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Name: January Martinez
Location:Hawaii...way out in the middle of the Pacific
Age:27

Personal Info: super mixed breed ..claiming humanity. Mother of an 8 yr old son who carry's the light so strong that his teachers are not sure what to do with him. This was my experience growing up in the public school system. We both share the type of creative fire that makes us want to be heard...want to express our concepts of truth...want to be funny and enjoy life...Being pressed to be quiet made the fire grow hotter and the juice of creativity boiled over into poetry. I began writing when I was 12 religously...though I do have great memories of being 6 and writing letters to my mom when I was angry with her Funny, I also remember spelling my stepdads name with a lower case B for Bill because I thought that starting out a name with a lower case letter was one of the biggest offences any one could give. REVOLUTION! Ahh..Through my journey I have revelations of beautiful and saddening things. Revelations of deep, powerful and Godlike things. My friends thought it funny that I would often start out sentences with "Hey guys, I had a revelation last night" So Bam! on stage I go by Mc Revelation....I write poetry when I am super charged by some great experience. Screenwriting has become another wonderful form of creativity that I am having the joy of learning..Coming to this board has been all about timing. Okay Player called me out one night at 3am when a poem jumped into a dream I was having. I've checked out the boards before...Big supporter of the artists...SHout out to the Lovely Jean Grae!!!...and the Fab DJ Bazarro!!!.......So here I am ....love the upliftment I see going on with the Okay Family.. Hey Stars, thanks for having me here. Bless!!

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My subject on
Controversy is: How "THEY" affect our societies through our youth.......



11 Years Old
----------

I've been here before
Lost in a maze of too many thoughts
Bound in a cage of unfeeling
Too much feeling
Ripping
Breaking
Hurting
Caring

I've been here before
11 years old
A Young
Sad
Angry
Little
Girl
Figuring it all out

World pains
Hunger pains
Anger pains
Jealousy about nothing real
For real

Books of Laughter
and confusion
I am seeking
Jah kingdom
Wading through the B.S. of Babylon
Trying to Trap my mind
with fancy cars
Expensive caviar
Cigars
and booze
Sexy women
in high healed boots

My mind's been tainted
I am fainted
on the smell
of your sweat
The brow you worked your bet

Slavery
Corporate take overs
Monopoly Makers
Tricking children
with your fake layovers
of niceness
Can you brighten this world
or will you continue
to rape the could
that would
If you gave Love a chance
Life is for Freedom's dance

But you're trying to hold me back
Trying to make me fat
and greedy
I am the needy
Needful of things
that set the youth free
We're tired of nonsense
We're tired of making you sense
how we are feeling
You will know us NOW
No more hiding

I AM AN ANGRY LITTLE GIRL
Eleven years old
You've raped me
and held me captive
of your Bad Brave
new world
I've curled up under
your foolish disguise
Now Babylon
YOU I despise
I will take your riches
and spoil your gold
Restore the Kingdoms
of old
and speak for us
until the story has been told
and told
and never forgotten.



Traaa Laa Laa...

Rev



umm.....umm...tasty beauty.....plump with life...thick with breath...soft caress....in you wisdom I delight....

  

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THE THIRD OFFICIAL OKP FEMALE COLLABORATION!!!! [View all] , Ezzsential, Tue Nov-01-05 09:03 PM
 
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FEMALES:
Nov 01st 2005
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first so mos def not last
Nov 02nd 2005
6
I didn't do the traditional introduction cause ezzential took all my asn...
Nov 09th 2005
27
This...
Nov 17th 2005
44
i like your name
Nov 12th 2005
36
      Thanx E..I feel like I already know you cause I promise you and my
Nov 17th 2005
43
ezzsential intro
Nov 05th 2005
11
My first time... I hope y'all like it.
Nov 06th 2005
14
RE: My first time... I hope y'all like it.
Nov 07th 2005
17
Awesome, daniemuse ...
Nov 08th 2005
22
PhotoSynthesis
Nov 07th 2005
15
      Holy Flow --
Nov 07th 2005
19
      RE: Holy Flow --
Nov 08th 2005
25
      Danie --
Nov 16th 2005
      Danie --
Nov 16th 2005
41
      gurl!
Nov 12th 2005
37
      (((AUDIO)))
Nov 08th 2005
20
      =)
Nov 12th 2005
35
      RE: PhotoSynthesis
Nov 20th 2005
51
           RE: PhotoSynthesis
Nov 21st 2005
56
SHOTOUTS!!
Nov 01st 2005
2
Afrika
Nov 01st 2005
3
Hebrew Honey
Nov 01st 2005
4
Mara
Nov 01st 2005
5
Revolt A.K.A. Literary Revolt!
Nov 03rd 2005
8
imagination_7
Nov 05th 2005
9
      natalie
Nov 05th 2005
10
lunaeco
Nov 08th 2005
21
medinastar
Nov 18th 2005
46
Orangeloni
Nov 18th 2005
47
rgv, mindful, paper, photo, ezz, winter, invisible...
Nov 21st 2005
54
      thanks for the support, love...
Nov 23rd 2005
59
RE: THE THIRD OFFICIAL OKP FEMALE COLLABORATION!!!!
Nov 03rd 2005
7
Robyn
Nov 06th 2005
12
hisessence
Nov 06th 2005
13
      emotional controversy...
Nov 07th 2005
18
      Thatz "IT" Right There ...
Nov 08th 2005
23
      Wow
Nov 08th 2005
26
RE: THE THIRD OFFICIAL OKP FEMALE COLLABORATION!!!!
Nov 07th 2005
16
awwwww!
Nov 14th 2005
39
      RE: awwwww!
Nov 17th 2005
42
*has a seat, chills with the women.folk*
Nov 08th 2005
24
mylife
Nov 10th 2005
28
courage
Nov 21st 2005
53
RE: THE THIRD OFFICIAL OKP FEMALE COLLABORATION!!!!
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29
RE: THE THIRD OFFICIAL OKP FEMALE COLLABORATION!!!!
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      RE: THE THIRD OFFICIAL OKP FEMALE COLLABORATION!!!!
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48
newolf
Nov 11th 2005
31
untitled
Nov 11th 2005
32
      RE: untitled
Nov 11th 2005
33
      RE: untitled
Nov 18th 2005
49
nice to meet ya girl!
Nov 14th 2005
38
RE: nice to meet ya girl!--Dido!
Nov 14th 2005
40
RE: THE THIRD OFFICIAL OKP FEMALE COLLABORATION!!!!
Nov 18th 2005
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      RE: THE THIRD OFFICIAL OKP FEMALE COLLABORATION!!!!
Nov 20th 2005
52
i've been dozing... *bookmarks to read when there's more time* nm
Nov 17th 2005
45
i don't know if yall got a men's section in here..
Nov 21st 2005
55
lol why not? join in..
Nov 22nd 2005
58
      NUH UH!!
Nov 28th 2005
60
           well there hasnt been alot of support this year...
Nov 28th 2005
61
RE: THE THIRD OFFICIAL OKP FEMALE COLLABORATION!!!!
Nov 22nd 2005
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