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Federisco
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9. "its very good!"
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first ive read from you. long but i think it was complete enough (i mean the theme, so that it didnt end up too different but still with twists and turns)

this here i feel extra good..

"II.

i've never seen
blue grass before
but i can tell you where
ky's blk roses
grow wild--

we exist between
kerosene lamps & liquor stores
tucked away soft between
blk churches
lake cumberland
& welfare offices
picture us
shining blk springs of
isolated humanity
young doctors/flunkies/pilots/junkies
kickballing our way to adulthood"

when i read it it made me want to listen to outkast and ceelo - liberation.. it gave me a feeling similar to that song hehm

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black & blue/grass [View all] , HottLykeFiyah, Wed May-08-02 12:14 PM
 
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May 08th 2002
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your use of imagery is beautiful, trace...
May 08th 2002
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RE: black & blue/grass
May 09th 2002
3
big brother's proud of you sis..
May 09th 2002
4
RE: black & blue/grass
May 09th 2002
5
The title caught me...
May 09th 2002
6
i have only read a couple of lines..
May 10th 2002
7
RE: black & blue/grass
May 12th 2002
8
lol
May 14th 2002
11
Whoa....
May 12th 2002
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