47. "why does that closing lyrical coda feel a little like a suicide note?" In response to In response to 0
or at the very least a man believing in his own early demise.
It's a nice sentiment and all but I can't see putting this song on voluntarily.
But generally artist's tributes to their young children are only slightly more interesting than stories/pics on Facebook about their kids posted by girls you knew from high school or stand-up comedy routines on the same subject.
If I don't know/love you personally, I likely don't care all that much and making it interesting as a musical milieu is tough to do.