>now i know this is the first time i've entered the contest, >i come to rip shit, and see how far i can progress; >got my tongue sharpened and punchlines set, >and then i find out lif put up against tek: >you mean the cat that puts his best out and still get >lynched, >pro couldn'a made it easier, this here is a cinch; >its almost christmas you can call me the grinch, >cause im not battlin this cat, im stealin this shit:
from this ^ line on down you kind of lost me tho
still tek i was lost with yours pretty much from step one
maybe it works when you actually flow it but on the page this shit just was too much