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ms mimi diva
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27. "RE: Humm"
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Thu Nov-30-06 02:25 PM by ms mimi diva

  

          

I'm not really a traditionally visual person, I suppose. I don't "think" in words most of the time either. I think I am more of a "feeling person". I credit this to all my writing teachers who said "Show, don't tell." Of course, this rule is subjective. There are times when it is better to tell, but most poetry is about showing.

If you say the word "sand", for instance:

I will feel
the grains of the sand,
the wetness or the dryness of it,
the way it moves, the way it tastes,
the way it touches other things,
the way it sticks,
the impression it leaves
the way the color of it makes me feel
the way the shape of it makes me feel
the way the word is "colored" --does it have double meanings or connotations? What do others associate with this word?
how does the word sound? If it was a musical note, what note would it be? Flat? Sharp? The harmony? The base? What is the music of the poem?
any analogy between the word and other things...

I'll have a flash of the image in my mind, and I may see something very vividly, but I don't attempt to be describe object in my mind, I attempt to describe the way that I feel about that object. I don't do it deliberately, really. It just is the way I think. The words and the images just start pulling from my mind, like they are coming from some otherworldly place, and they are ready for me to arrange.

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Can it be I stayed away too long?/
Did I leave your mind when I was gone?/
It's not my thing trying to get back/
But this time let me tell you where I'm at-- Jackson Five

  

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When did you first know? (A discussion) [View all] , Nowachaoticthing, Thu Nov-09-06 07:59 PM
 
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I'll go first.
Nov 09th 2006
1
Honestly
Nov 09th 2006
2
Good Question!
Nov 09th 2006
3
drawing / poetry
Nov 10th 2006
4
Humm
Nov 10th 2006
5
RE: Humm
Nov 12th 2006
8
RE: Humm
Nov 30th 2006
26
     
RE: When did you first know? (A discussion)
Nov 11th 2006
6
RE: When did you first know? (A discussion)
Nov 11th 2006
7
RE: When did you first know? (A discussion)
Nov 12th 2006
9
Still waiting for that moment.
Nov 13th 2006
10
Same here
Nov 13th 2006
11
No doubt, I certainly respect that...
Nov 13th 2006
13
      I wrote a poem about my father once
Nov 14th 2006
16
Then I will rephrase the question for you...
Nov 13th 2006
12
well...
Nov 27th 2006
20
RE: Still waiting for that moment.
Nov 28th 2006
22
when did you first know that you had talent?
Nov 13th 2006
14
well....
Nov 13th 2006
15
since the beginning
Nov 15th 2006
17
*grinning*
Nov 27th 2006
19
In High School ...
Nov 25th 2006
18
RE: In High School ...
Nov 29th 2006
23
      RE: In High School ...
Nov 30th 2006
24
I knew early on
Nov 27th 2006
21
::) genius takes time
Dec 05th 2006
30
      RE: ::) genius takes time
Feb 06th 2007
31
RE: When did you first know? (A discussion)
Nov 30th 2006
25
for me...for me...for me...it was...
Dec 05th 2006
28
progression
Dec 05th 2006
29

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