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2. "Enjoy it but"
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Try to not use window two lines in a row, I know thats a shitty word to change, but it flows and looks better if you vary it.

When you read it that line catches your attention cuz of it

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My first attempt at poetry. [View all] , politiq, Thu Aug-24-06 10:03 PM
 
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RE: My first attempt at poetry.
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RE: Enjoy it but
Aug 25th 2006
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      I assumed you ment to
Aug 25th 2006
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