my bad for taking so long to read this yoi really can see ur heart in pieces like this....ur rhythm has improved alot...i want to hear u on audio....do u do spoken word? this could be a rap or a spoken word piece....let me hear some audio dude...drop somen' in my inbox....http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/lifthalegend_music.htm"rip so many bars he should'a got a juris doctorate" -- phonte