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willi_dudat
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first i'll say that honestly this wasn't as good as i had anticipated, still good, just not as good as i was lookin for... you both sound so hungry, tho!!! its like, DAYYYYYYYUUUUUMN NIGGA, GO EAT SUM'N!!!

sha:
that second schpiel of multi-barred madness was, in the words of ol boy from x-clan, "vanglorious!"... i was like "damn, dude goin at it like da rza in 94 or some shit"... you handle more than your own on any track lyrically, though you had some spots where the delivery got choppy...

pro:
its weird hearin you rap over upbeat shit, yo... i think that was the first time i heard it... its good, i just hadn't heard it from you... "many money se' me se' many many many" was genius... didn't like the endin tho... maybe a quick dialogue before you/y'all started clownin mighta sold it to me... but after hearin the hook four times (tho it was hot) three more times with bland commical revisions kinda let me down... overall the track is heat, no doubt...

i divi it up at 8 to 9... in favor of prolif...

both showed up, tho i was hopin for a more potent, lingering round... prolif just had that structure and composition edge... tho i have my dislike about the track, the boy got skills... not to say sha doesn't... hell its the finals, ain't it??? but the composition... that influenced me more this time...

vote: pro

"It's the return of the gangsta, thanks ta..."

-du

  

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hdub Invitational Final: Shakeet Lohk Em vs Prolif [View all] , the_best_part, Tue May-09-06 11:49 PM
 
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^UpPiN^ 4 Later ...
May 10th 2006
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Back Again ...
May 13th 2006
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RE: hdub Invitational Final: Shakeet Lohk Em vs Prolif
May 10th 2006
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@work: myspace is blocked...
May 11th 2006
3
ure a ride or die bitch
May 11th 2006
4
RE: well...
May 17th 2006
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RE: hdub Invitational Final: Shakeet Lohk Em vs Prolif
May 12th 2006
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Well ...
May 12th 2006
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RE: hdub Invitational Final: Shakeet Lohk Em vs Prolif
May 13th 2006
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RE: hdub Invitational Final: Shakeet Lohk Em vs Prolif
May 15th 2006
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RE: hdub Invitational Final: Shakeet Lohk Em vs Prolif
May 15th 2006
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Sha...
May 17th 2006
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RE: hdub Invitational Final: Shakeet Lohk Em vs Prolif
May 17th 2006
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aight.aight...i heard'em...
May 17th 2006
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RE: hdub Invitational Final: Shakeet Lohk Em vs Prolif
May 18th 2006
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RE: hdub Invitational Final: Shakeet Lohk Em vs Prolif
May 18th 2006
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Thanx for the look yall!
May 19th 2006
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this nigga gotta foot fetish ;)
May 19th 2006
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      How can you deny them toes sun? You see them toes man? Dinnertime!
May 19th 2006
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yeah.....i agree...
May 19th 2006
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new home built...
May 19th 2006
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RE: hdub Invitational Final: Shakeet Lohk Em vs Prolif
May 21st 2006
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btw, both of you rocked it!
May 22nd 2006
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