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Zin
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At the master’s hands a slain slave …slips into memories and vows of revenge if ever freed … on the other end …another son is taken to the field given a white sheet …and hate is reborn again and again … while far eastern …a solider has at gun point molested and raped another Asian woman … and on the coast of Africa …they cry out from the female circumcisions … I wake from living … the monotonous minutes in time to save some of the children …from the hatred this world has giving …to so many before my speaking … if these words reach ‘em …hope to spawn a chain reaction …full of strong links … supporting the weakest …or arms will reach back from Tsunami beaches … to claim the livin …not even sparing the kings children …
Check this for filler …birds carrying West Nile … medicines on the next aisle …small pox and aids … all kill the same way … car crashes …planes smashing …trains lacking tracks adequate to sustain traction … hurricanes tornadoes floods and natural disasters … you hear the laugher of the devil at ya? …

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unfortunately
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~ evolution ~
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DeCisive
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Thu Jan-06-05 08:41 AM

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1. "RE: buiLD (IF YOU READ IT ADD TO IT)"
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man all day and all night...luckily my pops taught me how to fight..his wiles...its dirty game but must be played...so I smile in the face of pain...better dayz..Gotta be more to life..yo I used to cop work..from 300 pound nigga..that looked like Suge Knight...but he lost half the weight and arm..over night...With just one Ak...I was inspired on that day...to make my tongue spray..and rip through..all the rage in my mind...the hatred and strife..attached to my life...get it good...and keep it right...I got people depending on me..what ain't on the channel 7 news...is the reason..I take responsiblity...of strong holding..the culture and community...What!!!...ain't nothing the devils can do with me..my time is coming...so you'll see.

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Zin
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i knew you'd come thru

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freedomfighter
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Thu Jan-06-05 08:59 AM

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3. "RE: buiLD (IF YOU READ IT ADD TO IT)"
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brothers keeper as i defend or lend a hand the next
man is stabbing an ol maid laid in her own blood wood
and iron crush her skull for what?........ money money
why does the world reslove around money......it's bigger
then you and i will you die for it as new york gets hit
sorrows spirals out of control smoke stacks nigga's get
car jack intrusion the revolution is moving passing
hand held gac laws legally people crawl self imprisonment
traped in devilment terrorist cement we sink
in sin and the wages is death i guess........?
i am not my brothers keeper because he wont listen
he just keep telling me i bitching or i'm tripping
and i need to put down the blunt so i don't front
i just keep waving good bye as my eye bleeds truth
or lies.

Freeworld Order
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Zin
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4. "RE: buiLD (IF YOU READ IT ADD TO IT)"
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yeah freedom ......

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Dredma
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7. "RE: buiLD (IF YOU READ IT ADD TO IT)"
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This savage world weighs heavy on a conscience fem soul
with instinct to nurture and take hold
these blind knives with targets unknown
disbursing anger find innocent victims
soulless eyes functioning anonymously
cause the only purpose is chasing that green
the only motive is praise for the negative
repeating cycle of genocide
psychological media manipulation
AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!
And no one is free
to be free would be crazy
or that man on street walk passed daily
holding his sign
looked down upon
conformity would be comprised
thus money would loose value
and love wouldn’t be a contract
of “ I do” broken for 5O% of
the mother is being hushed in the scheme of games
order is being raped and abandoned
values erased and replaced with
what’s mine is mine
suffer alone
as I watch from my kingdom
I give you men playing GODS
AND women allowing them
true or false
it’s your opinion......

DREDMA*

  

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Instant_Vintage
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5. "RE: buiLD (IF YOU READ IT ADD TO IT)"
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So I pray for the brothers still bound in chains.
Chains dressed up with a lil shine and ornaments,
damn, we still got something hanging from our necks?
Chains dressed up with people we suppose are better cause
they get the same shit we work for, with ease.
$6 billion dolla nigga, you clean...
till you pull a trigga, nigga...
Laugh as you listen to me cry for exile.
This field is full of dreams deferred...raisin in the sun
My manhood never shrivels, you cant take that from me with your
double talk, quick talk, fake talk, all talk....
I am deaf to your words, just as I am dead to your laws.
2/3 of me wants to put my foot in your
1/2 ass ways so then you can see more than just my
3/5ths.
Fractions of reality cause full eclipses of justice.
I know you hear me, but are you listening?

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WILDOUT
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6. "RE: buiLD (IF YOU READ IT ADD TO IT)"
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Now who saw it coming, finger tips running through the back of her head
in the mouth of the earth, pure pleasure
my children, the grateful dead
rock songs crack dreams fiends live on heron can you spare some
change is what they ask for, i ask more like for foresight before fights,
suiting up cause its cold in toronto lord, watch over me
though i wield the elements like a monk or a mage
im just an honest man calling shit what it is
in the chest of the living carry the flame
living in the ice age the apocalypse prevented by man
made machines and concrete platforms fucking with the karma till its back and its sand, reminiscing on snakes and hoes, jewels is froze, i step with holy rocks on my chest exposed, rubies and embryos, quartz dna structure, karma sutra war tactics in the hood where books and brain cells dry out in this chemical warfare, and welfare, they fucking us so we fuck girls for kicks run trains on chicks flip game to taint another mothers daughter before she a mother scorned from our lovers split like illegal cable but the signal aint strong enough on our digressions from the heavens
taking the easy way out, pretending this never ending struggle comes with a full ration of doubt, shit is just as unstable as when i got my name, cats lives passing quickly like fables playing their games, switch tables with hands underneath, so much is spoken outside of the dream speech, that is to say, the landscape shift dynamically when we're awake, and while we sleep and our souls go to the unspoken land that the earths energies create, back again rising like mushrooms that can trigger vision in those ready to see it, sticking up for the sake of our seeds freedom, we turn on the axis and facts is washed away just like the islands, while the rich take birth control the earth got other ways to do what you wish for

even if your denying it

  

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8. "RE: buiLD (IF YOU READ IT ADD TO IT)"
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The World is Over
written in invisible ink
I give myself some forethought
but I'll just forget in the aftermath
of seeing myself replete of my freedom
See,
I be them
people struggling because they say that it's beautiful,
and it is
in a sea of trash I see beauty outlined in ashy faces
They don't know that inside the earth is drumming, thrumming with the unknown
causing tides to ripple through my chest
while my ancestors
lie at the bottom of the ocean
something's about to be unleashed
a familiar terror
has gripped my conciousness
so that i cannot sleep without it lying down next to me
cannot wake fully
without it dominating my shadow
the ever present mark
of tomorrow's ending
has me gathering up
and moving my soul
home
i ache with chains too heavy to let loose, and if I drop them
I let go of my legacy
See, those who die for me will die again
in me


~*~
until out of merely not nothing comes
only one snowflake(and we speak our names
e.e. cummings

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When One learns
to live without fear,
then One cannot be broken.

  

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Dredma
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you are amazing....last line the icing. muah! i love it. i felt it. true expression.

  

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Intrepid Vixen
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Thank you, but I read yours and I have to give it up because the open-ended ending is the perfect ending. And to Instant, man u dropped it and we all need to bring it on this one cuz everyone's stuff is just so damn niceeeeeeee!!

~*~
until out of merely not nothing comes
only one snowflake(and we speak our names
e.e. cummings

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When One learns
to live without fear,
then One cannot be broken.

  

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Zin
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30. "RE: buiLD (IF YOU READ IT ADD TO IT)"
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yo yall really came out on this

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11. "so....who you helpin'?"
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credit card companies cashing in on tsunami relief
percentage of what's collected via plastic pocketed by devil's via processing fee
even in attempting to end ocean born suffering: greed!!!
$god$ they love thee

  

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12. "RE: buiLD (IF YOU READ IT ADD TO IT)"
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The earth fractures
Natural disasters
plaster
tidal waves on third world statures
while we use our resources to capture
college kids usin Napster
but the bastards
had satellite photo's faster
than mother earth pictured it, ask her
economic powerhouses are playing casper
sending christian pastors
to hindu and buhhdist people to mask there
religious control
two fold
that was population control
if that was New York the reserves woulda been on patrol.


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E_CliPS
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13. "RE: buiLD (IF YOU READ IT ADD TO IT)"
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The ocean's forces hit
children's coarpse's lit
a star through the course of it
there swimming with porpioses
guided to heavens gates
divided by seven days
eleven sun rays
splash their face
in ten moon's light
to live out eternities flight
all the planet's align
somehow it had to be divine

  

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15. "RE: buiLD (IF YOU READ IT ADD TO IT)"
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i guess i must be cold hearted
looking without tears towards the departed
i guess its like they showed me no art in these streets
where the heart seems to beat against me
rather than for me
leave me empty and you say that you adore me
that is to say we
coincide our life paths
waking up in cold sweats
bleeding out of my pores toxins
couldnt never get boxxed out so instead got boxed in
it aint safe no more
the seas rise over buildings and high rises
no matter how far you run your earths to claim
project horizon

  

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it's not the last
disast-
er to turn the heads and make the world collectively gasp

What you do will come back to haunt you
and if you ain't available your mother, brother and sister will do

We're just so proud
we have to display our power
But He can erase a thousand years in less than an hour

You ain't immune, lock yourself in your room
The mother of the walls will find them soon
enclose your doom, mother nature wants to spoon
yet you stick a fork in that bitch, now you're done, consumed

The choosen race is ripped and torn
so to bring us back together we've been blessed with this storm
and if we don't want more, fuck a wall and a levee
just touch your feet to the grass and rest your Chevy

The cycle can't be stopped, still we bulild brake after brake
We on thin ice, so quit driving and skate

But this ain't about cars, technology, computers
It's about our harmony which has been spayed and neutered

You can laminate the land and it's still gon' get wet
and if we think we can forget, we ain't seen nuthin yet
We tryin' to fight with our daddy, you know he gon' whoop us
No matter how big we get that old man will put us
in our place
our place to destroy or build if we choose
nothing is given, we make it to lose

nothing is given
there is no accidental coindicidence
but if you make love
it will make sense

yep

  

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freedomfighter
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16. "RE: smile"
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spell breaker the creator cried
and i watched 1000s die the c red
floating along burning beds
fed oppotunistic sheds full of
losts kids to be sold expose
souls drop from cats eyes
knives and guns multiply
giving life light peering beyond
the birth canal wild is me
one man one hand one rib
dribbled victory loyalty creativity
just to exploded into mistic misery
under world fights
the community of negality
wow is me free dom no more
as the monster of the deep roar
increase work loads
crumbling asphalt roads
old taxes axes chops puppet strings
dewey decimal the animal
is still in control
as i roll pennies filling
the cities
wit brown brothers
ab lovers
shall set us free

lost yeah lol ha ha ha ah ah ha !

Freeworld Order
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Raid
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17. "Shit"
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its like we running a maze, right in front of our face
people under the wage thinkin that money is great
livining in conditions descripted in the funniest ways
and at the same time sad, missing something nothing replaces
we got the media blaming hip-hop for objectification
when most women deface themselves for no particular reason
where's the articulate season, where are the human beings
that once inhabited the earth that gave birth to our seeds and
most people decieving just to have fun on the weekend
the weak end of there struggle is the way its increasin'
they way most girls nowadays believin in these men
that play more games than an NBA season
defending the art of why i choose the way i write
is like, the day in night, ever changing in spite
of the fact that shit stays the same daily
maybe if i didn't let people close, shit wouldn't phase me...

What's up, first post, hope i didn't fuck with y'all shit, peace.

  

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mayowa
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Fri Jan-07-05 09:47 AM

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18. "RE: Shit"
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We gots to get free
open your eyes
can't you see
there ain't no you
there ain't no me
it's all us
there ain't no family
and no non-family
it's all one
the human family
the mind's got to expand
beyond 3D we need to learn to see
before this earth we leave
we must find our place
make it a temporaty home
before we leave for that which is eternal
heaven beckons, "come home"

-----Week's sig--------------

the hot and the cold
together create the warm
fire and water
together create steam

ying and yang
man and woman
copulate, become one
create life

love and truth (the rose and the cross)
mind and heart
IQ and EQ
two parts of you

find yourself
join your two halfs
bridge the gap
create a better you

-----I'm feeling this!--------------

Mediocrity is self inflicted and genius is self bestowed...Walter Russell

"Some patients mistakenly believe that their loneliness is a product of another person's absence"...a psychology book I don't know the name of

  

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19. "RE: Shit"
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up
~*~
until out of merely not nothing comes
only one snowflake(and we speak our names
e.e. cummings

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When One learns
to live without fear,
then One cannot be broken.

  

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jolena
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Fri Jan-07-05 06:38 PM

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20. "RE: buiLD (IF YOU READ IT ADD TO IT)"
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this troubling
script
with my hands covered in grit..
struggling
to grasp reality
so I reach till I discover my grip..
my futures a mist
the diverging roads put my head in a twist..
confusion breeds indifference..

so fuck it.

- --- --
"i write life like mistakes that smell of baby powder" - no reply needed

  

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21. "~ evolution ~"
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i meditate upon the spirit of evolution...

you that can turn caterpillars to butterflies..
scales into feathers..
seawater to blood..
that miraculous force that inspires rocks and dust
to weave themselves into biology..

metamorphose our species..

you have stood by us for billions of years - -
do not forsake us now....
empower us and awaken us
in pure and dazzling creativity...
awaken in us the powers
that we need to survive the resent crisis..

the powers we need to ((evolve))

evolve into more aeons of our solar journey.
awaken in us a sense of who we *truly are*..
tiny ephemeral blossoms on the Tree of Life...
Make the purposes and destiny of that tree
*our* profound purpose and destiny...

i meditate upon the power which sustains the planets in their orbits...
that wheels our milky way in its 200-million-year spiral..
to imbue our personalities and our relationships
with harmony, endurance and joy...
fill us with a sense of

-= immense time =-

so that our brief, flickering lives
may truly reflect the work of vast ages past...
and also the millions of years of evolution
whose potential lies in our trembling hands...

Breathe E.Z.
~ Zhana ~
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"Keep your power just in the day that you are living on this Earth, and not on how to maneuver tomorrow." ~Meditations for Souls in Process

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"Why do you stay in prison
when the door is so wide open?" ~Rumi

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"Give me a naked Soul... And a Mature Mind." ~Joshua Redman

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"Though we seem to be sleeping,
there is an inner wakefulness
that directs the dream,
and that will eventually startle us back
to the truth of who we are." ~Rumi

...

Vee is I and I am She

...

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22. "RE: buiLD (IF YOU READ IT ADD TO IT)"
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i hear the laughter of the devil but just after ima plaster cast that bastard...face off castor troy and boy they wont know what hitem.....bush the antichrist most of us the anti living....sleeping peeping only whenn they reaching in our pockets....3rd world disasters only compassion can stop it....watch it it get worse before it get better...we coming together but before we can build we must destroy....and after that the value of living and giving will reign....but for now ima huddle mine outta the rain....but for now ima huddle mine outta the rain...but for now ima huddle mine.....huddle yours....

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Zin
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23. "RE: buiLD (IF YOU READ IT ADD TO IT)"
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The plague ….
Fast food
Fast women
Fast cars
Fast stars … we look to as role models …
Raising ya fast ass kids …
Who’s hot in the pants asses …reciprocate
the cycle of babies having babies …
or not graduating
I’m agitated …with the infatuation
Of a teens Russian roulette flirt with aids
Or std’s that blind babies …
Or their acceptance of the situations faced
On a day to day basis
Or the fact that voting really don’t mean shit in this nation ….
But the lesser of two evils case these fools to eager
To take time and voice their opinions …
Or too ignorant …and vote according to one point of reasoning
The logic escapes me …
because I’m smarter than 85 % of these human beings
am I an escapee…
here lately
it seems better to give in (to death) and dictate how it will end ..

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jayare214
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24. "RE: buiLD (IF YOU READ IT ADD TO IT)"
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-yeah zin i definitely dug that

give in to death ?
ima give into life
ima give into the words i write
and give into the mic
ima give in to giving back
ima give over to taking back
my freedom first then waking up the sheep in the back
ima give over to god what im powerless against
and ima give foot- ass connections when its time to defend
oppressors oppression has been forever
and will continue to be
some are content with oppression
some can only live free
me? I’d die enslaved on a nat turner mission
and this path ive blazed
I hope my ghetto peeps listen
I hope to reach my children
And their friend’s friend’s cousin’s friends
As long as the received message is as strong as the send
God is guiding my pen im trying to stay out the way
I give my heart to making tomorrow better than today.


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DeCisive
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25. "RE: buiLD (IF YOU READ IT ADD TO IT)"
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I'm all about tomorrow...yesterday was dark as hell..and the
present day..son I'm just maintaining...Imma killa at procreatin...constructing landscapes..that can stand to the last day..not only that..I also provide the instructions..we attract the lost..when we discussing..so I edify the edicate..to avoid the obstructions..kids adhere to this...so they will do the same thing...when they get to our positions..these are blueprints..we got struggle down to science...I'm not Common but am I making sense...Cause irregardless...of the killing and drug pumping...there's intervention within each sentance...it not hard to find...when you actually look for it..instead of looking for points that contridict...to re-approve the assumptions..that we ain't shhhh...we as fans are partakers..to this mission of upliftment..for the soul of universal law...to rebuke anti-humanity insanity..present in society...with lyrical piety..until the end of time..ride with me...why look from over there..when you could be right beside me.

~Complex with the creative content on a conquest with concepts and context as concrete as poetry
~Its real and ill when I be sitting still yet still rocking to my mental rhythme.
~Its just right when I write

http://www.myspace.com/decisive147

  

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Intrepid Vixen
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26. "RE: buiLD (IF YOU READ IT ADD TO IT)"
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~~*I'm going to do something a little different. I'm going to take Decisive's last word or two and add on to that!! We gonna switch it up a little!*

Beside you
beside me
us both
gravity
notwithstanding
this pure antidote
is called trust
belly leaden
with dishonesty
told since birth
in the present
death from destruction
rained from heaven
we better get right
organize thoughts in order
and if I forgot to tell you that
I loved you
I'm sorry because I do
but sometimes my eyes can't see past the darkness and i misinterpret you
I'd like to lie side by side
with nothing in between us
but the earth space that we share


~*~
until out of merely not nothing comes
only one snowflake(and we speak our names
e.e. cummings

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When One learns
to live without fear,
then One cannot be broken.

  

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Zin
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27. "added to 26"
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“but the earth space that we share”
but we bleed with ease because we care …
from our knees we plead just to be spared …
but did nothing to prevent …but look in despair…
from the cans fluorocarbons …we sprayed our hair …
not thinking we changing the air up there ….
Never too late never too soon lets be more aware …
Rich taxing the poor …let’s be fair
Or fall flat ..on our backs and tuck our tail …
It’s a shame the same game but bullshit sells …
And ignorance is bliss …in this living hell …

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DeCisive
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34. "RE: added to 26"
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I plan to make this living hell...my heaven..I'm carrying blessings...of late godfather Elder Blevens...hustling hard...I ain't had rest..since the first time..I seen 9-11...playing with the pain...for the sake of gain...hold tight to your mind frame...the evils rotate..to wear away..your purpose and hope..scribe and flow..like you have before..and go...to your dreams...the world is yours...so memorize this reality...society attacks with minor adjustments...and market your soul...off of small changes...so bring nothing..shorter than amazin.

~Complex with the creative content on a conquest with concepts and context as concrete as poetry
~Its real and ill when I be sitting still yet still rocking to my mental rhythme.
~Its just right when I write

http://www.myspace.com/decisive147

  

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DeCisive
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35. "RE: added to 26"
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Sweetheart where would I be..without you...I need you more than you assume..when dealing with fate...its either too fast..or too soon...but that I'm used to...I'm vulnerbal to you...so the world bows to you...to put you on a pedal stool..of truth...I sew my thoughts..into your heart...spiritually guide you..but don't care to take the credit...I'm deading the negative conversation..resurrecting positive changes...laying out ground work...to let souls search..the infinite possiblities...of what should be..sort of like...you and me..destiny complete...everlasting peace...honest like how you think...cause it feels like..it was meant to be...

~Complex with the creative content on a conquest with concepts and context as concrete as poetry
~Its real and ill when I be sitting still yet still rocking to my mental rhythme.
~Its just right when I write

http://www.myspace.com/decisive147

  

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Nathaniel Bacon
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28. "omg(archive)"
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i don't want to see this end yet but this better get a spot in the archives my verse is forthcoming

Nathaniel Bacon!!!!

  

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XadaboBangGud
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29. "adding"
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see: the wind makes no noise
the noise Is Created
as the things
man hath laid
does crack and breakedth
see!!the wind makes no noise

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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31. "RE: buiLD (IF YOU READ IT ADD TO IT)"
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I have nothing to add right now, but I'm ^UpPiN^ this for later review -- And hopefully to see it placed in the ARCHIVES! -- ;^)

Now the way I see it -- THIS IS A COLLABO! -- (A collaboration of several poets adding on their thoughts & ideas)

There's creativity and spontaniety in this collab -- So I'm recognizing it for what it's worth -- *@ Face Value*

I hope others recognize the value of these thoughts & ideas, cuz some folks be actin' like ppl don't do collabs around here anymore -- And if they do, they're not profound or thought~provoking -- AND THAT's SIMPLY "NOT" TRUE! -- *hmmmmph*

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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Instant_Vintage
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32. "up"
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Instant_Vintage
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33. "up an archive"
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this is thorough. yeah, i am bringin it back, thorough

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KnowOne
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36. "Mos Def Archive....."
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but are ya'll done "adding"? If not ya gotta help me make sure it dont fall off before I can archive it.

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Instant_Vintage
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37. "add if you are gonna add....last call"
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PhotoSynthesis
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38. "ARCHIVE -- NOW!"
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Stick a Fork In It -- I THINK IT'S DONE! -- *chuckles*

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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