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jane eyre
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13. "RE: probably shoulda clarified that"
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>EX: Anyone could've came up w/ the idea for Harry Potter, but
>few could've executed on it.

fascinating. i think it's the opposite. few could've come up with the idea for harry potter, but in someone else's hands, i think it could've been written better. ok. that's beside the point.

anyway.

revision seems to be the general consensus, and it's a good consensus, but i also want to share, that in my experience (my own stuff and talking with other writers), it isn't a magic bullet. i'm almost sure you've been revising.

hm. or maybe it'd be interesting to start a conversation about the revision process?

anyhow.

i make a distinction between practice and revision. it's up to the writer to figure out which one they're in need of, i guess. the line i draw is probably a fine line, but yea...i do think there's a difference. for starters, revision, most likely, won't give you skills that you want to acquire or need to develop so that you can write your story.

it's possible for a writer to re-write themselves into the blue yonder and still get shot in the foot. if you're essentially asking: "how do i become a better writer, a writer who has better control over their subject matter, with solid technique?"-- i don't know if the answer is an out and out "revise".

i think technique comes through practice, not unless you're born knowing how to "do it". practice, in my opinion, basically develops whatever tools your have in your writer's toolbox and maybe gives you the wherewithal to purchase some new stuff to show off. practice helps to familiarize yourself with what's in a writer's toolbox.

then it just becomes a matter of

1. practicing how to use the tools, based on the instructions jotted out in the owner's manual. that's why i mentioned reading and imitation. writing and language go together like two peas in a pod. good writers have some kind of mastery over the language. their work is like an owners manual.
2. practicing how to use that funky electrical thing to put up the metal picture frame and knowing why you're using it instead of a hammer.

along the way, sure, issues of taste and style and likes and dislikes come up. it's possible to notice stuff about what works for you and what doesn't, while you practice.

and i'll shut up, now. i feel your pain, though.

  

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OKWriters: Idea vs Execution [View all] , BrooklynWHAT, Sat Jan-19-08 11:13 AM
 
Subject Author Message Date ID
Rewriting
Jan 19th 2008
1
Hemingway: "Writing is rewriting"
Jan 19th 2008
2
Indeed, indeed.
Jan 19th 2008
3
yeah. that's another one of my self-diagnosed flaws
Jan 19th 2008
4
I write what are called "vomit drafts"
Jan 19th 2008
5
      RE: I write what are called "vomit drafts"
Jan 19th 2008
8
           I write screenplays and have written for television
Jan 19th 2008
9
RE: OKWriters: Idea vs Execution
Jan 19th 2008
6
probably shoulda clarified that
Jan 20th 2008
10
     
Well, reply #1 pretty much sums it up.
Jan 19th 2008
7
where do you stand on outlining?
Jan 20th 2008
11
I am very big on outlining
Jan 20th 2008
12
On Profiling Characters...
Jan 22nd 2008
14
can we get a brief summation of how you go about writing first?
Jan 22nd 2008
15
Alright, feel free to critique it.
Jan 22nd 2008
16
      time and space
Jan 22nd 2008
18
      it's more marinating than distancing
Jan 22nd 2008
20
      damn, I wrote a long response and it didnt post.....
Jan 22nd 2008
19
RE: OKWriters: Idea vs Execution
Jan 22nd 2008
17

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