28. "Round 1: jayare214 over syllabic 10-9" In response to In response to 12
Syllabic...I felt some of your punchlines...but the run on sentence structure left a little to be desired. I couldn't really catch the flow...even though there was a rhyme at the end of every couplet.
Jayare...either you done came up since we battled or I caught you on a bad day. This verse was niiiiiiice! Kinda tapered off in the end....but I was saying to myself that you took it after reading your first 8. Good shit.
Jay takes Syllabic 10-9
************************* MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!
Elmyra....the choice of a new generation.
************************* MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!