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hunuh
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"where king james has failed,"


          

i will not.

her pupils were
the greatest
teachers i've ever known.
a muse with a noose,
we talked in the tongues
of pictures past.
a stoic pose
brought about heroic prose.
had she blinked
this ink would
no longer be sufficient,
an epic story cut short.

Romeo is still bleeding,
and no one cares.

her
eyes
made
me
want-

to be a poet.

slurred words match
the hue of two of
the most unforgiving
disciples my i's have
encountered. blasphemy
birthed these idle
hands that carress my
soul with a choke hold.

the gospel of gentics

made an untainted page
breath, inanimate life
follows, accustomed to
her light, and lives by
the grace of my pen.
the sin in the innocence
of a broken verse,
petty nouns and verbs
obscure poetic justice.

so
in
the
spirit
of
salvation-

god did away with black and white pictures.

sacrificed a broken
social scene's heretic
hobby. revisionist pictoral
history forever banned
as long as my words stand.

holy mandates
and my own
colloquial curiosity.

thank you.

(for lizzie.)

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

when whodini made friends it was well spoken.

  

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where king james has failed, [View all] , hunuh, Tue Mar-01-05 06:46 AM
 
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aight!
Mar 01st 2005
1
nope.
Mar 01st 2005
3
      RE: nope.
Mar 01st 2005
5
           interpretation
Mar 01st 2005
6
           RE: interpretation
Mar 01st 2005
7
           RE: nope.
Mar 01st 2005
8
this is tuff
Mar 01st 2005
2
the only way man.
Mar 01st 2005
4
i am telling u rite now... i wish i were lizzie...
Mar 01st 2005
9
RE: where king james has failed,
Mar 01st 2005
10
Two Words ...
Mar 01st 2005
11
up.
Mar 02nd 2005
12
RE: where king james has failed,
Mar 03rd 2005
13
RE: where king james has failed,
Mar 03rd 2005
14
never read your work before...
Mar 03rd 2005
15
up.
Mar 06th 2005
16
archive
Apr 04th 2005
17
again
Jul 21st 2005
19
RE: where king james has failed,
Apr 04th 2005
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