Nahhhh U ain't suck dude! -- *Not Really*

"I Ain't From The Ghetto" -- & -- "Diabolical Schemes" were the clearest / loudest and most vocally nice spits.

The other two I couldn't "hear" too well.

Sounds like you're on the right track -- But still could use some sandpaper & polish to smooove out the rough edges and put a shine on the wordplay, nahmean?

A'cappella ain't easy, so I give you extra kudos for that! --

If you can put some musical beats behind the verbage, kick it around a tight flow~stream, and lace it with some nice hooks -- You'll be flowing waterfalls in no time --


~Go 4 It~


*Thanx 4 Sharing*

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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