1. "RE: My first attempt at poetry." In response to In response to 0
like the horizon spits the moon out but leaves the sun to remain. and in the same vein when night breaks the sun drops like shards from a shattered window a stained glass window
These lines were the heart of the poem for me. Very interesting perception. Well done, and congrats on your very first time. You're no longer a virgin!
http://worthwatering.blogspot.com Can it be I stayed away too long?/ Did I leave your mind when I was gone?/ It's not my thing trying to get back/ But this time let me tell you where I'm at-- Jackson Five