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clarion
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"tell me something about urself"


  

          

howeva u feel to do this is cool..kinda was thinkin of how our words remind me of snowflakes..


me:
God tapped a honeycomb
out i poured w/the queen @ my feet
a sonnet in my spine
w/the ability of ananse

..

  

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Subject Author Message Date ID
me?
Apr 22nd 2004
1
^^
Apr 30th 2004
34
1 at a time then.. "wild eyed lion"
May 11th 2004
86
Survivor --
Apr 22nd 2004
2
surviv-o-r?
Apr 22nd 2004
4
what about u Foneticcus?
Apr 23rd 2004
17
      RE: what about u Foneticcus?
Apr 23rd 2004
19
           *smiles*...
May 01st 2004
37
                awww i wanna hear u
May 03rd 2004
39
not what i expected
May 11th 2004
87
i'm complicated..
Apr 22nd 2004
3
i...
Apr 22nd 2004
5
CoSign!
Apr 22nd 2004
6
      et tu KnowOne?
Apr 23rd 2004
18
RE: i'm complicated..
May 11th 2004
88
im left handed
Apr 22nd 2004
7
sweet and simple
May 11th 2004
89
i am passionate
Apr 22nd 2004
8
do you like being like that ..
May 11th 2004
90
      it's not a matter of me liking it or not
May 11th 2004
98
I am
Apr 22nd 2004
9
I am not sure
May 11th 2004
91
RE: tell me something about urself
Apr 22nd 2004
10
fighting gets tiring
May 11th 2004
92
RE%3A tell me something about urself
twistylox
Apr 22nd 2004
11
wow...
Apr 27th 2004
26
i'm seeing double
May 11th 2004
94
RE: tell me something about urself
twistylox
Apr 22nd 2004
12
more fun
May 11th 2004
95
RE: tell me something about urself
Apr 23rd 2004
13
RE: tell me something about urself
Apr 23rd 2004
14
u've dropped so many elements of urself
Apr 27th 2004
27
that was ill...
May 11th 2004
78
great write
May 11th 2004
96
RE: tell me something about urself
Apr 23rd 2004
15
i'm just trying...
Apr 23rd 2004
16
lyrical and revealing
May 11th 2004
99
RE: tell me something about urself
May 11th 2004
97
i don't write pretty...
Apr 23rd 2004
20
RE: i don't write pretty...
May 06th 2004
48
wow...
May 06th 2004
49
      RE: wow...
May 06th 2004
51
           ha. and ha.
May 06th 2004
52
                RE: ha. and ha.
May 10th 2004
62
                     ok...
May 10th 2004
64
                     child please.
May 10th 2004
65
paperdoll has got to be the...
May 11th 2004
79
she is...
May 11th 2004
81
thank you much.
May 11th 2004
82
RE: i don't write pretty...
May 11th 2004
100
wow
Apr 25th 2004
21
RE: tell me something about urself
Apr 25th 2004
22
RE: tell me something about urself
Apr 25th 2004
23
you have a lot to learn
May 11th 2004
101
      RE: you have a lot to learn
May 13th 2004
120
RE: tell me something about urself
Apr 25th 2004
24
RE: tell me something about urself
Apr 25th 2004
25
but if you're looking for a simple truth...
May 10th 2004
66
lolol
May 10th 2004
67
no i'm not
May 10th 2004
69
it must be true
May 11th 2004
102
that's my kinda response..
May 10th 2004
68
seriously..
Apr 27th 2004
28
RE: seriously..
Apr 27th 2004
30
i...
Apr 27th 2004
29
u remind me
Apr 27th 2004
31
dude, why am i crying?
Apr 27th 2004
32
      gurl what good r my thoughts
Apr 27th 2004
33
ouch
May 11th 2004
103
      some things we keep to ourselves
May 11th 2004
113
i eat the bruised fruit
Apr 30th 2004
35
damn
May 11th 2004
80
quote-unquote, wish i'd written this
May 11th 2004
104
i was.. .
Apr 30th 2004
36
peculiar's an unusual repetition
May 11th 2004
105
RE: tell me something about urself
harlemovement
May 01st 2004
38
"imagining what heaven would be like inside of me"
May 11th 2004
106
RE: tell me something about urself
May 03rd 2004
40
RE: tell me something about urself
May 03rd 2004
41
life..
May 11th 2004
108
RE: tell me something about urself
May 11th 2004
107
feelin
May 04th 2004
42
whoa
May 11th 2004
109
      everythin in due time as they say..
May 18th 2004
131
RE: tell me something about urself
May 04th 2004
43
RE: tell me something about urself
May 11th 2004
110
RE: tell me something about urself
May 04th 2004
44
gasp
May 11th 2004
111
      thx
May 14th 2004
123
^
May 05th 2004
45
u still havent put ur input in...i wanna read
May 06th 2004
46
      lol...persistent aren't we?
May 06th 2004
47
           umm yea..
May 06th 2004
50
           Come On Foneticcus!
May 06th 2004
55
                lol, love is a fickle thing...
May 06th 2004
56
                     RE: lol, love is a fickle thing...
May 06th 2004
57
hmmm......
May 06th 2004
53
RE: hmmm......
May 06th 2004
54
      wow....
May 07th 2004
60
      you're just asking for drama huh? -j/k
May 11th 2004
112
i fall in love too easily...
May 06th 2004
58
RE: i fall in love too easily...
May 13th 2004
122
i
May 06th 2004
59
RE: i
May 11th 2004
114
i am
May 09th 2004
61
RE: i am
May 11th 2004
115
RE: tell me something about urself
May 10th 2004
63
the riddler
May 11th 2004
116
i am me
May 10th 2004
70
mutable rhymes with beautiful
May 11th 2004
117
Pro
May 10th 2004
71
smooth for the rhyming. smart thoughts
May 11th 2004
118
Zin ...One Man ...Amazin
May 10th 2004
72
beautiful reading here
May 10th 2004
73
so where is urs piece...ms. luna.....lolol
May 13th 2004
119
      at least i'm not callin myself 'pretty' hee hee
May 14th 2004
124
           gurl, lolol
May 14th 2004
126
RE: tell me something about urself
May 10th 2004
74
RE: tell me something about urself
Lil Freak
May 10th 2004
75
aww
May 10th 2004
76
tell me about u mara..
May 11th 2004
77
      Mara
May 14th 2004
125
           so simple & sweet kinda what i expected..
May 14th 2004
127
There's A Difference --
May 11th 2004
83
AWOMAN.
May 11th 2004
84
      RE: AWOMAN.
May 11th 2004
85
           cosiggliage del nm
May 11th 2004
93
RE: tell me something about urself
May 13th 2004
121
RE: tell me something about urself
May 17th 2004
128
Who Am I?
May 17th 2004
129
i miss
May 17th 2004
130
Thank U All....
May 18th 2004
132

PlanetInfinite
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1. "me?"
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mother's egg.
father's seed.
produced a wild eyed lion.
taking my chance and your chance at the same time.
life's my playground.
and this is my sandbox.
back off, bitches.

- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -
- new entry 04.22.04
galleries


-added 4.19.04

  

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clarion
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34. "^^"
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; )

..

  

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lunaeco
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86. "1 at a time then.. "wild eyed lion""
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doesn't seem scary to me
nice short description, not too much, not too little.
great character depiction - i think its you in a moment, i like that
bless

~~~


my
blue
song
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PhotoSynthesis
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2. "Survivor --"
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Thu Apr-22-04 12:32 PM

          

Iíve worn a crown of thorns -- Well -- Ever since I was born
Accepting the Queendom of my destiny
Challenging anguish of the forlorned
So every battle conquest is blessed with expressed lyrical fitness
Iíve been doing this shit for too long -- Donít think I'll ever quit this
I wear my thorned crown proudly -- It fits neatly on my head
When trials of life urge pressure -- I bleed a sparkling ruby red
But Iím revived by a *Higher Power* -- So I ainít never left 4 dead

I'm a survivor -- That's right! -- ;^)


Happy now Fon? -- *snickers*

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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4. "surviv-o-r?"
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*smiles @ Pho*

===========================

"Pimping ain't art...but grabbing guns is?!"
(c) Menphyel

"I've come to realise that I never loved Hip-Hop as a whole,
just a particular era that happened at the same time as
I was actively checking actively for new music."

  

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clarion
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17. "what about u Foneticcus?"
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speak on u ; )

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PhotoSynthesis
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19. "RE: what about u Foneticcus?"
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See -- ;^)

He's so busy tryna correct my spelling -- He forgot to throw down a bio flow~stream! -- *hehehe*

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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37. "*smiles*..."
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my words ain't really needed here no more...

not on this board.

===========================

"Pimping ain't art...but grabbing guns is?!"
(c) Menphyel

"I've come to realise that I never loved Hip-Hop as a whole,
just a particular era that happened at the same time as
I was actively checking actively for new music."

  

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clarion
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39. "awww i wanna hear u"
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; )

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lunaeco
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87. "not what i expected"
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wonderful all the same.. from your attitude in here it seems like you're meant to be blessed, not just surviving

"I wear my thorned crown proudly -- It fits neatly on my head
When trials of life urge pressure -- I bleed a sparkling
ruby red
But Iím revived by a *Higher Power* -- So I ainít never left
4 dead"

bless

~~~


my
blue
song
http://au.briefcase.yahoo.com/bc/lilibluu/lst?&.dir=/blue/blue+thoughts+lunavamoloonerdco&.src=bc&.view=l

  

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paperdollpoet
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3. "i'm complicated.."
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like avagadro's number nestled between
toni morrison's bluest eye
and pi
like falling in love with your cousin
then finding out you were really adopted
like trying to give birth
with the baby coming foot first.


---
women writers.

www.sheflypaper.com






www.sheflypaper.com

  

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Foneticcus
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5. "i..."
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dont want u to ever leave this board again.

lol...

not even hiatus.

===========================

"Pimping ain't art...but grabbing guns is?!"
(c) Menphyel

"I've come to realise that I never loved Hip-Hop as a whole,
just a particular era that happened at the same time as
I was actively checking actively for new music."

  

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6. "CoSign!"
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n/m

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"Too weird to live.... too rare to die..."

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clarion
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18. "et tu KnowOne?"
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add something about u..

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88. "RE: i'm complicated.."
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i love the "pi" and the lines preceding
so smart, savvy, sweet
bless

~~~


my
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7. "im left handed"
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and almost 22
and i like ham
and one of my boobs is bigger than the other
and i graduate in may
and somebody loves me & i love them back
and i got writer's block
and im eating caramel corn cakes right now
and im wearin 10 gold bangles on my right wrist
and i want a typewriter
and a job
and some money

and i ramble a lot.

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89. "sweet and simple"
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this comes across as pure and real. i like this:

"and somebody loves me & i love them back"

and i know how you feel on wants and needs. bless

~~~


my
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mindful
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8. "i am passionate"
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you know...passionate

like the ripened apple sitting
in the bottom of your
frige, u too scared to
take a bit out of cuz
savoroing its juices will
cause a toothache...

like rollercoaster rides,
vomiting last nite's dinner,
and then hopping on
again, and again and again.
passionate like your
new next door neighbor
creeping into your life,
just to drain every inch
of want from you...

yeah... i'm like that.












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individual. ©sunshine

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lunaeco
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90. "do you like being like that .."
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i wonder
i don't like being too extreme. its bothersome, painful when its at its worst. i like the poetry that came out of this, just questions
bless

~~~


my
blue
song
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98. "it's not a matter of me liking it or not"
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it's who i am. i embrace b/c it's a piece of me...

i have no choice but to like it. live and learn, and then grow from it, i guess.


















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9. "I am"
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a reflection of the woman that came b4 me
I see everything she could not be
and I flee from everything she wants for me
cuz a reflection is just the exact opposite of what the eyes see
and what the heart lets ya mind believe
the only difference is we will never know who free
the one on the outerside or the woman within me


Intelligently 95 : spoil me mamma, hot oil massage me mamma
Intelligently 95 : lol
Injyl : *vomits*
Intelligently 95 : you know you like that
Injyl : thats it that is my new sig


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-i'm sorry but thou shalt not fux with this nephrew
just cause the nephrew look gooder den a mug don't mean u should give in to the lustful temptations - >:O


I've learned that people will forget what you said, people will forget what you did, but people will never forget how you made them feel.

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91. "I am not sure"
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if this means you and your mother, or you and your outward persona. seems to speak of both to me, and i like that not knowing but still want to know.
bless

~~~


my
blue
song
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10. "RE: tell me something about urself"
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doubt
blind
in love
warrior
of some
kind'


let's play ping pong ■

  

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lunaeco
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92. "fighting gets tiring"
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doesn't mean the fight's not worth it. sometimes its the tactics, the enemy, the no-end-in-sight.
love can be just as bad lol
i'm not making this any better but i hope it's all good
bless

~~~


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twistylox

Thu Apr-22-04 11:41 PM

  
11. "RE%3A tell me something about urself"
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Thu Apr-22-04 11:45 PM

          

*i am of reflection of everything.
i am an inspiration to each and every dusk
to dawn,
that has been spun.
an extension of each and every,
moment
that has yet to be spent...

i am of all that ever was
is
and will be in existence...

i am the reincarnation
of all words ~
ever written, read and thought of...
i am a reversed universe,
and celestrial opposite
of expressions i've yet to express...

and through the Creator,
i write an extension of a de ja vu,
and through the Creator,
these words are reflected
expressions
of the Creator in *You

*i am of everything that you know
and will ever know.
yet nothing you can or will understand.

*i am of every definition
in the most familiar
faces and traces
of every woman and man.
still,
you don't know who i am...

*i am of every part of each
of your 'feel it so much!'
yet, i am that one and only feel,
that you fear and dare not to touch....

*i am of the air you breath,
that sustains your life,
and the lives that live
to sustain your love...
yet, you don't know i'm critically vital and RE'LA'tive...

*i am of everyone and everything connected to you,
yet, i am the every~one~thing you fail to attach to...

*i am at the beginning of every
yesterday
and at the end of each
tomorrow
that has yet to be...

*i am realistically relative,
but only to the 'WE!!!'
i am this earth's universal mirror,
and the reflection of perfected ~
*Harmony

but,
i am different too....
i am more like typically distinct
and
somedays, i wish i was different,
like everybody else...
some nights,
i wish i could be more like the opposite me
and
the opposite of not myself...
sometimes,
i wish i could be jes' like those cool cats,
the strays
that be cattin' and
struttin' by...
cuz' in a world's race of rats
those cool cats don't break no sweat
and they don't have to try to win no respect...
i could jes' blend in,
you know??

and then,
i'd be like the atypical me,
that,
at times,
i wished i would be...
you know,
different and distinct,
like all of those other different and distinct
creatures i see....

now,
when i can be
that kinda' different kind of ordinary,
i know i've achieved what everybody else has already done...
i've blended in,
like all those other different beings...
i can walk around with my head held high,
cuz' i've become one of those other
different kind....
i've become the opposite of the me and not myself...
jes like all those other ~
everybody else...

so,
when i blend into that unique clique
of
cool, different and distinct,
when i become like
the ones that everyone else always notices,
the ones that catch everybody else's focuses...
then,
no one will ever notice that i'm commonly distinct
again...
cuz' i'll be jes' like the different ones,
the ones of blended perfection...
the ones that were uniquely different
before they wisely conformed
and transformed into
another alternate
view of
the other kind of ~ *ordinary distinction* ~

*who am i??
well, who i am is relative to who's looking...
who i am is subjective to who's judging...
who i am is relatively subjective to the view...
and who i am is directly
a relation to the subject of YOU!
who i am is evident
i'm everything ever created...
i am of every ~ one ~ thing that you can see...
yet, i am beyond imagination's creativity...

~basically ~
who i am depends on mostly
~YOU~
and your view
and where
and when
and why
and how you're looking at
me,
*too....

~twistylox

  

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clarion
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26. "wow..."
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i really like this..
*i am realistically relative,
but only to the 'WE!!!'
i am this earth's universal mirror,
and the reflection of perfected ~
*Harmony


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lunaeco
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94. "i'm seeing double"
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this is the kind of thing i write out then wonder what it means, so it makes me relate.
actually, its more together and gelled than what i'd write.. which makes it make even more sense to me than my own thoughts.
if this is who you are, its wonderful.
it sounds like Khalil Gibran type writing too, through the poetic parts..

"*i am of reflection of everything.
i am an inspiration to each and every dusk
to dawn,
that has been spun.
an extension of each and every,
moment
that has yet to be spent..."

what fun
bless

~~~


my
blue
song
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Thu Apr-22-04 11:54 PM

  
12. "RE: tell me something about urself"
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though i am mere,
there is nothing mere about me...
if you really open your mind,
you can understand,
that i am extraordinarily ordinary...
i am of minute greatness...

though i may not be pretty,
if you really open your eyes,
you can see,
the beauty in my plainness...
i am of unique commonality...

though i may be dull,
if you open your ears,
and really listen,
you can hear,
the complexity in my simplicity...
i am of colossal meagerness...

though i may not be mighty,
if you open your heart,
and really feel me,
you will be completely overpowered,
by my subtle aggressiveness,
and all that is unnaturally natural in me..
i am of bounded infiniteness...

*simply me
~~twistylox











  

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lunaeco
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95. "more fun"
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"i am of minute greatness...
...
i am of unique commonality...
...
i am of colossal meagerness...
....
i am of bounded infiniteness..."

your words lead me to agree, not necessarily with the lessers, but the entire lesson here. very philosophical. that's unbefore sunken deep even
bless

~~~


my
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song
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TheFunkyMariachi
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13. "RE: tell me something about urself"
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I AM NOTHING
for how can i write what joyce already wrote?
how can i be quotable, when i've heard so many quotes?
how can i sing reggae, when i've already heard bob marley,
singing and crooning at a soul shakedown party?
how can i break the record, since ron jeremy took thousands to bed?
and how can i rhyme, when Pac is stuck in my head?
The genius inside me is not mine in the least,
i have nothing to say, and i can't speak my piece
The best i can do, is listen to you,
and hope that you got it, that it rings with me true.



-----------------------------
"You know I'm uninsured up in this biatch, my medical plan was NOT to get shot"-The Coup

"You can jail the liberator, but you can't jail the liberation. You can kill the revolutionary, but you can't kill the revolution."

  

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14. "RE: tell me something about urself"
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Feedback would be much appreciated

I AM NOTHING
for how can i write what joyce already wrote?
how can i be quotable, when i've heard so many quotes?
how can i sing reggae, when i've already heard bob marley,
singing and crooning at a soul shakedown party?
how can i break the record, since ron jeremy took thousands to bed?
and how can i rhyme, when Pac is stuck in my head?
The genius inside me is not mine in the least,
i have nothing to say, and i can't speak my piece
The best i can do, is listen to you,
and hope that you got it, that it rings with me true.



-----------------------------
"You know I'm uninsured up in this biatch, my medical plan was NOT to get shot"-The Coup

"You can jail the liberator, but you can't jail the liberation. You can kill the revolutionary, but you can't kill the revolution."

  

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clarion
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27. "u've dropped so many elements of urself"
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in this piece..i c u...

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78. "that was ill..."
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96. "great write"
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this makes me think of a title "the hearer"..
it doesn't seem like its a full disclosure of you, however its a thoughtful provocative way to place yourself, especially in this day and age when everything seems to be on repeat.
i likes. original
bless

~~~


my
blue
song
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15. "RE: tell me something about urself"
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I prefer shadows and fog shrouds over radience of sunlight.

I dream to the tune of lazy, hazy jazz saxophone serenades.
These dreams wander halphazardly between romance and lust as the mood swings from brooding blue meloncholy to violet streaks of contentment.

The sticky sweetness fills my cup until it is half-empty. I soak up every drop, pausing to linger over the tangy scent that remains.

It is dark, and I am thirsty again.


"To be a poet is a condition, not a profession."
- Robert Frost

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16. "i'm just trying..."
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my pockets may not be full but i am great within
some are born to lose, but i was made to win
i maintain my shine in times when faith is dim
iím not trying to save face
iím just trying to stay slim.

iím tired of playing second string on second fiddles
the promise of ďdeath do we partĒ was wasted on widows
keep open your windows of opportunity
keep your calendars clear
this is my day
this is my week
this is my month
this is my year
and waiting around for demand to meet supply has gotten damn demanding
you can call me last kid picked
or you can call me last man standing
but iím
still
here.
and before i can save one person
i must become my personal savior
i must know that my soul glows
without the use of activator
so bring on the uphill climbs
these boots were made for hiking
time to shed my old self-loathing
to something more to my liking
so iím reciting:

my pockets may not be full but i am great within
some are born to lose, but i was made to win
i maintain my shine in times when faith is dim
iím not trying to save face
iím just trying to stay slim.

i never was a funky drummer
i never had that blue eyes croon
all iíve gotís a bunch of words written in my room
but iíve said too much too soon
and now you wonít wanna date me
because weíve replaced all that weíve done
with ďwhat have you done for me latelyĒ
and thatís great
and thatís fine
thatís someoneís measure of success
but of all the ways to size you up
a yardstickís not the best
and i just call Ďem like i see Ďem
and maybe you wonít hear me either
but a friend of mine told me i sparkle inside
and i believe her...

and my mom still calls me rob
just like my grandpa called me butchie
and my homies call me slim
my ex girlfriends call me pushy
or they donít call at all.
(and thatís okay too sometimes.)
iíve been the dialee and the dialer
the shoulder and the crier
iíve seen scorched earth and tidal waves
yeah, iíve seen rain and fire
itís all elementary from where iím sitting.
and if you think iím kidding
try me
please
this is the little light that could
the flash in the flood
the mud in yer eye
the eye in yr witness
the witness to yr revival
the revival in yr barn
the barn to yr dance
the dance to yr music to my ears.
this is the example that has to pacify
the new galactic battlecry
ratpack 3:16 sez i just whooped yr ass
and i can finish the chant at last:

my pockets may not be full but i am great within
some are born to lose, but i was made to win
i maintain my shine in times when faith is dim
iím not trying to save face
iím just learning to stay slim.

-----
"You Sensitive Bastard", Rob Sturma's latest book of poems, is available directly from the author. It's a pretty book with a real ISBN number and everything.

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lunaeco
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99. "lyrical and revealing"
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great words, seems to go off here:

"and if you think iím kidding
try me
please
this is the little light that could
the flash in the flood
the mud in yer eye
the eye in yr witness
the witness to yr revival
the revival in yr barn
the barn to yr dance
the dance to yr music to my ears.
this is the example that has to pacify
the new galactic battlecry
ratpack 3:16 sez i just whooped yr ass
and i can finish the chant at last:"

great chorus too, it's reality, it's really you and how you're feeling/being/wishing.. loved it
bless

~~~


my
blue
song
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97. "RE: tell me something about urself"
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this is poetically wonderful. kind of scary in reality, like how some late night advertise-news-ment was talking about calcium will cure everything including cancer and then something else said you need two hours of sunlight everyday and i remember times where i'd live for the late quiet stillness and jazz and dark wonderhours and how i wasn't able to bloom in that environment. like there needs to be some middleground.
i loved the start, the whole vibe, but if its self-descriptive i hope you're getting those 2 hours of sunshine
bless

~~~


my
blue
song
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paperdollpoet
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20. "i don't write pretty..."
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my words don't do ballet. they aren't classicly trained to mimic swans.

my words are more like women who close their eyes at clubs and just move. without caring what they look like. or if they sweat. or if they fall off beat for a second.

but moreso..

my words are like cuban women on street corners with runny mascra..the women who catch a faint sound of drums, from far away and start to move their tired hips.

cause cuban women are poetry. and runny mascra tells a story. and tired hips is not spoon feeding you her circumstances. and her dance is more outta hope than talent.

thats what i do.

pretty ain't got shit on me.

---
women writers.

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48. "RE: i don't write pretty..."
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your words are hidden behind the evil thoughts you have about people you dont know.Stop critizing what others write,and if thats you.change

Pretty Girl

  

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49. "wow..."
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Thu May-06-04 02:32 AM

  

          

didn't paperdoll already clear this up in her other post? how 'pretty' is a dictionary word, just like 'handsome', 'beautiful', 'hideous', 'sublime', & every other adjective in the dictionary that could be used to describe smthg?

===========================

"Pimping ain't art...but grabbing guns is?!"
(c) Menphyel

"I've come to realise that I never loved Hip-Hop as a whole,
just a particular era that happened at the same time as
I was actively checking actively for new music."

  

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PRETTY GIRL
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51. "RE: wow..."
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Listen i sont know you so why are you responding.Its not your comment that was made.Dealing with her is my thing no one else

Pretty Girl

  

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paperdollpoet
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52. "ha. and ha."
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you really need to get another subject to post about.


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pretty ain't got shit on me. © lei





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PRETTY GIRL
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62. "RE: ha. and ha."
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ha ha ha I was just thinking that same thing paper,
keep my name out ya mouth

Pretty Girl

  

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64. "ok..."
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this piece was meant to express something about urself..im not sure what ur beefs r..but seriously i wanted this to be positive reflection of who u r--

so pretty put something down about who u r..cause im feelin alias on u..be u..if u have somethin to say to paper hit that inbox up...

peace n blessing lil mamas...


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65. "child please."
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aulelei (which is my birth name) means pretty/beautiful/attractive in samoan.


so should i make the assumption that you are trying to be like me?

no because thats absurd.

"pretty", for the last time, is a word. one that was created before you thought "hey that would be a neat screen name, and it would look even better in all caps.."..before you could pronounce it or spell it...before you even knew what pretty meant..it was a word.

so until you show me copyrighted materials that state that the WORD pretty can and only will be used in reference to you then:

pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty
pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty
pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty
pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty
pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty
pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty
pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty
pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty
pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty
pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty
pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty
pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty
pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty

*cough*
pretty ain't got shit on me. (c) paperohhhhhsoooflybeenprettylifetimesbeforedoll.


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79. "paperdoll has got to be the..."
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flyest! you better be putting together a book!

  

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the flyest...


















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could be
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82. "thank you much."
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that means a lot coming from someone whose work i enjoy.


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lunaeco
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100. "RE: i don't write pretty..."
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realness, its funny how when asked about yourself, you write through your words.
fearless, fantastic, real:

"my words don't do ballet. they aren't classicly trained to
mimic swans."
---my words do origami, straight sheets become crumpled crumbs for the rubbish hee hee, just made me think.

"my words are more like women who close their eyes at clubs
and just move. without caring what they look like. or if
they sweat. or if they fall off beat for a second."

this seems to talk more about self, even as extension of self its really cool

"but moreso..

my words are like cuban women on street corners with runny
mascra..the women who catch a faint sound of drums, from far
away and start to move their tired hips.

cause cuban women are poetry. and runny mascra tells a
story. and tired hips is not spoon feeding you her
circumstances. and her dance is more outta hope than talent.

thats what i do.

pretty ain't got shit on me."

wonderful, on-point with your images because your words are dancing right before me, not with some "i'm pretty, look at me" vibe, more like a naturally infectious rythm where you have to feel it.

bless

~~~


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clarion
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21. "wow"
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Sun Apr-25-04 10:26 AM

  

          

at the reflections in this ocean of words...


the creativity falls off of some of yall like rain on umbrella..right now mine's has a hole in it
i appreciate yall gettin my hair wet..

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22. "RE: tell me something about urself"
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radiohead is my favorite band.



*********************************

she loves me...more than she knows.

exist in limbo.

"when my love comes to see me itís
just a little like music,a
little more like curving colour(say
orange)
against silence,or darknessÖ" -e.e. cummings


"we are accidents waiting to happen" -radiohead

"Poetry is a kind of distilled insinuation. Itís a way of expanding and talking around an idea or a question. Sometimes, more actually gets said through such a technique than a full frontal assault." -Yusef Komunyakaa

"The Black Artist's role in America is to aid in the destruction of America as he knows it. His role is to report and reflect so precisely the nature of the society, and of himself in that society, that other men will be moved by the exactness of his rendering and, if they are black men, grow strong through this moving, having seen their own strength, and weakness; and if they are white men, tremble, curse, and go mad, because they will be drenched with the filth of their evil."

-Amiri Baraka, from "State/meant" in the essay, "Home"

"My love is my soul's imagination. How do I love thee?...Imagine." -Saul Williams

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myself is sculptor of
your bodyís idiom:
the musician of your wrists;
the poet who is afraid
only to mistranslate
a rhythm in your hair...
-E.E. Cummings

  

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soulchild
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23. "RE: tell me something about urself"
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Iím young.
I still crawl on the fuzz of lifeís peaches
My mind reaches only a few years of sun and rain
My memory lane is more like a street block
Strolling consciously as far back as 1993
But thatís just me
Canít say that Iíve felt, first hand, the jazz gland
That once vibrated in John Coltraneís loins
Nor could I join in brassy parades of renegades
ďWe Shall OvercomeĒing national barricades
Foreign objects include records and A-tracks
Jerri Curls, fly girls, and the use of fanny packs.
The artist formally known as Prince
has never gyrated his twiggy hips on any of my stages
Puberty is a war that wages
Pimples dot my gauges of facial expression
16 years have left only sporadic chicken pock marks
and itís dreams of the future that spark my words.
Iím un-molded clay, just a couple rings on the tree,
Iím young and un-calloused,
and thatís just me.


___________________________
-Phyllis-


...that is all...

  

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101. "you have a lot to learn"
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you're absolutely gorgeous!!! this poem's got me tripping!

for a start, the start is perfection

"Iím young.
I still crawl on the fuzz of lifeís peaches "

got me thinking timidity, babies crawling, momotaro-the japanese fairy story about the old childless couple finding a little baby in a peach and then

"My mind reaches only a few years of sun and rain
My memory lane is more like a street block
Strolling consciously as far back as 1993
But thatís just me
Canít say that Iíve felt, first hand, the jazz gland
That once vibrated in John Coltraneís loins
Nor could I join in brassy parades of renegades
ďWe Shall OvercomeĒing national barricades
Foreign objects include records and A-tracks
Jerri Curls, fly girls, and the use of fanny packs.
The artist formally known as Prince
has never gyrated his twiggy hips on any of my stages"

this is great. its listing what you don't understand, but something in the listing makes me think you'll at least be open to..

"Puberty is a war that wages
Pimples dot my gauges of facial expression
16 years have left only sporadic chicken pock marks
and itís dreams of the future that spark my words.
Iím un-molded clay, just a couple rings on the tree,
Iím young and un-calloused,
and thatís just me."

keep racking up those notches - i hope i'm able to read more of your words. wonderful
bless

~~~


my
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soulchild
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120. "RE: you have a lot to learn"
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hey, thanks for the read.
i think that it's not so much that i have a lot to learn, because i've learned about many of these things. But I feel like there are things that one has to experience first hand to really understand and to really KNOW about, y'know...
___________________________
-Phyllis-


.waiting.

  

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Mc_Gr3y
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24. "RE: tell me something about urself"
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im freakier than riq and malik when i speak
a star thatll never burn out, i rise but never peak

(>_o)



































hitler's momma got one big titty and one little titty,
and they call that bitch Biggie Smalls


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delrica
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25. "RE: tell me something about urself"
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Delrica was released from the Smurfland Institute for the Smurfily Sane two moons ago when her friend, Moxie the Trick Pony, admitted herself in Delrica's stead. She now frolics amidst poets and writers under the guise of a webmaster for www.4luvofpoetry.com, has somehow landed herself the job of the DC/Baltimore Slam Master and talks to herself often. To read more about her disease, Smurfonia, you can visit her at www.geocities.com/delricaa.

----------------------
Cop my stuff, mayne!

My first chapbook: "This Chapbook Was Made With Pilfered Office Products" available now - $6.00

My 2nd chapbook, coming in 2007: "Orgasms and Ice Cream"

fmi: http://www.myspace.com/delrica

  

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delrica
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66. "but if you're looking for a simple truth..."
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they stuffed ME in a
pint of ice cream and labeled me
world's best chocolate!!

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Cop my stuff, mayne!

My first chapbook: "This Chapbook Was Made With Pilfered Office Products" available now - $6.00

My 2nd chapbook, coming in 2007: "Orgasms and Ice Cream"

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clarion
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67. "lolol"
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u still Smurfette...lolol...

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delrica
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69. "no i'm not"
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>u still Smurfette...lolol...


I'm D-Lo Smurfoni Smurfette ...the black smurf that always got away from Gargamel first...and that no one ever talked about...because we keep our best smurf secrets on the downlow...*noddin*

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Cop my stuff, mayne!

My first chapbook: "This Chapbook Was Made With Pilfered Office Products" available now - $6.00

My 2nd chapbook, coming in 2007: "Orgasms and Ice Cream"

fmi: http://www.myspace.com/delrica

  

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lunaeco
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102. "it must be true"
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i read it on okayplayer?

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68. "that's my kinda response.."
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dude that's jus way to much!!!

LMAO!!

~~~~~~~~ luv R.
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psycho.
"Institutions encourage us to consider the opinions they sell as "facts" and that we "believe" rather than question the morality they pitch."
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clarion
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28. "seriously.."
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*U* remind me of slips of paper
Sliding between the hands of children
Of expressions that r so honest & gentle
That breeze pass the teacher

Man I luv the way yall write

..

  

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beatnik
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30. "RE: seriously.."
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strong silent type, and i know more than i think i do...

PEACE LOVE and MONEY

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mindful
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29. "i..."
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Tue Apr-27-04 03:17 AM

  

          

am razor sharp---
keen... nice point
to my tip. my words
will cut u, slash wounds
deep into your flesh...

leave u lying in ur
blood... begging for
my help...

and i
will
deny
u
it.



















================
are one
individual. ©sunshine


------------------------------
my work
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clarion
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31. "u remind me"
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of a castle at times...
sand blasted..
soaked in heat of the oven..
ur words at times r a moat
yet a bridge inside ur soul..

(an u know what i could go on but for u tre..
the real beauty is ur cocoon..
the things that nurtures & nourishes u
surprise me..so fuck that butterfly..
i luv that caterpillar..u hear me sis..)

..

  

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32. "dude, why am i crying?"
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i can't fuck wit u chandra

u be having me tearing up all of the time man.

*happy tears tho*

*very happy indeed*



















================
are one
individual. ©sunshine


------------------------------
my work
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clarion
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33. "gurl what good r my thoughts"
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at times wrap around my brain w/o sharing them...u deserve it..i felt i should tell my lil sis...but ive told u the best things about u r the things that u dont see...keep being sweet ms. tremaine..

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103. "ouch"
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i don't see this sharpness in your other pieces. seems like you're defining where you want to draw the line (i can't find the words i mean) but its wonderful poetry, not sure if you're really that harsh is what i mean
bless

~~~


my
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mindful
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113. "some things we keep to ourselves"
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...

it's only best to do so.


















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could be
release. ©the jazzyfatnastees


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mylife
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35. "i eat the bruised fruit"
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because i know that sometimes
i am delicious beyond my scars

i am silent when angry
because i know that sometimes
i am capable of 'too much'

i am fierce in my love
because i know that sometimes
softness just isn't enough

i am frightened of myself
because i know that sometimes
i am unaware of the depth of my pain

i am like taffy left in the sun
because i know that sometimes
my vulnerability is my only asset

i am weakened by his touch
because i know that sometimes
his fire absolves my impurities

i am capable of UN-learning
because i know that sometimes
there is no truth to what i know

i am evolution in progress
because i know that sometimes
i dream of a me that held fire in her hands
and walked upon the seas
and i see all of my future selves
in the clouds of doubt in your eyes

i am more than the space between us
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

...happiness is a dark thing to pursue...and the pursuit of it a dark thing as well. ~steve erickson

him: the problem with this generation is that the women got all of the balls.
her: is that good or bad?
him: i don't know...

  

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80. "damn"
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line for line...you truly know who you are.

  

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lunaeco
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104. "quote-unquote, wish i'd written this"
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stunning vision of you, love, the way you love and are.. heartfelt
bless

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untaintedLove
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36. "i was.. ."
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born on the shores of neglect.
eventually adopted by liberation.
art became my nativity.
it's sweat....
poured into the root of the tree that sprang forth
strange fruit
for people like you to taste
so i guess i'm from a pecular place
born to a pecular race
and given a pecular, yet beautiful purpose.


*go ahead... climb the ladder... i'll sit here and wait for the wood to rot
-UntaiNted

Blacks were 3/5s of a man with tax purposes intended ~ You think you a afro-american, you a 14th ammendment.
Rass Kass:: Nature of the Threat

Curiosity Killed The Catechism
Com:: G.O.D.

  

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lunaeco
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105. "peculiar's an unusual repetition"
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i was reading something the other day about how the more exposure people have to something, the more easily accepted it is.. i hope you also realise peculiar=special

"born on the shores of neglect.
eventually adopted by liberation.
art became my nativity.
it's sweat....
poured into the root of the tree that sprang forth
strange fruit
for people like you to taste
so i guess i'm from a pecular place
born to a pecular race
and given a pecular, yet beautiful purpose."

beautiful read. a little sad, i hope you feel special.
bless

~~~


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harlemovement

Sat May-01-04 06:01 PM

  
38. "RE: tell me something about urself"
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i am what i said i was going to be at the age of 3. a girl with a crayon in her left hand and pictures in her right. imagining what heaven would be like inside of me.


------------pay attention here:
"two words."
bring something new to the table, bitch!-samo.4

  

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lunaeco
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106. ""imagining what heaven would be like inside of me""
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wish i could draw.
you're blessed and this was a great way to explain it
bless

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wolfie
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40. "RE: tell me something about urself"
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i am made of flower petals,
victims of wayward affections
pieced backed together to create my form.
i am forgotten love.

where the ocean kisses the land is where I was born.
birthed at the line the marks the furthest extension of the sea,
I was brought into the world with the force of a rip tide.

~*~*~*~*~*~*~newolf~*~*~*~*~*~*~

the light: so, you're having a pre-pre-midlfe crisis?
wolfie: yes.
the light: well, that's wonderful!


icantspell

  

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41. "RE: tell me something about urself"
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i'm scared to admit that i'm a writer
i daydream a lot
i have music in my body, mind and soul
i love my family with all my heart

i see opportunity in almost everything
and right now i have a writer's block
cause i'm content with my life

-------||||||-----REEEEEEEMMIXXXXX!!!!!!!

i carry weight on my shoulder like mine worker
worry bout other peolple though it's not my concern
try to be happy...whatever the cost
scared of my emotions cause they're really strong
kinda distant from the creator and for him i do long

*at the height of my excitement...writer's block knocks me out K.O* don't know what to say

******************************************
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Men write notes to her music - revion

  

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lunaeco
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108. "life.."
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this feels like me at times.. not the scared to admit i'm a writer but everything after..

"i carry weight on my shoulder like mine worker
worry bout other peolple though it's not my concern
try to be happy...whatever the cost
scared of my emotions cause they're really strong
kinda distant from the creator and for him i do long"

inspiration dropped off, so what, this is complete for where you're at now. that's cool, you're more passionate in this end part, but you leave it on a question.
bless

~~~


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lunaeco
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107. "RE: tell me something about urself"
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this expression makes me feel your passion, like you're a forceful person now. i wonder why you chose to write about yourself through describing birth and nature, intriguing
bless

~~~


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clarion
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42. "feelin"
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Infectious w/insatiable thoughts
Of animated details of interludes
&
loops w/o the hooks..

a diatribe of expressions
fester at the tip of my
tongue saturated w/sex
longin 4 the moment
to submerge in between the lips
of funk
engulf his sweetness
that keeps me wet
on his long days from home

..

  

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109. "whoa"
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"Infectious w/insatiable thoughts
Of animated details of interludes
&
loops w/o the hooks.."

really draws you in.. that's wrong. i'm unable to take erotic poetry seriously, but you had me with this:

"a diatribe of expressions
fester at the tip of my
tongue saturated w/sex
longin 4 the moment
to submerge in between the lips
of funk
engulf his sweetness
that keeps me wet
on his long days from home"

sad too. hope he's back soon
bless

~~~


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clarion
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131. "everythin in due time as they say.."
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when most of these thoughts come about..im listenin to somethin n feinin..lolol..so at this time this is my best outlet..


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paperdollpoet
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43. "RE: tell me something about urself"
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i am always on
the back streets of memory lane
trying to find short cuts
from which i came.

---
::::::

pretty ain't got shit on me. © lei





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lunaeco
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110. "RE: tell me something about urself"
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reminds me of when i was little and we used to move a lot, how within weeks we'd have mapped out the whole area.. know exactly where the parks and creeks and funspots-for-kids were..
but it also makes me think of you and what you're wondering here
bless

~~~


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Iconoclast
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44. "RE: tell me something about urself"
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i am conversation and revolution's love child
triple born under kilimanjaro's eyelids,
i scent-stride among words
though i'm still a cub...

poets are the midwives of reality--John Keats

do something before it exists, sense something before it becomes active, see something before it sprouts - Book of Balance and Harmony

"You can't finish hot soup in one gulp, you must sip slowly...

  

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lunaeco
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111. "gasp"
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"i am conversation and revolution's love child
triple born under kilimanjaro's eyelids,
i scent-stride among words
though i'm still a cub..."

define poetic.
bless

~~~


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blue
song
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Iconoclast
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123. "thx"
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...

poets are the midwives of reality--John Keats

do something before it exists, sense something before it becomes active, see something before it sprouts - Book of Balance and Harmony

"You can't finish hot soup in one gulp, you must sip slowly...

  

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Foneticcus
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45. "^"
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===========================

"Pimping ain't art...but grabbing guns is?!"
(c) Menphyel

"I've come to realise that I never loved Hip-Hop as a whole,
just a particular era that happened at the same time as
I was actively checking actively for new music."

  

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clarion
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46. "u still havent put ur input in...i wanna read"
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man...

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47. "lol...persistent aren't we?"
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===========================

"Pimping ain't art...but grabbing guns is?!"
(c) Menphyel

"I've come to realise that I never loved Hip-Hop as a whole,
just a particular era that happened at the same time as
I was actively checking actively for new music."

  

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clarion
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50. "umm yea.."
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plus im nosy..i wanna see how u decorate urself..

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PhotoSynthesis
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55. "Come On Foneticcus!"
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To know you is to love you -- And some of us ALREADY love you -- We just don't know you that well -- (((SPEAK)))


*Fill In The Blanks* -- ;^)

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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Foneticcus
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56. "lol, love is a fickle thing..."
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===========================

"Pimping ain't art...but grabbing guns is?!"
(c) Menphyel

"I've come to realise that I never loved Hip-Hop as a whole,
just a particular era that happened at the same time as
I was actively checking actively for new music."

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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57. "RE: lol, love is a fickle thing..."
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Thu May-06-04 11:02 AM

          

*REAL* -- Honest, Sincere and Mature love is NOT fickle, Fonn! -- (((Forreal Tho))) -- ;^)

Some folks just throw the word *love* around carelessly -- Sometimes when they mean LUST or INFATUATION or just plain CURIOSITY laced with interest -- Or self~seeking love -- Or Conditional love.

But Unconditional, Honest, Sincere & Mature love is worth the effort & risk -- *Trust*


*Word*


Now throw summthin' down and quit stalling dammittt! -- *LoL*

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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KnowOne
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53. "hmmm......"
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I always have & probably always will feel that my work sucks.

This board has done more for me & my writing they I could ever do in return.

and lastly......the 1st line in my sig:

_________________________________________
"Too weird to live.... too rare to die..."

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54. "RE: hmmm......"
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Thu May-06-04 09:05 AM

  

          

ive always wanted to ask,what exactly does that mean? In ur writing or ur persona that u put forth here..
i know u wont take this the wrong way..so

U remind me of the moon
meticulously dancing over
a lake
ur aptitude
for composing
thoughts w/depths of a meteor
Crashing to earth
Yet keeping some of us mesmerized
By ur honesty of a soul that has
Been torn & mended like a rag doll
Iíll pull out a telescope each time u write

each time lil brotha..each time.. ; )

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KnowOne
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60. "wow...."
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moving words Sis'.....I appreciate it!

Keep Flowin'.......

_________________________________________
"Too weird to live.... too rare to die..."

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lunaeco
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112. "you're just asking for drama huh? -j/k"
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everytime i see a reference to the moon i do a doubletake.. sorry..
bless

~~~


my
blue
song
http://au.briefcase.yahoo.com/bc/lilibluu/lst?&.dir=/blue/blue+thoughts+lunavamoloonerdco&.src=bc&.view=l

  

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Morehouse
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58. "i fall in love too easily..."
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its in the woman's eyes.

she got me
she got me...

peace


*********************************

she loves me...more than she knows.

exist in limbo.

"when my love comes to see me itís
just a little like music,a
little more like curving colour(say
orange)
against silence,or darknessÖ" -e.e. cummings


"we are accidents waiting to happen" -radiohead

"Poetry is a kind of distilled insinuation. Itís a way of expanding and talking around an idea or a question. Sometimes, more actually gets said through such a technique than a full frontal assault." -Yusef Komunyakaa

"The Black Artist's role in America is to aid in the destruction of America as he knows it. His role is to report and reflect so precisely the nature of the society, and of himself in that society, that other men will be moved by the exactness of his rendering and, if they are black men, grow strong through this moving, having seen their own strength, and weakness; and if they are white men, tremble, curse, and go mad, because they will be drenched with the filth of their evil."

-Amiri Baraka, from "State/meant" in the essay, "Home"

"My love is my soul's imagination. How do I love thee?...Imagine." -Saul Williams

***********************************
http://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id=500290931


myself is sculptor of
your bodyís idiom:
the musician of your wrists;
the poet who is afraid
only to mistranslate
a rhythm in your hair...
-E.E. Cummings

  

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revion
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122. "RE: i fall in love too easily..."
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co-sign
she must just look at me a certain way and i'm hers for the taking....Damn if only it was the other way round

******************************************
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"i created a record label just to release this artist,listen to the music and you'll understand why"

Men write notes to her music - revion

  

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mindful
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59. "i"
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drool in my sleep
making puddles
with dreams,
wasting years,
hoping
the next one
will offer more
good than
the last.



















================
are one
individual. ©sunshine


------------------------------
my work
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lunaeco
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114. "RE: i"
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i love how each one of these poems about yourself brings up another facet, so here's the sensitivity i was asking about in the last i guess. beautiful writing, relatable with the drool lol
bless

~~~


my
blue
song
http://au.briefcase.yahoo.com/bc/lilibluu/lst?&.dir=/blue/blue+thoughts+lunavamoloonerdco&.src=bc&.view=l

  

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clarion
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61. "i am"
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an echo of love
in the canyon of life
howled by motherís mother

i am blind teacher



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lunaeco
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115. "RE: i am"
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"an echo of love..."
beautiful
bless

~~~


my
blue
song
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DeCisive
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63. "RE: tell me something about urself"
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I exist in a paradox of what is
and what can be assumed
I am consumed by truth
I use music and spoken words as a tool
I communicate to you through passion
and navigate through visions in an unorthadox but orderly fashion
I represent the past
That means tomorrow is about to get passed again.

~Complex with the creative content on a conquest with concepts and context as concrete as poetry
~Its real and ill when I be sitting still yet still rocking to my mental rhythme.
~Its just right when I write

http://www.myspace.com/decisive147

  

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lunaeco
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116. "the riddler"
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a bit tongue-twisting.. i like the way you express the truth here
bless

~~~


my
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humblemumble
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70. "i am me"
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& the me you get changes from
second to minute to hour to day
today i feel like loving
wanna give something free
something for you to keep
close to you for comfort
put it in that private place
b/c tomorrow
i might show you another me
& you will love it still
but you just my not
want to keep it...


  

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lunaeco
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117. "mutable rhymes with beautiful"
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"& the me you get changes from
second to minute to hour to day
today i feel like loving"

knowing yourself can be interesting
bless

~~~


my
blue
song
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Prolific1022
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71. "Pro"
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i am
a konfined Krishna
a clandestine Christ
seeking the ability
to recognize my inner divinity
my family tree
is the holy trinity
i am constantly reborn
like a Pheonix from ashes cindering
activistfist raised
through glass celings
i send fragments splintering
delivering ideas
like an old earth giving birth
not afraid to Garvey up
and put in my work



----------------------------
Epitaph

in the beginning
the Word was with God
and the Word was God
when the Word was Spoken
to me poetry became more
than just another token
art form adorning a
dead white man's epitaph
---------------------------
"The World is a Stage...
We Own it!" -- The Cataclysm
"i came here to whip ass and chew bubble gum
and i'm all out of bubblelicious"
--Substantial

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"You can only be destroyed by believing you really are what the white world calls a nigger."
--James Baldwin

  

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lunaeco
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118. "smooth for the rhyming. smart thoughts"
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this got deep without knowing it as i read, the rhymes flowed with ease.

"delivering ideas
like an old earth giving birth"

bless

~~~


my
blue
song
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Zin
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72. "Zin ...One Man ...Amazin"
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Even tho ..this nukka boastful Östill a gracious host for ..hotness embeddedÖ in any painful words wrote Önext manís pain or shame Öalways listening close to ..for those who understand knowledge of self ..can always helpÖ living in the world by my self Öthe village crumbled Öaround me the walls ..came down ..i was exposed to ..the wickedness ..and emptiness Öof friends and foes too Ö I learned Ö ď whoís gonna look out for you betta than you?Ē Ö he who has wifie the demon with seeds planted Ö ride chariots set ablazeÖfuck horse and carriage Ödevout Christian you change ..divorce ya marriage Öand hell fire be ya name the scroll you carry Ö

sig.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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lunaeco
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73. "beautiful reading here"
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i enjoyed all these words, thoughts, streams.. thanks

~~~


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clarion
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119. "so where is urs piece...ms. luna.....lolol"
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see i watch how u decorate urself show us why u eclipse the sun...lol

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lunaeco
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124. "at least i'm not callin myself 'pretty' hee hee"
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here's my piece. was going to post an older one, but you mentioned eclipse
bless

Öan ever spinning arc
twisting perception
to perfect an ellipse
then turning tides to an intrinsic rhythm
not sure where it comes from
somewhere inside
outside
up there in the music

but Iím off-beat, off-centre, out-of-tune, out-of time

I float on momentum
get enmeshed in the galaxy
if this glass is ever half-empty
itís not what I meant it to be
never want to seem blue
Önor feel it too
I wax and wane though
still and always
come back to full

for you know i hold
potential
infinite

..a woman
reaching with arms outstretched
towards the light

his love a larger mass
an unseen force,
gravity
a strong arm around me
knowing no corners, shortcuts
i love between worlds
of day and night, north and south
straddling the earth
so neither hemisphere owns me
see iím only here temporarily
hardly long enough to notice

Öa note
wilder than free, sweeter than sugar
unleashed energy

Öa dream
in that soft space between
sleep and wakefulness

Öa woman
reaching with arms outstretched

Önoone knows the origin
Öof my shine

Önot even me




~~~


my
blue
song
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clarion
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126. "gurl, lolol"
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ms. luna ur indeed a beautiful writer whose words move the tides of the wavering sea...i like these lines..& thank u
a note
wilder than free, sweeter than sugar
unleashed energy

Öa dream
in that soft space between
sleep and wakefulness

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InFluenCe
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74. "RE: tell me something about urself"
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...a complex box
curious like a kid opening
presents on a christmas day
everything done for the love
like mother theresa on a confused day
puttin an influence on us
like jesus does to christians...

______________________
i try to practice my war like tactics, but in the clutch of your touch my armor just collapses - mighty mos def

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75. "RE: tell me something about urself"
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A young kid lookin for a big mans dreams
Lookin at things makin them look better than it really seems
Dont sware in my rhymes, and dont like cursin
Cuz im not an asshole or a bad type of person
Love to battle anyone who wants to step to the plate
Respect almost everyone, dont love to hate
This is me, and this is who i am
Sweat tears, blood, it all goes hand in hand
Workin for greatness, gram by gram
Im Lil' Freak, so tell me how you like me now

  

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mara
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76. "aww"
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That is beautiful Clarion.

*I'm hella hella sexy*

  

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77. "tell me about u mara.."
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u r not exempt..speak lil mama..lolol

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125. "Mara"
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My inner child is
four years old and she misses
her father deeply

*I'm hella hella sexy*

  

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clarion
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127. "so simple & sweet kinda what i expected.."
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*****************************
Feelin
Infectious w/insatiable thoughts
Of animated details of interludes
&
loops w/o the hooks..
a diatribe of expressions
fester at the tip of my
tongue saturated w/sex
longin 4 the moment
his sweetness to submerge in between the lips


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PhotoSynthesis
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83. "There's A Difference --"
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Between this kind of post vs. an "Introduce Yourself" post with name, age, favorite color/food/poet, etc.

I like this kind better because it transcends "labels" and speaks about the essence of who we really are! -- *smiles*


(((ARCHIVE PLEASE)))


Can I get an AMEN?

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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paperdollpoet
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84. "AWOMAN."
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aka i agree.


---
::::::

pretty ain't got shit on me. © lei





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delrica
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85. "RE: AWOMAN."
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lol

ya'll are funny.

I'll give this about a week longer to go and then I'll archive (that is of course if that was a cosign)

----------------------
Cop my stuff, mayne!

My first chapbook: "This Chapbook Was Made With Pilfered Office Products" available now - $6.00

My 2nd chapbook, coming in 2007: "Orgasms and Ice Cream"

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mindful
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93. "cosiggliage del nm"
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================
could be
release. ©the jazzyfatnastees


------------------------------
my work
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http://www.lulu.com/content/7598631
http://evan-roth.com/grey.php

  

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Soulbrotha
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121. "RE: tell me something about urself"
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>howeva u feel to do this is cool..kinda was thinkin of how
>our words remind me of snowflakes..
>
>
>me:
>God tapped a honeycomb
>out i poured w/the queen @ my feet
>a sonnet in my spine
>w/the ability of ananse

Me:

A gift from the Almighty
young, shaven and shorn
Grew some wings
He clipped them off
one feather by one
Ventured into unknown territories
some dark, some terrifying
through everything till now
in the process of working
still learning...

and being perfected for His coming.

"Do to others what you would others have done unto you." - The Lord Jesus Christ

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delrica
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128. "RE: tell me something about urself"
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Last week for this ya'll. Goes into archive Friday!

----------------------
Cop my stuff, mayne!

My first chapbook: "This Chapbook Was Made With Pilfered Office Products" available now - $6.00

My 2nd chapbook, coming in 2007: "Orgasms and Ice Cream"

fmi: http://www.myspace.com/delrica

  

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Decstar
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129. "Who Am I?"
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a boy that's trapped in a man's body
with no source of adbodimy,
but the artistry
is a myth, you see,
i feel like i have powers, when i only have dreams,
and i give free words, but they seem like forced seeds,
and when i feel like i'm givin up, it's like treason,
because for some reason,
i'm believing,
that it's a purpose for me breathing,
and seeing,
future motion pictures
that i've already ventured,
see i come from a broken past
of a broken passion
that seemed to keep passing,
drop soemthing off that he knew couldnt grasp,
now i'm a brand new art form,
inbetween swarms,
birth into the struggle
that has to be the hustle
that i've grown to take advantage of
with very little love,
and i'm sorry that this was suppose to be a little, but i figured ya'll used to biting off more than you can chew,
so peep the view,
i'm abstract
like flashbacks
of a past back
that shot up too fast like wet crack,
and to figure i was a disposal,
but somehow turned to gold,
now i dont mean to toot my own horn,
but the boy is fresh with words like blood of a new born,
yet i'm so torn and these streets keep calling me,
and i'm late on some education and truth and my life still writes to this beat,
i still somewhat fight to be free,
but i have this sheets,
and between these lines is all my world needs to be,
all the little things you need to know about me
so, i apoligize in future time
if i boggle your mind,
cause this is my time
and my grind,
and all i got is my heart and will as my wealth,
so if you take this as small change, this penny is a lil something about myself

"There is nothing more poetic, but depressing than a male writer" -yours truly

  

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LaDeeDeF_99
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Mon May-17-04 03:25 PM

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130. "i miss"
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i miss love.
warmth. security. and beauty.
dreams that dont seem impossible.
living life to the fullest.
having a heart that beats too fast like youre on a roller coaster.
circling dates on my calendar, other than the dates of my cycle.
sleeping without interruption. sleeping on his chest. sleeping without the aid of tylenol.

peace
ladee

  

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clarion
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Tue May-18-04 04:09 PM

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132. "Thank U All...."
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i enjoyed reading all of these seriously..i sit somedays reading ur writing(s) thinkin to myself how do they see themselves..i mean we all speak about moments & politics..be i rarely see u speak on u..how u feelin about urself..

U guys r beautiful..may blessing of positivity & joy touch u & spread..

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