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14. "My first time... I hope y'all like it."
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Name: Danielle Scott
Age: 24
Location: Boston, MA

I grew up mostly in NJ, but came to Boston because of college. My majors were Music Production & Engineering and Music Synthesis. Yeah, I am a tech geek, but I was a poet first, then a musician. I wrote my first rhyme at age 15 and haven't stopped since... I do sing more than I rhyme, but I love the freedom of rhyming. Music (esp. Hip Hop and Soul) is my love and passion in life. Nothing makes me happier. Anyway, enough about me... on with the poetry.
This piece is untitled. It's about church controversy. It orignally started out as a rhyme, but then morphed into something else. Here it goes:

Perpetraters, truth haters, political debaters
Looking for the majority favor to keep you in 'gaters.
Compromising, lying, defying the laws of doctrine
droppin' the loot, blockin' the truth, rottin' the fruit
choppin' the root of God's vine
You're blind swine with no spine takin' and rapin' the heart and the mind
Enroaching upon God's time, incurring heavy heavenly fines,
commiting serious spiritual crimes
of idolatry, bribery and extortion to gain fortune
accused of truth distortion and also freedom's abortion
repeated offenses of false pretenses
set up the gucci and colored contact lenses
woe to those who believe in the front and rely on weak defenses
for they won't be able to stand when the TRUE spirit comes against it
reaping what you don't sow
preaching what you don't know
leeching off those who be seeking, beseeching the throne of God
feasting off the anointed, disappointed that yours is a fraud
just a a facade of idle titles and unused bibles
pimping your degree in psychology as biblical theology
for all the blood on your hands, there is no acceptable apology

masquarading, parading, staging the waving of "holy" hands
when you can't even stand in the face of the sun of man
you don't understand
yet content with the stench of the detriment when you falsely represent
pretending to be pure but empty when living waters are so plenty
satisfied to be disguised by lies we hide in shade
absorbing God's rays
not reflecting light, rejecting right, respecting the night neglecting the fight
unsuspecting of plight we have all lost sight
of future vision as we continue to make blind decisions
still in engaging in spiritual masterbation due to intimidation
of the Word's ejaculation
settling instead for artificial insemination
'cuz intercourse without protection gives birth to the resurrection
direction, correction, and perfection
yet we perpetrate in this crooked election of the corrupt
those who "only wash the outside of the cup"
but inside are full of filth
yet holding us with leashes of guilt
pimping their degrees in psychology as biblical theology
for all the blood on their hands there is no acceptable apology.

D. Scott
http://www.dscottandthefamily.com
http://anewqueendom.blogspot.com

  

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THE THIRD OFFICIAL OKP FEMALE COLLABORATION!!!! [View all] , Ezzsential, Tue Nov-01-05 09:03 PM
 
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FEMALES:
Nov 01st 2005
1
first so mos def not last
Nov 02nd 2005
6
I didn't do the traditional introduction cause ezzential took all my asn...
Nov 09th 2005
27
This...
Nov 17th 2005
44
i like your name
Nov 12th 2005
36
      Thanx E..I feel like I already know you cause I promise you and my
Nov 17th 2005
43
ezzsential intro
Nov 05th 2005
11
RE: My first time... I hope y'all like it.
Nov 07th 2005
17
Awesome, daniemuse ...
Nov 08th 2005
22
PhotoSynthesis
Nov 07th 2005
15
      Holy Flow --
Nov 07th 2005
19
      RE: Holy Flow --
Nov 08th 2005
25
      Danie --
Nov 16th 2005
      Danie --
Nov 16th 2005
41
      gurl!
Nov 12th 2005
37
      (((AUDIO)))
Nov 08th 2005
20
      =)
Nov 12th 2005
35
      RE: PhotoSynthesis
Nov 20th 2005
51
           RE: PhotoSynthesis
Nov 21st 2005
56
SHOTOUTS!!
Nov 01st 2005
2
Afrika
Nov 01st 2005
3
Hebrew Honey
Nov 01st 2005
4
Mara
Nov 01st 2005
5
Revolt A.K.A. Literary Revolt!
Nov 03rd 2005
8
imagination_7
Nov 05th 2005
9
      natalie
Nov 05th 2005
10
lunaeco
Nov 08th 2005
21
medinastar
Nov 18th 2005
46
Orangeloni
Nov 18th 2005
47
rgv, mindful, paper, photo, ezz, winter, invisible...
Nov 21st 2005
54
      thanks for the support, love...
Nov 23rd 2005
59
RE: THE THIRD OFFICIAL OKP FEMALE COLLABORATION!!!!
Nov 03rd 2005
7
Robyn
Nov 06th 2005
12
hisessence
Nov 06th 2005
13
      emotional controversy...
Nov 07th 2005
18
      Thatz "IT" Right There ...
Nov 08th 2005
23
      Wow
Nov 08th 2005
26
RE: THE THIRD OFFICIAL OKP FEMALE COLLABORATION!!!!
Nov 07th 2005
16
awwwww!
Nov 14th 2005
39
      RE: awwwww!
Nov 17th 2005
42
*has a seat, chills with the women.folk*
Nov 08th 2005
24
mylife
Nov 10th 2005
28
courage
Nov 21st 2005
53
RE: THE THIRD OFFICIAL OKP FEMALE COLLABORATION!!!!
Nov 10th 2005
29
RE: THE THIRD OFFICIAL OKP FEMALE COLLABORATION!!!!
Nov 10th 2005
30
      RE: THE THIRD OFFICIAL OKP FEMALE COLLABORATION!!!!
Nov 18th 2005
48
newolf
Nov 11th 2005
31
untitled
Nov 11th 2005
32
      RE: untitled
Nov 11th 2005
33
      RE: untitled
Nov 18th 2005
49
RE: THE THIRD OFFICIAL OKP FEMALE COLLABORATION!!!!
Nov 12th 2005
34
nice to meet ya girl!
Nov 14th 2005
38
RE: nice to meet ya girl!--Dido!
Nov 14th 2005
40
RE: THE THIRD OFFICIAL OKP FEMALE COLLABORATION!!!!
Nov 18th 2005
50
      RE: THE THIRD OFFICIAL OKP FEMALE COLLABORATION!!!!
Nov 20th 2005
52
i've been dozing... *bookmarks to read when there's more time* nm
Nov 17th 2005
45
i don't know if yall got a men's section in here..
Nov 21st 2005
55
lol why not? join in..
Nov 22nd 2005
58
      NUH UH!!
Nov 28th 2005
60
           well there hasnt been alot of support this year...
Nov 28th 2005
61
RE: THE THIRD OFFICIAL OKP FEMALE COLLABORATION!!!!
Nov 22nd 2005
57
RE: THE THIRD OFFICIAL OKP FEMALE COLLABORATION!!!!
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