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empro
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Tue Jan-23-07 05:48 AM

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5. "Wow"
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>he finds her disgusting.
>he sleeps on the couch.
>he does not bathe with her anymore.
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>she fights with cooking.
>she stays out late & lies to avoid arguments.
>she smooths his side of the bed knowing he won't join her.
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>he remembers them smiling, unashamed.

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>he could never stray.
>he builds a home for them without her.
>he prays for the familiar to return.
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>she hardly kisses him.
>she hates to hear him breathe.

>he fights the urge to say, "i love you."
>she fights the urge to say, "i hate you."
>they watch each other fade, revealing nothing.
>they knew it would one day end, just not today.
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The parts really hit home. My situation is EXACTLY like this. Scary, how you put it down into words to express some deep emotions deep inside me. Almost made ya boy get "something" in his eye.

Great Job

  

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whoever said forever would last [View all] , mindful, Sat Jan-20-07 12:55 PM
 
Subject Author Message Date ID
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Jan 20th 2007
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thanks lady. i was trying something new, a new format
Jan 21st 2007
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      RE: thanks lady. i was trying something new, a new format
Jan 22nd 2007
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RE: whoever said forever would last
Jan 22nd 2007
4
honestly glad you could pull
Jan 23rd 2007
7
RE: whoever said forever would last
Jan 23rd 2007
6
nice.
Jan 24th 2007
8

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