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Zin
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"KING o the Ring ( Grand Finale)"


  

          

Zin vs. Ric

ONE round winner take all ...i will no longer claim KINg in this bitch if i looose ... rules settled on yesterday ... Decstar is hosting ...and it's blind like the rest of the tourney ...no hole barred...

Ric you got till tuesday ...with yo writing ass ...get yo weight up ...my verse is in ...

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Subject Author Message Date ID
Oh yeah
Apr 23rd 2004
1
we couldn't have this fall, now could we?
Apr 24th 2004
2
RE: KING o the Ring ( Grand Finale)
Apr 25th 2004
3
INTRODUCTION, MUTHAFUCKAS!!!!!!!!!!!
Apr 26th 2004
4
Get my name
Apr 27th 2004
17
      f'real f'real
Apr 27th 2004
18
           which one.........
Apr 27th 2004
19
OneManAmazin vs Mircle Ric
Apr 26th 2004
5
Zin
Apr 26th 2004
6
*sigh*
Apr 26th 2004
7
RE: *sigh*
Apr 26th 2004
12
      RE: *sigh*
Apr 27th 2004
20
oh ...i like Zin in this one too
Apr 26th 2004
9
I think Ric killed it
Apr 26th 2004
11
RE: I think Ric killed it
Apr 26th 2004
13
RE: Ric
Apr 26th 2004
14
RE: OneManAmazin vs Mircle Ric
Knockout_Jenkins
Apr 26th 2004
15
RE: OneManAmazin vs Mircle Ric
Apr 27th 2004
21
Ric ....
Apr 26th 2004
8
RE: Ric ....
Apr 26th 2004
10
      PS
Apr 26th 2004
16
           archive??
May 01st 2004
23
RE: KING o the Ring ( Grand Finale)
Apr 28th 2004
22
Is this one finished too?
May 03rd 2004
24
RE: Is this one finished too?
May 03rd 2004
25

Zin
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1. "Oh yeah"
In response to Reply # 0


  

          

give you something to be mad about ...see versus him

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Vash the Stampede
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2. "we couldn't have this fall, now could we?"
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the Signature starts now:

yo, yo, yo, whut's up y'all.

the group is the ILLIANCE.

the url is www.illiancerecords.com.
/\free music is there, an' a forum/\

buy the album.

support your fuckin' up an' comin' artist.

oh, an' somebody said that this was sig worthy, so, here it is:
"i like some of his music. i just don't like the idea of him being a marketing ploy to get me to waste perfectly good backpack money on a rocafella cd."

fuckers

war

outro

the Signature starts now:

yo, yo, yo, whut's up y'all.

the group is the ILLIANCE.

the url is www.illiancerecords.com.
/\free music is there, an' a forum/\

buy the album.

support your fuckin' up an' comin' artist.

oh, an' somebody sa

  

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MiracleRic
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3. "RE: KING o the Ring ( Grand Finale)"
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up for 2morrow

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Decstar
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4. "INTRODUCTION, MUTHAFUCKAS!!!!!!!!!!!"
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this is it......we'll get to figure out who's tha REAL king of OKP wit braggin rights for tha rest of tha year.

ric been holdin it down for a minute. takin out big shots lik Ax, warlock, zin himself, lunchboxx, bartek. not in tha order and mos def argubly by many, but it was wrote and tha people spoke.

battlin for OneManAmazin ....aka Amazin aka Zin aka king aka Ali.....throne. cat's been duckin and dodgin him for months. he's been doin is own duckin and dodgin. but now wit anotha queen respresentin his throne, countless victim's heads around him, new robe and freshly creased pants, he's ready to step and shit on cats.


ARE YA'LL MUTHAFUCKAS READY!?!?!?!?!!!

I SAID, ARE YA'LL MUTHAFUCKAS READY!?!?!?!?!!!!


LETS GET THIS GOIN

"There is nothing more poetic, but depressing than a male writer" -yours truly

  

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Warlock
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17. "Get my name"
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outt this sentence cuz it never happened

>>takin out big shots lik Ax, warlock, zin himself, lunchboxx, bartek

What's a sig?

  

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Frosted_Flake
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18. "f'real f'real"
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it was that other guy.

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Decstar
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19. "which one........."
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warlox?

it was one of u cats that battle ric.

"There is nothing more poetic, but depressing than a male writer" -yours truly

  

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Decstar
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5. "OneManAmazin vs Mircle Ric"
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Zin:

the farwell ryhme ...so you know i had to shit on a cat ...i want to see ..FREE AMAZIN T~Shirts and shit ...Ric enjoy the kingship...if you make it pass this

Ric friction..still "son" of my diction..fiction..when he speaks
of a kingship..I shits..on him and that monkey of his..larry
lisp..lyrically lost..ya track record shows..you lack the
stamina in ya bicuspids..to fuck wit..anything 'Zin spits
...taste like shit..when roles off that fat ass tongue of his...I
am a pink panther damaja..to cartoon character rappers
...maybe bubbles will comfort you..or maybe Frak will help you
...co-write another verse for me too...it's hard to..be on ya tip
when you dickless..I started not to battle you...cause I was
amused...watching you and tek...fight for Frak's dick..like
bitches...i mean on the realness...I was beginning to think
ya'll was alias'...for 3rd and Winter...we gonna call this
beginners...luck..if you fuck up..and win this...cause this shit
was over before you even agreed and entered...ya kings crown
is made of tin..you sound like my son pissing...yousa
tinkling miracle...and I'm the center..of any evolution
you made as a writer period!!!...your acceptance speech
should always begin with. I like to thank God..moms..and
King 'Zin..for spear..heading every effort..and most of all
telling me my rhyme scheme was strait shit..Bait you with
...pink pussy footing blank disses and hard dick...where's the
homo joke? okay there it is..I disqualify and diss you spit
...with Frak's sig..about how close you and another man is
...You can't be serious?...Zin dealing this..barrage...black
balled facts all...I'll be surprised if you get a vote at all...it's a
miracle...scoliosis..flo this..chiropractic acid..will realign ya
spine Ric..close the caption..shouting ..he's not a dick rider
...from the saddle specially made for Frak's dick..Winter sent
me to smack him..and ask for her dick back..tell him
kitkat..you silly sloppy sic slurrer of words...snagulpuss
mixed with Sylvester..what you thought you saw a bird?...
yousa herb..low life crumb even..you lucky I skeeted...I'm ya
daddy..I should have wiped you in the sheets...and removed
ya embryonic essence in tide with bleach...and ya moms used
pads on trash day... but nothing could replace the pitter patter
of lil feet..and the l love you daddy's so sadly...we chose not
to abort..and have the family reunion netcased.. via the
boards..like an episode of Maury Polvich..Frakage...in the
case of lil ricky...you are ....NOT! the daddy...while 99.9%
of his rhymes sound like mine...



MircleRic:

zin wants lyrical fitness, but he's still jeHova's clone,
door to door MiracleWitness, ya ego's overgrown,
son never could scratch my name off his irritiable shit list,
talk about persistence, "chez chez le Ric, viva le resistance!!"
now’s ya chance…in the land of a thousand pants,
u’d still come up short(s),
how many times u escape me with no wins,
stop swimming with sharks with no fins…or ruffles,
in scuffles, blouses lose, I make spouses cruise,
like ya first wife, u seem like the ernie and bert type,
u can kiss the rings peace,
cause the true king requests a mean feast,
of the self proclaimed, leave foes knelt, or slain,
drink some alka selzter mang,
ya not that ill, u gets no sick leave, when rick squeeze,
i leave ya world cold enough to make ya pits freeze,
up ya ante-perspirant, sweat out ya bitch weave,
don’t care when ya verse was in, with ease,
I muscle it with BRUT force, catch a boot to ya poot source,
sidewalk chalk ya smile, caulk ya style,
fill its holes with white fluid, handy man, just might do it, the mic druid,
worship self as a lost God, i tossed odds, “hercules! hercules!”
u need to re-work ya steez, leave this perp with knees…bent,
I leave mint’s…conditioned, what kind of man would I be,
if I didn’t leave ya wench positioned, for prime pokes,
but enough of wife life of crime jokes, the gods spoke,
mad scrambler, not the type to show porn,
but the type the peeps ya shit and shows corn,
this king of the wedding ring, should have better things,
I shine brighter then the head of mister clean,
take some antihistamine, thinks talking about my lisp is mean,
please my speech is impeded by men bleeded til they physique is lean,
and I then eat it, my style is the lifestyle of the rich and famous,
robin hood or robin leach, I clown zins sound “timbs to anus”,
new sheriff in town, yea limbs is nameless, not Nottingham,
leave ya delusions of grandeur rotting man,
picture me, the truest King in History,
leavin zin like the punisher skull…jawless,
miracle wins… victory…flawless,


"There is nothing more poetic, but depressing than a male writer" -yours truly

  

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Frosted_Flake
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6. "Zin"
In response to Reply # 5


  

          

those punches were rock-solid. the very last line didn't flow as well.. but the whole damn thing above it was fire.
Ric came with the word-play, but the punches weren't quite as direct.

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Vash the Stampede
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7. "*sigh*"
In response to Reply # 5


  

          

i like rics wordplay. i like a lot of zin's lines though. dude was tryin' to keep his king claim. i gotta read it again later.

the Signature starts now:

yo, yo, yo, whut's up y'all.

the group is the ILLIANCE.

the url is www.illiancerecords.com.
/\free music is there, an' a forum/\

buy the album.

support your fuckin' up an' comin' artist.

oh, an' somebody said that this was sig worthy, so, here it is:
"i like some of his music. i just don't like the idea of him being a marketing ploy to get me to waste perfectly good backpack money on a rocafella cd."

fuckers

war

outro

the Signature starts now:

yo, yo, yo, whut's up y'all.

the group is the ILLIANCE.

the url is www.illiancerecords.com.
/\free music is there, an' a forum/\

buy the album.

support your fuckin' up an' comin' artist.

oh, an' somebody sa

  

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Vash the Stampede
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12. "RE: *sigh*"
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ohkay

i like ric's flow better. zin, you good, but it's harder to read yours, and the flow isn't as sweet to me. ric flows more like a poet. it's close, but i gotta go wit' ric. now, back to my paper.

the Signature starts now:

yo, yo, yo, whut's up y'all.

the group is the ILLIANCE.

the url is www.illiancerecords.com.
/\free music is there, an' a forum/\

buy the album.

support your fuckin' up an' comin' artist.

oh, an' somebody said that this was sig worthy, so, here it is:
"i like some of his music. i just don't like the idea of him being a marketing ploy to get me to waste perfectly good backpack money on a rocafella cd."

fuckers

war

outro

the Signature starts now:

yo, yo, yo, whut's up y'all.

the group is the ILLIANCE.

the url is www.illiancerecords.com.
/\free music is there, an' a forum/\

buy the album.

support your fuckin' up an' comin' artist.

oh, an' somebody sa

  

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Zin
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20. "RE: *sigh*"
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ha ha i din't know we where looking for the best flow award but if that is how you voted thats cool ...ric by a vote .holla

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Zin
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9. "oh ...i like Zin in this one too"
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lmao ......it's so serious!!!

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Frank Longo
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11. "I think Ric killed it"
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But my vote's too late and I seem to be in the minority. Ric your flow was fuckin tight, the rhymes were complex, and the punchlines hit. I thought you had him.

More Christmas movies coming in 2025...

  

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MiracleRic
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13. "RE: I think Ric killed it"
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your vote counts, only 2 folks have voted so far, and ur one of em

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BarTek
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14. "RE: Ric"
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Zin made the same mistake I made and he is paying for it now.

Too much script about frak, too much script about dick, whereas Ric scripted a dope verse, wit nice wordplay, and on point punches. Also, Zin you dissed Ric with the same punch that Frak and I used, that ain't cool. I thought you could have taken it Zin, but Ric out-smoothed you. He was laid back and calm throughout the entire ordeal, he packed a good punch with his wordplay and flow, and I don't doubt he took this.

peace.

let's play ping pong ■

  

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Knockout_Jenkins

Mon Apr-26-04 05:59 PM

  
15. "RE: OneManAmazin vs Mircle Ric"
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this was hot

  

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Instant Axis
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21. "RE: OneManAmazin vs Mircle Ric"
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If i had to vote...the first line about Ric and me had me laughing out loud but then i see my name numerous more times about pretty much the same thing and im like hmmmmmmm......but the shit was just so harsh on Ric that i was laughing anyway.....Rics verse might have had better wordplay but as far as personals...Zin killed dude and flow wise...Ric's might have been smoother but when i spit Zin's out loud it went on like a beast...if i had to vote which im not going to cause Zin pin pointed me all thru the verse id say Zin won

fuck a sig!!!


why MiracleRic thinks me and him clic aight, here's the reason, u real with yours, i am once i bring my guard down, we both stupid as hell, we both got our talents, want a lot of the same things, like a lot of the same things, we both

  

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Zin
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8. "Ric ...."
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good verse .. but i expected better from you...again ..thanks for participating in the King o the Ring tourney...you made this shit a sucess and Decstar ...you held it down mang ...i'm out of town right now ..but i wanted to say thanks to everybody that took part in this ...i tried to get it all off before i got married but it didn't work ...so again thanks you guys ...Ric you brawled wit the best of them ...

P.s. if i in anyway offended anyone while dissing ric ...sorry it's just a verse ....luvs ya!!!!!!
Frak get at me mang before i go up ...you to Blak!!!! you know the number...

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MiracleRic
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10. "RE: Ric ...."
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no doubt yo, i was gonna spend some time on that verse but i just didnt feel like it, not the hardest hittin, but as always i kept my wordplay/flow top notch, im a lil surprised at your verse too, it had like the same 2 punches the whole time, lol, good ones, but damn...its always good comp between us, good shit, and good luck yo

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MiracleRic
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16. "PS"
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*rocks free zin t-shirt*

this was the toughest tourney on my lyrical endurance ever yo, mad love to all that participated and i'll let people know when my crown is up for grabs, may be a while, i gotta look at some of the newbs and see what they do in the other tourney,

and shout outs to some of my fav verses of the tourney, jayare, kosher sam, frosted flakes, ax, and tek, ya did ya thing things, this finale here still is gonna need some votes, but either way, good looks to all, 21

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MiracleRic
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23. "archive??"
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this is part of the tourney, so i think this should get archived as well, expect that verse soon, citizens of MiracleVille, kiss the rings bitches, lmao

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MiracleRic
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22. "RE: KING o the Ring ( Grand Finale)"
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aight, lets leave the votes open til friday, if no more votes come in, ima post my first verse as King, and go on a royal pen vacation, 21

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delrica
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24. "Is this one finished too?"
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Cop my stuff, mayne!

My first chapbook: "This Chapbook Was Made With Pilfered Office Products" available now - $6.00

My 2nd chapbook, coming in 2007: "Orgasms and Ice Cream"

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MiracleRic
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25. "RE: Is this one finished too?"
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yup

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