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HottLykeFiyah
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"Brightest Brown"


  

          

he makes me blush the brightest brown.
his words slide over me like sunlight
snaking down my spine
tonguing my emotions in a language
so sinful
that i pray for punishment by his hands
sentence me 700 years of
waking to the rhythm of his breathing
& putting words to every sigh
he's ever sighed
lynch me from the highest branch
of his smile
so that i can swing between his lips
& let my life drip
& roll slow from the corners
of his mouth
i'd let him bury me
in hot satin sheets of sweat
& silk
or burn me up w/ his fingertips
& swallow
my ashes
deep

we're living
a biblical lust
he is my genesis
& when he makes his exodus
from my mind
& down my stomach
to feather my clit w/ seductive prayers
o, what a revelation...
i tried to be a church girl
but he makes me blush the brightest brown
w/ him forever at the tip of my tongue
i can't help but sing
orgasmic elegies for the little girl i silenced
the first time i sang out for him
a caged bird
who never knew
that she could fly
i landed in his lap & introduced him
to my center of gravity
spread wide my wings
& hovered low above his touch
teasing him w/ tacit promises
& whispers of secret kisses
in illicit dreams

we were destined to spend
our Sunday moanings
together
we'll wake the earliest birds
of every fantasy we've ever murdered
& for the resurrection
i'll dress him in the brightest brown
that our spirits
can conjure.




)

but i'm a hater, tho

  

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Brightest Brown [View all] , HottLykeFiyah, Sun May-26-02 07:03 PM
 
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May 26th 2002
1
RE: Brightest Brown
May 27th 2002
2
RE: Brightest Brown
May 27th 2002
3
heh.. oh boy.
May 27th 2002
4
RE: Brightest Brown
May 27th 2002
5
really?
May 27th 2002
6
RE: Brightest Brown
May 27th 2002
7
tell me what you didn't like
May 27th 2002
10
      RE: tell me what you didn't like
May 27th 2002
12
      input appreciated
May 28th 2002
13
           no problem
May 28th 2002
14
      honestly...
May 31st 2002
21
           RE: honestly...what ever
Jun 25th 2002
36
!
May 27th 2002
8
RE: Brightest Brown
May 27th 2002
9
steamy.
May 27th 2002
11
RE: Brightest Brown
May 29th 2002
15
like i told you before...
May 29th 2002
16
RE: Brightest Brown
May 29th 2002
17
RE: Brightest Brown
May 29th 2002
18
the whole piece is lovely but
May 30th 2002
19
RE: Brightest Brown
May 30th 2002
20
Oh My...
Jun 01st 2002
22
sunday moanings
Jun 03rd 2002
23
Well, you're just the freaky one, aren't you?
Jun 03rd 2002
24
didnt wanna let this drop.....
Jun 09th 2002
25
RE: Brightest Brown
Jun 14th 2002
26
RE: Brightest Brown
Jun 15th 2002
27
RE: Brightest Brown
Jun 16th 2002
28
up
Jun 19th 2002
29
how did i miss THIS??!!??
Jun 19th 2002
30
hot damn chile!
Jun 19th 2002
31
evrybody look @ vet's reply
Jun 19th 2002
32
LET THE CHOICH SAY AMEN!!!!
Jun 20th 2002
33
this was too good
Jun 20th 2002
34
Great writing
Jun 25th 2002
35
this is really good.
Jun 25th 2002
37
! !
Jun 25th 2002
38

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