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ms mimi diva
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1. "RE: My first attempt at poetry."
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like the horizon spits the moon out
but leaves the sun to remain.
and in the same vein
when night breaks
the sun drops like shards from a shattered window
a stained glass window

These lines were the heart of the poem for me. Very interesting perception. Well done, and congrats on your very first time. You're no longer a virgin!

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My first attempt at poetry. [View all] , politiq, Thu Aug-24-06 10:03 PM
 
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Enjoy it but
Aug 25th 2006
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RE: Enjoy it but
Aug 25th 2006
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      I assumed you ment to
Aug 25th 2006
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