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DanjaRuss
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15. "Golden.."
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honestly when u started out, I wasn't sure where u going with it..but when it hit the second stanza..it just illumited excellence. My fav parts:

and I've
>blown the dust from between
>my fingers; digging in dirt
>trying to retrieve my roots;

>I've tugged onto little gurl,
>afraid to let her go,
>because grown women don't
>need direction.

The final line in the poem, makes it complete..in an incompletly/unsure kinda way :S..u knowhatimsayingtho..right


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"..if One Man's amazin..pray tell, where does that leave You??"-D/russ

  

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little gurls don't do this/that [View all] , mindful, Mon Oct-20-03 03:48 PM
 
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RE: little gurls don't do this/that
Oct 20th 2003
1
the ending was perfect.
Oct 20th 2003
2
RE: little gurls don't do this/that
Oct 20th 2003
3
well
Oct 20th 2003
4
hey Mindful
Oct 20th 2003
5
only if you take care 1st ladee :) thanks nm
Oct 21st 2003
12
RE: little gurls don't do this/that
Oct 20th 2003
6
RE: little gurls don't do this/that
Oct 21st 2003
7
RE: little gurls don't do this/that
Oct 21st 2003
8
rage for what? lol.. nm
Oct 21st 2003
13
      RE: rage for what? lol.. nm
Oct 21st 2003
16
?uestion mark.
Oct 21st 2003
9
the poem
Oct 21st 2003
14
      thanks
Oct 22nd 2003
21
cool.. i have my own thoughts on yours
Oct 21st 2003
10
RE: cool.. i have my own thoughts on yours
Oct 21st 2003
11
...
Oct 23rd 2003
28
RE: little gurls don't do this/that
Oct 22nd 2003
17
RE: little gurls don't do this/that
Oct 22nd 2003
18
"inch"into grown folks business....
Oct 22nd 2003
19
I like the or, because it indicates unsureness, ya know
Oct 22nd 2003
22
RE: little gurls don't do this/that
Oct 22nd 2003
20
ms. mind...
Oct 23rd 2003
23
RE: little gurls don't do this/that
Oct 23rd 2003
24
RE: little gurls don't do this/that
Oct 23rd 2003
25
u're welcome.. thank u
Oct 25th 2003
29
hmmmmmm
Oct 23rd 2003
26
RE: hey ms. mindful
Oct 23rd 2003
27
RE: little gurls don't do this/that
Oct 27th 2003
30
this was dope
Oct 27th 2003
31
how can u not like john mayer?
Nov 03rd 2003
35
      RE: how can u not like john mayer?
Nov 04th 2003
36
           RE: how can u not like john mayer?
Nov 09th 2003
39
^ n/m.
Oct 27th 2003
32
when creativity hits..
Oct 31st 2003
33
About Time Someone Said It Right.
Oct 31st 2003
34
RE: little gurls don't do this/that
Nov 06th 2003
37
i see why they call u truth
Nov 09th 2003
40
THIS BETTER GET ARCHIVED!!!!!
Nov 09th 2003
38
Ummmmmm -- CO~SIGN -- (ARCHIVE?)
Nov 12th 2003
41
RE: THIS BETTER GET ARCHIVED!!!!!
Nov 15th 2003
43
RE: little gurls don't do this/that
Nov 12th 2003
42

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