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4. "mentally drained, spiritually exhausted"
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is what i get from these lines:

I had wrote you and re-wrote you
and I am wrought with
anguish that I cannot
right you any more
because you have left the intimacies
of my imagination as empty
as a poorman's pocket.


such a horrible place to be in... Peace~

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death of a poet's love [View all] , OrangeLoni, Wed May-04-05 03:07 PM
 
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poets & loving & love & in love is hard
May 04th 2005
1
Concise and powerful:::loved it
May 04th 2005
2
RE: death of a poet's love
May 04th 2005
3
*Sigh*
May 04th 2005
5
such a little poem gave such big thought
May 06th 2005
6
RE: death of a poet's love
May 08th 2005
7
up nm
May 13th 2005
8
up nm
May 21st 2005
9
RE: felt
May 25th 2005
10
RE: death of a poet's love
May 31st 2005
11
thanks you guys
Jun 03rd 2005
12
RE: death of a poet's love
Jun 03rd 2005
13
RE: death of a poet's love
Jun 03rd 2005
14
simple...yes
Jun 03rd 2005
15
RE: simple...yes
Jun 03rd 2005
16
poets? or poet?
Jun 04th 2005
17
      RE: poets? or poet?
Jun 04th 2005
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           RE: poets? or poet?
Jun 04th 2005
19
           the word "offensive" didn't feature in my reply to you
Jun 05th 2005
22
why it gotta be like dat?
Jun 04th 2005
20
RE: death of a poet's love
Jun 04th 2005
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RE: death of a poet's love
Jun 05th 2005
23
i love the word play....
Jun 06th 2005
24
yeah, it occurs to me that I have trouble with happiness
Jun 08th 2005
26
powerful
Jun 06th 2005
25
RE: shudder
Jun 08th 2005
27
RE: death of a poet's love
Jun 08th 2005
28
hmmmm
Jun 09th 2005
29
nice, im loving this
Jun 09th 2005
30
RE: death of a poet's love
Jun 13th 2005
31
let's go ahead & archive, shall we?
Jun 14th 2005
32
RE: death of a poet's love
Jun 27th 2005
33
yea, yea, i c this as an argument or a mad soliloquy
Jun 27th 2005
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Jun 27th 2005
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