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58impala
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"Criticize my business card"


  

          

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v734/58impala/bizcard.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v734/58impala/backcard.jpg

I'm still playing around with the back, but so far I like it. I'm thinking about adding an instruction to the front where the note is, to turn over the card; because of I'm afraid that people won't turn it over to see if theres anything on the back.

Bartenders don't sleep on the business card. I wouldn't suggest giving it to bar managers (they will probably laugh at you, so I havent tried), but giving them out to "richer" people who can entertain people at their house might love of have a bartender at their party. Shit is like $20 to make, but you can charge $20-30 per hour plus extras (shopping lists, buying items in advance, custom drinks etc).

  

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clever...
Jun 01st 2007
1
I really like this.
Jun 01st 2007
2
That shit suck
Jun 01st 2007
3
RE: That shit suck
Jun 01st 2007
4
umm an address of what?
Jun 01st 2007
6
fuck they need an address for?
Jun 02nd 2007
9
lol
Jun 02nd 2007
14
ha thats fresh.
Jun 01st 2007
5
this is mad American Psycho lol
Jun 01st 2007
7
*perspires and drops his card*
Jun 18th 2007
19
lol exactly what I thought
Jun 19th 2007
24
OMG! Is that a Watermark!!!!
Jun 19th 2007
25
lmao, I had to youtube that
Jun 20th 2007
26
      LOL. did he just nut over a business card?
Jun 20th 2007
27
haha dope
Jun 01st 2007
8
that's pretty creative.
Jun 02nd 2007
10
good idea, but i would actually do that shit....
Jun 02nd 2007
11
Business card is nice, but AOL, man? Seriously?
Jun 02nd 2007
12
hahahaha, thats my business email
Jun 02nd 2007
13
      Gmail looks better
Jun 18th 2007
21
           LOL, why does gmail look better?
Jun 21st 2007
30
i like the concept but the execution needs work
Jun 02nd 2007
15
i think the scale is a bit off for the type
Jun 02nd 2007
16
yes
Jun 02nd 2007
17
that looks HOT! no lie. as a designer i'm jealous. my only concern is:
Jun 02nd 2007
18
shit sucks
Jun 18th 2007
20
RE: shit sucks
Jun 19th 2007
23
that's good shit
Jun 18th 2007
22
pretty in the face, but flat in the back
Jun 20th 2007
28
yeah I'm thinking of taking some of the folds
Jun 20th 2007
29
seriously? no one got this?
Jun 21st 2007
32
I'd say reduce the black space and make your info larger.
Jun 21st 2007
31

BreezeBoogie
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1. "clever..."
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is it a stock photo or your own shot? i'm guessing it's stock because the copy isn't hand written.

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I'm so glad that I can see
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the man can't put no thing on me" (c) Curtis Mayfield

  

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cskncream
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Fri Jun-01-07 11:47 AM

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2. "I really like this."
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Personally, I don't think you need instructions to turn it over on the front. It's clean and simple. Nice concept.

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Kira
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3. "That shit suck"
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You ain't put no address and it looks so informal. Think Professional my friend.

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Kanabul
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4. "RE: That shit suck"
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He's a bartender... it should feel a little casual. I like it a lot. I would leave the back blank though.

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58impala
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Fri Jun-01-07 10:01 PM

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6. "umm an address of what?"
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my house? nope they dont need it

shit needs to be a little informal, im working parties not 9 to 5s

  

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9. "fuck they need an address for?"
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they need a couch to sleep on after he get em fucked up?

lemme tell you something.

freelancers DO NOT put they address on business cards. it's no point in doing so unless they work for an organized business establishment with an office.

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HighVoltage
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14. "lol"
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1. he's bartending, its supposed to be casual. this isnt an office job.
2. the fuck they need an address for?

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aswahdan
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5. "ha thats fresh."
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i kinda like the back, eventhough its a little casual. but it fits tho.

  

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7. "this is mad American Psycho lol"
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nice card though.

  

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Zorro-Rojo
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19. "*perspires and drops his card*"
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The first thing I thought!

  

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crow
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24. "lol exactly what I thought"
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Earl Flynn
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25. "OMG! Is that a Watermark!!!!"
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LMAO!

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58impala
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26. "lmao, I had to youtube that"
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http://youtube.com/watch?v=qoIvd3zzu4Y

  

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27. "LOL. did he just nut over a business card?"
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8. "haha dope"
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the back needs some work tho

but the front is fresh


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PlanetInfinite
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10. "that's pretty creative."
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nothing other than that tho.

http://www.myspace.com/thievinstealberg
http://computerstupid.blogspot.com (4/9/07)
< her hair stick out further than her boodydoo.

  

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Instant_Vintage
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11. "good idea, but i would actually do that shit...."
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use your bar, your glass, your writing
tighten up on the note
make it a little off center
put some water or drops somewhere...thas a dry ass bar.
you got a winner

it looks a little too stock to me.

but its a great concept.

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12. "Business card is nice, but AOL, man? Seriously?"
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58impala
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13. "hahahaha, thats my business email"
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21. "Gmail looks better"
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30. "LOL, why does gmail look better?"
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Thu Jun-21-07 07:20 AM by RemyMartin

  

          

Maybe when it comes to mid-90s nerd elitism, but it's 2006 and...it's just fucking email.

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Luge Skywalker
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15. "i like the concept but the execution needs work"
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i think the back is unnecessary really but i guess thats a personal preference

the font is horrible imo especially when used on the back its very annoying to read

the front.. i think it would be better if you'd actually do it as someone above suggested. set up that scene and take a picture and use that. i also think that when printed the text on the piece of paper on the front will be extremely small and kind of hard to read

good idea tho.

  

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16. "i think the scale is a bit off for the type"
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17. "yes"
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18. "that looks HOT! no lie. as a designer i'm jealous. my only concern is:"
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how tiny does the writing on the front look when the card is actual size? is it legible?

  

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20. "shit sucks"
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i would never hire you

  

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23. "RE: shit sucks"
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i wouldn't hire YOU!
this is what you do at work...

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22. "that's good shit"
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28. "pretty in the face, but flat in the back"
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"i smack clowns with nouns, punch herbs with verbs..."

  

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58impala
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29. "yeah I'm thinking of taking some of the folds"
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of the note in the front and make it the background on the back

  

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32. "seriously? no one got this?"
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"i smack clowns with nouns, punch herbs with verbs..."

  

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31. "I'd say reduce the black space and make your info larger."
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And, the back is a little boring compared to the front.

But, other than that, that's cool.

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