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4. "i like what you said here"
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selfishness through generosity
can no longer be
a crutch
blossoms have to spring

and here:

so with these words
i beg to be forgiven
while i change friend from foe


in the last stanza, i didn't quite know if you meant "sew" or "say" but it ends the poem well. Peace~


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just a thought.... [View all] , AidenWaves, Sun Feb-10-08 06:08 PM
 
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