um.i gotta go with muddywaters, your verse was very creative and abstractjon- i just couldnt grasp what you were talking about although it seemed creative- (sorry)- I write battle verses to Mariah Carey songs...www.webspawner.com/users/delicateaurasoul4/index.html This is a great website to discuss spirituality/religion, philosophies, and post poems:www.aware-discussion.net