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soulchild
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"and you? (add on about yaself)"


  

          

there's a rattle in my forehead
shaking
shaking
shaking

and i'm wonderin how to turn the world down...



soul.


  

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RE: and you? (add on about yaself)
Jul 21st 2004
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RE: and you? (add on about yaself)
Jul 21st 2004
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RE: and you? (add on about yaself)
Jul 21st 2004
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niiiicccee.... *noddin head*
Jul 23rd 2004
14
i'm
Jul 22nd 2004
4
RE: and you? (add on about yaself)
Jul 23rd 2004
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RE: and you? (add on about yaself)
Jul 23rd 2004
6
RE: and you? (add on about yaself)
Jul 23rd 2004
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RE: and you? (add on about yaself)
Jul 23rd 2004
7
yo wolfman
Jul 23rd 2004
8
RE: yo wolfman
Jul 23rd 2004
16
RE: and you? (add on about yaself)
Jul 23rd 2004
10
thanks for the llooovvvveeeee
Jul 23rd 2004
15
nice
Aug 10th 2004
59
i still don't know shit
emptystevies
Jul 23rd 2004
11
RE: and you? (add on about yaself)
TheOldElKaBONGtypeNice
Jul 23rd 2004
12
RE: and you? (add on about yaself)
Jul 23rd 2004
13
word.
Jul 24th 2004
23
RE: and you? (add on about yaself)
Jul 23rd 2004
17
RE: and you? (add on about yaself)
Jul 23rd 2004
18
Me...
PetraP
Jul 23rd 2004
19
gatti-ward-ism
emptystevies
Jul 23rd 2004
20
damn...
Jul 23rd 2004
21
see,
Jul 24th 2004
22
WoW
Jul 24th 2004
26
May I please
Jul 24th 2004
31
      RE: May I please
Jul 25th 2004
32
RE: and you? (add on about yaself)
Jul 24th 2004
24
RE: and you? (add on about yaself)
Jul 24th 2004
25
love me or leave me alone
emptystevies
Jul 24th 2004
27
ME!!!
Jul 24th 2004
28
classic! (((((bump))))))
Aug 03rd 2004
49
RE: and you? (add on about yaself)
Jul 24th 2004
29
i
Jul 24th 2004
30
thanks everybody
Jul 25th 2004
33
TWO WEEKS???
Jul 28th 2004
34
be safe love... nm
Jul 28th 2004
35
RE: and you? (add on about yaself)
Aug 01st 2004
36
say what?!
Aug 01st 2004
37
where i used to be -- 'how sad'
Aug 01st 2004
38
message to God
Aug 01st 2004
39
word
Aug 02nd 2004
41
RE: and you? (add on about yaself)
Aug 01st 2004
40
I am nothing
Aug 02nd 2004
42
RE: and you? (add on about yaself)
Aug 02nd 2004
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RE: and you? (add on about yaself)
Aug 03rd 2004
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searching...
Aug 03rd 2004
45
RE: searching...
Aug 03rd 2004
46
RE: and you? (add on about yaself)
Aug 03rd 2004
47
I feel like a shell
Pulchritudinous
Aug 03rd 2004
48
::archive::
Aug 04th 2004
50
Second That -- :::ARCHIVE:::
Aug 04th 2004
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      RE: Second That -- :::ARCHIVE:::
Aug 07th 2004
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RE: and you? (add on about yaself)
Aug 09th 2004
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Ain't nothin better than me...
Aug 09th 2004
54
*nods*
Aug 10th 2004
55
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Aug 10th 2004
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Aug 10th 2004
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PhotoSynthesis
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1. "RE: and you? (add on about yaself)"
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Voices keep tellin' me to save the world
But I cut off their tongues every night
And go to sleep

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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InFluenCe
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2. "RE: and you? (add on about yaself)"
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regrets from two years back are haunting me...
i want to go back in time
i want the feeling of real affection
i want to grow older knowing i did the right thing

...regrets, haunting my soul...

______________________
i try to practice my war like tactics, but in the clutch of your touch my armor just collapses - mighty mos def

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Revolt
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Wed Jul-21-04 09:15 PM

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3. "RE: and you? (add on about yaself)"
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i'm on the quest to find beautiful:

somewhere between the time when the sun and moon switch places
and our eyes adjust to the mellow light sensation
of that white sphere beckonining us to open up our souls
heartache and past pains can be erased
when you let the moonlight caress your face...

i see his eyes gaping ready to absorb me for the taking
soft skins and slow motion rhythms entering
and exiting each other's vibrations...

reeeeeeeeeeeewind...

morning light...set in our closed eyes
red patterns kaleidoscopic
sheets scattered, heartbeats thumping
hair tousled...thoughts jumping
in the blissful silence
sun arose smiling,
kissing the bodies emptied with fullness.
he breathes my sweat, twirls my hair
returns to his slumber...knowing..

this is what beautiful is.


____________



"I'm nothing like me..." -KnowOne



"In this Solitude my soul cry lets loose, and this Verse of verses of Verse only become useless as earth grounds that produce no fruit…curs-ed…is…You…under-appreciation my eternal sickness…SARS like--with multiple victims…so I return back to the grave of unconscious societies, that are all the product of overactive wishes and hopes and dreams…hopeless aspirations that bank on faith’s substance to give them manifest activity…and I am now that Shadow that lurks over 2:30 hours…wondering what the hell to make of me…
" -.

"P.S. You don't have to read my shit just cuz I read yours...it was my pleasure."
-NoBle

The avy: Phelipe Haagensen aka 'Bene' from Cidade de Deus.


  

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14. "niiiicccee.... *noddin head*"
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Breathe E.Z.
~Zhana Vee~
all work (c) Copyright 2004 (or as dated)

BlackPlanet ID: Phenomenality

~~We are not human-beings having a spiritual experience, We are spiritual-beings having a human experience. You are the product... of the Karma of your Soul~~

~ Be humble, for you are made of the earth... Be noble, for you are made of the stars.. ~

...

Vee is I and I am She

...

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http://instagram.com/i.am.phenomenality

  

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mindful
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4. "i'm"
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lost within myself
swimming gets me nowhere,
only tired arms
and worn legs
hoping tomorrow
will be better than today...













================
is a
©googlism for tremaine




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my work
http://meetmsmindful.wordpress.com
http://www.lulu.com/content/7598631
http://evan-roth.com/grey.php

  

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Otto
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Fri Jul-23-04 08:12 AM

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5. "RE: and you? (add on about yaself)"
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i'm running
and running
and...

...

...running.

but i keep coming back to the same place.

-Otto

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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6. "RE: and you? (add on about yaself)"
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I saw a glint of light at the end of the tunnel
S l o w l y -- I walked toward it
It was a reflection in the mirror of my smile
I may be lost -- But at least my teeth are bright! -- *chuckles*

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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soulchild
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9. "RE: and you? (add on about yaself)"
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lol, nice photo, 'cus errbody likes them some good teeth!

soul.


  

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wolfie
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7. "RE: and you? (add on about yaself)"
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i've written a letter
swallowed it
and bottled it in my soul.

i've set myself adrift,
hoping to wash up on distant shores,
but i have yet to be found.

~*~*~*~*~*~*~newolf~*~*~*~*~*~*~

the light: so, you're having a pre-pre-midlfe crisis?
wolfie: yes.
the light: well, that's wonderful!


icantspell

  

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Otto
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8. "yo wolfman"
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that was hotness!!

-Otto

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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16. "RE: yo wolfman"
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Otto sweetie -- Check the profile -- Her name is: "Nora Wolf" -- aka -- wolfie! -- But don't feel bad, I've seen a lotta folks mistake the name "wolfie" for a dude! -- *chuckles*

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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soulchild
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10. "RE: and you? (add on about yaself)"
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gonna hafta agree with otto,
that is a nice one, wolf

soul.


  

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15. "thanks for the llooovvvveeeee"
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p.s.

otto -- i'm a girl ::smiles::

~*~*~*~*~*~*~newolf~*~*~*~*~*~*~

the light: so, you're having a pre-pre-midlfe crisis?
wolfie: yes.
the light: well, that's wonderful!


icantspell

  

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earthsista
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59. "nice"
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>i've written a letter
>swallowed it
>and bottled it in my soul.
>
>i've set myself adrift,
>hoping to wash up on distant shores,
>but i have yet to be found.

~sig~
When ppl show you who they are- BELIEVE them. ~Maya Angelou

  

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emptystevies

Fri Jul-23-04 10:16 AM

  
11. "i still don't know shit"
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path of least resistance
waterflow through mountain valleys
letting gravity take me
back to the Source

  

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TheOldElKaBONGtypeNice

Fri Jul-23-04 10:30 AM

  
12. "RE: and you? (add on about yaself)"
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Fri Jul-23-04 10:30 AM

          

I got:
Paint on my sleeve where my heart used to go
I got:
Tainted emcees ice grillin my shows

1 for three and 2 for five with the joints and the jive
and a million and 1 goals for which to strive

I'm my mom and dad's metaphor and my sister's hacksaw and my brothers' punching bag with a stabbed-in-the-back flaw - JADED

ronin wingman for the apothecary with fatcaps in my pocket.

I spray bombs on your mind... sometimes.

et cetera, et ceterahhh et. cet. er. aaaaahhhh



Izzel KizzaBizzong

  

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blak_yukon
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13. "RE: and you? (add on about yaself)"
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me?
i'm happy with the fact
that being aggravated
cant last forever,y'know
its cool to feel you deserve
cool to be arrogant some of the times
while for the most play humble,y'know

yeah, i'm stickin'with that

----------sig-----------

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me and the fellas would converge and heat up some Hot Pockets in preparation for Rap City.© Roc

dude, getting a response from the folks at freestyle is like watching water boil...© Tek

  

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soulchild
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23. "word."
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n/m

soul.


  

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17. "RE: and you? (add on about yaself)"
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Fri Jul-23-04 02:18 PM

          

My shadow jumped out at me
As the sun eclipsed behind cloud~cover
I jumped right back and smacked her ass somewhere over the rainbow
Now everytime I walk -- Skittles follow me -- *heheh*

Nahhh but really tho -- Translation:

Sometime me -- myself -- & -- I -- fight for control
Cuz there are many facets to this photographic prism
Shadows of my past mistakes & old habits try to creep back and jump @ me --
(Part of the "control" tactic)
But I know my strength & power now --
So I smack -- (Not literally of course) -- But I push aside my self doubts or insecurities
And move along with assurance & confidence
EVEN WHEN I DON'T FEEL IT
Cuz it will eventually manifest itself
If I walk IN it
Talk IN it
Wear it like a coat or sweater
*Smiles* are Skittles by the way -- ;^)

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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delrica
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18. "RE: and you? (add on about yaself)"
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The voices have said too much
And I listened too long
Now I must push on
Grasping at reality
So I can become myself again
And care once more

----------------------
Cop my stuff, mayne!

My first chapbook: "This Chapbook Was Made With Pilfered Office Products" available now - $6.00

My 2nd chapbook, coming in 2007: "Orgasms and Ice Cream"

fmi: http://www.myspace.com/delrica

  

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PetraP

Fri Jul-23-04 05:35 PM

  
19. "Me..."
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I sought your company
to fulfill my dreams
and realized
that only I could do so!

  

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emptystevies

Fri Jul-23-04 08:33 PM

  
20. "gatti-ward-ism"
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lately it feels like:

i'm taking too many hits
fatigue lowers my guard
mickey sticks me with his signature
up is down and left ain't left no more
legs buckle
corner says run
t.atlas pleads into headpiece, "he's gotta wrap him up, or this fights done!"
survival instincts kick in
wild loopin' right connects to the chin
corners and crowd see momentum and emotions swing
now the real test of wills and character begins





  

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InFluenCe
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21. "damn..."
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i gotta give it up to the ladies... theyre very well poets... keep on bringing the heat please =]

______________________
i try to practice my war like tactics, but in the clutch of your touch my armor just collapses - mighty mos def

www.myspace.com/methodicaleddie

  

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soulchild
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22. "see,"
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Sat Jul-24-04 05:52 AM

  

          

I don't like pictures.
they tend to lick that
stretch of the world
where my mouth perpetually squints.
I don't like pictures.
'cause pretty is a verb
and beauty don't know how
to sit still.

soul.


  

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PhotoSynthesis
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26. "WoW"
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I see! -- ;^)

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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31. "May I please"
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put this in my sig:
>I don't like pictures.
>'cause pretty is a verb
>and beauty don't know how
>to sit still.


DamN.....these words right here^ I couldn't love them more. Especially since I am (imo) unphotogenic.

  

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soulchild
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32. "RE: May I please"
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oh, wow, yeah. it's an honor to be in your sig.
and i hear you about being photogenic...i'm not either!

soul.


  

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Annabanana
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24. "RE: and you? (add on about yaself)"
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there's a fire in my knees
blistering, raging.
if i had a direction, i'd run.

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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25. "RE: and you? (add on about yaself)"
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There's no need in tryna figure me out
I'm NOT normal
Just love me
Or leave me alone

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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emptystevies

Sat Jul-24-04 09:28 AM

  
27. "love me or leave me alone"
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that brand nubian ish
track 10, " in god we trust" '92

recently relayed this exact message to an X. ya know how long i've been waitin' to say that to someone
the ultimate ultimatum, the breaking point

thank God for brand nubian!

  

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2blac4u
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28. "ME!!!"
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come closer O brotha of my familiar
swim in the abyss of my liquid brown
eyes
drink thirstily from my well
and know
ME!
im so black
i cradle midnight in my arms
and call him sun
ME!
like fine wine my mind
is the cellar of thought
were vocabulary and expressions age
to become wisdom
Me!
my hips swing like the pendulum
of a grandfather clock
timex stops to catch my rhythm
Me!
i am earth
the beginning of all creation
my brown body bears the fruit
of civilization
do
ya
see
brotha’s?
this is ME!!!!



"Poetry is when an Emotion has found its Thought, and Thought, has found Words".. ~Unknown~

"The Poet is a Liar that always speaks the Truth"..~Unknown~

  

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49. "classic! (((((bump))))))"
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-Stephani
www.webspawner.com/users/delicateaurasoul/index.html

www.3kingsmusic.com < for spiritual hiphop
www.enneagraminstitute.com < for self-analysis
www.hiphopinfinity.com < an awesome ughh site
I'm a H.E.R.B.
Holotyped Existance
Rhetoric Bound


rules are for those that need structure
discipline is for the anal retentive and power hungry
repeated tests are the only thing of which i speak
we need to be tested to find out which part of the soul is weak~robynwildchild

You have the strength of Beowulf but cripple it because of your affinity for the monster
You have been sustaining yourself on the gruel of self-destruction for so long your stomach rejects the ambrosia of life
While the hero of your mind stands by without action while the monster of your emotions sever friendship like arteries under the knife~PG

"fingertips of sun
trace the edges of this room
I turn my face so
your leaving does not eclipse
your kiss on back of my neck"~Ambergirl

someday I won't have to tell myself the obvious
or pretend to be oblivious
~Robynwildchild

"pain is usually the source of my work. the way i have dealt with mental adversity is by embracing it, and allowing certain ideals to wash over my consciousness so that i could purge my pain."-tek

The new me is like: A woman killed in ruffles; falling to the ground with her hair spread out; her wrist secreting ambiant neon blood
Juggling the moon and stars in palms; with the flecks in the eyes turning globes confetti like yearns of non-existant love...
Running in barefoot brooks; with the moon arching its reflection up the aching backs where he holds onto my hips and sways me
my dreams are:
Renewing again amoungst the mating mossrocks stay satiated coining a pith in a breathy palms; so so sappy drenching dreary destiny to bloody toned walls
my heart calls: callused and waving kites colors hues meshing, please feel me- I'm so-so soft- scratching like cat napes, round and female with sun-dresses blowing passion.. kiss the wind swiveling tears on cheeks, the light beams behind my curls, I pose and bleeeeeeed with pain on my sleeve...
engulf: anger,sadness, happiness changing to squared rolling wheels, penetrate the projections of emotional mattresses... I feel open.. constantly.. dream of my transparent body unzipping my skin and stepping out of me.. and I run to cotton-candy padded fields and glow with bliss, and he will wait with his arms open- like that of jesus and view me- patiently...cuz he knows I tripped on my way there and I'm all bruised... ~ me



the colors were NEVER accurate!and people dont go thru people!


my music:
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-NgNuVHrEKI

  

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29. "RE: and you? (add on about yaself)"
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I see the future when I sleep
I have to fight to pray and think
I am in sink with all of my senses
I have more than six...I am a gift
Not to women..well maybe one and a better living
Often misunderstood..my parents moved me to the burbs
I still found a way to the hood and learned how to serve
I still serve but its the afrodisiacs to soothe nerves
And light minds...I can quiver spines with no effort
Every sister...white women alike
that see me on the street try to pick my brain
Playing sexual war games
Wanting to be the nucleus in my late night mind state
I tell em I'm celibate they contemplate how to change my ways
I Moses my path in between disrespect and hate
I know off of verbatim the formula for God's pace

~Complex with the creative content on a conquest with concepts and context as concrete as poetry
~Its real and ill when I be sitting still yet still rocking to my mental rhythme.
~Its just right when I write

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30. "i"
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wanted his kisses to make me a woman
hoped each suck would draw doubt from my body
thought that if he planted a see in me
that I
would have
a purpose
But
I, like many sistas, was wrong
so i walked that Cres until I came back to square one
was trying to discover which cup of tea was mine
which doormat would bring relief
which coat rack to rest my hat on
which lover's bed to sleep in
I want to be like *that* girl whose walk
is much bolder and freer and fly
who goes unfazed by judging eyes
who hips sway with righteous pride




  

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soulchild
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33. "thanks everybody"
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who wrote something nice. I'm off to backpacking for a week and then camping for another. so, to any new responses, thankyou in advance!

soul.


  

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34. "TWO WEEKS???"
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>I'm off to backpacking for a week and then camping for another


*Late Pass*


~Oooooops~

Hope you have a great time lil' Miss -- I guess you won't know that you were nominated AGAIN for AOTM until it's all over then, huh? -- *sheeesh*

Hope you have a great time! -- ;^)

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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mindful
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35. "be safe love... nm"
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================
is all
got ©amel larrieux




------------------------------
my work
http://meetmsmindful.wordpress.com
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http://evan-roth.com/grey.php

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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36. "RE: and you? (add on about yaself)"
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Contrary to what you may believe
I'm quite shy -- ;^)
It's just that I have an "extroverted" soul
That takes control and pulls me outta my shell
So when I wanna sit still -- Be quiet -- And keep my peace
My soul stirs -- Tells me if I don't speak ^Up^
I'll go str8 to hell! -- *LoL*

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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soulchild
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37. "say what?!"
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you? shy?

soul.


  

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Natalie
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38. "where i used to be -- 'how sad'"
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"how sad"

perhaps
when i am gone
you will remember me

perhaps
with some gladness
or maybe some sadness

perhaps
when i am gone
i will just cease to be.

==================================

"I'm a curbside prophet with my hand in my pocket and I'm waiting for my rocket to come." - Jason Mraz

"Conformity is the refuge of a stagnant mind."

  

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39. "message to God"
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i told you what i couldn't do
you showed me what i could -
it has made all the difference.

==================================

"I'm a curbside prophet with my hand in my pocket and I'm waiting for my rocket to come." - Jason Mraz

"Conformity is the refuge of a stagnant mind."

  

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soulchild
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41. "word"
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nm

soul.


  

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Revolt
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40. "RE: and you? (add on about yaself)"
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Minor things rattle me
and explosions make me sit still.
I am stagnant and productively doing so...
at this moment in nothingness, movement
is internal.

I got...a thing for him.
And he knows it.

A wonderful presence, I can't even feel.


____________



"I'm nothing like me..." © KnowOne



"His harlotry, I actually learned to condone…

And…

Up to this day
I never see him anymore.
Heard whispers about
His gatherings,
Hundreds of ladies
Or even thousands
ready to swallow his
pour
-ing seedlings…
rain showers these women
bathed in, thinking
his semen was some kind
godly power.

I never got used to that.

Or him, being away from me.
But truly, who was I to
Try to capture him, solely?

He was owned by
Every damn female's sex
...in the city.

" ©.

"P.S. You don't have to read my shit just cuz I read yours...it was my pleasure."
© NoBle

The avy: HaShem Yeshua Mashiach.


  

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Nowachaoticthing
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42. "I am nothing"
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I am nothing
reflection of moonbeams
insufficiently luminiscant
beautifully insignificant
reluctantly reliant on sunrays to spark the shine

unrefined
undefined
not designed for existance in the daylight
yet still not quite ready for primetime.

"To be a poet is a condition, not a profession."
- Robert Frost

http://inevitabletruth.blogspot.com/
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http://www.hdfest.com/Barry/allreviewsbarry.html
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wolfie
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43. "RE: and you? (add on about yaself)"
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i am the setting sun

burning brightly
fading fast

~*~*~*~*~*~*~newolf~*~*~*~*~*~*~

the light: so, you're having a pre-pre-midlfe crisis?
wolfie: yes.
the light: well, that's wonderful!


icantspell

  

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soulchild
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44. "RE: and you? (add on about yaself)"
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i like this one

soul.


  

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45. "searching..."
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for love
in all the wrong places.

not enough
searching for eye

and i
keep thinking
in standstill.

i am a stagnant intellectual.
yeah,
that's me.



***********************************



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myself is sculptor of
your body’s idiom:
the musician of your wrists;
the poet who is afraid
only to mistranslate
a rhythm in your hair...
-E.E. Cummings

  

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soulchild
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46. "RE: searching..."
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and i
keep thinking
in standstill.

i like that.

soul.


  

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Revolt
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47. "RE: and you? (add on about yaself)"
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He doesn't even...look like he used to.

I guess I took back the light I infused him with.
No wonder I thought his mind was so bright.

The dimness engulfs him.
He used to be sunshine to me.

Just a passing memory...
like the vapour filled clouds that surround me.
Ready for reign.
____________



"I'm nothing like me..." © KnowOne



"His harlotry, I actually learned to condone…

And…

Up to this day
I never see him anymore.
Heard whispers about
His gatherings,
Hundreds of ladies
Or even thousands
ready to swallow his
pour
-ing seedlings…
rain showers these women
bathed in, thinking
his semen was some kind
godly power.

I never got used to that.

Or him, being away from me.
But truly, who was I to
Try to capture him, solely?

He was owned by
Every damn female's sex
...in the city.

" ©.

"P.S. You don't have to read my shit just cuz I read yours...it was my pleasure."
© NoBle

The avy: HaShem Yeshua Mashiach.


  

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Pulchritudinous

Tue Aug-03-04 01:48 PM

  
48. "I feel like a shell"
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hard and rigid outside
cold and empty inside
I've been searching...
And waiting patiently
For my spirit to be rediscovered
So I can once again be me
Always down
But never out
I'm waiting for the Most High
To show me a different route
So I can repair the damage
Caused by Life and all its complexities
I know all of this is a lesson
And it's just as well
But it's a long hard road out of Hell © Marilyn Manson

  

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wolfie
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50. "::archive::"
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when pages yellow
and ink fades
we will still have our words immortalized in song

~*~*~*~*~*~*~newolf~*~*~*~*~*~*~

the light: so, you're having a pre-pre-midlfe crisis?
wolfie: yes.
the light: well, that's wonderful!


icantspell

  

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51. "Second That -- :::ARCHIVE:::"
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If I were REALLY a poet
I'd be a dangerous individual
Sabotaging sentences with symmetry & satire
Terrorizing word tapestries with thermoneuclear theorems
Chastising cadence with combustible cryogenics
But alas --
I am but a lowly circus freak
Juggling wordplay while riding Einstein's elephant
Thru a hoop of fire while spinning on the world's axis

I write 4 Peanuts -- But I love it! -- ;^)

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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52. "RE: Second That -- :::ARCHIVE:::"
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noted.

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Cop my stuff, mayne!

My first chapbook: "This Chapbook Was Made With Pilfered Office Products" available now - $6.00

My 2nd chapbook, coming in 2007: "Orgasms and Ice Cream"

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53. "RE: and you? (add on about yaself)"
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This weekend, I saw summer slippin'
But it just wouldn't FALL
A cool front tried to blow thru -- But 80-85 degrees
Ain't KOOL at all

I love warm weather & sunshine! -- ;^) -- (((Forreal Tho)))

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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54. "Ain't nothin better than me..."
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...
Today
I'm so much better than yesterday
Die to self daily...
Yet, living still
Only now
In God's will
Turn back?
Never will
Encouraging others
Growing still
I wasn't living before
Only existing as space to fill
Life anew
Believe He's real.

I may not be saying anything that hasn't been said before, but I may be saying something that someone's never heard before.

  

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soulchild
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55. "*nods*"
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word.
i hear ya

soul.


  

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56. "RE: and you? (add on about yaself)"
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I dreamt about him.
(About time.)
Amazing how
vapourized thought
can become a solid truth
all within the span
of a midsummer night's dream.

Woke up in tears.
Ripped away from the
slumber of soundless
reality
only to arise to...

another.work.day.
____________



"I'm nothing like me..." © KnowOne



"Wary and worn,
into depressions and
hunger, you wane into
nonexistence, because of this
unworthy presence,
that you allowed to set
precedence over me.
Holding no pity,
I walk my way,
content as I exist,
and believe in life and its goodness,
you sit, alongside her,
in reckless mess,
dilapidated,
as you both eagerly waste
each others breath."
© excerpt from "Changes"

"You don't have to read my shit just cuz I read yours...it was my pleasure."
© NoBle

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soulchild
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57. "RE: and you? (add on about yaself)"
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Ripped away from the
slumber of soundless
reality

it's interesting that you choose to call your dreams your "reality". yeah, good work.

soul.


  

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earthsista
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58. "RE: and you? (add on about yaself)"
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I'm trying to find my hope, don't know where she went.

~sig~
When ppl show you who they are- BELIEVE them. ~Maya Angelou

  

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