42. "really good, although i got a couple nitpicky criticisms: (SPOILERS)" In response to In response to 0
a) i mean... i mean... she ate the grapes. oh hell no. and she got her magic fairy homies decapitated. that shit was weak. i know she got sent to bed without supper and all, but damn mercedes would've hooked u up. Just seemed out of character for her to disregard faun.
b) too much focus on the captain drama, i wanted to see more fantasy world
overall i thought it was really great, loved the death metaphor, loved the way violence was used in a potent but not saturating way. i thought it was really good.