I'm sorry Lyric ... but I wasn't feeling ^this^ at all --


I'mmma listen to it again later ... and I'll tell you why ...


I'mma ^UP^ this so maybe some of the fellas who actually flow lyrically can give you some pointers.

You be playing with your ish tho -- (Don't SOUND like you're taking it seriously) -- So it's hard for the listener to take it seriously, nahmean?

And I don't mean playing -- (like fun playing) -- I mean bullshittin' type playing -- (like making up shit on da grip) -- with no meaning or rhyme to your reasoning.

Suggestion: Listen to some of the other flows on the board.
Like: getgrown feat.uncle vic & willi-dudat (audio)

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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