Good job man.. as far as your weaknesses... i would say work on your voice and cadence.. you sound a bit heavy on the track.. like you are stomping with your feet.. i would try a bit more expression and tone down the UMPF in your voice cause it's a plenty.. besides that.. just keep on doing it... you have a lot of skill dude..
peace
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