Yo Lyric i agree with photo, shes a spot on critic, maybe the source should appoint her, lol, forreal uve always had the lyrics, I think the problem for you is either the lack of actually sptting ur verses,you might not do it enough, i spit verses everyday to try keep progressin, or it may be your experimenting or even the most obvious factor, bad recording equipment.ON sayin that (ima say summin smart that photo would usually come out with) you havent lost anything, if anything youve gained an incite of what to improve on, and if it was something experimental then you know you definately gained summin.

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