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MiracleRic
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24. "Sha"
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yall are some inconsistent voters yo, lol, one day all that matters is "direct" punches but then 2 or 3 rounds later yall on some...other dude's was more raw but thats the nature of the game...that being said...

I wasnt especially impressed by either, i dont see the fuss on this battle at all...this tourney has fizzled after like round 2...here are the highlights of this round

>Shakeet:

>Can’t rhyme with gravel in your mouth, youngun I script
>pages//
>Matta fact, I’ma write this rhyme on your skin shavins//
>I been raisin/ spit mavens/ give this kid a strict hazin//
>Get your head split in two like a BIpolar schiz patient//
>Sha rhymes come off blazin/ like a Hades arson’s heat//
>Bio grounded in his room beatin off to Dawson’s Creek//
>Your tonsils peaked/ when you first left the placenta//
>Doctor looked at your face and said God took an adventure//

no offense sha, but u had a ton of wack shit in your verse, this highlighted portion is all that i felt at all, i guess thats why other votes went the other way, i think this section was hotter then anything your comp came up with however, so its why i still give u the win, u guys shouldnt depend on personal info on each other, sometimes u just gotta flow ill to win, stop using the same crutch (punches) everyone else depends on

>Bio:

>Try again, see the shattered remains after I clove the post/
>Sha got half the boards comatose on wack rhyme overdose!/
>Stop there! You’re just hurtin’ yourself, like a masochist/
>My skill is past this shit, right now, I’m on the path to
>Lif/

this was the only thing that even stood out to me yo, u had a ton of super-cliche ish in your verse that i think ruined ya verse, i think u ended stronger and that may have got u so many votes but other than that...i dont see what the fuss is about, i think u rode ya wave of fortune further then u should've but it looks like u got this wrapped up, but unless u makes leaps and bounds, settle for 2nd place, cause even "on the path to lif" sounds like your final destination fam

now before i get the random "u hater" comments...i keep it real as always, but this was a crapfest

Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

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"King O' Da Ring Tourney IV (Round 5 - Semifinals)" [View all] , Prolif, Tue Dec-06-05 11:14 AM
 
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Dec 06th 2005
1
hhhmmm....
Dec 06th 2005
2
      Yo that was uncalled for. Salty mofo.
Dec 06th 2005
3
           RE: Yo that was uncalled for. Salty mofo.
Dec 07th 2005
5
                but for real....
Dec 07th 2005
6
                     RE: but for real....
Dec 08th 2005
8
                          actually...
Dec 08th 2005
9
Save it for the final (no "s") yall. LOL!!!
Dec 06th 2005
4
hmmm
Dec 07th 2005
7
RE: "King O' Da Ring Tourney IV (Round 5 - Semifinals)"
Dec 09th 2005
10
Shakeet Lokh Em vs Biohazard
Dec 09th 2005
11
biohazard
Dec 09th 2005
12
*stunned look*
Dec 09th 2005
13
TIE
Dec 09th 2005
14
Biohazard
Dec 10th 2005
15
biohazard
Dec 10th 2005
17
This probably changes nothing
Dec 11th 2005
19
RE: Shakeet Lokh Em vs Biohazard
Dec 11th 2005
20
Tie
Dec 13th 2005
22
sha
Dec 13th 2005
23
RE: Shakeet Lokh Em vs Biohazard
Dec 14th 2005
25
scorecard
Dec 14th 2005
27
      eff it... theres no ties in this. My vote is for Sha.
Dec 14th 2005
28
           co-sign on this
Dec 15th 2005
29
           upon further review.. Sha took this one
Dec 15th 2005
30
TIE
Dec 10th 2005
16
man...*smh*...this would have to go to audios IMO...
Dec 10th 2005
18
if aint nobody else gon vote....
Dec 13th 2005
21
RE: "King O' Da Ring Tourney IV (Round 5 - Semifinals)"
Dec 14th 2005
26
It was a good run, I had fun
Dec 15th 2005
31

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