. i loved this!

peace.

let's play ping pong ■

  

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very nice, know. very nice.

peace,

n.

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"Conformity is the refuge of a stagnant mind."

  

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hotness

Basura Caliente:

S.A.U.S.E. - Distributary
The Movie Stars - Coming to the Stage

"I school a beat like I'm Aus at Harvard" - Miracle Ric

"Bless yo heart!!!!"

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23. "A Lyrical Collage"
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Im kinda new here...but this piece is really cool! I've never read anything quite like this.
It's as if each verse is Intricately woven together within it's own meaning like a lyrical collage.

I plan on reading this once more..I'd love to know your interpretation?

Beautiful Job!

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"oh yeah....this IS okayplayer.be ready for criticism & wild ass comments" © BigJazz

  

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soulchild
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yep, read it again
it's brilliant

___________________________
- Phyllis -




"music is soul"

  

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for real tho.

real nice know.

((wo))

  

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27. "RE: In Your Own Words.......(Please Read!!!)"
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thank you for including me in this. this wholly shows your involvement in this board.

and thank you for that.

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It's things like THIS -- (as well as other things, of course!) -- but it's things like this that make me REALLY appreciate our current moderators!

You TAKE the time to make US feel appreciated -- individually and collectively -- to make us feel SPECIAL -- to make us feel like we ALL belong! -- ;^)

In this flow you included "new" OKP heads, as well as oldies -- So everyone feels a kinship -- REGARDLESS of their length of time on the board, nahmean?

This was really Special, *Know* -- Thanks again for your thoughtfulness! -- *smiles*

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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I appreciate it. Nice to see my efforts are being noticed. lol

_________________________________________
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yo , that was tight!
GOOD IDEA USING EVERY1 ELSE LINES AS COLLAGE!
this was one of the first posts i've seen or read of yours but i really liked it stay up son!oh..are u a medeator or sumtin'!
look out for the audio i did coming of *Relationship Blues* i;ll post Prt:2 and attach the audios wit'em..When its all polished up! Keep postin like a bill collector!
www.soundclick.com/konsanatra

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~George Bush censors me.....

"Manifesto, This what i wanna see happen. For all my peoples still breakin graff writin & rappin."~~ Og Kweli

My nose is fucked!~ Weez

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