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The prose seemed to skim along almost leisurely and non-threatening, but once you maneuver to your key points, they hit with the force of a pissed-off stonecutter with bricks in his gloves. This is a very good thing to me.

This part hit me the hardest:

"Now is all there is,
and now is fine, I have more to offer you than
anyone who is here now, and I ask for nothing

beyond the

equity of the moment."

But then again, you are a historically skilled writer, so I should expect jaw-droppers like these.

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The Equity Of The Moment [View all] , gsquared, Thu Nov-12-09 11:06 PM
 
Subject Author Message Date ID
RE: The Equity Of The Moment
Nov 12th 2009
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RE: The Equity Of The Moment
Nov 12th 2009
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RE: The Equity Of The Moment
Nov 13th 2009
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RE: The Equity Of The Moment
Nov 13th 2009
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I thought you gave
Nov 14th 2009
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RE: I thought you gave
Nov 14th 2009
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      U Wrote ^This^ On A Napkin?
Nov 22nd 2009
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RE: The Equity Of The Moment
Nov 23rd 2009
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RE: The Equity Of The Moment
Nov 27th 2009
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