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Af-1
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Wed Jan-28-15 11:08 AM

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"Any creative writers here with time for story advice?"


  

          

I've actually asked for story help here before and received invaluable advice from people last time so hopefully people will be equally generous with their time and ideas.

I'm currently writing a book and there's a female character who's leaving her work place (where she works with the book's central character and is his potential love interest). She's told everyone she's leaving for a really cool job overseas but I want the story she's telling people to be a lie. What I can't think of is what the truth should be...

I've been through a long list of ideas like she has a child that she doesn't want anyone to know about, illness (which I haven't yet completely written out but am not too keen about using), I considered there being something about her family that she doesn't want shared(?), witness protection program (no, no)...

The book is a sorta crime/thriller so I guess it's welcome to be a little dark. I intend this to be three books in total and have completed the first (where she introduces the lie) and am in the planning stages of the second book where I need her to come clean basically.

Any help or ideas would be welcome. Thanks!

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Any creative writers here with time for story advice? [View all] , Af-1, Wed Jan-28-15 11:08 AM
 
Subject Author Message Date ID
what are her motivations for this lie
Jan 28th 2015
1
Depends on why she’s lying and how it ties into her overall arc.
Jan 28th 2015
2
Thanks for replies #1 and #2...
Jan 28th 2015
3
She's being groomed by Asata in Cuba to be the next great Black leader.....
Jan 28th 2015
4
Erm... yup, that's definitely a unique idea :)
Jan 29th 2015
8
she could actually be headed to rehab
Jan 28th 2015
5
I like all of these
Jan 28th 2015
6
The pilgrimage is a fascinating idea...
Jan 29th 2015
7
she has an alt origin story:
Jan 29th 2015
9
      RE: she has an alt origin story:
Jan 30th 2015
14
a stalker's being released from prison...
Jan 29th 2015
10
Hmm, that's a great idea...
Jan 30th 2015
15
if you use an idea presented here
Jan 29th 2015
11
RE: if you use an idea presented here
Jan 30th 2015
16
someone posted anais nin's lovers obit yest
Jan 29th 2015
12
RE: someone posted anais nin's lovers obit yest
Jan 30th 2015
17
ideas
Jan 29th 2015
13
RE: ideas
Jan 30th 2015
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