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>broken pieces fell to earth
>distant now the memories
>we saw each other
>through anothers Eye
>in a single moment
>the life we had...ended

These six lines speak loud volumes for my life


>still the door that
>has opened brings new possiblities
>will I pretend I never
>loved you or will time
>stop again and lend me
>a few seconds to capture
>the perfect memory
>of paradise
>will the sun burn
>an inscription for eternity
>keep the sacred pen
>by your side and write forever
>this seems to be a dream
>this feeling lasting longer than expected
>so I'll wait hold onto
>what has been given
>reach out to the closest friend
>kiss the hand of a begger
>wash the feet of one walking
>and bow at dawn
>who am i beside the ocean
>tears fell last night waiting to hear
>childrens voices calling for daddy
>to read to them carry them
>over the sea or
>walk singing again
>a quiet place finds silence among
>those things hoped for
>while the light of a loners smile
>speaks to a heart trapped by fear
>spilled milk a baby cries
>while her mother awakens
>finding serenity in her arms
>broken pieces fell to earth
>leaving all the lies
>shattered



I loved this one. I actually saved it simply because I can relate quite a bit on several levels. Always a pleasure to read your work. Awsome job

  

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shattered [View all] , ASIEM, Sun Nov-30-08 12:40 AM
 
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RE: shattered
Jan 04th 2009
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RE: shattered
Feb 18th 2009
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RE: shattered
Feb 25th 2009
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RE: shattered
Feb 25th 2009
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RE: shattered
Feb 25th 2009
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