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lightworks
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Critique this shot please. [View all] , lightworks, Mon Sep-07-15 12:55 PM
 
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crop it. increase focal point.
Sep 07th 2015
1
^^^^^^
Sep 07th 2015
3
Interesting. I had it window window window and if felt cramped.
Sep 07th 2015
4
      shit, you could crop it down to just two windows it would still work.
Sep 07th 2015
6
           I was hoping to get that 3rd window in the shot
Sep 08th 2015
19
           the elements need to be odd.
Sep 08th 2015
21
I dig it & already liked it. Reminds me of this Rober Frank shot
Sep 07th 2015
2
Thanks! Oh that's you eh? Dope.
Sep 07th 2015
5
      Robert Frank "The Americans" totally changed the game
Sep 09th 2015
31
i like it. could we see with a sharper focal point?
Sep 07th 2015
7
It's with an iPhone so no lol.
Sep 07th 2015
8
      being a phone, i think your composition is supposed to be spot-on.
Sep 08th 2015
16
      you still shooting with the DSLR?
Sep 08th 2015
20
           Yup. Just don't have it on me 24/7 like I do my phone.
Sep 08th 2015
26
For the REAL people that will see it, it's good. leave it alone.
Sep 07th 2015
9
ehh i think you are wrong
Sep 08th 2015
10
imo, there shouldn't be "right" or "wrong" in art. its all subjective, n...
Sep 08th 2015
29
SHIT. IM NOT REAL. SOMEBODY CALL THE POLICE.
Sep 08th 2015
14
      You're an Etch A Sketch.. LOL
Sep 08th 2015
25
Good lord, can you shoot something other than the metro????
Sep 08th 2015
11
good pioint.
Sep 08th 2015
12
maybe, maybe not.
Sep 08th 2015
15
I'm gonna err with maybe not....
Sep 08th 2015
17
      right. i hear you
Sep 08th 2015
18
Look through my feed. There are more than just metro shots.
Sep 08th 2015
27
I like it, but I like this other one you took even more
Sep 08th 2015
13
yeah this one is real dope
Sep 08th 2015
22
yup.
Sep 08th 2015
23
Yep.
Sep 08th 2015
24
yeah this one is really good
Sep 08th 2015
28
oh yeah. this sht is fire
Sep 09th 2015
30

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