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gsquared
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11. "RE: be cause i am a poet"
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this is all good, this here is special:
>>fall beneath
the oil lamp
chronicled by extremities
that curve with every emotion<<

and the way it curved on through the ending was balanced like a
nice jazz solo and that's the advanced poem...





"Motion of the Ocean Lotion
Rubbing together
Like kindling sticks creating forest fires
~Slow Burn~
My turn to speak in tongues"

--Photosynthesis

  

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be cause i am a poet [View all] , ASIEM, Tue Aug-02-05 04:49 AM
 
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Archive .
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second the archive
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*Shakeet takes notes on writing from Asiem*
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I was feelin this........
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i love it
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thank you...
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no thank you
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u speak truth. Great piece.
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RE: u speak truth. Great piece.
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