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delrica
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"July AOTM: Zin aka Amazin' aka "Dat Murried Nug""


  

          

Congratulations, Zin!

You know how this works brotha...now drop it like it's hot!

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Cop my stuff, mayne!

My first chapbook: "This Chapbook Was Made With Pilfered Office Products" available now - $6.00

My 2nd chapbook, coming in 2007: "Orgasms and Ice Cream"

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Subject Author Message Date ID
Congratz Nukka.....
Jul 01st 2004
1
*nods* now... get to it nm
Jul 01st 2004
2
congrats
Jul 01st 2004
3
RE: July AOTM: Zin aka Amazin' aka
Jul 01st 2004
4
it didn't hurt as much as i thought it would
Jul 01st 2004
5
RE: July AOTM: YAY ZIN
Jul 01st 2004
8
i wish i had more hands...
Jul 01st 2004
9
congrats Zin, do that damn thang ;)
Jul 01st 2004
18
What the....
Jul 02nd 2004
29
Mic Check
Jul 01st 2004
6
RE: July AOTM: Zin aka Amazin' aka "Dat Murried Nug"
Jul 01st 2004
7
Zin
Jul 01st 2004
10
The Poetry (summer's for gotten tune)
Jul 01st 2004
11
Barren Orchard( The Short verison)
Jul 01st 2004
12
Get Together
Jul 01st 2004
13
damn nice
Jul 07th 2004
38
nice.....and I usually...
Jul 14th 2004
59
RE: Get Together
Jul 14th 2004
60
RE: Get Together
Jul 14th 2004
61
RE: Get Together
Jul 21st 2004
66
i wanna read this
Jul 31st 2004
95
Good Morning~ Love
Jul 01st 2004
14
Awwwwwww --
Jul 08th 2004
43
*nodding head*
Jul 01st 2004
17
Till Death do us
Jul 02nd 2004
26
Work Place Jones
Jul 02nd 2004
27
RE: Work Place Jones
Jul 02nd 2004
28
cute...
Jul 05th 2004
31
CoSign
Jul 14th 2004
57
RE: Work Place Jones
Jul 06th 2004
33
haaa
Jul 07th 2004
39
Style
Jul 05th 2004
32
Photo
Jul 06th 2004
34
I Remember This -- *smiles*
Jul 07th 2004
41
Born King
Jul 06th 2004
35
RE: Born King
Jul 07th 2004
37
Hail 2 King Zin --
Jul 12th 2004
56
Light's Orange Varying Elements
Jul 06th 2004
36
coool
Jul 07th 2004
40
RE: The Poetry (summer's for gotten tune)
Jul 07th 2004
42
post and rep feat. 3rdi
Jul 08th 2004
44
you no good SOB!!!!!!!!!!
Jul 31st 2004
96
Shy Requiem
Jul 08th 2004
45
RE: Shy Requiem
Jul 09th 2004
48
this was soo sweet...
Jul 28th 2004
89
Eye Easy
Jul 08th 2004
46
Mercy
Jul 08th 2004
47
loved the jazz of that
Jul 09th 2004
49
Take me to the Water
Jul 09th 2004
51
loving this flow
Jul 27th 2004
86
Even
Jul 09th 2004
52
I
Jul 09th 2004
53
Blind Man's
Jul 09th 2004
54
Like Flashing for Springer Beads
Jul 09th 2004
55
RE: The Poetry (summer's for gotten tune)
Jul 14th 2004
64
RE: The Poetry (summer's for gotten tune)
Jul 31st 2004
94
The Freestyles (Instant Archive)
Jul 01st 2004
15
Bone Collector
Jul 01st 2004
16
RE: Bone Collector
PetraP
Jul 01st 2004
19
Heat
Jul 14th 2004
58
Potent...laced
Jul 09th 2004
50
Go 'Head On Then Zin
Jul 14th 2004
62
love life music
Jul 21st 2004
67
The 10 Post Commandments
Jul 22nd 2004
68
ha...that was real, man.
Jul 22nd 2004
74
dreams of tossing an OKPfe
Jul 22nd 2004
69
side splitting.
Jul 22nd 2004
73
RE: dreams of tossing an OKPfe
Jul 23rd 2004
75
I 'Memba This One --
Jul 23rd 2004
76
Arsenic
Jul 22nd 2004
70
none ohter than he
Jul 22nd 2004
71
i hear you talking 2
Jul 22nd 2004
72
**Congrats**
Jul 02nd 2004
20
congrats...
Jul 02nd 2004
21
OH NO.. look out!!!
Jul 02nd 2004
22
RE: July AOTM: Zin aka Amazin' aka "Dat Murried Nug"
Jul 02nd 2004
23
Good Lord Almighty!!!
Jul 02nd 2004
24
RE: July AOTM: Zin aka Amazin' aka "Dat Murried Nug"
Jul 02nd 2004
25
lol.. the murried nug?
Jul 04th 2004
30
A.....:July AOTM: Zin aka Amazin' aka "Dat Murried Nug"
Jul 14th 2004
63
Congratultations
Jul 18th 2004
65
THIS RIGHT HERE...
Jul 25th 2004
77
shit
Jul 25th 2004
78
two thewack ass nukkas
Jul 25th 2004
79
*smiles*
Jul 27th 2004
84
i giggled at this
Aug 01st 2004
102
hot
Jul 25th 2004
80
ill advised
Jul 25th 2004
81
NO!
Jul 25th 2004
82
RE: July AOTM: Zin aka Amazin' aka "Dat Murried Nug"
Jul 25th 2004
83
everlasting, huh?
Jul 27th 2004
85
congratulations...
Jul 28th 2004
87
Thank You GUYS!!!!!!
Jul 28th 2004
88
You're Welcome -- ;^)
Jul 29th 2004
90
Encore
Jul 29th 2004
91
sickness
Aug 01st 2004
103
Enough
Jul 31st 2004
92
Git Him AUS !!! --
Jul 31st 2004
93
bonus tracks
Jul 31st 2004
97
bonus track
Jul 31st 2004
98
i'll show you how to do this hunn...bonus
Jul 31st 2004
99
padding the stats
Jul 31st 2004
100
*head nod*
Aug 01st 2004
104
*applauds*
Aug 01st 2004
101

KnowOne
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1. "Congratz Nukka....."
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bring that fire.....

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"Too weird to live.... too rare to die..."

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mindful
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2. "*nods* now... get to it nm"
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think i
just heard the
©mook (on the school of love)




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Morehouse
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Thu Jul-01-04 05:47 AM

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3. "congrats"
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i love you all

"when my love comes to see me it’s
just a little like music,a
little more like curving colour(say
orange)
against silence,or darkness…" -e.e. cummings


"we are accidents waiting to happen" -radiohead

"Poetry is a kind of distilled insinuation. It’s a way of expanding and talking around an idea or a question. Sometimes, more actually gets said through such a technique than a full frontal assault." -Yusef Komunyakaa

"The Black Artist's role in America is to aid in the destruction of America as he knows it. His role is to report and reflect so precisely the nature of the society, and of himself in that society, that other men will be moved by the exactness of his rendering and, if they are black men, grow strong through this moving, having seen their own strength, and weakness; and if they are white men, tremble, curse, and go mad, because they will be drenched with the filth of their evil."

-Amiri Baraka, from "State/meant" in the essay, "Home"

"My love is my soul's imagination. How do I love thee?...Imagine." -Saul Williams

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myself is sculptor of
your body’s idiom:
the musician of your wrists;
the poet who is afraid
only to mistranslate
a rhythm in your hair...
-E.E. Cummings

  

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Zin
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Thu Jul-01-04 10:47 AM

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4. "RE: July AOTM: Zin aka Amazin' aka"
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Thu Jul-01-04 11:03 AM

  

          

First of all thanks to GOD, my Wife and my Kids ...who deal with life without me sometimes when i'm in write mode ...i've taken the first step ...i have a problem.. lol

Ayo …it finally happened so I guess I don’t have anything else to write about when the boards get the best of me …I really appreciate the love shown …even if some of this shit is fake … everyone that knows me knows I have a love for this boards like a child ..I have had arguments over this board and defended this board like my child … I am an addict and thanks for the love!!!



Big up to all those who kept voting when we thought this shit would never happen …


Aus ~ okay ! now I can stop posting so much and get back in the studio

PG …Yukon ….Axis … Decstar…. HEY!! Thanks for being ride or die cats EVEN when you didn’t agree with what the fuck I was doing… and thanks for keeping my ego full blown even when I was gonna give this shit up !!!!!

Ric … thanks for clipping my wings

Photo ~ there’s a thin line between love and hate *winks*

Knowone, Del and Mindful …wow class acts you always have a fan in me

And last but not least

3rdi ~I love you like a sister foreal …

And now that we’ve gotten all the bullshit outta the way…this may hurt!!!!!!!!!

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lunaeco
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Thu Jul-01-04 10:52 AM

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5. "it didn't hurt as much as i thought it would"
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Congratulations Zin
This'll be interesting. Hope you enjoy it
bless

~~~


my
blue
song
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InspiredFree
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Thu Jul-01-04 01:12 PM

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8. "RE: July AOTM: YAY ZIN"
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Very happy for you man... Jus kno, just cause I aint post dont mean I aint read... Have fun with this.

______________________
we must never be frightened or cajoled/into accepting evil as deliverance from evil. - Robert Hayden

  

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MiracleRic
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9. "i wish i had more hands..."
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to give u four simultaneous pats on the back, congrats yo, its about time, and what u mean, clippin ya wings, im confused, lmao, get to work on this, and then get in the studio, so i can ghost produce for aus ;O, lol, they shoulda never gave u nuggas lyrics!!! fuck yo wings nugga!!!


Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

Building repetoires (c) spm since 1983

  

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Revolt
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Thu Jul-01-04 06:29 PM

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18. "congrats Zin, do that damn thang ;)"
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____________



"I'm nothing like me..." -KnowOne



"Did he ever say she was beautiful, or was intelligent, or was classy or was…just—-something like me. Ever? I will ask.

I will ask and then one day when I meet up with him I will kick him in the balls. So hard and so swift, just to hear that crushing sound of castration.

Maybe then I’ll be satisfied." -.

The avy: Maxwell, the impeccable.


  

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AUS
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29. "What the...."
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a brother have a few dsl problems and come back to this shit??!!??!!


for real i wanna thank eaybody who voted for this clown on behalf of "the beat slangin' pimps". thanks to ya'll the nukka might actually finish the album mentioned below in 2004 instead of 2044.

and ric man you was supposed to keep that you was really the mastermind behind these beats on the low til i built up some groupies. damn, guess i'll have to rely on the good looks and googley eyes from chicks saying i look like will smith.

congrats fam.

Basura Caliente:

S.A.U.S.E. - Distributary
The Movie Stars - Coming to the Stage

"I school a beat like I'm Aus at Harvard" - Miracle Ric

"Bless yo heart!!!!"

http://www.myspace.com/beatslanginpimps
http://www.myspace.com/s_a_u_s_e

  

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One_Man_Amazin
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6. "Mic Check"
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Thu Jul-01-04 11:12 AM

  

          

In a world where so much is changing so fast why are we worry about who has the hottest lyrics? The revolution is under our noses, but “We the people“ are sniffing our own asses. Reparations thru record deals and recording contracts, contracting you to make the rich get richer by selling your form of expression; that’s pimping 101. So you must ask your self are you selling yourself short to the system? Have you forgotten who the creator of this art truly is? So who should eat off of it? Are we so caught up in self-righteousness that we now begin to overlook the true meaning of hip hop? Is it really about bucks blunts and bitches? Where did substance go? Who's responsible for hip hop’s demise in my cipher? We started this with unity and awareness in mind but we have since fell short of the goals and deviated from the plans; which were laid by forefathers. While our grandmothers and grandfathers are being raped by social security cuts, high medication costs and laws being passed to take away benefits they were promised ..and some gave lives for. So I ask are you ready for war? The new modified world order is taking place before your eyes young soldier. It now has stealth capability, cloning techniques, mind controlling power thru media. Where are the thinkers? Has modern philosophy stopped? Have “We the people “ started to take life at place value? (what ever they place in your face) America’s top news and information resources ..tainted with untruths and plagiarism, I ask is it just that easy? Have you been deceived into pagan beliefs of a slaves god? Where your master tells you to lay down and die rather than gird your armor. Why is it that heaven is such a perfect place but you feel you are blessed to be living? Ask your self what do you stand for ...and if it ain't upliftment of movement then sit your ass down!!!!


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Instant Axis
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7. "RE: July AOTM: Zin aka Amazin' aka "Dat Murried Nug""
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congrats fam........i hope you diss the shit out of everyone!!!!

fuck a sig!!!


why MiracleRic thinks me and him clic aight, here's the reason, u real with yours, i am once i bring my guard down, we both stupid as hell, we both got our talents, want a lot of the same things, like a lot of the same things, we both

  

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mara
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Thu Jul-01-04 04:23 PM

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10. "Zin"
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Congratulations

*I'm hella hella sexy*

  

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Zin
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11. "The Poetry (summer's for gotten tune)"
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I
am
movement
contrived
to your wishes........
in
the
ambers
and browns
of a rising
winter ............
I
sorrowfully
dance
to your rhythm........
dancing
summers
forgotten tune..........
dancing
summers
forgotten tune..........
swinging
to
the
three peat
of
Monk's keys .......
spinning
in the
horns high's
until
I'm
Dizzy.............
WIshINGthatyou'Dspin....withme
dancing
dancing
in the
summer's forgotten tune
of LOVE..........

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Zin
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12. "Barren Orchard( The Short verison)"
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but my lust for lies begins and truth dies
and cries shelter my ears from the thunder
and loneliness takes me under wondering
if you us we were suppose to be
reality eating away at my mind state
tainting my vision of a soul mate
that was once the apple of my eye
grew from a barren orchard

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Zin
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13. "Get Together"
In response to Reply # 11
Thu Jul-01-04 05:02 PM

  

          

Is it the brown in the leaves on the ground
Or the shades of blue that peek through
On
Partly cloudy days
Or maybe it’s the way
Ya eyes meet with mine
When we’ve agreed
And had a meeting of the minds
complex’in
simplicity’s morn’
I find myself waking
thanking
the most high for breaths taken
in you to if I’m not mistaken
grace
deals fate
factious statements
claimed in the name of pagans
through false accusations
making those men forsaken
those sensation
of a cool chill ….wakes
as the wind blows
green thru the windows
the winds …envy you
sleeping beautiful
resting
effortless
I recite …syllables to the
Rise and fall of ya chest
My poetry in motion
The blue of the oceans
Reflection
In heavenly directions
I pause with the shudder of ya accent
Happiness
For lack of a better expression
Cause
the word love
needs more letters
and bliss
might be confused
with the perfect muse
and letters get
sealed with a kiss
so I say it like this …

ontheperfectdayintheperfectworldattheperfecttimeyou’dbebymyside
ontheperfectdayintheperfectworldattheperfecttimeyou’dbebymyside

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robynwildchild
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38. "damn nice"
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i love the environment you portrayed.. partly cloudy.. reminds me of a perfect fall day.. mmm

lovely.

~~~~~~~~ luv R.
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psycho.
"Institutions encourage us to consider the opinions they sell as "facts" and that we "believe" rather than question the morality they pitch."
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KnowOne
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59. "nice.....and I usually..."
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hate rhyming poetry.

Keep Flowin'.......

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AUS
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60. "RE: Get Together"
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this verse is timeless.
so is the merge of the beat with this rhyme. by far our best collab.

Basura Caliente:

S.A.U.S.E. - Distributary
The Movie Stars - Coming to the Stage

"I school a beat like I'm Aus at Harvard" - Miracle Ric

"Bless yo heart!!!!"

http://www.myspace.com/beatslanginpimps
http://www.myspace.com/s_a_u_s_e

  

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blak_yukon
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61. "RE: Get Together"
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demand an audio for this....

blk

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AUS
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66. "RE: Get Together"
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check the soundclick page

Basura Caliente:

S.A.U.S.E. - Distributary
The Movie Stars - Coming to the Stage

"I school a beat like I'm Aus at Harvard" - Miracle Ric

"Bless yo heart!!!!"

http://www.myspace.com/beatslanginpimps
http://www.myspace.com/s_a_u_s_e

  

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95. "i wanna read this"
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to my future husband.....jimmie lee





Q: what's the deal with puerto rican lovers?

A:well for starters they do salsa and merengue in your pussy. that helps. (c) Damali

sistawitafro: dude i've been caught many-a-night by a lifetime movie

dude: i remember when i first started watchin it. i was back in petey b (petersburg) and all tha ladies as watchin it. i was like i aint about to watch a damn chick flick wit all of ya'll. next thing i know, i'm passin out tissues and talkin about "he wrong for that. he wrong for that."

From beginning to end no matter what if we are true to ourselves then how could any action be a sin to us-PG

www.myspace.com/3rd_i

3rd i: so u gonna be my child's god parent
Dawgeatah: i already have 3
3rd i: yeah but do u have a black one..like pokemon gotta catch them all.

i am a self-mutilator
of the worst kind...
(c)MyLife

  

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Zin
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14. "Good Morning~ Love"
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Thu Jul-01-04 05:02 PM

  

          

a mouth full of questions ......fill the space that was suppose be filled with the most important words of the day "good morning " had taken his place at the front of the line and I was "fine" with the placement ......of the question rendered .....but remembered that .....I felt neglected that preceding sunset .....for lack of the words that I hadn't heard yet .....betta yet outta of respect .....and was sure not to comment as "have a good day " slid out next .....where the hell was my formal placement of complacent nouns and verbs that I deserved? ......where they stolen by the feline ...and being to stroke the ego of another not deserving of my precisely place LUVYIOOE letters .....gave me the "sorry we missed you" sign followed by " will return at 5 pm." promptly after I work my 9 ....then quickly shoved into dinner to shower to bedtime ......seems that going to bed mad has taken it's toll on our ....quality...... so we found the don't bother me's ....with your lil insignificant......rants ...that "petty shit" ....meant...... much more to the person delivering.....and now that same cold shoulder you throw is now shivering ......because I know you love me

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43. "Awwwwwww --"
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*smiles*



*head nods* -- Good Morning! -- ;^)

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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17. "*nodding head*"
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nice.


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26. "Till Death do us"
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born from a sinners womb ......dead or alive survival of the fittest ...so I stretched and left exit wounds ........curse with the knowledge that preceded my years .....I cry the tears.. of history repeating to my eyes and ears .....turned fallen warriors from tough guys .....ironically caught a three piece in his sleep trying to save private Ryan.... the anthem national played place to disgrace a country ....that didn't give a damn about his face or race .....nukka repent so when ya soul is face to face .....you ain't hoping.... they got something good to say ...you know it!!!!!!!!
***wait wait hold up****

HOUSTON, Texas (CNN) -- The space shuttle Columbia broke up as it descended over Texas Saturday toward a planned landing at Kennedy Space Center in Florida, showering debris across southeastern Texas and into Louisiana.
more children lost in the sky ...riding charroits prepelled by fire..gone in the twinking of and eye .... http://i.cnn.net/cnn/interactive/space/0301/gallery.mission.guide/gallery.anderson.jpg
lost .... http://i.cnn.net/cnn/interactive/space/0301/gallery.mission.guide/gallery.husband.jpg
lost.... http://i.cnn.net/cnn/interactive/space/0301/gallery.mission.guide/gallery.mccool.jpg
lost... http://i.cnn.net/cnn/interactive/space/0301/gallery.mission.guide/gallery.brown.jpg
lost... http://i.cnn.net/cnn/interactive/space/0301/gallery.mission.guide/gallery.chawla.jpg
lost... http://i.cnn.net/cnn/interactive/space/0301/gallery.mission.guide/gallery.clark.jpg
lost... http://i.cnn.net/cnn/interactive/space/0301/gallery.mission.guide/gallery.ramon.jpg
lost...mother has thou forsaken ...those men that find ways to kid knapp her babies ...condemned to burn at 200.000ft and 900 degrees ....we grieve .....

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27. "Work Place Jones"
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Check me lunchin at the front desk
Tryin to finesse
My way into caressing
Ms. PhatAssEvenInAdress
Scopin the professional
Attire
With the satire
Ending in
me returning empty handed
once again
persistence’s
best friend
my main mang
cause …the next nukka ain’t gonna treat shorty like me ..
on the real
I’m talking like maybe us just chilling
nothing strenuous
the issue
never pressed just the movie
and maybe “that dress”
you know the one from the beginning of this thought
that cupped her shape ..
like cotton invaded her space
got me wasting mind time
in her negation of my negotiations
I’m staying patience tho ..
Cause she’s not just another hoe
And I figure if I just hit her
Then that wouldn’t be professional
Till the day
Casual convo
Is Returned with a note
I like you do you like me
Check yes or no

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28. "RE: Work Place Jones"
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jesus...

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31. "cute..."
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"I like you do you like me
Check yes or no "

this is really cute. reminds me of yukon...somewhere in the style...and of axis...something he wrote a while back...i likes.

peace,

n.

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57. "CoSign"
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n/m

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33. "RE: Work Place Jones"
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i like that one too!


soul.


  

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39. "haaa"
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yo that's what's up..
turns into an all night love affair with dat DRESS on da flizzzzor..

peace!

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32. "Style"
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My style is....Wednesday night prayer meeting ...glad to be in this service speech .....bible speculation from the back seat ....pastoral dirty dealing exposed by the deacon .....questioning ya promise land promises ..... gritty
My style is ...Luther mountain top visions ...big Luther chair is still a chair if your not there isms ....Luther do ~do brown shake ya ass to this one.... Lex Luther world domination aspirations
My style is ....a black panther ……….tattooed on.....strip club dancer shaking what her mother gave her to feed her seeds ..... Jayed Z ......you can't knock my hustle ...my style is by any means
My style is ....Bin Laden traced ......small pox laced ...last supper poker faced ...Judas!?.....toasting with Saddam Hussein ....underground rail road running slaves .....ballot chads in ya brothers state? fate has moved my style to war for oil ....
nah fuck that fuck that
fate...... has moved my style from state to state subconscious to conscious thinking ......clear vision blurred on the horizon of Zion
my style is a WAKE up call for all ya ....
free ya mind .........
free ya mind...........
free ya mind............
free ya sind............
free ya stnd ...........
free ya styld............
free ya style................
free y style.................
free style................
freestyle?
or freestale?
be ya own style playa!

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34. "Photo"
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Respect the Sun Toucher …
Frame catcher
focus flash record …
and suspend minutes
with my fifth sense …
entrap ya scent …
as if ya physical was present …whenever
I found it relevant …I could relish
The sight and smell of ya essence
As if you sent ya love
In perfumed handwritten letters
With kiss
Imprints
The touch of ya lips …
Greets the morning dew …
A Rise
And respect sent
You stand erect …when
My light reaches ya position …
To bring warmth to the chill of the darkness

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41. "I Remember This -- *smiles*"
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You wrote it back in January some time -- (For our collab, I believe) -- ;^)


Still graphic & beautiful as ever! -- *sigh*


*Timeless Piece*



Thank you sweetie! -- *wink*

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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35. "Born King"
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I was born in the middle of a miracle with a serial number embedded in my cerebellum ..
That made my eyes swell and turn red when said ..
808
the numbers read ..the date that fate circumcised and demised a plan against this temple as simple as genitals clipped to chip me back to remedial ..
zero …one
the number of kings crowned found without flaw in this host~pillow times the number of men belittled cause I made it thru… times the generations stunned at the blessing of a son on this the day that the lord hath made ..
one 9..seven 3
the year ears …heard the plan …formulated to oppress ..by any means …race religion ..color or creed …greed traced tainted hands …sweaty palms …on this Sunday …hosanna sing …born to you is a king …wrapped in alabaster …linens cleaned to breath unwilling …cause I didn’t want to enter …but be recommitted …
808dash01dash1973
ht ~23 inches eyecolor~ brown
wt ~8 pounds 2 oz.
Name ~King ‘Zin
Mother’s maiden name ~ Nature
Father’s maiden name ~ JAH
Born unto you is a king…

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37. "RE: Born King"
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creative very..
i likes..

POST KING.. yea the LEO in ya ass coming through.. what was that i was telling you?

lol yo too bad you weren't Aotm next month.. ahh....

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56. "Hail 2 King Zin --"
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Your crown awaits you! -- *Photo holds out bottle of Crown Royale*


I'll drink to this flow, don'tchaknow! -- *wink*

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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36. "Light's Orange Varying Elements"
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I AM
LIGHT passed through a prism separated from the one beam it lived in new form ..
the blues .. now deliver color to streams and rivers .. and heavens reflection
while my yellows ..wake sleeping bee’s in the hollows ..of their hives and attracts them to pollinate ..
the red stings the backs of necks and faces .. hints of sunshine left behind ..
while the green .. grows ..and shows the nurturing of the seeds .. and life at it’s fullest ..young
I AM
the winds the lick the lips of passers ..ORANGE autumn leaves .. bare trees .. hair on it’s end .. a chill when there is no wind the calm in the middle of storm .. a tight hold .. VARYING comforting words when life’s bends ..bend you to breaking
I AM
the ELEMENTS of a melody .. high notes that complement lows and all in between .. is fitting .. the master piece played when only you are listening
cause nothing else matters right?
I am IN
Light’s
Orange
Varying
Elements
of one beam into something new.. WITH YOU

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40. "coool"
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mmm....yummy haha

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42. "RE: The Poetry (summer's for gotten tune)"
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What a lovely symphony of wordplay! -- ;^)

>Monk's keys .......
>spinning
>in the
>horns high's
>until
>I'm
>Dizzy.............

I likes dat right dere! -- *smiles*

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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44. "post and rep feat. 3rdi"
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3rdi
My body has been known to cause great wars i was once
called Helen of Troy.
My heart beats are the rhythm that u set your life
too.
i bring u comfort i offer u quiet...peace....
To sit with me think with me....to feel me.
i am what i have always been as i converge and emerge
into that which always was.
No my mind u may not have because freely is it not
mine to give.
it is the only thing i have to call

My Own.


zin
Your body is weak but your mind is strong
I know it won't fail me I've been failed by bodies
(anybody&everybody) too many times
but your heart that too will come in time
it's controlled by your mind
I look in to see whatI can find
and am "Amazed" yours is just like
mine....

3rdi

My mind...is that all you want? U would
be content in
having only half of what u need.
For 25 years of this life i've lived
and
i have given...
You called me by my true nature and my
heart slipped
and skipped a beat.
Enter cautiously and slowly for u know
what an empath
i
be when u kiss me intellecually.

Al....what do u want from me???? Do u
understand how
powerful our words are? I can not just
keep giving u
words like they are nothing...these
words....are
feelings man. I be the lioness of
Judah...



zin

you are the words spoken in love for me

you sing melodies like stroked piano
keys
is the love you seek in me let's see
and in time & I'll find your
emotions up my sleeve
your up my back down my spine
your in my mind with these lines
27 years in this life never did i find
someone true then you
spoken worded my feelings
you traced my steps and recaptured
essence of true
dealings
speak your mind ma ~~~~~~and i'll do
the rest i enter
you then we let Jah manifest....................I want
your
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96. "you no good SOB!!!!!!!!!!"
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i oughta stab u in the eye for that!!!!!!! i am squealing with delight do you HEAR ME!!!!!!!!!!








Q: what's the deal with puerto rican lovers?

A:well for starters they do salsa and merengue in your pussy. that helps. (c) Damali

sistawitafro: dude i've been caught many-a-night by a lifetime movie

dude: i remember when i first started watchin it. i was back in petey b (petersburg) and all tha ladies as watchin it. i was like i aint about to watch a damn chick flick wit all of ya'll. next thing i know, i'm passin out tissues and talkin about "he wrong for that. he wrong for that."

From beginning to end no matter what if we are true to ourselves then how could any action be a sin to us-PG

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3rd i: so u gonna be my child's god parent
Dawgeatah: i already have 3
3rd i: yeah but do u have a black one..like pokemon gotta catch them all.

i am a self-mutilator
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45. "Shy Requiem"
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If she is looking …
I hope she like what she sees and has the courage to approach me …I know she will like me up closely .. enough to take the chance to get to know me …and show me what it means to reflect love openly…if she is looking

If she is listening …
My diction should be at it’s crispest …so that my knowledge roles off of my tongue to parlay my wisdom … and if by chance she doesn’t agree with my sentences …she has the ability to convey her own feelings

If she is smelling me …
I know my confidence will arouse…and tremor thunder to her loins like dark clouds …I smell like spring flowers after April showers …with the musk of a lion… odoriferous …devout Christain … “he smells like Jesus is in him” …I’d smell of many men …my father and any that injected the fact that women should be respected …

If she touches me …
I’d hold her in a soft clutch …just hard enough to show her love …but strong and powerful …cause I’m a ‘lil thug …vise a shoulder’s tensions… when I back rub… and have the firm hand shake of her father …

If she tastes me …
I hope my delicacy…fits the recipe …and thre nectar …of my innermost feelings licks sweet like honey combs that bee’s keep …I’m working hard for my queen ..but we have yet to meet …I be gald when she finally notices me ... my shy requiem

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48. "RE: Shy Requiem"
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spit linen to these fine womens,ha...


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89. "this was soo sweet..."
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& congrats on this Zin

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46. "Eye Easy"
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Eye easy
With this crooked tooth smile …makes the words that roll from his lips as eloquent as the morning birds chirps and the sun’s rise in unison … movement that would grace sold out stages …parts played by the guy with the chubby waist … it is he …dreaded locks of brown tinted …not by dyes intentions … it’s naturally mention ..in his ..bio …ill regular fitted …nice guy tho .. if you get past the ego and get to really know …
I’m sure you’d agree … pedigree strange … mixed with Jamaican/Brit slang … Yardie … anger managed disposition … fit’s his self esteem like a puzzle …prone to a “what’s fucking with this?” rhetorical question asking …cause the answer does not exists …in his eyes …
brown …light to the right light hit … but in the darkness you think he’s full of shit … as real as …well real as the word it self ..cause with out real there’s nothing else …but don’t mistake … a change in ways as fake … maybe he saw fit to change his ways …and this may be the first day … or maybe …just maybe ..he’s not perfect. That could be it …cause he like everything else changes consant……………ly

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47. "Mercy"
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Mercy, Mercy me!!! most high messiah …I beseech you to watch over me and mines in these troubled times … the rain cometh …your reign summed it … all up … even

Before
I
Believe your
Light was
Everlasting ( you already loved me )

You sent a word …and an angel to look after us …but it’s so so dark in the twelfth hour …and our… morals have change …Gomorra is no longer strange …if these were the old days …salt would line the pave(ment)…shackled by mental enslavement …only you can save men ..lost in the holocaust the cage exists… even when bars are not present … finding it hard to obey

The
Everlasting
Notes

Commanded
On a
Mountain to
Moses
And
Named for all
Men
Ever more and
Now
Till the
Savior returns for his people …

No equal …or other god before

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49. "loved the jazz of that"
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beautiful read - i mean the "summer's forgotten tune" piece.. still working on reading some more.
i like the way it's formatted, but more so the words, blending in the seasons worked well.
bless

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51. "Take me to the Water"
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My recollection of times seconds has never been a question …
And my salt intake will always exceed the trails left on my cheeks ..
But I am reaching…
Drawing blank …
Trying to conjure memories …
But I can’t see through these ruff seas …
In the way
The spray… of the ocean’s water on my face
as the storm brews on the horizon…
The dark bellows gather …at my eyes length
Those ominous grays .. of today’s unsettling changes
Has found a way to trap my sunshine in …
Gone is the warmth on my face
So I
lick my tongue to taste …
only to savor the bitter …of the wind
that has shifted from those …
odoriferous roses …
… I know of …
to the loathing…odors
forfeited forth by troubles trumpeter …
I heard the horns …
Entwined …in the winds whistles
As The sea fiddles
away
Till the tympani …of the thunder reaches my ears hear
Or the crash of a cymbal crackling …
Acting
as if the sky was splitting …this very minute
I’m then committed
To
The
Salt water river …
Baptizing ….
My troubles
In
this
Salt water river …

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86. "loving this flow"
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i really enjoy the the rythm of this piece and others where you're using choice words to describe and make the right sound as well as the right feeling come through.
i think you're a natural poet, and your (battle-born?) flow/style enhances by adding sounds that resonate and make the poetry stronger.
bless

~~~


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52. "Even"
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She said she wanted to be friends …
And I took that to mean the that I was not the man that she was interested in ..
And in that very instant …
She left,… the day dreams that I spent dreaming in my evenings that I eventually wish to begin …
To die with out meaning …
And declined without EVEN seeing …
My case pleaded …
before this lovers court and was dismissed…
Without EVEN cross examining the witness …
Shit !!!…
resentment …now had me wishing I didn’t feel like this …
Instantly she went from…
best friend
To
Future gurl friend
To
Just friend
To
BITCH!!! …
And I don’t ever degrade women …
but that was all the reimbursement I could get …
For my time spent …
And my good night kisses missed
And my EVENings getting to know another queen to be
And my feelings wasted
chasing …
me jaded?…or hating? Not EVEN!!!
It EVEN felt good for a minute …
That word …
that had rolled off my tongue so easily …and irresponsibly
that made me feel like a man …
spew because I felt like I had been dealt with …as less of a man
actually showed how boyish I was …
and EVEN to this day …I felt like I got EVEN
I guess some things you just don’t grow out of …

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53. "I"
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I call
I talk
I persist
I act childish
I joke
I laugh
I cry
I miss
I long
I hurt
I feel lonely
I smile
I smirk
I hope
I dream
I wish
I hold
I am
BE~Cause
I
love
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54. "Blind Man's"
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Now …comes the pain staking task of the sever
my words won’t express the pain, the rage, …the facts that I must now face
it’s over … the closure
at peace …released …my feelings ..our feelings deceased …I sing eulogy’s …
at love's requiem …we DIE
my eyes have known the love …you have … and close … only to nEVer be shown again …
but love remains
my heart toRN …reality THORNS …and PINches with wishes ..of the love relished at the beginning …
endING
BITter …
and tho I smile when I see you …
it’s still SINking in…
you were my best friend …nEVer again
just to TASte …
to FEel
to SMell
to HEar
to sEE …you love me …one more time …
would be a lovely ending …
instead I’m blinded …
with the RAGE of you nEVEr loving me …
and the selfishness …
that I …..befriended
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55. "Like Flashing for Springer Beads"
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With reckless abandonment I open my wounds for you to see my true being
like flashing for Springer beads
fate has dealt …me up and downs
turn around’s
and
now
it’s getting harder to gain ground
sounds
like
hearts pounding
feet rustling the leaves
of a chase
of hearts through the woods of love’s eve
around tree’s
down hills
and through streams
Am I chasing you
or are you chasing me?
and if caught would the love be the same as the chase?
could it maintain in the face
of adversity?
I bear my soul ….

like flashing for Springer beads

see you never wanted to be and exhibitionist… just flirt with the possibility
so you bear ya soul to me

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64. "RE: The Poetry (summer's for gotten tune)"
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i like this sensitive styling side of you as much as the other

peace,

n.

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94. "RE: The Poetry (summer's for gotten tune)"
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this was my favorite line


I
>am
>movement
>contrived
>to your wishes........

www.myspace.com/3rd_i

3rd i: so u gonna be my child's god parent
Dawgeatah: i already have 3
3rd i: yeah but do u have a black one..like pokemon gotta catch them all.

i am a self-mutilator
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15. "The Freestyles (Instant Archive)"
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'Zin~~no question .......tag teamin 'em red (high) beam freeze 'em while we lyrically tease 'em with the expertise ...of a
mason team ...brick lay asses ...like pyramids with
hyrogipics ....son KEYSHIFTING ass KICKINGS....then clicking the post message ......

pg ~~Sickening synapsis to bring the shit to a head and give em
all the synopsis/
If they smart they'll drop this before we provoke us to
choke the whole populous/
Like they kids on the way to school in vriginia we stop the
bus/
Expose the virgin in ya like the ground beneath buildings
gone to dust/
And every station in the nation be rated PG and Amazed that
the feds still ain't on to us/

'Zin~~FCC indicted price is right phone tap 'll get ya hormones
slapped into the middle of next week steamrolling mcees
with speed .... geeked from the weed and a case of the
munchies i unleash a verb spitting keyshifting double headed
beast ....with no sense of melody my words travel and
unravel mysteries via telepathy ...bone crushing ya PM
messages lettin jumanji answer the questions of why we stay blessing

jum~~~When I close my eyes
I be seein' the apocolypse
So I write rhymes
Like a killer scratchin' names on hollow tips
Spread the shells out on the table
And load all the clips
Preparin' for war like Travis Bickle
Whisper my name
Emcess get visions of the reaper
Who brandish sickles
I leave 'em drippin'
Like sandwhich pickles
The last image they see is a mic stand
A bright light and...........
.......Who knows?
Maybe they see God
But one thing's for sure
He's no longer playin' hard
Words cause amps to combust
I leave the stage blazin'
Kinda like the Christian image
Of the hell I be raisin'
Mushroom clouds cover continents
When Jumanji link with Amazin

'Zin ~ who can save 'em

pro_poe~~It's impossible, a plethora of penitentiary prophets, prophecy for profit, surrepticity, stop it...
Falsely proclaiming a power that you do not posses, possessed patriarchs, divulging in the dark,
Only God can bless...
I'm a student, studying the sovereign, so sacrilegious problems, don’t paralyze prodigious, I stay prudent...
Acting as alliteration obliterates the nation,
Tenuous torture, tears of a generation, genially give temptation..
Sacrificing succession, to succeed in lessons, learned living loudly, my mother mostly, concerned, proudly, poised, her boy, possesses poison, that will paralyze the noise...
'Zin~ i can stop em ya'll

pro_poe~And end endless entities, centuries of defenseless stupendous enemies, emotions, enigmatic, in fact its, distracted devotions, inventively...
It’s a curse that I'm tight, using cursive to cause cancer, with the words that I write...
So someone will see "the light", skinned nigga who narrowly nourishes, and nullifies what’s right...
Have patience, anticipation will leave you a patient in the hospitals prayin, racin for a cure, how long can we endure, with no remedy or save'n...
Synonyms sadistic, devastating disses, these kids are too feminine...
Anaconda acronyms, actually it aint an accident, accurately thrashin them...
My conscience is cautious, but a cautious conscience is nonsense, when you pray for repentance but in the next sentence, your keeping correspondence with bondage...So let me de-slave yall...

'Zin ~cornerpocket eight ball ........

bartek ~words written down forming sharp witted lines leaving competitors tounges cut out who tried to get wit it NOW/
heed this warning do not upset these dangerous mc's/
picture multiple mic's raised with crushing grips/
an electrifying mist graced the cover of this new marvel hit/
"devestating frequencies" shook the nation as superman was found obliterated and left to rest/
multiple incisions to his chest the culprits infiltrated through the sound membrane in the final seconds of this gory death/
i see a fist in the empty space of this script/
gripping the heart of enemies before erupting from within the cage with sharp melodies/
'Zin~ Finish tHeM!

yukon~i'm barrelin'out of the dark bound caverns of doubt
i'm with the tretorns back like ghost did clarks
mr.victor with the scriptures
paint pictures and such
git atcha with darts
lush for liquiors,fuzzy greens in dutch
my calibre ranks
that of what made a amatuer sank
vocals is dollar sign shots
swoosh or off glass bank

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16. "Bone Collector"
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uh oh!!!
Remember 'Zin.... nukka I took you unda my wings showed you how to fly right when ya was whine'in and cryin..........helped you get ya 150 soak and wet ass weight up and bandaged them wrists when you felt like dieing....now you trying to take advantage of my kindness........ thinking I won't get at you nukka!!!....i deliver stomps to shake this shit up like green giant ..she's a ho ho ho .....carrots and tomatoes flows take you back to basics ..fuck a collabo .....single shot rock since i came ......battle verse for sport not replies or the fame ...game contains elements of mike J in the prime ...crisp assisted living like john stockton ...stop and pop hot rocks ..son blocks and shruggs off lob's ....thrown at the throne .....till you get off it you lost it ....ya crown's a coffin ....treat these spills ......7up style neva had it nevea will ...ghost writing ya death certificate every post message ....thought i wouldn't peep ya animaniac claims to be king ...guess who's back?.....and bitch smacking season's in full swing .....the green coat flow ... O no! you guess it penmen till my fingers won't twitch....to scribble ...babyface mcees wipe the dribble ...with a "I love Daddy" bib.....and snap on underwear ....bomb threat ...but nobody's scared ....betta get ya soul write and ya family prepared .....unaware ...that I'm peeping ya fake maneuverss when you thought I was sleeping with ya deuce like you Hoover.....crush ya west side connect .....every mic check ...and play the X ya name game cause ya'll nukkas is suspeckk ....too short like bitches in flats ....trophy wall stacked cause I collect faces and necks .....oppose the throne and where about's shifts from home to unknown ....muffled face taxi cab confessions "yeap I collect bones"....

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19. "RE: Bone Collector"
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damn, damn, damn!!! you would've had my vote, i hope you know that...i haven't gotten around to checkin the board much, í just started school again...sorry!! i'm real glad you got this anyway!! CONGRATS!!!!
much love, now do your damn thang!!

  

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58. "Heat"
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4real

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"Too weird to live.... too rare to die..."

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50. "Potent...laced"
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Zin nukkas!! …iller than HIV positive
Prostate cancer pulps …that traveled to ya knoggin
Author …
of infectious increments of the illest shit …
the equivalent to intravenous over doses of medicines
it’s evident …
when the weather gets … foul… the weak get wet …
so if I’m brain storming getting soaked .. you’d expect
when I loggin look for exits …
messy …plus I’m nothing to mess with…
the best is … classic …
If I posted writtens it’d be in hieroglyphics ..
Most don’t hold interest …
dow jones listings nonexistent …
while the rest …just …well to be frank …sound like bitches..
daddy’s gurl nukkas …I tuck ‘em in with good night kisses
crack the door right? …and leave on the hall light …
in my sleep I bangs and banks ‘em
with this Langston
in two words
ya’ll nukkas just some dreams deferred
herbs …
could never see or be One_Man
cause I spit with my finger tips and shit with my pen
iller than …al scratch
‘Zin stays unmatched …
and those that try to match stick
get flipped like mattress’s
you lacking springs … and ability to create new things
while my changed sheets …
posted more babies than ya family tree…
all and each one of ya’ll are just maybe’s …
cause you’ll never reach ya full potentials against me …

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62. "Go 'Head On Then Zin"
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>banks ‘em
>with this Langston
>in two words
>ya’ll nukkas just some dreams deferred
>herbs …
>could never see or be One_Man


Awwwww Shyt! -- *chuckles*

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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67. "love life music"
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I envision ...the.... African jungles where music was invented and embrace the drum pounds as a lyrist....tribal chants and people dance to the rhythm ..of harvest... men ...praying to gods for deliverance .....and this.... my chance ...to enhance..... your understanding of the tribesmen pounding the heart felt sounds...expounding on the jazz lik .....eloquently played by monks keys....chasing the horns twisting me Dizzy......wind dancin leaves ....sun shining...... spring in my eyes.... this is life with a love for the music ....and i use it.....as tool...to convey to you .....the humbling struggle ... of a culture where nobody loves .....this is life ...... blood ... breath ..sweat ...tears for respect .......cause i love it if you haven't figured it yet ....with this mic in a state of embrace ....i speak for every visionary ..from Marley to Marvin Gaye .....who made a the crowd sway with something to say ....gave fruit to our youth to live to ...on things they live thru ....get up stand up....tell me what's going on......not just another rap song this is love life music


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68. "The 10 Post Commandments"
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Won …..2 3 …4 5 … 6 7 8 …..9 ….10
It’s the 10 post commandments ….
Ya’ll can’t tell me nothing about these freestyles …these keystyles … this Slam poetry …these Haikus’ … this spoken word … I got this Okp shit locked …
Won …..2 3 …4 5 … 6 7 8 …..9 ….10
I been posting here for years …some call me an animal..
Authored so many post …I wrote me a manual …
Some step by step rules …to get ya reps. up
As opposed to four replies …from yaself with just ^up
Number 10 …bring the hot ish when you begin …or after we welcome you in …
you getting ….no more repping …
Number 9 … Find …then … diss reply to one of mine … lost or win …you’ll get plenty of hits when nukkas think you battlein ‘Zin…
Number 8 …post one or two then …wait …’cause these cats get bored …
If they think you flooding the boards
Number 7 … pay attention to what is said …if you on the last page with a goose egg (0)ya shit is dead … and if ya shit is dead by all means let it die … or relive the same shit …all over …with one reply
Number 6 …if all fails post for the chics …you‘ll get replies quick
With that sentimental shit …but if you choose you could loose … all respect quick …On some bartek shit …everybody calling you “Bitch”
Number 5 …keep somebody else alive ..sometimes another reply ..
is a sight for sore eyes …
Number 4 … I know you hear this before …the gurl poets don’t want the “Revolution” anymore …. Cause headwraps, backpacks, and Neo~soul died …after (brother to the night) became the “funk” in her thighs …
Number 3 …shudda been number one to me …you a netcee …and this here is internet beef …if you battle here by any means be discrete …so on blast or inbox …make sure you send ‘em heat …
Number 2 …could be the golden rule …if you can … woman or man … find you a crew …there will always be strength in numbers when you move …but make sure they stay true …..and always back what you do ….

Number 1 … this shit here … is done for fun ….don’t get serious ..if nukkas not feeling it …if ya poetry is written ..with plans for real critique … make sure ya title reads…(only real responses please) …
Vets or Newpies print these if you need … oh yeah! before you post ..give the welcome mat a read!!! …the King …’Zin

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74. "ha...that was real, man."
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"Pimping ain't art...but grabbing guns is?!"
(c) Menphyel

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69. "dreams of tossing an OKPfe"
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As step into the booth to put it down wit hot sAUSe
I think of all the OKP’s that I’d love to toss
I’d hit Inspiredfree
from N.Y. to D.C.
but wait till February to freak with Natalie
then fly to the Chi .. to put some humps on 3rd I
throw it back nonstop cause when I post she reply
I doing robynwild dog style while I freestyle
An audio battle with wildout …FROM her moms house
if she’s freakier than Delrica
I got to meet her
She Archive’in every stroke …’CAUSE her ok’s bold
I’m hitting PhotoSynthesis with the quickness
and When I finish …
I’m leaving her with cigarettes *shrugs* winks* and shit
smoke no weed ..But it will take a dime full
To toss mindful
got to be extra lifted to hit something so gifted
Fa sho the curve will serve …ya soulchild
No doubt
Bang LexM …cause she want me to “help a sister out”
Hit Ezzential in the Yukon with the hazards on
now she nominating me for the Artist of the month
Read the 23rd psalm backwards
Hitting Afrika
And pay good money
to bang Hebrewhoney
hit Limbic listening to Limp biscuit
and bang Ambergurl to see how many replies I would get ?
I’d get bored
Banging Orangeloni on the Concorde …
And for … the rock the mic tour
I’d creep with Paperdollpoet
Peep the cd …to see if ladee_is def …
And she got what it takes to rock the mic right to left
Over a Syntax error… I’d bang Mara
but I’m scurred to hit the gurl wit a name like hottlykefiyah
I imagine Imagintion_7’s a live wire …
Freak lunaeco with the play doh …
In the 3rd hole …I’ll Chaste_Souls
case close
dominate Dominicana in the Dominican republic
for the love of it ..(we did it for love!!!)
trick wit
solchild and ergobliss in the same sentence
and spill my Mystic_Elixir
and spell ‘ZIN in Invisible ink
bang clarion , Shyning_Star and specialOne
to the third movement of “Eyes Green” on “Momas Gun”
it’ll take more than Baddu for dasweetesttaboo
but I’m saving the Sade
for my night with WinterBlaze
hit and ditched …Soulstice
for OkayPlayerChic
roll play with wolfie on that Red Robin hood shit
‘Zin put it down … for VirtuousWoman_Found
played Mary J for Reallove
but of all the ass tossed and freaky okp’s
I’ll break out the expertise
when I bang J alise…. haters please!!!

Zugga Zin spit betta in his sig ...
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73. "side splitting."
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(c) Menphyel

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75. "RE: dreams of tossing an OKPfe"
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yeah yeah...dirty rotten crotch ripper rhymin'.ha

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76. "I 'Memba This One --"
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>I’m hitting PhotoSynthesis with the quickness
>and When I finish …
>I’m leaving her with cigarettes *shrugs* winks* and shit

I remember wonderin' why I gotta be hit wit a quickness -- I DON'T LIKE QUICKIES -- *grrrrrrr*


*chuckles*

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I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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70. "Arsenic"
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Arsenic
The flow is arsenic
praying to God the battle verse posted ain’t for you when ‘Zin’s authoring ….

Ya verse …ya style.. delivery suspeckk
Ya words …ya choice… you choose off subject
Ya sound …ya simplicity … displayed to the public
Address what you call truth ... wrong, you rubbed it
Ask ‘em the depth …the meanings … all gutted
The tree …you barkin up is the wrong …but I love it
Your ignorance displayed ….for ya fan base
Weak emotions put on blast …I brought it to ya face
I’m sicker ..than any (w/n)igger … joker to the ace
Rook ..you just another jester ..in the king place
You can Front for them ..but I see through you
This is ya walk of fame son …do what you choose to
If you .. my mental will hit you ..far from subliminal
My words … will smite and curse ..far from minimal
I live … the life ..i write …you can believe that
You whine … and cry ..at night …I can see that
Befriend a man ….and then ..stab him in the back
The blows …you chose ..were low ... so …i think you trailer trash






It’s Arsenic …
praying to God the battle verse posted ain’t for you when ‘Zin’s authoring ….

Ya anger …displaced … disgraced … do you have friends?
No gain … for you … insight …what’s the meaning?
The age … religion …the race … never meant shit
Ya dealings …you choose ..ya fate ..will get you dealt wit
No love ..for self inside …son it’s evident
My views … my reason … your replies … irrelevant
This verse was made for you …who betta too
Get all up in ya azz … like I’m gonna do
The rest …they lack the will …or the power too
But fate … has set the wheels …now I’m in front of you
Ya students … ya men … ya crew …can get serve too
Retreat … and combine … ya shine …I’ll still encompass you
Ya blood …is thin …as water …you know what I mean
The real will see the real … it’s in your blood stream …The Arsenic

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in posted writtens ...
idiots!!!!!!!!
i shit from the up right postion...
and Tim kick
like the champion ...
i am

  

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amazin
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71. "none ohter than he"
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None
other
than
he…
‘Zin the magnificent penman hanging the pennant of the king …at this his pinnacle, fruits at the pestle, the epistle purging in prophecies than pungent tongued mcees would spit only the written betta than these … “him then who?” …I’m next to none … One_Man_free_G.O.A.T. … my ! that’s one amazin finger roll … the jab step is slow and the cock blocks low blows in the hole … that’s my game in the lane … off da chain … maybe once around the back … then I’m to the rack with it … every post message … designed to massage intellectuals with intelligence … betta than, that in which we went to war wit …the resurgence of true mc’ing fuck that backpacker rap … cause I hold left arms and whip asses … slash Craftmatic ..prescribing chiropractic … ‘Zin slips disc’s when he spits …slip ya disc in and Instant Archive my shit to ya A drive … Mr. A game bringer … and every author box claimed by Amazin’s none less than a banger … the lost and found rep. coat checker rapping …baggage handler posting Paper or Plastic … FED ‘Z deliver toxic to ya liver uncontainable …when their missing who they blamin yo! … him who flame throws … internal organs explode … holy scroll ..the intake will bleed the nose … systolic exceeding normal readings … that’s what you get for reading these pig feet mc’s … the fever
..’Zin’ll easily … reduce ya temperature … to the cold slab.. toe tagged … missing in action …just for the satisfaction ..of subtracting …weak rappers … from my kingdom …see … cause if you looking for the realest unadulterated mcee …you looking for
none
other
than
he


Zugga Zin spit betta in his sig ...
than many men's bullspit ...
in posted writtens ...
idiots!!!!!!!!
i shit from the up right postion...
and Tim kick
like the champion ...
i am

  

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amazin
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72. "i hear you talking 2"
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Eeyo …bad mouth trap runners get they shit bashed out and jaws tap quicker than tracker runners … Michael Johnson speed knot …sinners .. stamp ‘Zin …testimonials …Amazin’s “Grace” on pace to be a classic spitter …Greco wrassle with the pen …thumb war with my thoughts …so how you gonna tell me how to be ‘Zin … when you lost …
(((back spin)))) bringitback bringitback bringitback

eeyo…fuck the he say she say …these nukka’s claim wins on Amaze …like they got it on replay …sick …cause he got raped on the payday …the nukka that gassed you ..didn’t tell you what you got into …pride …self esteem shattered … now every time you see me posting …you think I’m talking bout ya …. As if ya still even matter … skills … or bust … on ya bus … but … you spinning wheels … still ..in that same position ..i back bends ‘em …tap out or pass out …either way it’s a submission …you got to be kidding me … net nukka’s ain’t even real to me ..matter of fact jack ...your part of this verse is history …

(((back spin ))) son son …forreal let me tell these cats

sure ya sick of me shitting on mc’s ..but can’t defeat me so fall to ya knees … still the king …I will not be dethroned alone …so you’ll battle …and tell ya friends not to vote fa me …on some he think he’s the illest mc …we don’t like him anyway so damn what he say …but when you on the top look down like I am …they gonna treat you the same way …my rage ruins radical thinking ruffles feathers And rings bells cause I do it well …so imagine …if I didn’t have this… attitude …and I really spit at you …where would you run too?

Zugga Zin spit betta in his sig ...
than many men's bullspit ...
in posted writtens ...
idiots!!!!!!!!
i shit from the up right postion...
and Tim kick
like the champion ...
i am

  

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revion
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20. "**Congrats**"
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it's been a long time coming....now give it to us
like only you know how to

Peace

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21. "congrats..."
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to the man who made me stay and helped me find my funny bone at what could have been a reactionary moment in my life...imagine that, the man who thrives on getting a reaction stopped one from happening

now do your thing and shake the ppl up! and if requests are being taken, i'd like to see one of the may - july 2003 'zin pieces up here. you've been gettin' all soft LOL! *hugs you tight*

you're truly talented.

peace,

n.

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robynwildchild
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22. "OH NO.. look out!!!"
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this is sure to be a most interesting month....

CONGRATULATIONS FINE SIR!!

start it up already!!

~~~~~~~~ luv R.
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23. "RE: July AOTM: Zin aka Amazin' aka "Dat Murried Nug""
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THE CHAMP IS HERE!!!!....

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PhotoSynthesis
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24. "Good Lord Almighty!!!"
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I ain't been paying attention to the AOTM thread, cuz it's just the 2nd -- but I looked up and there's already 24 threads/responses on this post!!! --- *dayummmm*


Zin darlin' -- I'm glad this is your month to (((SHINE))) -- And I have no doubt you'll be dazzlin' us with a lil' bitta' everything you got in your treasure chest! -- *smiles*


NOTE: The line between love & hate was erased a long time ago boo -- I LUV'S YA NOW -- And don't you eva 4~get that!!! -- *wink*



~Shine On~



A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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Decstar
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25. "RE: July AOTM: Zin aka Amazin' aka "Dat Murried Nug""
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BIG UPS, fam.

good lookin on tha shouts, but u know i got u anytime, anyplace.

get to blazin tha month, man


THA CHAMP IS HERE

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30. "lol.. the murried nug?"
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you got married?

anyway, Zin... this you deserve cuz u've grown ova the past year and contributed so-oo much to the boards...

wanna battle?

haha..

peace and congrats!


-Stephani
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www.3kingsmusic.com < for spiritual hiphop
www.enneagraminstitute.com < for self-analysis
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I'm a H.E.R.B.
Holotyped Existance
Rhetoric Bound

You have the strength of Beowulf but cripple it because of your affinity for the monster
You have been sustaining yourself on the gruel of self-destruction for so long your stomach rejects the ambrosia of life
While the hero of your mind stands by without action while the monster of your emotions sever friendship like arteries under the knife~PG

"fingertips of sun
trace the edges of this room
I turn my face so
your leaving does not eclipse
your kiss on back of my neck"~Ambergirl

someday I won't have to tell myself the obvious
or pretend to be oblivious
~Robynwildchild

"pain is usually the source of my work. the way i have dealt with mental adversity is by embracing it, and allowing certain ideals to wash over my consciousness so that i could purge my pain."-tek

The new me is like: A woman killed in ruffles; falling to the ground with her hair spread out; her wrist secreting ambiant neon blood
Juggling the moon and stars in palms; with the flecks in the eyes turning globes confetti like yearns of non-existant love...
Running in barefoot brooks; with the moon arching its reflection up the aching backs where he holds onto my hips and sways me
my dreams are:
Renewing again amoungst the mating mossrocks stay satiated coining a pith in a breathy palms; so so sappy drenching dreary destiny to bloody toned walls
my heart calls: callused and waving kites colors hues meshing, please feel me- I'm so-so soft- scratching like cat napes, round and female with sun-dresses blowing passion.. kiss the wind swiveling tears on cheeks, the light beams behind my curls, I pose and bleeeeeeed with pain on my sleeve...
engulf: anger,sadness, happiness changing to squared rolling wheels, penetrate the projections of emotional mattresses... I feel open.. constantly.. dream of my transparent body unzipping my skin and stepping out of me.. and I run to cotton-candy padded fields and glow with bliss, and he will wait with his arms open- like that of jesus and view me- patiently...cuz he knows I tripped on my way there and I'm all bruised... ~ me



the colors were NEVER accurate!and people dont go thru people!


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63. "A.....:July AOTM: Zin aka Amazin' aka "Dat Murried Nug""
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CHASTE_SOULS, CONGRATS YOU!!!!



ZINFUL :y~~~

  

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65. "Congratultations"
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Good work buddy, i always liked your work

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77. "THIS RIGHT HERE..."
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Zin…you Care to rebuttal ?
Nah …the word choice is humble
For them hum bug
Nukkas looking for trouble outside their bubbles ..
An outburst would disperse
Purse carrying cross dressers …
Faster than a Leer Jet’s 0 to 60 stats …
Or supped up Acura’s boosted on NOS gasses …
I knock asses
that try to provoke
Mic chokes
with knock knock jokes …

who’s there? … Him …
A.K.A. …KING around hurr…
That’s your KING …
Encompassing the rest of these weak beings
Not to be
confused with pink and green …sororities…
royalty…
nukkas!!! bow and kiss the rings …
soundings …similar
but the subject matter changes …
angles …remain …focus …
on those spitting that hocus pocus …
hold up!!!! nukka quote this …
“I am always at the level you wish to achieve by smoking …”

hence there’s not a need for me splurge
expletives …with herbs
unless I have the urge … to return to
the days of my youth
it’s seeming uncouth
to demonstrate euthanasia
on playas …
looking for unity …
with theirs back turned …and signs that read “Just Do Me!”
this screams for attention … from my Timbalands
sending
him and henchmen …
back to the drawing boards for better plans ..
THEM writing again?
Matter of no interest to him
Cause ‘Zin’s opus’s opening
Left them nukkas with they mouths open …..
AHHhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
maze in
bitches mouths … my name stays in
till spit and potential babies drip from bib’less chins …
biblical men …take this physical in
till my son’s creativity’s …beginnings
touch and wet ya neck up …
fast forward pass the rest ‘em
your retorts …
sound like ya’ll got a case of the ‘Zin hick ups…
mad cause ya gurl’s breast…
smells like my mid section …
second guessing …her motives …
while you licking and caressing ‘em …
I’m the best man …
Zin’s Tae Diggs to bitches
In the country ,the ‘burbs or even sex in the city

Mimic this
Merciless and murderous to writtens
Till poppa
Blocks pop ups …
And crew punches like “Doc Oct”
Fools flock …to the scene…
Just to get done in
Runin right into the flames
When I’m gunning …blattow!!!!!

How you like me now ???
Feeling Cool J’ish
Verbal splash sprays like sprinklers on hot days ..
Leaving the heirs ..of this here
With Legion Aires …
Or monkey pox …to mic jocks
I’m time in motion …
My digital phonics’…metronome tocks
Hard to watch …
Set alarms to sleepers …
Soundings are like street sweepers …
I’m infrared to heat seekers …
Mad cow to beef eaters …
Big pussy to lil peeter’s …
Bright light to blind people …
You can’t eat, feel or see me …
I’m broken switches to ass beatings …
The metaphor of a simile…
Simply
I am the stimuli behind guys
The very reason
god created ..haters and beef …
I’m gum to nukkas with out teeth …
Slow flow to a fast beat …
The reason the seasons change …cause my steeze
Switches on nukkas …
And stings ..like jelly fish and bees
He’s
The
Gauntlet gashing mad man that
Gives gimp legged MC’s a reason to stand …
I’ll put this potential energy
Of spitting in perpetual motion
And cut punnie print wearing nukka’s short
I Punish pussies, playa’s and poster’s active or lurkmode
The whole shit as appose
to half shit you come with
I’ll keep it coming ..
And it’ll be bloodshed all month …
The flamed tounge
The place where inspiration comes from …
I move nukkas ….like Century21
Or Remaxx ..
Rematches?
spark heat like matches
break these actors down to the carbon ashes ..
forensic ..sick …tape police
I caution mcess like crime scenes
My foes Identified by eye strains and I V’s
To their iP’s …
I ease …soldier’s attention span’s
When the General reports to duty …
Cause no grunt soldier could do me …
Who he ?
The Magnificent
Monolith
I been called lots of shit
But never been called “fucked wit”
Me and the words don’t fit in the same sentence
Cause I sentence men to lives with
Scars and shit
I alley~oop darts thrown …
By anti Zin lobbyist…
And fill mouths of nukka’s slobbing dick …
The author is
Cocky at times …
So the obvious …is seen like Kelly tapes involving piss….

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Zin
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78. "shit"
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Loiter the rhythm … ‘Zin mental massages ya carcass…twenty minutes after ya loggin …to be exact 19 minutes and fifty seconds flat …send the ills to inject ..intellect …respect …or repercussions …concussions concurrent with blunt-trauma to ya scull piece …in short ( I’ll knock ya ass out over beats).. with any release …a beast … with or without mic’s I’ll still win rings …watch and feel me jack son’s …like the champion ...i am ….. even if I spit it (cixelsyd) ..i’d be the sickest … this in nukka spitting shit backwids … now let you use the last ten seconds ..trying to figure out what I just did
………………………………………………….

3 -2 -1
force feed feeble fast fuckas with upchucks …and chuck 100 degree excrement at the best of them …(hot shit) if swallowed toxic …follow with two glasses of milk and a table spoon of amoxicillin … graze gimp grippers grabbing for the goblet…with the gun tongue and lash out at nukkas for fun ... when the grass is cut … the serpent’s exposed to the sun …so to any and everyone that didn’t want this …
fuck’em ………

from ya Teknicklly speaking dick teasing mcees … to O kp MiNI men with elitist dreams …of stardom …by far the weakest team … and bitchest men ….you know who you are … names no need …LaUgHinG at mofo’s with long ass names …scare to get at nukkas on his team …Lik at the Lisp spittin bastid … if he asking …cocky ass kids …thinking he runs shit …when I pull the strings …. I AM and always will be the mofokin KING …and always AOTM …Amazin On The Mic …you the best nukka that writes … cause you the only asshole writing …open ya eyes …fukc what I’m saying ..their’s envy in ya tribe …


next is the alias’s alias … you failing … I’m perched atop …..and you lack essentials to stop me …oxygen … ya’ll nukkas ain’t even breathing ….when ya reading … let out crys for help … and stop holding ya breath …you couldn’t breathe breath for breath with the best ..if you spit it as a man or woman …against one man … I am that …which encompasses and eclipses weak shit … so if you feel the dart hits …speak freak …

who else …oh! promising promotional promiscuity…of you dick ride me …gives a gut check to gluttons …of this “beat ya ass like you stole something” …nukka nuttin over tracks … I beat it … get it I beat it ? well if you didn’t peep the remix …I give to nukkas when they want it …iso if you asking you can ..well …. get it …now beat it?

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Zin
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79. "two thewack ass nukkas"
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Hip Hop

In the days of growin up on the block …
Pitching forty tops …when the shorties flocked …
to basketball courts and watch …
jellys ..ripped jeans .and bike shorts …
double~dutch queens …and jumping ditches was a sport …
life was sweet
collecting cans and bottles … for a penny each
and Gump’s aunt was the same age as me …
werd PG (Pokies Grave)
I was crushed after I grind her in the backseat
and she knows we did …but she told all her friends we didn’t
never kidded …
cause lying on ya dick lost you inches ….
And stepping on the lines … meant ya moma drunk wine …
Remember that …
The opposite of fresh was whack …
And stepping on the crack …broke ya momma’s back …
skeeza's was hoes ...and you never spilt the poles..
always walked on the side with the oldest…
who knows this …
ever lost a bike cause you let ya boy hold it and somebody stole it
and three days later you got to fuck ya boy up over it …
the boldest nukkas ride ya shit two blocks over …
just so you won’t know it …
and their was a nukka everybody in the hood was scared of before cats evea heard of debo
ya’ll cats ain’t in the know…

ya’ll nukkas ain’t hip hop …
ya’ll nukkas ain’t one, twos and it don’t stops …
ya’ll nukkas ain’t head bops …
ya’ll nukkas just …..nukkas …..listening to fifty


this here is hip hop
this shit here don’t stop …
this is that
head nod …cause ya neck knows it’ fat …
if don’t know where it comes from …where ya at? …
I trying to figure out … why ya’ll nukkas whack




Back in the days of mopeds …red and blue do rags
And don’t forget the straitening comb pass …( I had to pass the shit to my moms)
Miami Vice on Friday nights … Tubbs and Crock
the Dukes of HaZzard … with the flag on top …
son
I got USED by Elie …then Damaged
Till the rayon shirts ..with the Swede Bally’s
Mimicked … Scoob and Scrap
Cause each and every cat that rapped …
Hit the stage with the dancers on the side …
Damn ..remember T- ROY died …
And Hev… went on a peaceful journey …
Then CREAM turned into money…
I must admit Purple Rain was the shit …
And short gay ass Prince .. had the baddest chics ..
Broad daylight taking skinny dips …
…follow the geri curl drips ….follow the drip …
tumbling … and kid and play movies …
King’s Dominion had ….the big ass Sugar Daddies…
and you used baby oil if you were ashy
fuck it!! what chu’kno bout popping the plug …
June bugs …
water fights …or street football ..wit sideline pop … hop scotch …
curb ball …or a bike rim nailed to a tree …
yo !!!! no dunking … red light 1 2 3 …
dirt rocks …Pellets and BB’s
in school sneaking candy …
pitching pennys … and lost all ya lunch money …
ya’ll cats don’t hear me ….

Cause
ya’ll nukkas ain’t hip hop …
ya’ll nukkas ain’t one, twos and it don’t stops …
ya’ll nukkas ain’t head bops …
ya’ll nukkas just …..nukkas …..listening to fifty


this here is hip hop
this shit here don’t stop …
this is that
head nod …cause ya neck knows it’ fat …
if don’t know where it comes from …where ya at? …
I trying to figure out … why ya’ll nukkas whack

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Natalie
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84. "*smiles*"
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should be "what you know 'bout bein' an eighties child" (not baby, but child or kid growing up and playing then). i really enjoyed this 'cause there are so many memorable lines. this one in particular:

"and jumping ditches was a sport"

we used to play some serious games and one miscalculated ditch jump tore two gashes in my left knee that had all the flesh showing...whoops! this is going to be archived, huh? oh well thanks for bringing back all kinds of childhood memories. lol!

peace,

n.

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102. "i giggled at this"
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never kidded …
cause lying on ya dick lost you inches ….
And stepping on the lines … meant ya moma drunk wine …
Remember that …
The opposite of fresh was whack …
And stepping on the crack …broke ya momma’s back …
skeeza's was hoes ...and you never spilt the poles..
always walked on the side with the oldest…
who knows this …
ever lost a bike cause you let ya boy hold it and somebody stole it
and three days later you got to fuck ya boy up over it …

but the flow is sick Zin... for real...













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80. "hot"
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He…that sends the flame ..force feedin ‘em …’Z ~eye hit ‘em with the fire starter ridim ..
Him …the him from down stairs …the stop … the cookie getter… the answer to the question of who’s the nicest nukka in this …
I …the priceless on the price is right list …ya dollar bet against could never let you win … fuck ya credits
Me …mic man …magma mouth …excrement ..breath ..face talking cause I spit that hot shit …
Mr. Arrogant … my ego’s extent is and extension of my skills ..not my dick …

And as a mater of fact…

I doo think my shit stinks …it reeks of the hotness …you could never reach …


Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeven …
If wordsworth wrote ya whole speech …you couldn’t find enough rhyminin words …to rhyme within reason …
My Seasons … meet with men and tenderize …eyes hince the N …cause the mention of my name automatically notifies ya next of kin …

(Hold on I got a beep )

lefrak21 (10:45:42 PM): eight men out...we runnin suicides...brick yard...hit hard...strength in numbers...multiplied danger danger...cant stop the hunger...basement flows...back alley gamble...shoot the grip yall..collect it got damn you!!!...trade off spots and engulf liquor shots....i picture rocks flying head high like triggered glocks....its disfigured knots out of place...watch ya emblem...a street soldier violated for some conscious wisdom...

(I’m back)

oh No not them!!! … tag team ..dream … foot work Olajuwan … Ric tell nukkas what’s going on …

MiracleSlick (10:49:55 PM): hot
MiracleSlick (10:49:57 PM): ass
MiracleSlick (10:49:58 PM): lines

I spit …the speech of mimes … monks …and any nukka that vowed silence … I ‘m an ass getting Catholic Arch Bishop … confession telling …my words stick to ribs and melons …a drunk driver driving my pen to a write in … with this pen chained to my wrist …I heard the sirens … I put the pedal to the metal and my dick to the sky …

dtothasky (11:01:45 PM): i pass tha bar with handcuffs on
why?

dtothasky (11:02:55 PM):cause tha brink of redemption is tha end of insanity

so I guess with this I fess that I’ve redeemed …the thoughts of those who felt I wouldn’t do damage

dtothasky (11:05:08 PM): there u have it

and the rest …I murk ‘em and leave ‘em

sistawitafro (11:06:48 PM): Hot like them old people in the boost commercial…

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81. "ill advised"
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Consider this an ill-advised spill on guys
Nukkas! Zin spit then up verses …just to get a rise
But in actuality ..shit didn’t even raise my eye brows
Thinking his poetry side … won’t flip on nukkas like butter fly knives
Amazin …act like the hand ain’t quicker than the eye
Cause I’m focused
I already dissed you before you wrote that hocus pocus
For the hopeless …Zin’s Opus is open
But bring ya best shit …
Fuck that quoting the clef notes shit
Master with .. words fitness script or unscripted
Thas free style or written
Corner , block, or ya baby moma’s kitchen
I gets bizzy …best nukka in or outta the biznus
there’s no iller recipe
since Martha Swart hit cellblock B …
she inside
insider trading trays and playing spades
while I freaks
these 250lbs on 250 count sheets

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82. "NO!"
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Zin nukkas!! …iller than HIV positive
Prostate cancer pulps …that traveled to ya knoggin
Author …
of infectious increments of the illest shit …
the equivalent to intravenous over doses of medicines
it’s evident …
when the weather gets … foul… the weak get wet …
so if I’m brain storming getting soaked .. you’d expect
when I loggin look for exits …
messy …plus I’m nothing to mess with…
the best is … classic …
If I posted writtens it’d be in hieroglyphics ..
Most don’t hold interest …
dow jones listings nonexistent …
while the rest …just …well to be frank …sound like bitches..
daddy’s gurl nukkas …I tuck ‘em in with good night kisses
crack the door right? …and leave on the hall light …
in my sleep I bangs and banks ‘em
with this Langston
in two words
ya’ll nukkas just some dreams deferred
herbs …
could never see or be One_Man
cause I spit with my finger tips and shit with my pen
iller than …al scratch
‘Zin stays unmatched …
and those that try to match stick
get flipped like mattress’s
you lacking springs … and ability to create new things
while my changed sheets …
posted more babies than ya family tree…
all and each one of ya’ll are just maybe’s …
cause you’ll never reach ya full potentials against me …

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83. "RE: July AOTM: Zin aka Amazin' aka "Dat Murried Nug""
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Cry baby cry!!! …
the fiscal year ends and tears run over cheeks … ‘Zin speaks …
Stop the wailing !!!
Bob Marley back up act up and get up stand up …ya’ll crying ass cats need to man up …
van up ..drop squad to ya noggin …author boxing …I punch ‘em the face with this shit here …
Smear queers!!! …
throw back and run …you Joe Gibbs…trying revive ya ugly ass game …looking like Tyrone Hill
I am me… (Nukkas !!!)
And ya’ll just weak … f –a- b- o- loso ..magnifico ..the swagger daggers …ass holes … fago’s …case close …trick nukkas think it’s difference ..if you’re the nukka that gets or you’re the nukka that blows …

(speaking voice ) Now you have to really read that last line …
Now back to the regularly scheduled ..ass reaming

Salt water faces frown back at your computer screens … parental advisory … cause ya daddy’s not as live as he …
He who?
‘Zin flu …the sickest …wickedest…ya small pox shots …get hit with these rickets ..it is …the shittiest …e~COLI808 ..dyslexic dissect it … h to the c- t- i- b ..fly is he …Dick you down Vitally… verbally unblemished ..when you spit … and when I score you scream …LOESIN BABY!!

(speaking voice) Okay I know the Dick Vitale line was over the top … but let me elaborate a lil bit on it


The diaper dandie anise pansy ass nukkas in the game still rocking jeans missing the ass cheeks …I purple rain ..
Appllonia six …bitches ..in the culb with they thongs exposed … some sex shooting hoes….

( speaking voice) Now this shit here is funny… “I’m your sex shooter…” oh kay let me finish this…

Sissco …blonde and beautiful … Dru Hill dragon slaying Buffy ass nukkas … condition critical ..i think we losing ‘em …
Matter of fact …I could give a damn if ya wack ass never come back … TO HELL !! wit ya Jansport toting ass ….

(speaking voice) Please forward all replies to this post to: yo moma!!!... with her stanking ass …

the fact remains I’m still the king stop fronting …
the fact remains I’m still the king stop fronting …

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85. "everlasting, huh?"
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lol! only you! and this line had me going, huh????:

"Sissco …blonde and beautiful"

i like a man who can acknowledge beauty in another man uh huh. yeah. i'm just messing with you. hope you enjoyed all that the month had to bring you.

peace,

n.

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87. "congratulations..."
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...it's long overdue, peace to you and your fam..




"During the day – I swim with Dolphins
At sunset – I sprout wings and soar with eagles & nocturnal owls
And at twilight – I retreat to the safety of Mother Earth’s womb
As Father time comforts & heals Love’s wounds
So once again I can skip across painted poetic stones
Leaving footprints in the bottom of hourglass sands
Rejoice in renewal --
Bow down --
Fold hands --"

--Photosynthesis

http://www.GaryPatrickGarry.com

"I'm stalling in flight
Hovering over horizons
Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
--Photosynthesis

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88. "Thank You GUYS!!!!!!"
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to those that supported with and without replies ..........

I would just like to say …it has been a pleasure being AOTM this month what an early berfday present …

My mother always told me make the best of what you have ...i am neither poet nor MC these are just my feelings shared with you guys .....thanks for listening ...and now to say something meaningful .......



Please register to VOTE and VOTE so some changes can be made in the U.S.

Please stop the rate of AIDS, domestic abuse and all the ill’s that plague our society today ….
And SPREAD LOVE!!!!!!!


In Memory ...of GTP... Anthony ...Rob...Hattie ...Joe ....Bobbie ...Peter Sr.&Jr. and every Parker beofre me that held it down for my family.


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90. "You're Welcome -- ;^)"
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And thanks for blessing us -- And the ARCHIVES -- With your thoughts, words, & sentiments -- With your battle stances and word romances!


You done good boo! -- *wink*


Your "crown" will be under glass in the ARCHIVES -- Along with this thread! -- *wink*

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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91. "Encore"
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Gone the great Gatsby of the post with the raspy audios …the gift of gab flo…Un~institutional
No rules of writing can contain …the cold shoulder of … cold war writtens …vs. many men …
Crowned …board renowned…ummmmm… KING … thas the monarchy …dart archery ..spitting Grand …among this petty larceny
Those I fathered watch and mock me … cause most sons learn emo~shuns …copying daddy …and going thru the motions …
A.O.T.M. Amazin On The Mic …forever the etchings …sketched…epics’ burnt optics and evicted mceees spittin whack shit …
The battle record controversial …depending on who you asking …but most mofockas left with their asses hand back …
Others acting …like they not feeling the rappings …so for Christmas I grinch ‘em …and leave the bad kids madd …
Spit it for those who never had …
I‘m a have not … with the pad lock …on this board to reek havvvvoc …
So for one last past …
As…Artist of the Month …
Amazin
One man
Zin
I wait for the haters to come out and say something …
But I hear none …
Get in line …Uno …card game flo …
poker face …most all ready know …
I’m gone …no alias ..no lurkmode ….
But If I come in and I see it ..
i’m posting you can believe it …
So think about ya running off at the mouth …while I’m out …
And Keep ya dick beaters off the crown

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103. "sickness"
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n/m

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"Too weird to live.... too rare to die..."

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92. "Enough"
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of this here.....it's booth time nukka.

my ish will be done by end of year, why you draggin'?

quit tryna become a beat pimp and rhyme fool.

Basura Caliente:

S.A.U.S.E. - Distributary
The Movie Stars - Coming to the Stage

"I school a beat like I'm Aus at Harvard" - Miracle Ric

"Bless yo heart!!!!"

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93. "Git Him AUS !!! --"
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Drag his ass to fame an fortune -- Just don't forget my autographed copy -- And my front row tickets -- And my backstage passes! -- *wink*

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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97. "bonus tracks"
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get my august....on

He…that sends the flame ..force feedin ‘em …’Z ~eye hit ‘em with the fire starter ridim ..
Him …the him from down stairs …the stop … the cookie getter… the answer to the question of who’s the nicest nukka in this …
I …the priceless on the price is right list …ya dollar bet against could never let you win … fuck ya credits
Me …mic man …magma mouth …excrement ..breath ..face talking cause I spit that hot shit …
Mr. Arrogant … my ego’s extent is and extension of my skills ..not my dick …

And as a mater of fact…

I doo think my shit stinks …it reeks of the hotness …you could never reach …


Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeven …
If wordsworth wrote ya whole speech …you couldn’t find enough rhyminin words …to rhyme within reason …
My Seasons … meet with men and tenderize …eyes hince the N …cause the mention of my name automatically notifies ya next of kin …

(Hold on I got a beep )

lefrak21 (10:45:42 PM): eight men out...we runnin suicides...brick yard...hit hard...strength in numbers...multiplied danger danger...cant stop the hunger...basement flows...back alley gamble...shoot the grip yall..collect it got damn you!!!...trade off spots and engulf liquor shots....i picture rocks flying head high like triggered glocks....its disfigured knots out of place...watch ya emblem...a street soldier violated for some conscious wisdom...

(I’m back)

oh No not them!!! … tag team ..dream … foot work Olajuwan … Ric tell nukkas what’s going on …

MiracleSlick (10:49:55 PM): hot
MiracleSlick (10:49:57 PM): ass
MiracleSlick (10:49:58 PM): lines

I spit …the speech of mimes … monks …and any nukka that vowed silence … I ‘m an ass getting Catholic Arch Bishop … confession telling …my words stick to ribs and melons …a drunk driver driving my pen to a write in … with this pen chained to my wrist …I heard the sirens … I put the pedal to the metal and my dick to the sky …

dtothasky (11:01:45 PM): i pass tha bar with handcuffs on
why?

dtothasky (11:02:55 PM):cause tha brink of redemption is tha end of insanity

so I guess with this I fess that I’ve redeemed …the thoughts of those who felt I wouldn’t do damage

dtothasky (11:05:08 PM): there u have it

and the rest …I murk ‘em and leave ‘em

sistawitafro (11:06:48 PM): Hot like them old people in the boost commercial…


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98. "bonus track"
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Consider the battle plans handed for combat …
combatants …
militants …fall … even innocent by standers …
acts of war …declared …
the answer …nothing sacred …
the walls shake …. houses quake …
then crumble no man’s safe …the scene falls into place …
the face …
confused …
tears men women and children run at the same pace … picture this muse … brothers verses father and sons …
daughters and mothers under god …
brains washed against each other …
a crabs bucket …
no way outta the bushel but the pot …the flames lick …from hell’s kitchen …
the steam is so hot …
this otto …to be enough speech to bring about change …
but these eyes …so filled with envy …
it’s hard to see my reasoning …
if we each one …teach one uplift one …
the seeds wouldn’t die young …
but take root …even on adamant ground ….
the heart’s sound pounds so loud ..
it’s deafening to ears …
cause the truth’s not what you really wanta hear …
the truth hurts …the battle …given up … infantry soldiers deserted …love concurred all … but this was just a war of words …my pen fights the page …the page fights to turn …each turn ..turns a new leaf …each leaf loose …dies and refuses to bear fruit …the dead fruit …returns to the earth and nurtures the soil …and the soil sends the nutrients back to the roots …the cycle 360 …did you miss me … knowledge given …battle tested armor ready …every ready the batteries …to blast the cannons of understanding … case wisdom conjures and conquers brains …and shits a knowledge stain … as a battle plan … ‘Zin!!!!


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99. "i'll show you how to do this hunn...bonus"
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fam I’m ya favorite fuck an Artist of the month ...i hold for the ladies the jewels choice ...keep ya lips moist ...flow fa knowledge ..if you giving ...freestyle ..no hands ...parential guidance ..momie use ya head ...

betta in bed than ...any other man or woman ...underlying meanings means you on top ...riding the stallion ...last mandingo flo for the main event ...star of the show ....i'll make you famous

burning who can blame us ....numbers exchanged ....

my aim is lust

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100. "padding the stats"
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i just wanted to see 100 reps. .........
ayo nukas hated ...but i made it tho
nukkas like zin can't be faded yo ....
so to the alias ...blahze' ..
and to them nukkas that hate ...fuck you anyway ...bastids ...

Aus i hope you was recording that shit!!!!

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104. "*head nod*"
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101. "*applauds*"
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well done, indeed.

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myself is sculptor of
your body’s idiom:
the musician of your wrists;
the poet who is afraid
only to mistranslate
a rhythm in your hair...
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